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Reviewer: fanfictionfeedn_the_addiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 4 All that Jazz

aww  man you maimed Jasper's pretty face!!!..  I hope he can get some liquid stiches so the scar would be minimal lol. 



Author's Response:

Yah Poor Jazz took the fall in chapter 4. Poor dude. So I’ve FINALLY finished Edroar chapter five. Sheesh…I know it took me forever. Let’s just say a certain Cullen was being a tad difficult… and it may not be who you suspect. I just gave the chapter to my beta and as soon as she’s finished with it I’ll post. YAY! I can’t wait. I’m so excited. Anyway, I just wanted to pop in to say thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my crazy little tale. Believe me I know reviews are never given lightly and they really mean so much to me. I hope you can forgive that it takes me so freaking looooong to reply. I have some strange OCD type affliction that I can’t seem to reply until I’ve finished the next chapter. What the hell is up with that? Perhaps I need to increase the meds…lol. Thanks again for taking the time to share your thoughts with me. Seriously, I can’t express how valuable a part of the writing process that truly is. I can’t wait to hear what you think of chapter 5. Gah! I always eagerly await the reaction and always fear the worst. Yes, I have some anxiety issues. It’s not pretty I tell ya. I’m SO Edroar Angela…sigh. If only I were as cool as Bella Swan.

 

P.S Jazz is thrilled with all the lovin he got from chapter 4. He said to make sure I throw some Darlins your way. Edroar of course is quite unhappy about sharing his readers with that southern charmer. He's just so darn possessive.

 

xoxo

Kelly

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 4 All that Jazz

That was to funny talk about a cluster fuck I am not sure what one is more funny Jess or mike LOL.  So Dr Cullen????



Author's Response:

So I’ve FINALLY finished Edroar chapter five. Sheesh…I know it took me forever. Let’s just say a certain Cullen was being a tad difficult… and it may not be who you suspect. I just gave the chapter to my beta and as soon as she’s finished with it I’ll post. YAY! I can’t wait. I’m so excited. Anyway, I just wanted to pop in to say thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my crazy little tale. Believe me I know reviews are never given lightly and they really mean so much to me. I hope you can forgive that it takes me so freaking looooong to reply. I have some strange OCD type affliction that I can’t seem to reply until I’ve finished the next chapter. What the hell is up with that? Perhaps I need to increase the meds…lol. Thanks again for taking the time to share your thoughts with me. Seriously, I can’t express how valuable a part of the writing process that truly is. I can’t wait to hear what you think of chapter 5. Gah! I always eagerly await the reaction and always fear the worst. Yes, I have some anxiety issues. It’s not pretty I tell ya. I’m SO Edroar Angela…sigh. If only I were as cool as Bella Swan.

 

P.S Jazz is thrilled with all the lovin he got from chapter 4. He said to make sure I throw some Darlins your way. Edroar of course is quite unhappy about sharing his readers with that southern charmer. He's just so darn possessive.

 

xoxo

Kelly

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 4 All that Jazz

:'( I miss Edroar.  Ok but we met Jazz and now he will be with Alice.  So does this mean that Dr. Cullen is a sour puss just like his son?  Gosh no wonder Edward is like that.  Actually I thought Edward is like that because he hasn't got laid. LMAO.  I cant wait until him and Bella get together.  Gosh angry sex is HOT. 



Author's Response:

I lMAO'd hard about Edroar being angry because he needs to get laid...perhaps. Could Bella's hoo ha be all that's really needed to tame that wicked beast? lol. So I’ve FINALLY finished Edroar chapter five. Sheesh…I know it took me forever. Let’s just say a certain Cullen was being a tad difficult… and it may not be who you suspect. I just gave the chapter to my beta and as soon as she’s finished with it I’ll post. YAY! I can’t wait. I’m so excited. Anyway, I just wanted to pop in to say thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my crazy little tale. Believe me I know reviews are never given lightly and they really mean so much to me. I hope you can forgive that it takes me so freaking looooong to reply. I have some strange OCD type affliction that I can’t seem to reply until I’ve finished the next chapter. What the hell is up with that? Perhaps I need to increase the meds…lol. Thanks again for taking the time to share your thoughts with me. Seriously, I can’t express how valuable a part of the writing process that truly is. I can’t wait to hear what you think of chapter 5. Gah! I always eagerly await the reaction and always fear the worst. Yes, I have some anxiety issues. It’s not pretty I tell ya. I’m SO Edroar Angela…sigh. If only I were as cool as Bella Swan.

