Date: 28 Aug 2010 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 9
That is kinna disturbing that someone knew enough about the building that they could put that up on her car. I hope that they can help protect Bella and Abby.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! (Sorry I didn't say that with your other reviews... I appreciate all of them!)
Date: 28 Aug 2010 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 8
Ok I thought that they had cameras and security and all of that stuff so how did that happen?
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I promise that you will see how it could have been done...
Date: 28 Aug 2010 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 7
That was scary that they were being followed. It is sad that Bella doesn't think that Edward likes her because she knows deep down that is a lie.
Author's Response:
I wanted to keep that aspect of the book... Bella not thinking she's good enough for Edward.
Thank you for another review... You rock! :)
Date: 28 Aug 2010 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 6
It is good that Bella is starting to get friends again because it is good that she had that in her life.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. Who wouldn't want more friends... Especially friends like A, J, Em, and R? :)
Date: 28 Aug 2010 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 5
Well I am thinking by the last sentence in this chapter that it is a done deal that Bella is leaving her house and moving in wether it be with Edward or with her parents! I hope that it is with Edward.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I would easily choose Edward over my parents. Hehe
Date: 28 Aug 2010 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oh I am guessing that it is Alice and Rose that are in the apartment because really who could stay away when there is a baby involved!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I guess we'll see, won't we? *Insert evil chuckle*
Date: 28 Aug 2010 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 3
That was so sweet that Edward let her talk about something that she needed to get off her chest!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I love a sweet Edward.
Date: 28 Aug 2010 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 2
So how terrible is it that she heard the staff at the doctor's office talk about her and Abby outside. It was really sweet for Edward to keep her calm after that.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. People suck.
Date: 28 Aug 2010 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
That is so sad that Jessica died! Especially after she was beat up by her boyfriend.
Author's Response:
Yeah... I have a sick and twisted mind.
Thank you for all of your reviews!
Date: 05 Aug 2010 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 14
I wish I knew why they want them.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. It will all come out in later chapters.
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2010 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 14
Oh dear i hope they get to her in time!!!! and where was the damned peep hole lmao! oh! i can't wait til the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I'm sorry it has taken me so long to update... I've been out of town, then school started back up... It's been crazy!
Date: 02 Aug 2010 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 14
Oh no, no, no... Someone has to find them. Please don't let anything happen to Bella or Abby. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I'll be posting the next few chapters soon...
Date: 28 Jul 2010 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 14
i hope thye find them soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. They will find them... or will they? :)
Date: 28 Jul 2010 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 14
oh no!! This is very very bad...
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I have to say that it doesn't get better immediately.
Date: 28 Jul 2010 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 14
I think it suck but at least now will we find out why they are doing this. Tomatoes bad lemons good LOL
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review... It made me laugh. I'm not a big fan of tomatoes either. :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2010 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 14
oh no
Author's Response:
Oh yes...
Thank you for the review. :)
Date: 28 Jul 2010 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 14
you can't end it there. update now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I'm so sorry for the delay in updates! I'll be posting the next few chapters here soon!
Date: 28 Jul 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 13
perfect
Author's Response:
;) Thank you!
Date: 28 Jul 2010 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 12
love it and edward against a car is yummy
Author's Response:
I couldn't agree more! :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2010 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 13
that bed wouldn't have lasted long had it been edward and i lmao! j/k i loved everybit of this chapter lol
Author's Response:
Hehe, that's awesome! :) Thank you for the review... I'm glad you liked the chapter!
Date: 28 Jul 2010 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 13
that was really good, and perfect, can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thank yo so much, and thank you for your review!
Date: 27 Jul 2010 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 13
I love this update. So sweet how he went to Abby to feed her. Silly Bella thought he was leaving her. Can't wait to read more because I absolutely love this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I think it's important for Edward to have a good relationship with Abby, and to love her like she was his own. I'm so happy that you are enjoying the story!
Date: 27 Jul 2010 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 13
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you, and thank you for the review!
Date: 27 Jul 2010 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 13
That was some very good lemonade!!! I hope these two are on the same page now and won't have to second guess themselves and each other anymore??? I love it this story!!! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I'm glad you liked the lemonade. We'll see if they have any more trouble...
Date: 27 Jul 2010 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 12
These two better start coming clean about their feelings. They have enough to drive them crazy, they don't need miscommunication too! Great job...I love it...thanks!!
Author's Response:
I agree! Thank you for the review!
Date: 27 Jul 2010 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 11
My nails can take it!!! :-)
Author's Response:
Good! :) Thank you for the review!
