Date: 21 Aug 2020 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Unexpected
More please
Date: 15 Apr 2014 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Unexpected
Please update I loved the first one you posted and I also love this one please update soon
Date: 15 Jun 2013 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Unexpected
I t has been a very long time since u have last updated this story!!! HAVE U ABANDONED THIS STORY??????????????? PLEASE LET ME KNOW!!!
Date: 15 Jan 2013 11:48 PM Title: Author Note
I would love more for sure!! :)
Date: 06 Jan 2013 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Unexpected
So that's what Bella saw. Renee wasn't a good mom but I'm not sure even she deserved that; that was harsh.
Author's Response:
very harsh, Aro and his people are not very nice in my story. Thanks for pushing that review button...
:)
Date: 03 Jan 2013 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Unexpected
wow .. the angst level on this story just went through the roof. Interesting how the plot is unfolding, Aro is one sick bastard for sure.
Author's Response:
Giggle, the momentum continues throughout, thanks for reviewing. Hugs
Date: 03 Jan 2013 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 2 - First Encounters
I just started this, fascinating. Format is odd, with the large spaces between paragraphs, but i'll get used to it. love jake the puppy dog.
Author's Response:
Thanks for pressing that button. Sorry about the formatting, it's just how it uploads. Hope you continue to enjoy.
Date: 03 Jan 2013 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Unexpected
wow The V are worse than normal. not a redeemable soul there at all it seems. Although I don't feel very sorry for Renee after what B was forced to go through.
Guessing E and A and B saw the vision of Renee getting raped?
Author's Response:
You never know, there might be one or two good guys
Author's Response:
You never know, there might be one or two good guys
Date: 03 Jan 2013 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Unexpected
Thanks for the update!
Date: 27 Dec 2012 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Time to talk
Wow that was a lot to take in. I wonder when they'll figure out or rather find out that Bella is the one suffering from thirst. I hope Edward & Bella get around to having sex. It doesn't have to be soon I just hope it'll be in the story somewhere.
Author's Response:
hehehehe. You are such a smart cookie!!!
And there are plenty of fun times ahead for E & B but some yummy frustration first giggle
Thanks for reviewing, you are ace!
Date: 24 Dec 2012 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Time to talk
Thanks for the update, and Merry Christmas
Date: 23 Dec 2012 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Time to talk
Great chapter. Love that Bella surprises them all. Hope Billy behaves.
Author's Response:
Merry Xmas Hun
Date: 23 Dec 2012 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Time to talk
I am in love with this story, you must post more!
Author's Response:
Aweeee thanks sooo much, you gave me the biggest smile. I'll post the next chapter ASAP. Hugs
Date: 13 Dec 2012 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Awakening
Okay that was really COOL!!!!
It would have been so cool if she verbally threatened Billy for thinking what he was thinking. I wander how Charlie was doing during this, I hope his thoughts are in the next chapter.
Mob could there also be Edward/Bella intimate moment too, like a hug or a gazing into each others eyes with just the two of them. I really enjoined the monument they had when she woke up but they weren't alone.
Author's Response:
Date: 11 Dec 2012 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Awakening
<3 Oh how I love this story! It's amazing :) I cannot wait for the next chapter!
Date: 11 Dec 2012 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Revelations
Hey, first time I have ever commented on a story on this site. Your story so far is excellent and I would love to read da next chapter asap so I am hoping my comment is the 8th one :)
Author's Response:
sQuEaL!!!! Thank you so much for taking the time to push that review button. There are so many great stories on this site, and it gave me the biggest smile to read that your first ever review came to me. Hugs.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Awakening
wow so much going on in that chapter. I wonder what renee will think. Will they turn her or kill her. I hope you update again and soon. love love it.
Author's Response:
Thank you for pushing that little review button. I will try and get the next chapter up asap.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 4:41 PM Title: Author Note
Hi, I just found this story and am going to give it a go. Very curious about it. Your author's note (chapter one) only convinces me more to read your story.
Author's Response:
Hello hello... Thank you for giving my story a go. My fingers are crossed that you enjoy it and I'd love to hear your thoughts on what you read.
Author's Response:
Hello hello... Thank you for giving my story a go. My fingers are crossed that you enjoy it and I'd love to hear your thoughts on what you read.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Awakening
great chapter. Billy is being a wanker. At least jake seems to actually want to help her. Poor confused Charlie.
