Date: 07 Jul 2011 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 16 *~ The Chapter Where They Finally Do It!*~
That was definitely worth the wait. The fruit and oils were a nice touch. I like how realistic you kept his first time with how they did not cum together the first time. I love how Bella teased Edward in the car knowing that he was holding off for their special night and how he got back at her in cafeteria. I would like more lemons in Bella's POV, but I don't see Edward getting too kinky. He is still Geekward after all.
I am glad Edward enlisted Seth's help with the comic and that he will now have a male friend who shares his likes and dislikes. Hopefully, the workout will yield Seth his own someone special.
Date: 27 May 2011 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 15 ~*Web Cams and Public Fondling*~
I enjoyed the Bella and Edward fooling around in Newton's until they were interrupted, but the webcam sex was freakin' hot. I am glad Alice's plan is working and I am looking for to Bella and Edward having sex.
I love the comic, but boy did it get dark with Victoria ripping open Anthony's wound to entice Isabella and tearing a chunk out of Isabella's arm. I hope Isabella can stop Anthony's transformation or that she can inject him with her venom.
It was great that Emmett felt bad about catching Edward and Bella making out and did not make fun of them. Thanks for another great chapter!
Date: 23 May 2011 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 6 *~ The Perfect Date~*
well that was an awesome date! definately something to be said for being besties for years before the big date.
eddie looked in the chest! i wonder if bella will catch him? or will he just jizz in his pants? lol
Date: 20 Feb 2011 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 14 ~* Cockblocking Bastards *~
Wow! I figured somebody would interrupt them, but Emmett moving the door and causing Edward to penetrate Bella not as the way they had planned was priceless. Bella's dream and what almost happened in Eddie's room were some hot lemons. Thanks for the update!
Date: 19 Feb 2011 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 14 ~* Cockblocking Bastards *~
LOL! OMG that was greatness. Nothing ever goes right for these two so Em cock-blocking them and the reaction being actual penetration is priceless and perfect. I so can't wait for EPOV to see the outcome of this slip.
Date: 11 Jan 2011 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 13 ~* The Joy of Butt Sex *~
I enjoyed Edward and Bella's declarations of love and the impromptu butt sex in the shower. It is nice that Edward wants his first time with Bella to be special. It was great to see Edward help a fellow bullied student. I love how Edward motioned to Tanya like he was puking when he saw her giving him the eye. It was very funny.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 2 *~ The Consequences of Spanking It~*
I loved Edward's makeover. The meeting with Emmett and Jasper was pretty funny, especially Emmett's reaction to him flirting with Rosalie. I can't wait for Bella's reaction to the changes in Edward.
Date: 23 Dec 2010 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 12 *~ Triple Trouble Part Three ~*
Aw, I am so glad that he said it. Hope she's not going to freak out. I love badass Bella in this chapter. The threat to Tanya in class was "da bomb" and the fear she invoked in Tanya awesome, especially when she called her name and the coward ran in the other direction. It reminded me of Princess Bride with Indigo and the Six Fingered man. It was so true what you said about detention. They do try to waste your time with busy work hoping to purge you of that bad behavior instead of just letting you get your work done. I look forward to Bella's reaction to his declaration of love.
Date: 23 Dec 2010 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 12 *~ Triple Trouble Part Three ~*
Damn Bella is possessive of her man! lol I love it! and I know he's about as possessive of her as she is of him! i always squeal really loud when this story is updated because it owns my ass big time! lol keep up the great work and I can't wait for more.
Date: 20 Dec 2010 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 11 *~Triple Trouble Part Two~*
Hells yeah! Edward and Bella standing up to the idiots and bitches was greatness. Tanya needs to be put in her place. I think some public humiliation is needed ;)
I sure hope that's Bella in the shower with Edward.