Date: 27 Jul 2010 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 10
This is just creepy!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. *Insert creepy music* :)
Date: 27 Jul 2010 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 9
Could this person be a copy cat from a book of Bella's? Just a thought.
Author's Response:
Thank you for another review! We'll see...
Date: 27 Jul 2010 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 8
I would be scared out of my mind at this point!!! My other guess would be Riley. He works for Emmett. He could get in the garage. Just a thought. The date was so nice. To bad it has this attached to it now. Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thank you again for your review. You are the first person with a correct guess as to who her accomplice is! GREAT JOB! :)
Date: 27 Jul 2010 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter. Well, Victoria and I am guessing Laurent is behind all of this. I can't wait to see!!! Great job...thanks!
Author's Response:
Thank you for ANOTHER review! You are half right in your guess. :)
Date: 27 Jul 2010 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 6
Sweet time with Abby. I love it! Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I thought it would be good to get away from all of the drama for a short little stint.
Date: 27 Jul 2010 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 5
Well that is settled. She is not leaving now. I have no idea who this can be. Great job...I can't stop reading!!! Thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for another review! I'm glad I've got you hooked... though I hope I'm not keeping you from something! (I know there have been times that I've neglected something so that I could read a story!)
Date: 27 Jul 2010 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 4
What crazy person could be after Bella and Abby??? I am so glad everyone is going to be around now.... Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. I promise all will be revealed! :)
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2010 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 13
Great story. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I'm glad you are enjoying the story! :)
Date: 27 Jul 2010 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 13
The Lemonade was sweet and about time for these two. I am glad they finely took the step now when are they going to tell each other that they love each other???
Author's Response:
Thank you for another review! I agree... and it will be coming...
Date: 27 Jul 2010 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 3
What a sad situation. Edward is right though. James would have gone to Bella's house if Jess has not shown up. I am so glad Edward was there for Bella. I loved it when he said goodnight my Bella. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for all of your reviews! Doesn't it make you want an Edward... not like you needed another reason, right? :)
Date: 27 Jul 2010 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 13
yay! Thank goodness they got over that bump...lol. Great job!
Author's Response:
Thank you for another review! I'm glad you liked the chapter... It was one of my favorites to write!
Date: 27 Jul 2010 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 2
Edward was so sweet to Bella and Abby. The nurses were terrible. I hope they are in big trouble. I am so glad Edward knew what was going on. Great job...thanks!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for another review! I love a sweet Edward... Le sigh...
Date: 27 Jul 2010 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
It is sad, but I can't wait to get caught up. Great job...thanks!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I hope you enjoy the story!
Date: 27 Jul 2010 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 11
I liked this a story. Thank you very much.
Edward simply delightful...
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I'm glad you have enjoyed it so far!
Date: 27 Jul 2010 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 12
i liked it, they needed that!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review... You like the next chapter even better! ;)
Date: 27 Jul 2010 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 12
I liked this chapter and have enjoyed your entire story... keep going..
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. I'm glad you are liking the story.
Date: 27 Jul 2010 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 12
I like very much :P but i can't believe he stopped. Hopefully they have cleared that up now I can understand that Bella felt rejected.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review... I promise the next chapter is better... Well, near the end it is...
Date: 27 Jul 2010 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 12
dont stop lol
Author's Response:
That's what she said... :) Thank you for the review!
Date: 27 Jul 2010 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 12
Ha! if edward had me against the car people would definitely get a nice show morning, noon and night lmao! we wouldn't move a inch! lmao j./k wonderful chapter i can't wait until you update again!
Author's Response:
NO kidding! Thank you for the review!
Date: 27 Jul 2010 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 11
You're right, I was biting my nails! LOL I hope E/B get a little reprieve soon so they can have their date. They deserve it...
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review... I hope I didn't ruin a manicure! :) They will get their date!
Date: 27 Jul 2010 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 10
they're so happy, i hope they catch the people soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. They are happy... too happy maybe...?
Date: 26 Jul 2010 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 11
Great updates. I'm still afraid that something will happen to her but I hope that those creeps who threat her will get caught before the can harm her or Abby. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! We'll have to wait and see what happens... :)
Date: 26 Jul 2010 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 11
That is a cool phone. same ? why are they doing this to Bella and Abby they didnt have anything to do with James death???
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I promise, promise, promise that your question will be answered... It won't be for quite a few more chapters, but it will happen!
Date: 26 Jul 2010 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh shit
Author's Response:
:) Thank you for the review!
Date: 26 Jul 2010 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 11
LOL@ emmet big yeti ass crashing to the apartment lmao. Kelan lutz is supremely sexy but i picture emmet to be alot bigger and hairer for some reason.