Ugh James getting involved. Hope someone kills Aro painfully. What a presumptuous arse. Renee will throw b under a bus I'm sure.
Author's Response:
giggle. Billy is a wanker! I cracked up when I read that. You're very amusing! lol
Date: 11 Dec 2012 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Awakening
Another great chapter. Looking forward to the next.
Author's Response:
Thanks Hun!
Date: 10 Dec 2012 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Revelations
Well that was quite a bit to process.
Author's Response:
hehehe. I hope you enjoyed it though. Thanks a bunch for pushing that button
Date: 09 Dec 2012 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Revelations
Wow!! This is truely an amazingly beautifully well written story!! I really am enjoing reading this story!! I absolutly love writter who can write long capters. This story is very intriging & keeps me coming back just to see wwhat is going to happen next. Can't wait 4 the next chapter!!
Author's Response:
SqUeAl........ Thank you soooooooo much for your kind words, you gave me the biggest smile!!! Next chapter is up.
Hugs
Date: 09 Dec 2012 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Revelations
Love it, as always :) I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
:)) Thanks hun, I love that you're still reading my story and enjoying
Date: 08 Dec 2012 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Revelations
hmm aro had her followed. Ok Confused about healing her herself. Is she a witch or something else.
Author's Response:
lol. It will all make sense soon I promise. I can tell you she isn't a witch though, hehehe
Thanls sooo much for reviewing
Date: 07 Dec 2012 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Revelations
I forgot how much I love this story...thanks for the rewrite!
Author's Response:
Squeal. Thank you.
Date: 07 Dec 2012 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Revelations
I love it! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you for pushing that review button.
Date: 07 Dec 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Revelations
Wonderful chapter. I cannot wait until she meets Edward!
Author's Response:
Yay!!! Thanks a bunch for reviewing. Hugs
Date: 07 Dec 2012 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Revelations
wow so much going on. Aro is even sicker than normal. Buh bye Riley.
Alice is too funny. Glad Rose has Em. Aww Jake is playing nice.
Author's Response:
Hehe... Hugs
Date: 07 Dec 2012 10:51 AM Title: Author Note
I will read, I am French and that is google translated what I read and write.
Sometimes it is not easy to understand.
Author's Response:
Wow, I can imagine somethings would be lost in the translation. Thanks so much for reading and leaving feedback.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Big Red & Rusty
Wow, so Bella has more than one power & one of them is the same power Aro has. No wonder he's suppose make an appearance later. She's going to be pretty powerful. I also see why Rose was the only one who could go to Bella. Rose had had nothing to do with her at that point. If Edward or any of the others had showen up & they touched her hand she would have known Edward was watching her. Her heart probably would have given out. This way she gets easied into the whole vampire thing a little at a time & they will know not to touch her till it's time for Edward to come clean about spying on her & being her mate. That was funny, "What took you so long Dr. Cullen?" next chapter please.
Author's Response:
hehehehe... interesting theory you have about Rose, I love hearing my readers differnt ideas on things, I tend to leave some areas open to interpretation just so I can see if you guys are paying attention... lol... It also gives me the change to adapt soome of your ideas into the storyline, which is really helpful when my brain freezes lol...
Thanks a bunch for your review, next chap not far off I promise.
Hugs
Date: 03 Dec 2012 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Big Red & Rusty
oooh an interesting gift. she can see memories like Aro huh? poor b. LOL for E peeping on her.
Author's Response:
giggle. I love peeping Eddie... lol... ahhhh you'll just have to wait and see how her gift pans out lol
Date: 02 Dec 2012 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Enigmas
Ha okay that was funny, Edward watched her masterbating for the very first time. Oh man she is going to be very embarrassed if she ever finds out she had an audience of one. That makes me feel better though, it was necessarily Jake she was reacting to, he made her feel a bit embarrassed & uncomfortable being shirtless but it was Edward's unknown presence that she was really reacting to.
Next chap please ^_^
Author's Response:
Giggle, so glad you enjoyed that lol. Next chapt not far away. Hugs for your review, you made me laugh.
Date: 29 Nov 2012 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Enigmas
OH MY GOD! *squeal* I got a shout out! *does the cabbage patch dance and the running man* God, I literally checked daily for an update, and since my kids are awake and staring at me for my not so elegant and quite rusty dance moves, i grabbed my tablet and locked myself in my car. What kids? *hehe i am joking, or am I ?....(yeah i am, i suck at lying.)