 

P.S Jazz is thrilled with all the lovin he got from chapter 4. He said to make sure I throw some Darlins your way. Edroar of course is quite unhappy about sharing his readers with that southern charmer. He's just so darn possessive.

 

xoxo

Kelly

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 4 All that Jazz

Great chapter, loads of fun but no instant Alice/Jasper sparks? Looking forward to the next chapter and Edroar!

Author's Response:

So I’ve FINALLY finished Edroar chapter five. Sheesh…I know it took me forever. Let’s just say a certain Cullen was being a tad difficult… and it may not be who you suspect. I just gave the chapter to my beta and as soon as she’s finished with it I’ll post. YAY! I can’t wait. I’m so excited. Anyway, I just wanted to pop in to say thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my crazy little tale. Believe me I know reviews are never given lightly and they really mean so much to me. I hope you can forgive that it takes me so freaking looooong to reply. I have some strange OCD type affliction that I can’t seem to reply until I’ve finished the next chapter. What the hell is up with that? Perhaps I need to increase the meds…lol. Thanks again for taking the time to share your thoughts with me. Seriously, I can’t express how valuable a part of the writing process that truly is. I can’t wait to hear what you think of chapter 5. Gah! I always eagerly await the reaction and always fear the worst. Yes, I have some anxiety issues. It’s not pretty I tell ya. I’m SO Edroar Angela…sigh. If only I were as cool as Bella Swan.

 

P.S Jazz is thrilled with all the lovin he got from chapter 4. He said to make sure I throw some Darlins your way. Edroar of course is quite unhappy about sharing his readers with that southern charmer. He's just so darn possessive.

 

xoxo

Kelly

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 4 All that Jazz

hmm poor Jazz.  murder by stilletto.  lol



Author's Response:

So I’ve FINALLY finished Edroar chapter five. Sheesh…I know it took me forever. Let’s just say a certain Cullen was being a tad difficult… and it may not be who you suspect. I just gave the chapter to my beta and as soon as she’s finished with it I’ll post. YAY! I can’t wait. I’m so excited. Anyway, I just wanted to pop in to say thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my crazy little tale. Believe me I know reviews are never given lightly and they really mean so much to me. I hope you can forgive that it takes me so freaking looooong to reply. I have some strange OCD type affliction that I can’t seem to reply until I’ve finished the next chapter. What the hell is up with that? Perhaps I need to increase the meds…lol. Thanks again for taking the time to share your thoughts with me. Seriously, I can’t express how valuable a part of the writing process that truly is. I can’t wait to hear what you think of chapter 5. Gah! I always eagerly await the reaction and always fear the worst. Yes, I have some anxiety issues. It’s not pretty I tell ya. I’m SO Edroar Angela…sigh. If only I were as cool as Bella Swan.

 

P.S Jazz is thrilled with all the lovin he got from chapter 4. He said to make sure I throw some Darlins your way. Edroar of course is quite unhappy about sharing his readers with that southern charmer. He's just so darn possessive.

 

xoxo

Kelly

Reviewer: MarchHare5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 4 All that Jazz

Jasper. Mmmm.... :)

Jessica's a trip. LOL

Reviewer: bella71 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 4 All that Jazz

this story is so cute the marilyn moo statue too funny lol

Reviewer: swtvixen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2010 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 3 - I Know You Are But What Am I ?

