Date: 07 Jan 2012 4:30 PM Title: Acceptance
I was aprehensive about reading your story as I just don't like the subject matter. I've tried to watch American History X and I just can't, even if it is on tv and it is edited, I can't do it. You're writing about a very upsetting problem.
With all of that being said, I'm intersted in where you are going with this story. It seems like Bella has hit a turning point. Edward doesn't seem as far gone as Jasper and Alice, but I'm curious how he will act once he learns Bella is going over to Angela's for dinner.
You're writing is strong (so stronge in fact that I skimmed through the beating of the 16 year old boy at the bar and skimmed through the beating/rape of the woman. i'm not stupid, i know what happened. This isn't a reflection of your writing, just the subject matter, which you gave proper warning about).
the subject matter is indeed hard to stomach, but the story is intereting. I want to see how it turns out.
Waiting for the next one!
Date: 05 Jan 2012 7:00 AM Title: Anarchy
I was very suprised when I read Edward wasn't cheating, I should have known better!! You have to look at the reasons why they are the way they are. Violent acts happened to them, so they are getting back I guess. Even in todays world, there are people like this. Don't hate the author, this is a story, and you were warned before hand!!! I have read several of your stories tonight, they are all very original. Very well written in my opinion. Back to Edward, Bella doesn't completely believe Edward about the sex issue, she wants to....He has to really sit and talk with her and explain it well in detail. I think Bella lacks self esteem because of her thinking of Edward having sex so often with others, thats why she turned to drugs to block the pain. Since they met so young, they probably were eachothers first, and maybe only till this initiation. Bella needs to back off the drugs now. Do her "time" and move on, maybe to another town, start fresh kinda. They can come back to the Group, or start another in another town since Edward is so "high ranking" I'll shut up now...sorry.
Date: 02 Jan 2012 8:37 AM Title: Assumptions
This story is disgusting, I honestly don't understand why you would take
Characters well known and loved and turn them into sick twisted
Trash that you come up with, you need really need help.
Date: 15 Apr 2011 2:38 AM Title: Accusations
Loooove this story!!! Update update update :)
Date: 19 Feb 2010 4:54 AM Title: Anarchy
Please update soon!!!
Date: 13 Feb 2010 10:19 AM Title: Accusations
hmmm should be interesting.........
Date: 13 Feb 2010 10:12 AM Title: Abomination
fuck........
Date: 13 Feb 2010 10:02 AM Title: Annihilation
horrible fighting......... nice to see that edward isn't cheating.... didn't see that coming.. LOL
Date: 13 Feb 2010 2:37 AM Title: Anarchy
Wow this is very very, wow.........
Have to see where this is going...
Good on you for being brave and writing this...
If you have any problems please send me a PM...
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
Date: 12 Feb 2010 9:18 PM Title: Anarchy
Looking forward to whatever comes next...
Date: 12 Feb 2010 3:26 AM Title: Accusations
I love that you named her Angela...that was very poetic...I am a nervous wreck as to where this is going to go...but I am in for the long haul..
Great job
Date: 12 Feb 2010 2:43 AM Title: Annihilation
OH god..that movie still gives me nightmares...that scene on the curb...yike...ouch..
your subject is hard to write about...but it is very well written. it sucks that there are people that believe this shit, but there are...and you do a great job protraying both the evilness of the situation and the fraility of their spirits...Your readers need to remember..that hate brings on hate. If it is all you know, they you will live for it.
so sad really, but you do a great job.
Thanks
Author's Response:
Yes someone made me promise no curb stomps in this story, and I shall comply with that :) Thanks for reading bb!
Date: 12 Feb 2010 2:25 AM Title: Addicted
oh my goodness. this is going to be good.. Very interesting idea..I look forward to seeing where this will go.
Thanks