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Reviewer: cateyes38372 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2011 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 10 THE BOX

love it and cant wait for more. cant wait to see how he falls for the Goddess.

Reviewer: KnoKnayme Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2011 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 10 THE BOX

HAHAHA!!! I KNEW those cookies were special!!! lol!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2011 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 10 THE BOX

What a fantastic chapter I loved it.  Lion turning up was brilliant. How is he going to take it when he comes round in the morning. lol 

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2011 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 9 It's Electric!

Loved the chapter.

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2011 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 10 THE BOX

so funny love it thanks

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2011 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 10 THE BOX

Ha ha ha "special Cookies"

they make me laugh.

Reviewer: almoncla Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2011 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 10 THE BOX

OMG. love this story I have laughed at everything while reading. I truly think this is the best edward Bella story I have read in a while, it's funny and different. Cant wait until the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2011 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 10 THE BOX

I love this story.  I just wish you update faster.  I love the passion between these two.  More heated arguements would be fun. Cant wait for more.

E/k

Reviewer: almoncla Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2011 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 3 - I Know You Are But What Am I ?

loved this chapter, it is very funny. Jessica in the story is great.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2011 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 10 THE BOX

First time he goes out with her and gets druged I cant see this as ending good.  cant wait for more

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2011 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 10 THE BOX

OMG are they both drugged from the cookies!!!!   ROFL.

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2011 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 10 THE BOX

Everything about this chapter was exquisite. The tone devolved beautifully as the scene progressed, so the bordello-like, lust-filled haze of content confusion was made clear to the reader even as it was felt by the character. Space cakes, huh? With the Electric popsicles and now the space cakes, I'm gonna hazard a guess that our beloved masseuse (therapist) is building up an internal supply of LSD or some other hallucinogenic drug. How will this effect her LCI? (Laughter Control Issues; I very well may have forgotten the real acronym).

Reviewer: nikon342 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2011 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 10 THE BOX

Ahh Fuck! Edroar is gonna be irate! And rightfully so too. I would be breaking shit. I am hoping that all will be alright and they will not be waking up gagged and bound to a bed or a whipping bench. Anyway, I cannot wait for more! :)

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2011 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 10 THE BOX

Wow you actaully got Edward to have a conversation with Bella.  I am soooooo sad to read that they were drugged though.  I was hoping that things would progress without having to have them drugged.  I cant believe there is a place like that, that would just drug you without your knowledge.  I am sure he is going to blame it all on Bella.  Thanks for the update BB.  I miss you.

Reviewer: akemp17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2011 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 10 THE BOX

loved it

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2011 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 9 It's Electric!

I loved that Mandy could see what they are not.  How long was she in his lap it doesnt matter it felt right lol.  Love her freinds they are crazy.

Reviewer: inge15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2011 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 9 It's Electric!

loving this story :)

Reviewer: fanfictionfeedn_the_addiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2011 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 8 Face Off

can't wait to read about the NY trip  woot!!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2011 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 9 It's Electric!

Ooh... I'm excited about Bella's metaphorical cookies coming out next chapter! Thanks for sharing with us!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2011 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Amazing?

HAHAHAHA!!! Mike's Tootsies, indeed. I loved this chapter for its character development. Edward is still Edroar, that's for sure, but he opened up a tiny bit. And that's enough. I wanted to thank you for Jake's book; it made me cry, but just like with Bella, it was a good cry? I'm suspecting Edward and Carlisle's respective fury and numbness have the same root cause: the loss of a mother and wife (again, respectively... Not the same for them both). With this in mind, I have no idea how he'll respond to Jake's book. It might be too close to home for him? 

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2011 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 6 Hells Bells

LOVE!! Did Edroar even take the letter? I love your characters; Jessica is so unintentionally hysterical! I am beginning to suffer from LCI myself...

Reviewer: KnoKnayme Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2011 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 9 It's Electric!

I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I really loved how you created the character of Mandy... she was surprisingly not as catty as most women (who aren't Bella) are made out to be in Twilight fanfiction... wonderful!!1 I can't wait for the next installment!!!

Reviewer: lopeza Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2011 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 9 It's Electric!

I love this story, your take on Bella is delightful.

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2011 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 9 It's Electric!

hehe awesome chappy

Reviewer: anita blake Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2011 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 9 It's Electric!

Great chapter, and I'd love a turn sitting on his lap!!!

Reviewer: EN426 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2011 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 9 It's Electric!

He needs Mikes popsicles! Can't wait to see what she has in store for him!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2011 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 9 It's Electric!