Wonderfully funny chapter... cannot wait to read more :)



Author's Response:

 

Thanks so much for reading and for the review. They are like delicious little pieces of heaven to me. I'm so glad you're enjoying my kooky little tale!!! Sorry I’ve been so horrible lately with my replies. It seems I’ve developed some sort of odd OCD habit that I can’t reply until I finish writing the next chapter and then I’m rushing to reply so I can post the chapter so I’ll stop tweaking it like the tweak h00r I am….lol. It’s madness really. Just know, I SQUEE over your review and value it dearly.  I just finished chapter 4 and can't wait to see what you think of it. I'm a spazzy poster. It's nerve wracking for me but I LOVE IT...lol. Thanks again for the support it really means so much. :-)

 

xoxo

Kelly

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2010 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 3 - I Know You Are But What Am I ?

hmmm   Jazz I'm guessing....and he'll meet alice tonight



Author's Response:

 

Thanks so much for reading and for the review. They are like delicious little pieces of heaven to me. I'm so glad you're enjoying my kooky little tale!!! Sorry I’ve been so horrible lately with my replies. It seems I’ve developed some sort of odd OCD habit that I can’t reply until I finish writing the next chapter and then I’m rushing to reply so I can post the chapter so I’ll stop tweaking it like the tweak h00r I am….lol. It’s madness really. Just know, I SQUEE over your review and value it dearly.  I just finished chapter 4 and can't wait to see what you think of it. I'm a spazzy poster. It's nerve wracking for me but I LOVE IT...lol. Thanks again for the support it really means so much. :-)

 P.S Chapter 4 is ALL about Jazz.  :-)

xoxo

Kelly

Reviewer: Story Girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 3 - I Know You Are But What Am I ?

So many moments in this chapter had me laughing... it was really distracting those who were more intense in their viewing of the World Cup final match than I.  ;)  Great fun in this one.  Her reactions to Peter and her slip up as he left, her thoughts of Jessica and the references not only to her philosophical musical ponderings but the thought that she had to change the ringtone to eliminate the mental image of her dancing around in the spandex, and finally the wonderful reference to her 'wicked cool' grandmother all gave me reason to grin and I appreciated it.  I liked the encounter between Edward and Bella in this also as it has given me hope that there's a lot more to him and his sense of the ridiculous than meets the eye.  I look forward to discovering more sides to him.



Author's Response:

 

Thanks so much for reading and for the review. They are like delicious little pieces of heaven to me. I'm so glad you're enjoying my kooky little tale!!! Sorry I’ve been so horrible lately with my replies. It seems I’ve developed some sort of odd OCD habit that I can’t reply until I finish writing the next chapter and then I’m rushing to reply so I can post the chapter so I’ll stop tweaking it like the tweak h00r I am….lol. It’s madness really. Just know, I SQUEE over your review and value it dearly.  I just finished chapter 4 and can't wait to see what you think of it. I'm a spazzy poster. It's nerve wracking for me but I LOVE IT...lol. Thanks again for the support it really means so much. :-)

 

xoxo

Kelly

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 3 - I Know You Are But What Am I ?

I LOVE this story. Gosh I get into reading and then it ends and I am like *gasps* theres no more in this chapter???? LOL.  Anyway, I think they are made for each other.  She loves taunting him and he loves taunting her just as much.  I cant wait for the meeting at bottleneck.  I am thinking that Edroar is going to call her late for a massage and she is already going to be drunk and tell him a piece of her mind or let her mind speak what she really feels. LMAO that would be nice.  Or she could just go give him a drunken massage and see how he likes it.  That would be fun too.  Sorry this is what came to my mind and thought I would share the idea with you.  I cant wait for another update.  I wish it would could be everyday.



Author's Response:

 

Thanks so much for reading and for the review. They are like delicious little pieces of heaven to me. I'm so glad you're enjoying my kooky little tale!!! Sorry I’ve been so horrible lately with my replies. It seems I’ve developed some sort of odd OCD habit that I can’t reply until I finish writing the next chapter and then I’m rushing to reply so I can post the chapter so I’ll stop tweaking it like the tweak h00r I am….lol. It’s madness really. Just know, I SQUEE over your review and value it dearly.  I just finished chapter 4 and can't wait to see what you think of it. I'm a spazzy poster. It's nerve wracking for me but I LOVE IT...lol. Thanks again for the support it really means so much. :-)

 P.S LOVED your ideas...drunken Bella is always fun..lol.

xoxo

Kelly

Reviewer: NikiC Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 3 - I Know You Are But What Am I ?