We are getting into the story now sister! I am excited, is it obvious? Nah, didnt think so.. I remember this chapter from before and dont even care that i am reading it again. It is like im a Never Say Never VIRGIN! *turns head looking for the idiot who said the word .....(stage whispers) virgin.* Nope cant find them, but forget them , moving on. In my opinion it starts picking up and every chapter tops the last. Have you read any of my previous posts from the last tide together? (dude, i said last ride) hehe, sorry, just missed our goofing off and in appropriate remarks.
Well now im just waiting for a new chap, and a response to my jabbering, if you have the time.Busy lady and all, with writing this epic story and all.
Till the next time my dear.......
Heather
Author's Response:
You crack me up!!! You have know idea how thrilled you make me knowing that you hang out for chapter posts. Hell girl, you deserved the shout out!!! I love your jabbering. Sadly when I removed the chapters all me past feedback ran away so I haven't been able to go back and review our previous banter... I'm frowning... giggle.... I love your messages, you paint such a funny picture in my head, I'm busting to get the next chapt posted so I can see more remarks from you.
:)
Date: 28 Nov 2012 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Enigmas
Love love love!
Author's Response:
thanks soooo much for the kind words, I'm glad you liked the rewrite. After so long not writing I figured it was a great way to get back into it and those first chapters sucked badly hehehe
Date: 27 Nov 2012 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 1 - New Beginnings
I love it <3 You've done a beautiful job rewriting it, as I knew you would.
Date: 27 Nov 2012 11:33 PM Title: Author Note
Oh my goodness! I'm sorry to hear about you and your hubby :( but I am ever so glad to hear that you've found your passion for life again!! And I absolutely want you to start this story back up, for I love it dearly. I'm so glad to know you are alive and well.
Date: 27 Nov 2012 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Enigmas
Thanks good chapter
Date: 27 Nov 2012 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Enigmas
Ok, a little disturbed by the attraction to Jacob. I'm an Edward & Bella fan all the way, so just sayin'. I don't think Edward would be pleased if he knew what inspired Bella's little self-loving session. That might ruin the moment, just a little bit. Looking forward to seeing where this is going.
Author's Response:
Giggle, ohhh come on now, I'm Team E all the way so dont worry, but seriously who wouldn't stare at Jacobs pecks if they were right there. Lol...
Anyway, she might have pictured those sexy abs, but who said the feelings came from that. Don't forget Edward is right there. ;-)
Date: 26 Nov 2012 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Enigmas
oh Jake you dont stand a chance. eww for flashback. poor b. OOOh peeping tom eddie.
Author's Response:
Hehe
;-)
Date: 20 Nov 2012 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 2 - First Encounters
Finally, an Emmett that does more than play video games! Poor Bella though! She has been through the wringer! Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Emmybear rocks!!!! Giggle.
Thanks soooo much for pressing that little review button
Date: 20 Nov 2012 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 1 - New Beginnings
Still as good as the first time, love your writing style. (Go find a publisher)
Author's Response:
Naw you're a sweetheart, thank you!
Date: 20 Nov 2012 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 2 - First Encounters
Thanks for the update
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 19 Nov 2012 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 2 - First Encounters
oooh B is gonna be mad when she finds out about Jake/Scruffy
Date: 19 Nov 2012 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 2 - First Encounters
woo-hoo! god i love this story, it keeps me on the edge of my seat. Every word i read, while loving every fuc**ing word, also pains me because that means one more word to the chapter being over. Do you get what i am saying?
I'm excited. When i saw you update with an authors note, i grabbed my tablet, grabbed a newport and ran outside to smoke while reading it. Thats when i sent you a review informing you I have been following this gem of a story from the very beginning and was a loyal "reviewer" too, and that it was under my previous penname (NaWiSi). I wanted to go back to the beginning and start over, i got a few read before going to sleep. Imagine my surprise when i went to continue, but could not locate any chapters but the first one. I panicked, OK! Lets just say i tapped into some dramatic theatrics and wanted to fall to my knees and yell to the heavens "NnnnOooooooooo, Nnnooooooo!
My husband clearly thought i was in a tourette mode.
