Date: 25 Jul 2012 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue
Hahaha! I literally loved your last chapter :D
The story is awesome, but the end is not some cliché, it's refreshing :)
Tha,k you for your imagination!
From France,
Bisous :)
Date: 19 Jul 2012 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue
What a hilarious way to end it! Bella was sooo bad!
Date: 19 Jul 2012 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 65
I am very curious how Emmett will combat these thieves and cattle killers.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 53
Bella was so sweet to hear his confession with such understanding.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 33
I was glad that Bella was accepting of Rose.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 24
Love Alice! I liked how she handled Emmett and gave advice to Bella.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 21
I wonder how the ride will go. I wonder if Alice sees that Emmett is distracted.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 20
I wonder what he will say to Jasper.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 19
I wonder if Bella and Alice will find out about Rose.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 18
Loving the image of a tiny Alice.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 17
I love that Bella can ride a horse. Edward is certainly stepping in it!
Date: 18 Jul 2012 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 16
I am enjoying the Spanish lesson. I am glad Bella is making him grovel. I like Alice.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 15
I love Carmen! Interesting that you made Alice an orphan here raised by nuns.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 14
I wonder how long Bella will harbor hurt feelings.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 13
I like Carmen and Elezar.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 12
I like Jasper.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 11
That is an awesome entrance for Alice!
Date: 18 Jul 2012 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 10
What happened to Alice? I can't wait to find out.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 9
That was one crazy scene. I am glad EEmmett believed Bella.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh this is good!
Date: 18 Jul 2012 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 6
So here is Alice! I am very curious how she will take to Emmett.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 5
I am very curious how Bella will meet Edward.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 4
And I thought the mail order bride would be Rose.
Date: 18 Jul 2012 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 3
Emmett is cute trying to curb his tongue!
Date: 18 Jul 2012 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 2
Makes me wonder if Jasper will make a play for Bella.
Date: 17 Jul 2012 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love a period fic! This is really an interesting start.
Date: 11 Jul 2012 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue
they do have a knack of getting caught at the wrong time,don't they?i can't even imagine how embarrassing it must have been when Charlie reported everything openly.
great read.i am so glad i could read it in full!
Date: 20 Jun 2012 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 6
He'll end up w Rosie, and Alice w Jasper. But where is Edward? I can't wait!
Date: 20 Jun 2012 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 3
I'm really liking Carmen. She brings the Latin flavor
Date: 20 Jun 2012 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 2
I knew that was what Jasper was thinking, ha! Love stories set during this time, excited to read the next chapter.
Date: 16 Jun 2012 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue
I just love this story. Again.
Date: 15 Jun 2012 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue
Wow, really loved this story. Thanks for a really good read.
Date: 14 Jun 2012 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue
I joined this cattle drive late, but I'm sure glad I did. What a great story. Now I'm off to catch up with the sequel.
Date: 11 Jun 2012 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 5
I am loving this story. I am always a sucker for a period piece and a good story line and it looks like I am getting both here.
Date: 10 Apr 2012 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 11
Thank you so much. I cannot tell you how hard I laughed just picturing the scene of Alice beating down on Eric Yorkie. I really needed that. Sunday was my deceased daughter's birthday. She would have been 30. We lost her almost 3 years ago. So I have been down with her birthday approaching. She was a big fan of fanfiction and wrote many stories herself. Looking forward to reading more. Thanks again.
Date: 19 Nov 2011 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 11
I'm an idiot but great story
Date: 19 Nov 2011 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 10
ch 10 finished
Date: 02 Nov 2011 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
I loved this story. Thank you for sharing with us.
Date: 25 Oct 2011 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue
hi great chapter
His story was amazing
I simply loved it: D
kisses, until the next
Date: 24 Jul 2011 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue
Awesome story. I started this story today early in the morning and couldn't stop reading it. Thank u very much for giving out a lil piece of urself. I truly loved it
Date: 10 May 2011 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue
Loved the Story! I'm so excited that you have a sequel!!!
ANgel
Date: 06 May 2011 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 12
poor Jasper.... I hope it works out
ANgel
Date: 05 May 2011 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 9
I laughed so hard through this chapter!
Angel
Date: 05 May 2011 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oh no...Emmetts gonna hurt him!
Loved they way they met.
ANgel
Date: 05 May 2011 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 7
Yay they have met! And how embarrassing..but I really like that he was enjoying the view...tehee
Angel
Date: 05 May 2011 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 5
Coward... pricsless!
Angel
Date: 05 May 2011 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 4
Awww Poor EM :(
Angel
Date: 05 May 2011 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 3
Emmett really cracked me up with the not trying to curse..
Angel
Date: 05 May 2011 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ok Just started this! Very different read!!!
Angel
Date: 10 Apr 2011 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue
awww poor edward lol.....glad it ended this way!:)
Date: 30 Mar 2011 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue
so nice:))
Date: 24 Mar 2011 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 33
I know I'm late to the table, but I'm really enjoying this story!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 12
This chapter was really funny!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh boy. That's awkward. I hope Emmett doesn't kill Edward before he and Bella can explain the situation.
Date: 19 Mar 2011 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue
I just finished reading the entire story and I just wanted to say that I loved it!!!
