Date: 16 Mar 2010 11:28 PM Title: Outtake 2: The Day Edward Messed Up?
You are awesome!
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2010 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story......
Date: 14 Mar 2010 1:45 PM Title: Outtake 2: The Day Edward Messed Up?
enjoyed it. they forget, it happens. I have been with my husband for 23 years and he forgot my birthday last year. Sometimes they are just stupidly forgetfull.
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 11:58 AM Title: Outtake 2: The Day Edward Messed Up?
Aw that was so damn sweet. I need more outtakes. Yes I'm greedy and want more but at least I'm being honest about it. Thanks for the long ass chapter. I appreciated it. Until next time.
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 11:22 AM Title: Outtake 1: The Day Emmett Got Snipped
Too funny that Bella & Alice were in on the balloons poor Emmett. I loved it but Rose was right he needed his man bits snipped she would have a football team on her hands.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 11:13 AM Title: Epilogue
Aw! I loved it they had twins yay! Now Rose had two sets of twins plus Brady good Lord! Jasper & Alice didn't have a baby I always thought those two would be excellent parents especially Alice with all her energy. I had a good night with this story even though I was on the verge of throwing up for the last couple of hours. Thanks for the distraction. My author gave me a reprieve so I can beta chapter 21 of Through His Eyes today sometime. I love her its-rpattz-baby is my sister from another mother. Anyway I love your writing style and I really enjoyed this story way too much.
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 13
Oh I forgot I loved this part from two chapters ago: no matter what *except abuse cause that shit is not cool no matter how sexy he is and how much I love his ass*. I loved the six month flash forward it was so good. Rose pregnant with twins yikes plus Alice & Jasper getting married yay plus Charlie gave Alice away priceless. I freaking loved it!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 10:46 AM Title: Epilogue
I like it so much how you write.:)
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 12
Well okay that was good but I have to say I just read almost an exact same cancer story with Daniel Gale Cumming to America except it was Emmett so it was like okay because I just read last week. I loved it though. Do you happen to help on that story or something? I love the Edward/Bella banter, So good!
Author's Response:
My story was written before Daniel Fale Cumming to America, it was published first on FF.net. Though I am friends with teh author of DGCtA, we didn't share story ideas.
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 11
I loved it! But what is new about that, nothing! Interesting very interesting. I can't wait to find out Edward's deal.
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 10
Damn that was a trip but so good and sad at the same time. I loved it!
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh shit this is what you were talking about in your reply to my review. This is booty son! Bella is on the run. Poor Edward and Ian he didn't even get a chance but those are the breaks. Oh shit I am about to strangle Bella's ass!
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wow Angela got dealt with by Daddy C and Edward. I wonder what is going to happen to Jessica. Hold on Bella don't bail out on Edward. She looks ready to run folks. Poor Em finding out Bella was a virgin like that plus I liked how the women were all older than their men except Alice.
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 7
Damn Edward got catty there watch out Angela. I don't think Angela would do that though. Wow Edward is packing for real yikes! I liked it as usual Bella needs to stop fighting it she is beginning to make me sick just a little. She ready to bolt already and they are just getting started. I loved Edward's POV as usual.
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 6
Damn she didn't tell him that she was a virgin? Em was so excited he almost split the beans he means well. I loved as always.
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 5
What can I say? I loved it. The chapter was just great and it went by so fast. It was so sweet, funny, hot and just plain good.
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 4
Wow! I loved Edward's POV! I love Jasper he is the man. I knew the Cullens knew about Edward's obsession with Bella at least they are going to help him get his girl. Yay! I loved this chapter go Edward go!
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 3
OMFJ Charlie had me laughing so hard I had tears in my eyes him and the gay duo. Edward is so hot but borderline stalkerish with a dash of I will kill anyone in your area that is a heterosexual male without my permission you got it! Yes, fucking sir! My bad for taking so long my hubby is watching tropical thunder which is so fucking funny so I am hearing that in the background and reading next to him. I love the chapter BTW!
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 2
OMG I love your Edward & Bella. Usually Bella gets on my nerves but I love your Bella. This story rocks my tube socks! I think The Cullens all know Bella is done for since Edward has her in his sights aka cross hairs. I love it!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the great reviews, lol you might not like Bella so much in later chapters, I even wanted to smack her some, but she does redeem herself. Glad you are enjoying this though :0)
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMFJ! This is so good I don't know what to do. I'm supposed be beta'ing chapter 21 of Through His Eyes but you are making it really hard to do. Damn you!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 3:20 AM Title: Outtake 2: The Day Edward Messed Up?
awww that is too sweet. I'm so happy bella didn't let him get his way and forget about valentine's day. I'm so happy. this was great. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 11 Mar 2010 5:58 PM Title: Epilogue
i want to know about the birth and the pregnancies so outtakes please!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 9:16 PM Title: Outtake 1: The Day Emmett Got Snipped
hope there are more outtakes or even a sequel....cant get enough
Date: 02 Mar 2010 9:10 PM Title: Epilogue
loved this story....again, sooo love the inner monologues, sooo funny..
was wondering if the twins were actually edwards? would have been great to include that part in it...
well done with this fic..