I love your writing and i personally cant wait to read both a new chapter and your reply if you think i am REPLY WORTHY. JUST SAYING
Author's Response:
It's loyal readers like you my dear that get me all worked up and motivated to get moving on my next chapter. That you sooooo much for your review, you created the funniest image in my head of your little freak out hahaha. Keep your eyes open cause it won't be long until I spit out the next edited chapter. You gave me the biggest smile and I just wanna hug you for that.
Mmwah!!!!
Date: 17 Nov 2012 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 1 - New Beginnings
hello again. great story. in response to your question regarding my previous penname, it was NaWiSi. just as good as your first, 1st, time writing this chapter
Date: 14 Nov 2012 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 1 - New Beginnings
Thanks good chapter
Date: 13 Nov 2012 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 1 - New Beginnings
Welcome back!
Date: 13 Nov 2012 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 1 - New Beginnings
Interesting start.
Date: 13 Nov 2012 12:08 AM Title: Author Note
i have been here since the beginning, under a different name, but all the same. i have waited too long for an update and hell yeah i want u to continue. you have too.
Author's Response:
thank you, I will & hopefully with my revising the earlier chapters and tweeking it the story will be a bunch better... what was your previous name???
Date: 07 Nov 2012 9:01 PM Title: Author Note
Well i want you to finish this but Thats up to you If you can't get back into it I will be sad but would rather you do whats best for you I miss your updates please let us know what you decide....
Author's Response:
Thanks hun. Chapters are starting to roll out
Date: 06 Nov 2012 3:21 AM Title: Author Note
lets do this girlie im pumped that your finally back!!!!!!!! rock this shit out
kT
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I'm doing a quick edit from the start so reporting story. You may want to start reading from the beginning. It won't take me long until I'm all caught up and can end the story in the right way.
Hugs.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 2:55 PM Title: Author Note
Absolutely we want you to! I'm glad you're in a happier and more content place now, and I wish you a wonderful journey! Be happy!
Date: 05 Nov 2012 2:19 AM Title: Author Note
I'm sorry you had to separate from your hubby but I'm so happy you found yourself! I would love if you finished this story. Actually now that you updated I am going to go back and read it again from the beginning so more chapters would be much appreciated. Good luck with everything!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I'm doing a quick edit from the start so reporting story. You may want to start reading from the beginning. It won't take me long until I'm all caught up and can end the story in the right way.
Hugs.
Date: 04 Nov 2012 9:08 AM Title: Author Note
Well congrats on your life changes!
I would love for you to keep writing.
Date: 03 Nov 2012 2:09 PM Title: Author Note
This is a great story. I hope u continue it. I love all the diff pov's.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I'm doing a quick edit from the start so reporting story. You may want to start reading from the beginning. It won't take me long until I'm all caught up and can end the story in the right way.
Hugs.
Date: 03 Nov 2012 12:54 AM Title: Author Note
If you write, I'll be here to read. I'm glad you're feeling better.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I'm doing a quick edit from the start so reporting story. You may want to start reading from the beginning. It won't take me long until I'm all caught up and can end the story in the right way.
Hugs.
Date: 02 Nov 2012 9:00 PM Title: Author Note
Please do continue...your writing was always amazing and the story flowed so smothly, it would be a shame for this wonderful story not to have a fitting end.
Date: 02 Nov 2012 5:21 PM Title: Author Note
Good for you! would love to read more
Date: 02 Nov 2012 5:06 PM Title: Author Note
WOW I am sooo glad things are working out for you!!! I missed you much!!! Heck ya if you want to continue the story i am up for it!!! It is good that all is good with you and you have found happiness!!! love it!! take care and just do what is best for you :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I'm doing a quick edit from the start so reporting story. You may want to start reading from the beginning. It won't take me long until I'm all caught up and can end the story in the right way.
Hugs.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I'm doing a quick edit from the start so reporting story. You may want to start reading from the beginning. It won't take me long until I'm all caught up and can end the story in the right way.
Hugs.
Date: 02 Nov 2012 4:48 PM Title: Author Note
Of course we want you to continue!!!! Yey for loving your life again.
Date: 02 Nov 2012 3:18 PM Title: Author Note
I definately hope you will continue this story it has been amazing this far and I patiently wait for it to continue!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks hun, that means a lot... I found a chapter I haven't posted yet, I need to edit it, but you may not have to wait long for the next one.
:)