Loving the story snarky Bella is my favorite Bella.  Though I must say that fact she has never seen the Powerpuff Girls is so wrong in so many ways.



Author's Response:

 

Thanks so much for reading and for the review. They are like delicious little pieces of heaven to me. I'm so glad you're enjoying my kooky little tale!!! Sorry I’ve been so horrible lately with my replies. It seems I’ve developed some sort of odd OCD habit that I can’t reply until I finish writing the next chapter and then I’m rushing to reply so I can post the chapter so I’ll stop tweaking it like the tweak h00r I am….lol. It’s madness really. Just know, I SQUEE over your review and value it dearly.  I just finished chapter 4 and can't wait to see what you think of it. I'm a spazzy poster. It's nerve wracking for me but I LOVE IT...lol. Thanks again for the support it really means so much. :-)

 

xoxo

Kelly

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 3 - I Know You Are But What Am I ?

I do believe she got under the 'Fat Cats' skin. lol Aww...I love me some country Jasper. Please say she will invite Jasper to the bar so he can meet Alice. Great chapter and story. Can't wait for more. Thanks



Author's Response:

 

Thanks so much for reading and for the review. They are like delicious little pieces of heaven to me. I'm so glad you're enjoying my kooky little tale!!! Sorry I’ve been so horrible lately with my replies. It seems I’ve developed some sort of odd OCD habit that I can’t reply until I finish writing the next chapter and then I’m rushing to reply so I can post the chapter so I’ll stop tweaking it like the tweak h00r I am….lol. It’s madness really. Just know, I SQUEE over your review and value it dearly.  I just finished chapter 4 and can't wait to see what you think of it. I'm a spazzy poster. It's nerve wracking for me but I LOVE IT...lol. Thanks again for the support it really means so much. :-)

 P.S Can't wait to hear what you think of Jazz. :-)

xoxo

Kelly

Reviewer: fanfictionfeedn_the_addiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 3 - I Know You Are But What Am I ?

keep'em comin



Author's Response:

 

Thanks so much for reading and for the review. They are like delicious little pieces of heaven to me. I'm so glad you're enjoying my kooky little tale!!! Sorry I’ve been so horrible lately with my replies. It seems I’ve developed some sort of odd OCD habit that I can’t reply until I finish writing the next chapter and then I’m rushing to reply so I can post the chapter so I’ll stop tweaking it like the tweak h00r I am….lol. It’s madness really. Just know, I SQUEE over your review and value it dearly.  I just finished chapter 4 and can't wait to see what you think of it. I'm a spazzy poster. It's nerve wracking for me but I LOVE IT...lol. Thanks again for the support it really means so much. :-)

 

xoxo

Kelly

Reviewer: MarchHare5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 3 - I Know You Are But What Am I ?

IMO, you should definitely do an EPOV. I'd love to hear his thoughts about Bella and how she's the only one who dares to stand up to him. Since he obviously *does* have a sense of humor, and a mischief streak a mile wide, I want to know what's going through his head--and why *did* he cancel his afternoon massage? Was he worried about his own reaction to his new masseuse? ;)

Really enjoying this! :)



Author's Response:

 

Thanks so much for reading and for the review. They are like delicious little pieces of heaven to me. I'm so glad you're enjoying my kooky little tale!!! Sorry I’ve been so horrible lately with my replies. It seems I’ve developed some sort of odd OCD habit that I can’t reply until I finish writing the next chapter and then I’m rushing to reply so I can post the chapter so I’ll stop tweaking it like the tweak h00r I am….lol. It’s madness really. Just know, I SQUEE over your review and value it dearly.  I just finished chapter 4 and can't wait to see what you think of it. I'm a spazzy poster. It's nerve wracking for me but I LOVE IT...lol. Thanks again for the support it really means so much. :-)

 

xoxo

Kelly

Reviewer: fanfictionfeedn_the_addiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 2 - What's in a Name?

your funny

Reviewer: fanfictionfeedn_the_addiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Plan A

Hey I got around to reading this and I like it.  I already favorited MoD so I should know about updates but oddly these days some of my favs have been updated and I havnt received alerts so.. Idk..

