Date: 02 Mar 2011 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
to me edwards intentions are great but he's going about it all wrong, he's doing it all backwards and pushing bella in the deep end when he should have asked her on a date not finger fucked her five minutes after meeting her :) hope he realises that
Date: 03 Sep 2010 5:44 PM Title: Epilogue
What a Fabulous Story!!! I love the way it went right into it and took no prisoners!!! I haven't reviewed any of the chapters as I have read this story in one hit!
Loved the chapter where Edward is collected by Bella from the airport, Fucking made laugh and hot!
How come Bella didn't know about Edward and that he worked for the company for quite a while?
I do love me a story that gets down to the 'nitty gritty' and says 'stuff' all of those time wasting descriptive passaged that to me are a total waste of time and not essential.
Now just gonna read a couple of out-takes and I am done, having thoroughly enjoyed it!!
Date: 09 May 2010 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 8
funny how you read so many stories with a character a certain way and it floors you when they are ooc. never saw that comming from angela. glad to see all is out in the open now, but it makes me wonder who saw them in the prologe?
Date: 26 Mar 2010 5:42 AM Title: Outtake 2: The Day Edward Messed Up?
Also, I wasn't going to read this story (I've been staying away from the AH stories lately) but I do love me some Jensen and your banner...you can totally thank your half-naked Jensen for getting me to read this story. Damn that man is yummy! So yes, I blame your banner for getting me to read this, but I am so SO happy that I did because it was absolutely amazing! Loved every single bit of it.
Date: 26 Mar 2010 5:39 AM Title: Outtake 2: The Day Edward Messed Up?
This story was AWESOME! I so TOTALLY loved it! It was just--like--ugh I have no words to describe how awesomely awesome this story was! It was funny and not as angsty as I expected (thank you for not overdoing on the angst). This was just plain amazing and I am totally checking you out tomorrow to see what else you've written. Or ya know, later today cause it's like 3am.
EXCELLENT Job! Loved it loved it LOVED it!