Love the chapter i hope you update again soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review, and I completely agree with you about Kellan, and how I picture Em! I love me some funny Em!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2010 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 10
i'm studying pediatrics and i have a thing about spit. so when i read what edward did i laughed because I hate drool lmao. but i love kids and i love being the person that they can come too to make them feel better when they are sick!! but i hate drool lmao. i was scarred for life when my cousin dropped a loogie on me when i was 5 i still retch at the memory lmao! my dr.s and profs. find it hilarious. at clinicals i found a sure fire way of avoiding the spit. i stood a foot away and handed the tissue to the parent. don't judge me i'm growing out of it lmao. if your wondering how i never had to deal with spit in my personal life...I have no kids or brothers or sisters. and i didn't touch a baby without a bib or a towel i know it's sad. your probably thinking "why the fuck do you want to be a pediatrican" lol that's the same thing my proff asked lmao.
Just thought i'd tell you something funny. but i loved the chapter great job.
Author's Response:
First off, as always, thank you for the review. Second, I commend you for going after something you enjoy. Good luck with school! I am in nursing school right now. I used to have a hard time with blood, and would pass out any time I got a shot or blood drawn! But, I have worked in an ER for over 2 years and have adjusted quite well to the presence of blood. So... No judgement here. Like I said, I am proud of you for going after something you are passionate about!
Date: 26 Jul 2010 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 11
New reader - very excited for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I'm glad you found my story and are enjoying it!
Date: 26 Jul 2010 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 11
wow...you learn something new everyday...good chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review!
Date: 26 Jul 2010 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 10
oh dear! This isn't good!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review... Are you biting your nails? There are several nail biting chapters in this story!
Date: 26 Jul 2010 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 8
i think that it is victoria
Author's Response:
Yes, it is. Thank you for your review!
Date: 26 Jul 2010 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 9
so cute can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! I'll post 10 in a few minutes!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2010 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 9
can't wait for more! updaye soon !!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. I'll post 10 in a few minutes!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2010 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 8
the funniest thing about new moon was the slow motion run lmao hilarious lol great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you, and thank you for the review. The run was hilarious! (BTW ~ Her screaming in NM drives me nuts every time I watch it... It makes me want to give her a facepunch!)
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2010 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 7
i don't know i have and idea it may be some vulturi man or something. loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Keep guessing... ;)
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2010 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 5
great chapter it's a llittle creepy at edward's attachment. even though they've been talking for months. it's a tad bit unrealistic unless he has ties to abby. even though they are in danger i can understand the um...moving into the apartment and the fact he like's her but i don't know edward is creepy lmao but that is no insult to your writing i love it and your a great writer you just have a creepy character lmao
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Edward is very possesive of Bella in the Twi saga, so I was hoping to somewhat capture that here... Do you think I over did it? :)
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2010 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 3
so we have to watch out for abby's father? lmao i wonder if edward is secretly the father. or if the father is aro or somebody else lmao great fucking chapter by the way
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. Jessica never knew who Abby's father was... There will be no input from him, I promise he won't be causing any trouble!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2010 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 2
that was weird....lmao i'm blunt with my doctors i would've asked what the hell he wanted lmao
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. You should be comfortable asking your doctor questions!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2010 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
of cours i like it! it's brilliant honey bunches of oats i can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! *Insert blush*
Date: 26 Jul 2010 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 9
Edward is to good to be true he cleans lol. I cant wait for more.
Author's Response:
HE can come clean my house any time... I'd even provide his uniform. ;) Thank you for your review. I'll post 10 in a few minutes!
Date: 26 Jul 2010 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 9
Aww...Edward is so sweet! I want one!
Author's Response:
Who doesn't want an Edward? :) Thank you for your review!
Date: 26 Jul 2010 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 8
Aros laugh is something else. Why does victoria want them dead????
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. His laugh is one of my favorite parts of NM... I always rewind it several times so I can listen to it! :) Victoria will tell you all about it in a later chapter!
Date: 26 Jul 2010 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 7
Love Esme so her pov is alway good. The red head has to be victoria but why????
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I also love Esme, and her natural maternal-ness... Yes, the red-head is V, and the reason for what she's doing will be revealed!
Date: 26 Jul 2010 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 6
I thought it was a nice chaper kind of like new beginings.
Author's Response:
Thank you, and thank you for the review!
Date: 26 Jul 2010 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 5
It is a good thing she is safe with Edward no ? she is moving in???
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Yes, she is moving into Edward's building.