I tried to respond to your response of my review about living in Canarsie and giving you ideas but your contact link sends me nowhwere.  mybe pm me?  then Ill b able to respond. 

I plan to keep reading this too.

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Plan A

Hot damn, woman! Another great story. I can't wait to read more of this. One chapter in and I already love it! Thanks

Reviewer: Rockmamaoff Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 3 - I Know You Are But What Am I ?

The internal workings of Bella's mind are fascinating.  She is so feisty and strong-willed.  I absolutely love her.  She will definately keep Edward on his toes.  Jessica is, well, disturbing but I agree with the reviewer who said it was nice to see her mindless instead of spiteful and cruel.  Would love to read a few chapters in EPOV if possible.  Can't wait for the next chapter.  Good job.



Author's Response:

 

Thanks so much for reading and for the review. They are like delicious little pieces of heaven to me. I'm so glad you're enjoying my kooky little tale!!! Sorry I’ve been so horrible lately with my replies. It seems I’ve developed some sort of odd OCD habit that I can’t reply until I finish writing the next chapter and then I’m rushing to reply so I can post the chapter so I’ll stop tweaking it like the tweak h00r I am….lol. It’s madness really. Just know, I SQUEE over your review and value it dearly.  I just finished chapter 4 and can't wait to see what you think of it. I'm a spazzy poster. It's nerve wracking for me but I LOVE IT...lol. Thanks again for the support it really means so much. :-)

 

xoxo

Kelly

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 3 - I Know You Are But What Am I ?

love  it the cow thing pricless cant wait for more



Author's Response:

 

Thanks so much for reading and for the review. They are like delicious little pieces of heaven to me. I'm so glad you're enjoying my kooky little tale!!! Sorry I’ve been so horrible lately with my replies. It seems I’ve developed some sort of odd OCD habit that I can’t reply until I finish writing the next chapter and then I’m rushing to reply so I can post the chapter so I’ll stop tweaking it like the tweak h00r I am….lol. It’s madness really. Just know, I SQUEE over your review and value it dearly.  I just finished chapter 4 and can't wait to see what you think of it. I'm a spazzy poster. It's nerve wracking for me but I LOVE IT...lol. Thanks again for the support it really means so much. :-)

 

xoxo

Kelly

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 3 - I Know You Are But What Am I ?

Loved the powderpuff reference in there. Glad you didn't made Jessica a mindless person instead of making her a vendictive bitch like others do. Great job!



Author's Response:

 

Thanks so much for reading and for the review. They are like delicious little pieces of heaven to me. I'm so glad you're enjoying my kooky little tale!!! Sorry I’ve been so horrible lately with my replies. It seems I’ve developed some sort of odd OCD habit that I can’t reply until I finish writing the next chapter and then I’m rushing to reply so I can post the chapter so I’ll stop tweaking it like the tweak h00r I am….lol. It’s madness really. Just know, I SQUEE over your review and value it dearly.  I just finished chapter 4 and can't wait to see what you think of it. I'm a spazzy poster. It's nerve wracking for me but I LOVE IT...lol. Thanks again for the support it really means so much. :-)

 

xoxo

Kelly

Reviewer: M4troth Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 3 - I Know You Are But What Am I ?