Date: 02 Mar 2010 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 7
i am absolutely loving this story. i, as usual, love emmett soooo bad.... he is just the cutest teddy bear. i love the way you write, it makes everything so believable.
my fave thing is bella's inner monologue.
my fave line is "Fuck Me! No seriously Edward pull over and fuck me!" mmmmm yes please... :)
Date: 01 Mar 2010 2:33 AM Title: Epilogue
Yay! They all got their hea.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 11
I knew it.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for all the wonderful reviews :0)
Date: 01 Mar 2010 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 10
Argh!they are two ridiculous and stubborn people w very bad timing!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 9
Poor B! And crazy E! I have a feeling somrthing else is up though.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh, we all know he wants a green-eyed baby too!
Date: 28 Feb 2010 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 7
Yay! So now I'm still dying to know who was in the prologue.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 6
And will she tell him she's giving him her V card?
Date: 28 Feb 2010 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 4
*soft chuckle* oh the whole family knows! Well now I wonder who that was in the prologue. I assumed it was Carlisle. Maybe not.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 3
This kind of crazy scary stalker shit is really only hot in ff. RL- you can only date someone like that for so long. Fantasy world- its fuckhot.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 2
Lol. She's too much.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
He's kinda forward huh? Don't get me wrong, its hot, but uh, rush things much E? And he's hardly too young. Hell, at least he's legal which is more than I can say for some ff.
Date: 22 Feb 2010 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 10
K I know he was hurt and all but he messed up by not be fully honest with her and really is she suppose to give up having kids? That'd big that's not like alright I wear jeans instead of shorts. Come on Edward
Date: 22 Feb 2010 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 3
I totally love that Edward is younger and he is the one calling the shots and making her seem like the younger of the two. I love a guy that can take charge. This Edward is very nice but kind of scary too
Date: 19 Feb 2010 6:31 AM Title: Epilogue
Make a sequel there is still so much to be said! I mean the whole how did she get preganant. ets...
Date: 17 Feb 2010 4:04 AM Title: Outtake 1: The Day Emmett Got Snipped
aww that story was THE best I think I have ever read. It was hotter than hell too so great job. i hope there's a sequel but if not that ended just fine. thanks again bye
Date: 17 Feb 2010 12:14 AM Title: Outtake 1: The Day Emmett Got Snipped
funny chapter. liked it!
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2010 11:57 PM Title: Epilogue
I really liked your story! I can't wait to read others!
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2010 11:56 PM Title: Epilogue
I really liked your story! I can't wait to read others!
Date: 16 Feb 2010 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 8
Angela was not very smart or loyal to Bella. I wonder how the other will fare. Hopefully she will be gone as well. Great chapter.
Date: 16 Feb 2010 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 7
wonderful story. I think all will be ok in the long run.
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2010 5:09 AM Title: Outtake 1: The Day Emmett Got Snipped
Thanks for that out-take glad u did that one. Is there anymore?
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2010 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
Shit .. next time can I pick Edward up at the airport !
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2010 4:58 AM Title: Epilogue
Well that was perfect it's wasn't some crazy ass 70 chapter drag out or tiny one shot where ur craving more and can't get any satisfaction. It was just right. Thank u :-)
Date: 16 Feb 2010 4:52 AM Title: Epilogue
Aww *.* Your fanfiction was really cute and fabulous! Would you really do a sequel?? That's awesome! I'm waiting for it :D
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2010 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 13
My favorite quote"Bella catch this damn thing. And if anyone gets in your way I'll hurt them." Loved this chapter had me lmao.
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2010 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 12
Aaw, so sweet, I think I need a cup of tea 2 break my sugar high. Oh did I mention I luv this story.
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2010 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 11
Well u sure gave me a scare, glad the r going 2 talk in the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2010 3:46 AM Title: Outtake 1: The Day Emmett Got Snipped
lol that was great loved it
Date: 16 Feb 2010 3:05 AM Title: Outtake 1: The Day Emmett Got Snipped
sniff sniff i always get sad at the end of stories... this was a great one tho i really enjoyed it : ]
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2010 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 10
Wow!! What an end to this chapter. Heart in my throat kind of end.