Great stuff!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2011 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 9 It's Electric!

Love, love, LOVED IT!!!!

Michele

Reviewer: MarchHare5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2011 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 9 It's Electric!

Yeah, had to laugh when you started mentioning 5Point. Too freaking funny.

And I was wondering who would call Bella out on the attention the Lion gives her. Also have to wonder if her luggage really did make it to NY. lol

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2011 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 9 It's Electric!

OMG I cant believe you did it.  LOL  We got an update.  I am so excited.  It was quite a funny birthday for Bella. But I think I liked her enthusiasm with flying for the first time.  At least that's what it sounded like.  I love how he held her tightly not breaking eye contact.  It seems that he is entranced with her when he can stop working for a few seconds.  Ok Kelly please dont make us wait so long for the full chapter of Bella and Edroar.  I would love to see him do something for her birthday or at least for her to bet him something that he cant stop working for the evening to have fun.  That would be fun to read.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2011 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 9 It's Electric!

Just one of the boys is a hilarious read.

Sweet chapter   Alex is so cute.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2011 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 9 It's Electric!

glad for the update , thought the story had been abandoned

Reviewer: yvonne1520 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2011 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Plan A

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Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2011 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 9 It's Electric!

Thanks for the update, looking forward to the next chapter. I hope the lion purrs!

Reviewer: DarkwardLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2011 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 8 Face Off

I really enjoy reading this story. Lol, it makes me laugh ;D I love Edroar! He clearly likes Bella in some way.. Can't wait till they unite together! Tehe, in numerous ways... :')

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 8 Face Off

Angry Edward is hot!  I wonder what is going on between father and son to create the relationship they have now.  I hope Bella can solve the puzzle, and I can't wait for their roadtrip to NY.

PS - loved how Edward can related better with the kids rather than any of the adults.

Reviewer: sevanderslice Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 8 Face Off

Edroar must have a thorn in his paw. He only relaxes when Bella soothes him to sleep.  I'm excited to read more.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 8 Face Off

I am waiting for when it is going to happen they are going to be up close and in each others face witch one is going to attack the other with there lips and in NY would be perfect.?????

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2011 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 8 Face Off

cute story a little unbelievable.  I hope you update often

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2011 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 2 - What's in a Name?

Why would they call her while she is working?? Why.. Knowing he is such an ass.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2011 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Plan A

Well you named him almost perfectly.. you need ass in there somewhere.

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2011 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 8 Face Off

Fun chapter!

Reviewer: kaybrans Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2011 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 8 Face Off

Happy Birthday!! What's a century between friends???   :)

Reviewer: MarchHare5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2011 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 8 Face Off

Hm, Carlisle. Seriously wondering what the story is between him and Edward. I have my ideas of what it might be...

And I love how Edward's interaction with Bella is subtly changing. ;)

Reviewer: mayi Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2011 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 8 Face Off

I always love your chapter and you ALWAYS make me laugh! Till next time!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2011 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 8 Face Off

So wonderful!!!!

Reviewer: elliej Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2011 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 8 Face Off

"I dropped down into a frog position and began hopping up and down on my hands and feet. I let my tongue hang down low as I burped out the melody for Stairway to Heaven."

 

Probably the most unexpected paragraph in fanfic history.  Awesome.  :-D

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2011 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 8 Face Off

thanks good chapter

Reviewer: randomly_mad Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2011 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 8 Face Off

This was an absolutely fantastic chapter. You had me laughing so hard I had to put my head down and had tears running down my face.

Thank You so much

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2011 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 8 Face Off

I loved it. I loved that Bella told Carlisle off for the way he is.  I love that she doesn't back down to Edward and I love that he was trying to take care of her when she hurt her eye.  I dont know why he is so tense unles he is worried about being alone with Bella.  Hhhmmm maybe he wont be able to control his desires. lol.  Thank you for the shout out sweetie.  It really touch my heart that you remember me and you helped me so much with twitter.  I really appreciate it.  I cant wait for Bella to get her revenge on MIke, I sure hope you have plans for Edward to find out about that too. He needs to know that she is gretting Mike back for what happened to his eyes.  OH GOSH AND HAPPPYYYYYY BIRTHDAY TO YOU, HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU, HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR TS, HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2011 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 8 Face Off

lol  for creepy mike hitting on jake.

Reviewer: swtvixen Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2011 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Amazing?

Very nice chapter additions cannot wait to read more

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2010 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Amazing?

Is Mike out to get Bella?  Lovin the playful banter. More of that please..