Great chapter. :D I loved the "fight" between Bella and Edward. I thought at that moment that maybe some chapters in Epov would be nice. It would be nice to know how Edward became the person he's now...I mean such a personality doesn't come from nothing....

please update soon

M4troth



Author's Response:

 

Thanks so much for reading and for the review. They are like delicious little pieces of heaven to me. I'm so glad you're enjoying my kooky little tale!!! Sorry I’ve been so horrible lately with my replies. It seems I’ve developed some sort of odd OCD habit that I can’t reply until I finish writing the next chapter and then I’m rushing to reply so I can post the chapter so I’ll stop tweaking it like the tweak h00r I am….lol. It’s madness really. Just know, I SQUEE over your review and value it dearly.  I just finished chapter 4 and can't wait to see what you think of it. I'm a spazzy poster. It's nerve wracking for me but I LOVE IT...lol. Thanks again for the support it really means so much. :-)

 

xoxo

Kelly

Reviewer: mz_cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 3 - I Know You Are But What Am I ?

luv it



Author's Response:

 

Thanks so much for reading and for the review. They are like delicious little pieces of heaven to me. I'm so glad you're enjoying my kooky little tale!!! Sorry I’ve been so horrible lately with my replies. It seems I’ve developed some sort of odd OCD habit that I can’t reply until I finish writing the next chapter and then I’m rushing to reply so I can post the chapter so I’ll stop tweaking it like the tweak h00r I am….lol. It’s madness really. Just know, I SQUEE over your review and value it dearly.  I just finished chapter 4 and can't wait to see what you think of it. I'm a spazzy poster. It's nerve wracking for me but I LOVE IT...lol. Thanks again for the support it really means so much. :-)

 

xoxo

Kelly

Reviewer: Littleangel531 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2010 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 2 - What's in a Name?

soo loving this off to a great start!

Reviewer: Rockmamaoff Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2010 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 2 - What's in a Name?

I am so totally in  love with this Bella.  Most stories make her wimpy or so lovestruck the minute she meets Edward it makes me want to puke.  Please oh please keep her snarky and keep her messing with Edward.  This is fast becoming one of my favorite stories.  Well done.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2010 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 2 - What's in a Name?

I think Bella just may be Edroar's match!!!  She can take everything he dishes out and then some.  

Reviewer: swtvixen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2010 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 2 - What's in a Name?

Hehe ... way to go bella yelling back  at him :) Nice chapter.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 2 - What's in a Name?

oh this story looks like fun......

Reviewer: sprazinko Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 2 - What's in a Name?

That was great

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 2 - What's in a Name?

Totally loving it!!!!!!  Can a slight snore be considered as purring????  LOL!  I see Bella will be giving him a run for his money which he probably isn't used to.  Can't wait for more interaction between the two!!!!!

Reviewer: Flynnstones Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 2 - What's in a Name?

yes I really loved this chapter. made my day

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 2 - What's in a Name?

I hope we get E's pov.  I have

to say 'angry as a bag of bees'

is priceless!! Can I use it? The

update is great ! :)

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 2 - What's in a Name?

LOL  Tame the lion Bella!! Get in touch with your inner circus freak lion tamer and make him purr!!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 2 - What's in a Name?

Wonderful chapter! Edward is quite the character! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: MarchHare5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 2 - What's in a Name?

This is great! I love Bella's character in this, and Edward... wow, lol. I can't wait to see how you end up taming the beast. ;)

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 2 - What's in a Name?

Well that was just wonderful.  Wow we met Emmett and Rose and Mike.  I love what you did with Mike by the way. LMAO.  I absolutly love how much Edward and Bella get on each others nerves.  He is a prick but I am sure he is just suffering from someone that hurt him deeply.  Anyway, it was wonderful.  God now I am wondering how long we have to wait for more.  I am already anxious.  lol.  Oh and I cant wait for the Support Group meeting.  And maybe and EPOV.

Reviewer: krisandrob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 2 - What's in a Name?

Bella's got some spunk watch out Edroar she is going to break you.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 2 - What's in a Name?

Love the LCI I think I have the same thing I smile and giggle when I am mad or upset about something.  What has crawled up Edward Ass must be something big and painful LOL.  Mike that is funny what a diva LOL.  That was kind of scary when the phone went off I wonder what he was thinking????

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 2 - What's in a Name?

Bella is hillarious! The girl has balls! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Plan A

Absolutely,postively love it! I adore Bella's attitude towards Prickward! Please continue!!!