Date: 11 Mar 2011 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue
I perposly left this until it was finished and I have to say...LOVED IT!!!!
Wonderful story and I am sure you could have kept going, but I understand it has to end somewhere.
Thank you for this story.
Date: 10 Mar 2011 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue
that was to cute i love the way you write can't wait to see what else you have writen
thank you
angel
Date: 10 Mar 2011 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue
LOL. Great ending to a great story! Loved the kids names too Charlie, Billy and Harry. Or - charles, william and Harry
Date: 04 Mar 2011 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 25
bahahha, Leave it to Em to fart during church.
Date: 03 Mar 2011 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 17
I really enjoy reading your western story, although the scenerie is normally not my first choice. But as many reviews you got I decided to give your story a chance and I got rewarded. I can not stop me from reading in every free minute.
Thanks for writing
All the best from Austria
Date: 16 Feb 2011 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue
God, I loved that. Sorry I didn't review every chapter, but like I said before, I was too excited to get to the next one. Off to Untamed Hearts now...promise to review more!
Date: 16 Feb 2011 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 70
I'm on pins and needles again! Thank God I don't have to wait or I'd die!
Date: 16 Feb 2011 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 50
I owe you a huge apology. I had 50 chances to leave a review, but in my owne defense, I was too eager to move on, so I didn't. Sorry.
I love westerns, but have found over time that I have a hard time reading them, much preferring to watch them. This story changed that for me. I actually wrote one and have it waiting to be posted on another site because, aw shucks, ma'am, who don't love a cowboy?
So, I have to say, I'm so pleasantly surprised that I'm anxious to get on to the next part, but I had to let you know that much like the 2000+ posters, I'm in love! Can't wait to see how it turns out.
Date: 29 Jan 2011 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 90: Epilogue
Edward will never get to pass the rubbing one out and getting caught will he?!
Date: 29 Jan 2011 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 89
Spare any more embarrassment for Edward, he's had quite a bit already!
Date: 29 Jan 2011 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 88
Post congrats on your dissertation Dr!!
Date: 28 Jan 2011 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 86
I had a suspicion that they'd get the ranch from Mallory(bank). Karma
Date: 28 Jan 2011 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 85
This chap has me laughing out loud in a fit of giggles. At least Rose played off things or else all hell would break loose. Got to luv Em and his big ass mouth coming in buck ass naked.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 84
A nightmare! Will they get alone time or will everyone be around on their pre-honeymoon time? Rosie's knocked up, but unwed. She sure is stubborn, haha.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 83
Wow, the story behind James' motive was creative indeed. What a twist.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 81
So Carmen and Rosie bonded over Mallory, haha. Looks like Alice is leader of the pack to get'R Done!
Date: 28 Jan 2011 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 80
Dear Rosie blew that SOB away! His Mexican comment had my rifle aiming into his mouth, glad Rosie pulled the trigger, lol.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 79
Jenks to the rescue!
Date: 28 Jan 2011 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 77
Carmen is pissing me off with her snarky comments! R.I.P. Tyler.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 75
Yikes...a nightmare, a perv touching her?
Date: 28 Jan 2011 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 74
Poor Rosie is tough as nails living a hard knocked life, able to handle Carmen's harsh welcome and insults. But, in charge she is and doing a fine job at that!
Date: 28 Jan 2011 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 73
How sweet of Jas kissing Alice's wounded face.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 72
I didn't expect Carmen to respond like that, I wonder what's up?
Date: 28 Jan 2011 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 71
Ugh, James is disgusting.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 70
Alice is badass taking the law into her tiny skilled hands. Rosie to the rescue. Awe Edward thinking of Auntie Esme's pregnancy and not wanting her stressed and the baby too.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 68
I can't imagine riding a horse full speed for so many hrs full of anxiety not knowing what is happening!
Date: 28 Jan 2011 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 67
This is keeping me interested, is El dead? Bella kidnapped... How long before the guys find out what happened? I must read on to find out!
Date: 28 Jan 2011 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 66
Oh no the poor animals...
Date: 28 Jan 2011 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 64
No kidding, their engagement is a surprise. I hope Alice doesn't feel cheated. Damn Emmet's big ass mouth, give him a shiner Alice plz.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 63
All good in the hood! Except poor Emmy-Bear and Rosie :-(
Date: 28 Jan 2011 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 62
Those two shits should drink up that water.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 61
So now Edward knows he won't be a broke bitch, I mean cowpoke anymore.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 60
Oh my "one shot" Alice Brandon! I was hoping she didn't kill her father, like if he was some perv or something. Glad she blew that dirty fucker away, filthy judge. Go Jasp, standing by his woman. I hope nobody finds her, poor little Ali soon to be Mrs. Whitlock. Not that she couldn't defend herself, haha.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 59
Yea, the Cullen's are pregos. Awe Edward thinks about making babies with Bella. Now, Alice is engaged, lol!!!
Date: 28 Jan 2011 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 58
Sheriff Jasper is frisky!! Shot gun wedding, I always thought it meant when someone was knocked up. But, literally holding a shot gun to Alice's head is f'n hilarious.
Date: 27 Jan 2011 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 56
Edward got caught, and Em saying he better not be thinking about Bella had me giggling. Poor guy must have blue balls, hmm I could help him out, haha. So Edward is a carver, how precious the rose is handmade with love.