E/k

Reviewer: MarchHare5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2010 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Amazing?

Yuck! FungiCure. And Mike's to boot. Ewwww. ;)

I think we all have an inkling as to why Edroar doesn't fire Bella. It's going to be so, um, interesting when it all comes out.

I also think I have an idea of why Edroar is so angry and why he has a robot for a dad.

Keep it coming! I love it!

Reviewer: dufflepudsrule Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2010 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Amazing?

I love the story so far!

Reviewer: cantsleep Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2010 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Amazing?

Mike needs to pay, what an ass and how rude to do that in Bella's room, which is basically set aside for Edward's massages or those he deems have earnt it. That is so gross. Bella needs to be redeemed. Great chap, thanks for updating, can't wait for next.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2010 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Amazing?

I really liked this chapter.  I think its because Edward and Bella actually had a conversation and he showed that it actually hurt him if she wanted him to fire her.  I am hoping he knows its her birthday and he planned that meeting so he could get her alone.  lol.  I hope anyway.  Now as for Mike well I think Bella definitely needs to plan a revenge on him.  He should no way be doing that at work nor in his bosses massage room.  I really hope you do update more often its so hard to wait so long for an update.  I hope you have a Merry Christmas.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Amazing?

Mike and his foot fungis lol. Bella is the only person Edward respects what happened to him????  I cant wait for NY that should be fun.

Reviewer: KnoKnayme Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2010 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Amazing?

awww hell poor Bella! lol great chapter!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2010 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Amazing?

I think Edroar/edsnore gets a kick out of Bella's fiestiness! Very cute story - has me laughing threw the whole chapter!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2010 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 6 Hells Bells

Your story is so entertaining! Bella's got some balls here! edward is just fussy & cantankerous.... love it!

Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2010 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Amazing?

Welll I started reading your story today and I was hooked. Totally read all 7 chapters while burning an incedibly long list of CDs for my roommate. How I adore mulitasking. And being the fanfic addict that I am, reading is soooo much more amusing than watching the progress bar on iTunes.

And wow Edroar the lion. Love it. Hilarious. For some reason when ever Bella describes Edward, I think of the little orange cat, Toulouse, from the AristoCats when he's spitting and hissing at Tomas O'Malley. :D It makes me want to muss up is preeeety hair and say 'Who's a cu~te little kitty'. I'd probably get bitten for that... but it would be worth it!

Happy typing and looking forward to more!

CrimsonR

Reviewer: EN426 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2010 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Amazing?

Love tis story! Bella needs to kick mikes ass.

Reviewer: kaybrans Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2010 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Amazing?

:)

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2010 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Amazing?

Loved it! Fungi spray, who would have thunk it!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2010 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Amazing?

glad to see you writing again.   Aww Jake wrote a book

Reviewer: Jolinar Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2010 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Amazing?

"What was his definition of a deep sleep…death?" :-) LOL

Thanks for updating!

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2010 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Amazing?

why egg on mike besides watching bella and edroar is much much more fun

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2010 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Amazing?

An update, wow it really must be Christmas! Just kidding. Thanks for the super long chapter. I can't wait to see what happens in New York and his reaction to Jake's book!

Reviewer: mayi Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2010 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Amazing?

I love this story! I think is the only story that I have read and laughed my ass almost during the entire chapter. I wish you would update sooner.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 6 Hells Bells

very cute, love the exchange between them but must admit i would love a  little epov

Reviewer: ammNI Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 6 Hells Bells

I'm absolutely in love with your story. The characters personalities are so strong and very well portrayed. This is excellently written and I cannot wait for more! Really want to know about both Bella and Edroar's family dynamics. Also cannot wait to read about the Halloween Ball; it sounds like it's gonna be a blast.

Not sure if the charity I'd pick is a worldwide one but I'd choose the Dog's Trust cause I'm a huge dog person. If it isn't a worldwide charitable organisation (which I don't think it is) then I'd choose WWF (World Wildlife Fund) - I'm all about the animals! ;)

Fantastic chapter and amazing story. Thanks for sharing.
~Anna-Margaret
xx

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2010 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 6 Hells Bells

Great job, thanks for writing.

Reviewer: rara_avis91 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 2 - What's in a Name?

omg!! This is so hilariously funny!!!

Reviewer: MarchHare5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2010 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 6 Hells Bells

"Even the man's ass was snobby and affluent." Fricking priceless!

So what the hell was in that bottle anyway?!

And methinks Edroar likes the fact that Bella stands up to him... ;)

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 6 Hells Bells

I love these two can't way fot the UST to explode.