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 2 - What's in a Name?

Squeal! An update. Great job! I'm looking forward to more Edroar.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 2 - What's in a Name?

it appears Edroar has some issues. This is a fucking great story can't wait to see where it is going to go.

Is it going to be al BPOV or are we going to get some Edroar in there as well

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Plan A

I can so see the awkwardness! As if the first day of a new job isn't weird enough.

Author's Response:

I know right. Bella really  has her hands full with this guy. I just finished chapter 2 last night and sent it to my beta. I can't wait to hear what you think of it. Thank SO much for reading and reviewing. I can't even tell you how much it means to me. (((hug)))

xoxo

Kelly

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Plan A

oooo please tell me theres is going to be more because i can't wait for Bella to kick Edroar's ass



Author's Response:

Your review really made my day. I wasn't kidding when I said Edroar is a tyrant. I revised the 1st chapter 32 times!  I'm so glad you liked it. I can't wait to write this story. I'm about halfway through chapter 2 now. Thanks for the support. It really means so much. :-)

Reviewer: HelsBells Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Plan A

This is off to a great start - please do continue it! Can't wait for the sparks to fly...



Author's Response:

Your review really made my day. I wasn't kidding when I said Edroar is a tyrant. I revised the 1st chapter 32 times!  I'm so glad you liked it. I can't wait to write this story. I'm about halfway through chapter 2 now. Thanks for the support. It really means so much. :-)

Reviewer: evilangel813 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Plan A

What will she do to tame the lion???



Author's Response:

Your review really made my day. I wasn't kidding when I said Edroar is a tyrant. I revised the 1st chapter 32 times!  I'm so glad you liked it. I can't wait to write this story. I'm about halfway through chapter 2 now. Thanks for the support. It really means so much. :-)

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Plan A

I absolutely love this story. Please continue to write it.  I think someone needs to teach Edroar a little lesson.  lol.  This will be fun.



Author's Response:

Your review really made my day. I wasn't kidding when I said Edroar is a tyrant. I revised the 1st chapter 32 times!  I'm so glad you liked it. I can't wait to write this story. I'm about halfway through chapter 2 now. Thanks for the support. It really means so much. :-)

Reviewer: Vtiedemann Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2010 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Plan A

I think you should continue on with it.  I like it.  You have my attention and am curious as to where you will go with it.  I think it has potential.  And he is rude!  I hope Emmett is a little nicer to her.



Author's Response:

Your review really made my day. I wasn't kidding when I said Edroar is a tyrant. I revised the 1st chapter 32 times!  I'm so glad you liked it. I can't wait to write this story. I'm about halfway through chapter 2 now. Thanks for the support. It really means so much. :-)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2010 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Plan A

Good begining, I don't think Bella will put up with his crap for long

Author's Response:

Your review really made my day. I wasn't kidding when I said Edroar is a tyrant. I revised the 1st chapter 32 times!  I'm so glad you liked it. I can't wait to write this story. I'm about halfway through chapter 2 now. Thanks for the support. It really means so much. :-)

Reviewer: krisandrob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2010 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Plan A

That was an interesting start.

Author's Response:

Your review really made my day. I wasn't kidding when I said Edroar is a tyrant. I revised the 1st chapter 32 times!  I'm so glad you liked it. I can't wait to write this story. I'm about halfway through chapter 2 now. Thanks for the support. It really means so much. :-)

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2010 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Plan A

Looks interesting! :)



Author's Response:

Your review really made my day. I wasn't kidding when I said Edroar is a tyrant. I revised the 1st chapter 14 times! It's probably totally different from when you read it now...lol.  I'm so glad you liked it. I can't wait to write this story. Thanks for the support. It really means so much. :-)

Reviewer: bellawitch75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Plan A

Well it seems to be some amusement in here. I want to read about how Emmet's going to be with Bella and I WANT TO HEAR THE REAL ROAR soon!