Date: 14 Dec 2010 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 4 *~ It's My Party and I'll Puke If I Want To~*
poor poor Edward. I have a confession to make, In college I got so drunk some other drunk guy to put his tongue dont my throat and I cant even begin to say where it went wrng but I threw up all over this poor guy, he didnt shriek but the look on his face was priceless, i still cant help but laugh and thank god he was good guy and still one of my buddys to this day. so funny but oh what it what be like be a fly on that wall
Date: 14 Dec 2010 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 11 *~Triple Trouble Part Two~*
ALICE!!! lol no I'm kidding of COURSE its Bella. lol Sad that bella got detention when she was only telling Tanya off. stupid ho! lol keep up the great work and I can't wait for more. I think I might give that The Blizzard story a shot though. Sounds good. thanks again bye
Date: 13 Dec 2010 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 11 *~Triple Trouble Part Two~*
I am hoping it is Bella not Tanya. Wouldn't he recognize his girl's body from Tanya though? I love that Edward is starting to stand up for himself with Lauren and Jessica then later with Tyler and Mike. I am glad Edward and Bella set things straight with the girls about Tanya and what she said happened with Edward before enjoying their time pleasing each other. I laughed out loud when Edward spooked Bella in the library. Her reaction was hilarious. Thanks for another great chapter! I look forward to seeing who surprised Edward in the shower.
Date: 26 Nov 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 10 ~*Triple Trouble Part One*~
Thanks for another great chapter! I enjoyed the 69 and Bella and Edward oversleeping and almost getting caught by Charlie. That was some quick thinking by Edward. I liked that Edward drove Bella in the morning to school. Too bad they did not have any classes together.
Date: 25 Nov 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 10 ~*Triple Trouble Part One*~
lol poor Edward. he has no idea how hot he really is no matter what he looks like. and I bet Bella saw Jessica touching him and is freaking out. poor thing. I about squealed like a little girl when I saw this had been updated. I can't wait for the other two parts or another chapter in general. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 20 Nov 2010 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 9 ~* Oh, Lucky Girl *~
Ha! Ha! Ha! Go Edward! I love that he was able to shock Bella by utilizing Google to give her that incredible orgasm. I am glad she explained to Edward about losing her virginity to Jacob and how bad the experience was.
It may have cruel to set up Charlie thinking that Bella's new boyfriend was this tatoo covered boxer/artist, but it was sure was funny to watch him explode before Edward got there. I am glad she did apologize to Edward for almost getting him hurt when Charlie flew off the handle at their kiss.
I absolutely agree with your recc of My Brother's Best Friend by jennlynnfs. It is one of my favorite fan fic stories as well as she is one of my favorite authors. If you haven't read Boycotting Valentine's Day, One Cup of Chunky Peanut Butter and Waiting Always Waiting, you really should. They are much shorter and just great.
Date: 14 Nov 2010 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 9 ~* Oh, Lucky Girl *~
Wow who knew Geeky Edward cullen would know a girl's g-spot. lol I loved that especially the whole Teasing Charlie deal. lol tooo great. I was soo excited when I saw you updated. I love this story. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 14 Nov 2010 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 9 ~* Oh, Lucky Girl *~
LOL, poor Charlie. He still sees Edward as the safe Geek, huh? I can't wait for his reaciton if he ever walks in on them doing something very un-Edward-like. I think he'd have a coronary.
God bless Google and the man who would take the initiative to research how to please his woman properly.
Date: 03 Nov 2010 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 8 ~* Google Search: How to Make a Woman Cum*~
LOL, nothing better than a cockblocking Esme. If she only knew what her sweet little boy was doing with his girlfriend. I can't begin to tell you how much I needed this chapter today. it's been a rather craptastic few days and this just made me laugh, smile, and forget all the crap going on.
What would we do without Google? Be orgasmless, sexually frustrated women, huh? ;)
Date: 02 Nov 2010 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 8 ~* Google Search: How to Make a Woman Cum*~
I just recently discovered your story, and I'm in love with it! I absolutely love pervy Bella! The hope chest is brilliant, and the fact that she keeps an old picture of Edward in there is actually sweet. It shows how she loved him even before his transformation. My favorite part of the story is how you've stayed true to Edward. Even though he's a hottie now, his personality hasn't changed. He's still the same sweet Edward. Now I'm excited to see what happens when he goes back to school AND if he figures out how to please Bella. :-)