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 6 Hells Bells

I see lion taming in Bella's near future! Great chapter! : )

Reviewer: bluiqt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 6 Hells Bells

great chapter!  The contest at the ball sounds exciting!!  Pep is hilarious!! 

 

 

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2010 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 6 Hells Bells

WEll now we are getting somewhere. At least they are talking.  I feel bad for whatever was in that water bottle. I hope someone wasn't purposely trying to hurt him but with him being so mean I dont put it past anyone.  I love that she stands up to him, I was really expecting a kiss though. I mean they were nose to nose and fighting and the tension was high so I thought it would at least cause a hard kiss.  But I can see that he likes her a lot or he would have fired her just like Emmett said.  I am so glad you finally updated.  I am a fanfiction whore too. LOL. so I understand.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2010 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 6 Hells Bells

The Boys and Girls Clubs of America get my vote.  Keep kids on the straight and narrow.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2010 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 6 Hells Bells

I was hoping he would attack her with his lips.  He doesnt know how to deal with someone that dont back down. 

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2010 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 6 Hells Bells

thanks can't wait for the next update soon right, i love this chapter thanks

Reviewer: bellawitch75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2010 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 6 Hells Bells

I will choose something like Childrens Cancer Research Foundation or something like that. BTW the story is cool

Reviewer: KnoKnayme Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2010 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 6 Hells Bells

AWESOME chapter! I love their repartee!

Reviewer: gmteenz Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2010 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 6 Hells Bells

Haha, love this story, lots of humour in all the right places, especially love your Edward, he has obviously met his match, looking forward to the next update.

Reviewer: bluiqt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2010 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 5 Who Does That?

Really enjoying this story so far!!  Bella is hilarious!



Author's Response:

I FINALLY finished chapter 6. HURRAH! I can’t wait for you to read it. I just gave it to happymess to beta. I’m dying to hear what you think. This story is so fun to write and the fact that you took the time out of your day to let me know you’re having fun reading it means so much... YOU ROCK!!! :-) 

Xoxo
Kelly

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2010 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 5 Who Does That?

Hmm I wonder what was in that bottle. This not knowing is going to kill me. Great job! Loved the charades part.



Author's Response:

I FINALLY finished chapter 6. HURRAH! I can’t wait for you to read it. I just gave it to happymess to beta. I’m dying to hear what you think. This story is so fun to write and the fact that you took the time out of your day to let me know you’re having fun reading it means so much... YOU ROCK!!! :-) 

Xoxo
Kelly

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 5 Who Does That?

OH SHIT can nothing go right for these two LOL.  What did Carlisle write for Edward???



Author's Response:

I FINALLY finished chapter 6. HURRAH! I can’t wait for you to read it. I just gave it to happymess to beta. I’m dying to hear what you think. This story is so fun to write and the fact that you took the time out of your day to let me know you’re having fun reading it means so much... YOU ROCK!!! :-) 

Xoxo
Kelly

Reviewer: fanfictionfeedn_the_addiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2010 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 5 Who Does That?

That was hilarious...  What the hell was in that bottle?  haha most likely Edward had on underwear..right? lol ....So many questions but most likely they'll be answered by next chap. 



Author's Response:

I FINALLY finished chapter 6. HURRAH! I can’t wait for you to read it. I just gave it to happymess to beta. I’m dying to hear what you think. This story is so fun to write and the fact that you took the time out of your day to let me know you’re having fun reading it means so much... YOU ROCK!!! :-) 

Xoxo
Kelly

Reviewer: robsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2010 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 5 Who Does That?

I was laughing so much, I needed this thanks



Author's Response:

I FINALLY finished chapter 6. HURRAH! I can’t wait for you to read it. I just gave it to happymess to beta. I’m dying to hear what you think. This story is so fun to write and the fact that you took the time out of your day to let me know you’re having fun reading it means so much... YOU ROCK!!! :-)

Xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2010 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 5 Who Does That?

Well I must say I was hoping for more of Edward. We really dont see much of him. And yes I would say Edward is at the sink naked. LMAO. But what was in the bottle.  It cant be alcohol she would have been able to smell it. I am guessing some kind of oil but she should have been able to feel the oil so I dont know. obviously it was nasty to taste. LMAO. But still we need more interaction with Edward.