Author's Response:

You're so  funny *gigles* Yeah he'll be roaring very soon I'm sure. He's a pretty angry guy and I don't think Bella's gonna scamper off shivering in fear. Your review really made my day. I wasn't kidding when I said Edroar is a tyrant. I revised the 1st chapter 14 times! It's probably totally different from when you read it now...lol.  I'm so glad you liked it. I can't wait to write this story. Thanks for the support. It really means so much. :-)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Plan A

I like so far and cant wait to read more.  What is he thinking????



Author's Response:

I'm unsure if I will do an EPOV on this story. I think I might keep it BPOV and possibly do outtakes for EPOV eventually... Hmmm. Not sure. Your review really made my day. I wasn't kidding when I said Edroar is a tyrant. I revised the 1st chapter 14 times! It's probably totally different from when you read it now...lol.  I'm so glad you liked it. I can't wait to write this story. Thanks for the support. It really means so much. :-)

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Plan A

Uh-oh!! Bella has spotted a challenge!!  lol



Author's Response:

Yeah, looks like Bella's gonna have her hands full with this one...literally... ha ha ha.. I'm so punny. *chuckles* Your review really made my day. I wasn't kidding when I said Edroar is a tyrant. I revised the 1st chapter 14 times! It's probably totally different from when you read it now...lol.  I'm so glad you liked it. I can't wait to write this story. Thanks for the support. It really means so much. :-)

Reviewer: Flynnstones Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Plan A

edward is such a meany. god i feel so bad for bella :(



Author's Response:

Yeah  he's not very nice. I wonder why he's so angry? Hmmm... Your review really made my day. I wasn't kidding when I said Edroar is a tyrant. I revised the 1st chapter 14 times! It's probably totally different from when you read it now...lol.  I'm so glad you liked it. I can't wait to write this story. Thanks for the support. It really means so much. :-)

Reviewer: Kelligurl93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Plan A

update soon please and thank you



Author's Response:

Your review really made my day. I wasn't kidding when I said Edroar is a tyrant. I revised the 1st chapter 14 times! It's probably totally different from when you read it now...lol.  I'm so glad you liked it. I can't wait to write this story. Thanks for the support. It really means so much. :-)

Reviewer: yebabb79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Plan A

i yhink you should keep going with this story i like ooc edward and bella



Author's Response: Your review really made my day. I wasn't kidding when I said Edroar is a tyrant. I revised the 1st chapter 14 times! It's probably totally different from when you read it now...lol. I'm so glad you liked it. I can't wait to write this story. Thanks for the support. It really means so much. :-)

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Plan A

Oh I love it. You should totally continue this. It's pretty original. Great job!



Author's Response:

YAY!!! I'm so glad your reading Edroar. I smiled when I saw your name. *throws confetti* PARTY!!! Your review really made my day. I wasn't kidding when I said Edroar is a tyrant. I revised the 1st chapter 14 times! It's probably totally different from when you read it now...lol.  I'm so glad you liked it. I can't wait to write this story. Thanks for the support. It really means so much. :-)

Reviewer: EASEmama Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Plan A

I like it!



Author's Response:

Your review really made my day. I wasn't kidding when I said Edroar is a tyrant. I revised the 1st chapter 14 times! It's probably totally different from when you read it now...lol.  I'm so glad you liked it. I can't wait to write this story. Thanks for the support. It really means so much. :-)

Reviewer: light023 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Plan A

Great start!!



Author's Response:

Your review really made my day. I wasn't kidding when I said Edroar is a tyrant. I revised the 1st chapter 14 times! It's probably totally different from when you read it now...lol.  I'm so glad you liked it. I can't wait to write this story. Thanks for the support. It really means so much. :-)

Reviewer: raestanford Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Plan A

What a cool story idea.  I love what I have read so far.  Love all your other stuff too.  So YES please continue.



Author's Response:

Your review really made my day. I wasn't kidding when I said Edroar is a tyrant. I revised the 1st chapter 14 times! It's probably totally different from when you read it now...lol.  I'm so glad you liked it. I can't wait to write this story. Thanks for the support. It really means so much. :-)

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