Date: 26 Jul 2010 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 4
Why would anyone be after her and the baby???
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review, and I promise that the cause will be revealed!
Date: 26 Jul 2010 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 3
I think Edward is a dream a sweet sweet dream and Bella better hold on to him. I like the part where he said that we'll just have to keep our eyes open.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. Edward is very dreamy... :)
Date: 26 Jul 2010 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 2
First someone needs to bitch slap that nurse LOL. That was so sweet of Edward to go out of his way she better call him.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I agree!
Date: 26 Jul 2010 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
That is so sad. Did she kill him first or did he kill her.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! He killed her and then shot himself. Sorry if that wasn't very clear in the chapter!
Date: 26 Jul 2010 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 8
loved it can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I just posted chapter nine... I hope you enjoy it as much as this chapter!
Date: 25 Jul 2010 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 8
The date was awesome but the threats freak me out. I hope nothing bad happens to them.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Le sigh... who doesn't want an awesome date with Edward? :)
Date: 25 Jul 2010 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oh dear...and I also got a kick out of Aro's laugh...and you are right...it is strangely fitting for this chapter...great job!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. My husband laughs at me because I actually have his laugh recorded as a ring tone... I can't help but giggle when I hear it! :)
Date: 25 Jul 2010 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
Edward is really sweet. Does he make house calls?
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. I'll ask him to give you a visit! :)
Date: 25 Jul 2010 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 2
I just found this story and I love it so far. Edward is such a sweet doctor and I can't believe how incredibly rude those nurses were just talking behind her back like that after all that she's been through. Poor Bella.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. I'm very glad you are enjoying the story. What I wanted to capture with the whole nurse scene was that people are extremely judgemental... They had no idea what had happened and just considered Bella to be trashy.
Date: 25 Jul 2010 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 5
they are so cute together!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I'm glad you like their relationship!
Date: 25 Jul 2010 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 2
aw he is so sweet!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! Gotta love a sweet Edward!
Date: 25 Jul 2010 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
love it!
Author's Response:
Thank you, and thank you for your review!
Date: 25 Jul 2010 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 7
oh this is not good...not good at all...but good chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review!
Date: 25 Jul 2010 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 6
oh dear...shopping with Alice and a baby...this should be interesting...
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review... I love Alice's spunk, though I would definately not want to go shopping with her!
Date: 25 Jul 2010 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 5
i really love this story
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad you are enjoying the story. Also, thank you for your review!
Date: 25 Jul 2010 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 3
i really love this edward
Author's Response:
Me too! :) Thank you for your review!
Date: 25 Jul 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 2
that nurse was a bitch but edward was nice
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! I don't know that I could write a mean Edward! :)
Date: 25 Jul 2010 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
so sad
Author's Response:
The first chapter is very sad... Thank you for your review!
Date: 24 Jul 2010 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 5
This is such a cute story so far. It'll be interesting to see what has happened at Bella's house.
Thanks for taking the time to write this and share with all of us!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! I'm nearly done writing the story, but the version I'm posting here has been edited since I posted it on FF.net... There were some errors pointed out to me (this story is unbeta'd), and I wanted to fix those!
Date: 24 Jul 2010 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 5
Great story!! (:
Author's Response:
Thank you, and thank you for the review!
Date: 24 Jul 2010 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 5
Aww...Edward is such a sweetie! And what does she mean she needs to think about it...really?! haha...great job!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I'm glad you liked the chapter. Bella drives me nuts sometimes, so I had to keep some of that in my story, right?
Date: 24 Jul 2010 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 4
poor Bella...I wonder who is after her??
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review... I promise you will find out... eventually! :)
Date: 24 Jul 2010 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 3
Aww...that was sad...but yay for 3am phone calls to Edward!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Who better to talk to at 3am... I'd certainly like a phone call like that!
Date: 24 Jul 2010 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 2
yay for first meetings!!! Great job...although I would have punched the nurse in the face...lol
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I would have liked to hit the nurse as well!
Date: 24 Jul 2010 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
wow...way to drive right in...good job though.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review... I wanted to hook people with the first chapter! :)
Date: 24 Jul 2010 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great story so far.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review, and I'm glad you are enjoying it!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2010 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 4
How scary for Bella. Good thing Edward is protective already. Loved it, great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you for another review... Here's 5!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2010 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved the chapter! Foreboding and foreshadowing ending? Maybe? Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! I'll post chapter 4 for you right... NOW! :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2010 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 2
I'm really enyjoying this. So sad and sweet.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you are enjoying it, and I hope you continue to read!