Author's Response:

I FINALLY finished chapter 6. HURRAH! I can’t wait for you to read it. I just gave it to happymess to beta. I’m dying to hear what you think. This story is so fun to write and the fact that you took the time out of your day to let me know you’re having fun reading it means so much... YOU ROCK!!! :-) 

Xoxo
Kelly

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2010 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 5 Who Does That?

rofl....sprayed him with bleach I guess.  lol



Author's Response:

I FINALLY finished chapter 6. HURRAH! I can’t wait for you to read it. I just gave it to happymess to beta. I’m dying to hear what you think. This story is so fun to write and the fact that you took the time out of your day to let me know you’re having fun reading it means so much... YOU ROCK!!! :-) 

Xoxo
Kelly

Reviewer: elliej Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2010 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 5 Who Does That?

LMAO!  The mystery deepens.  I loved the ending.



Author's Response:

I FINALLY finished chapter 6. HURRAH! I can’t wait for you to read it. I just gave it to happymess to beta. I’m dying to hear what you think. This story is so fun to write and the fact that you took the time out of your day to let me know you’re having fun reading it means so much... YOU ROCK!!! :-) 

Xoxo
Kelly

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2010 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 5 Who Does That?

Good chapter!  You can already feel the sparks flying between Alice and Jasper!  The demeanor and letter from Carlise is very intriguing.  Can't wait to find out what has the Cullen men so uncomfortably numb as you put.  I think Edroar was flirting when he was playing with her about breakfast and as soon as he realized it, he turned off his emotions asap.  I love how Bella can make him purr like a kitten one minute and the next she has him roaring like a lion!  She needs to keep working on those muscles to loosen him up : P 

Can't wait til the next update (also on Master of Disaster, hint hint hint LOL!)

 

Reviewer: KnoKnayme Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2010 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 5 Who Does That?

HAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FREAKING HILAARIOUS!!!

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2010 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 5 Who Does That?

Great chapter

When is Bella going to give Edward his father's letter

great story

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2010 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 5 Who Does That?

I hope he is standing naked at the sink, and can't wait to find out what was in the bottle!

Reviewer: MarchHare5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2010 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 5 Who Does That?

Um, yeah, soooo not caring what's in the bottle, because all I can think about at the moment is naked Edroar.

That's not true, exactly. Poor Eddie. And poor Bella - she's about to get roared at, I can well imagine.

And Carlisle? Geez. Something very, very sad going on there. :(

But I swear to god, Bella is hysterical. I love her. It's amazing how different this story is from your other one (which I also love)--but this is just all kinds of funny shit.



Author's Response:

I FINALLY finished chapter 6. HURRAH! I can’t wait for you to read it. I just gave it to happymess to beta. I’m dying to hear what you think. This story is so fun to write and the fact that you took the time out of your day to let me know you’re having fun reading it means so much... YOU ROCK!!! :-) 

Xoxo
Kelly

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2010 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 5 Who Does That?

Poor... well poor both, that's all I've got to say



Author's Response:

 

I FINALLY finished chapter 6. HURRAH! I can’t wait for you to read it. I just gave it to happymess to beta. I’m dying to hear what you think. This story is so fun to write and the fact that you took the time out of your day to let me know you’re having fun reading it means so much... YOU ROCK!!! :-) 

Xoxo
Kelly

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 4 All that Jazz

And the craziness ensues. I love it, even without Edroar.Great job!



Author's Response:

I always squee when I get your review. I'm so glad you liked it.  I’ve FINALLY finished Edroar chapter five. Sheesh…I know it took me forever. Let’s just say a certain Cullen was being a tad difficult… and it may not be who you suspect. I just gave the chapter to my beta and as soon as she’s finished with it I’ll post. YAY! I can’t wait. I’m so excited. Anyway, I just wanted to pop in to say thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my crazy little tale. Believe me I know reviews are never given lightly and they really mean so much to me. I hope you can forgive that it takes me so freaking looooong to reply. I have some strange OCD type affliction that I can’t seem to reply until I’ve finished the next chapter. What the hell is up with that? Perhaps I need to increase the meds…lol. Thanks again for taking the time to share your thoughts with me. Seriously, I can’t express how valuable a part of the writing process that truly is. I can’t wait to hear what you think of chapter 5. Gah! I always eagerly await the reaction and always fear the worst. Yes, I have some anxiety issues. It’s not pretty I tell ya. I’m SO Edroar Angela…sigh. If only I were as cool as Bella Swan.

 

P.S Jazz is thrilled with all the lovin he got from chapter 4. He said to make sure I throw some Darlins your way. Edroar of course is quite unhappy about sharing his readers with that southern charmer. He's just so darn possessive.

 

xoxo

Kelly

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