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2010 2:24 AM Title: Epilogue
please please due a sequel i loved it
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2010 10:05 PM Title: Prologue
That was good.
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2010 7:08 PM Title: Prologue
hot loved it
Date: 15 Feb 2010 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 11
Damn you! So unfair. Hhhrrrmmmmfffff
Date: 15 Feb 2010 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 10
Holy Jesus... Seriously I know that he is all stitched up but I HONESTLY want to punch him bad in that pretty little face of his for the pride party. I mean, fuck me! The man was grieving her loss on one day then when she shows up he acts like a prick? LOL (sorry I got a little carried away here)
Great chapter! Intense!
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2010 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 2
I don't know which made me laugh more; Bella running from Edward in flats, the crack about Felix's love of 'meat', the endearing nickname the hoes, or cranky Edward.
Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2010 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
*picks jaw up off of floor*
Duuuude.... This is the absolute sexiest version of Edward, not including original Edward, I've read yet. Trust me I'm an avid reader.
This is exactly why boys should totally bow to Edward while chanting 'we are not worthy, we are not worthy'.
Please excuse the crazy enthusiam, but this had me giggling like a little seventh grader.
I love the fic so far, good job.
: P
Date: 15 Feb 2010 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 8
this is a really great story! i can't wait for more!!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2010 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 9
Well that was quick, were back on the rocky road. What is Edward going on about is he sterile or is by choice he doesn't want children. I could understand Bella she amost 30 the time clock is speeding up. Bella is running hot and cold and it is driving me a bit crazy, but it does add to the story. Anyways can't wait for the next alert!!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2010 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 8
"Blush" I'm sorry I somehow missed reading chapter 4 EPOV. So thanks for including that, my bad. Anyways I loved this chapter, things are looking up for Bella and Hotward. thanks again.
Date: 14 Feb 2010 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 9
This woman has no willpower! And needs to stop running away from her problems!!
Date: 14 Feb 2010 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 9
I'm really lovin' this story! I'm hoping for an EPOV. I am curious to know if he is shooting blanks and can't have children or if he simply doesn't want to have children. Poor Bella, she comes off a bit scatter-brained. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 14 Feb 2010 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 9
My GOD. That was hot, sad, confusing... Hard chapter :x poor Bella... why the hell Edward doesn't want a baby? He is just driving me crazy with it.
Date: 14 Feb 2010 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 8
The Cullens ROCKS MY WORLD! They are all so damn cute *.*
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2010 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 7
Aaaah... Wow!!! I think, no I know I have to lay down! That chapter was amazing. It was like u could read my mine. I would love more EPOV "For years I have dreamed of Bella, wanted Bella and loved Bella" So Edward knew of Bella before this eh? Anyways thank you!! Looking forward 2 seeing ur alerts. U make me very happy :-)
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 6
Yikes Batman hit next page quick!!
Date: 14 Feb 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 7
Ooooooh, feisty baby Cullen! I don't think there is a better kind!
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2010 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 6
I am truly enjoying your work as a writer. I am currently reading and enjoying very much 2 of your stories. This one becoming my favorite. I hope you plan on continuing it. Thanks for letting us enjoy your creativity.
Date: 13 Feb 2010 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 5
I loved that. Thanks for EPOV, too!
Date: 13 Feb 2010 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 2
This is very intense. I always love when things get heated so quickly.
Date: 13 Feb 2010 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 6
Wow ! What a great story. Had me hooked from the start. please update soon.
Date: 13 Feb 2010 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 4
My God that story is all kinds of cute and hot *.*
Date: 13 Feb 2010 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 4
Ahhh, so young Edward has known Bella. Doesn't seem like Bella remembers him! Can't wait for the next update!!
Date: 13 Feb 2010 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 2
I wish Edward would pull me into a closet. LOL.
Date: 13 Feb 2010 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 4
OMG !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
can´t wait till the next one
Date: 13 Feb 2010 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love me some Edward! Great chapter!!
Date: 13 Feb 2010 1:05 AM Title: Prologue
Ha, wonder who walked in on them.??
Date: 13 Feb 2010 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 2
Well this story is certainly going on my favorite list. Can't wait for the next installement. Thanks.
Date: 13 Feb 2010 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 3
OMG OMG
Edward ist funny .
Can´t wait till the next one!
Date: 13 Feb 2010 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 2
OMG !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
can´t wait till the next one
Date: 12 Feb 2010 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
hehe grat story, can´t wait till the next one!
Date: 12 Feb 2010 9:55 PM Title: Prologue
Great Story
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter