[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2010 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 39
OMJ!!! That was fucking hot! He bit her and she likes it?!? Jasper needs to be careful that she isn't using his bites as a substitute for cutting.
Poor Victoria (two words I never thought I would say together). I really hope she is being honest with them.
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2010 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 38
Totally did not see Victoria showing up in this story. I hope this isn't a trick to get to Bella.
I loved it when Bella slapped Jasper with Charlotte's hand. That was awesome!!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2010 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 37
She loves him?!? I am so glad. I wasn't sure if she was going to be able to allow herself to love him.
I like Peter and Charlotte. They seem like a lot of fun. I hope we get to keep them around for a while.
Author's Response:
I can never say thank you enough for all your reviews so Thanks again! I'm so glad you loved the story and left such wonderful and insightful reviews.
xoxoxo
M & J
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2010 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 36
Hmmm, I think Jasper handled that whole thing really well. The poor guy is going to go stir crazy from the sexual tension between him and Bella if she doesn't get better REALLY soon. ;)
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2010 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 35
Bella is a little nutsy with her emotions, but she is getting better.
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2010 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 34
Go Bella!!! I totally love how she tore Carlisle a new one!!! That was classic! I always thought that it was bullshit that Edward was able to dictate that the family leave Bella in NM. Carlisle is supposed to be the head of this family yet he allowed that to happen?!? Good call on letting Bella tell him exactly what she thought!
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 33
Whoa, I expected Bella's reaction to E&C returning, but not Jasper's. But in a way, I am proud of him for standing up for himself. He really did get pushed around alot in SM's books. It is almost like seeing a caged tiger finally being allowed to stretch his legs and show off his stripes. ;)
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2010 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 32
OMJ!!!!!!! That was hot and intense and all over the emotional spectrum!!!! Holy shit! I need to read the next chapter NOW!!!
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2010 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 31
Holy shit!!!! What is Bella asking for?!? I don't think she is ready for sex yet. She has just started to really open up and find herself again.
The date was fan freakin tastic!!! It was absolutely perfect!!! Loved it from start to finish.
The semi-sex talk with Charlie was funny. Poor Charlie! ;)
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2010 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 30
It is really cute that Emmett wanted to make Bella a CD too. LOL
I love that poem that Jasper said to Bella. It really is perfect for these two (and thanks for giving props to Tara sue me...I had seen it there also). ;)
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2010 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 29
Oh my! She finally initiated some real action with him. Woo hoo!!!
I also loved when she was tracing his scars. It was a sweet and intimate moment. Well done!
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2010 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 28
Loved the family day out.
I am so glad that Bella didn't freak out over Jasper's past.
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2010 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 27
I'm glad that Bella figured out about the wolves. I think it was important for her to figure that out without Jasper telling her.
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2010 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 26
I love when Jasper promised to change her, but not for Edward. I really liked that.
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 25
When Bella freaked out it almost seems like she has been supressing her emotions for so long that now that she is letting them out, there is no filter. So, any emotion can be blown out of proportion.
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2010 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 24
Spirit is a cool name, but I like Jasper Jr (JJ) too.
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2010 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 23
Ahhh, he got her a puppy! That is so sweet. I love that he was the only puppy not afraid of him and Emmett. I bet that Bella is having this reaction to Alice's name because she was supposed to be Bella's best friend, but she left without a word which in a way is almost worse than the way Edward left.
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2010 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 22
I liked the shower scene. Emmett is a smart cookie when he needs to be. ;)
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2010 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 21
LMAO! I love that snarky Bella is starting to breathe again! I can not wait to see therapy with Emmett. He has got to be a therapist's worst nightmare!!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2010 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 20
Jasper has a dirty, dirty mind. First the spanking in the school dgirl outfit then the little fantasy in the shower...I wouldn't mind seeing them both come true for him. ;)
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2010 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 19
I loved the exchange between Bella and Emmett. It was very sweet and natural.
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2010 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 18
I am glad she is not staying there longer. I really don't think it can benefit her since she can't admit to being in love with a vampire and then left by said vampire. I was surprised there was no mention of any of the wolves in the hospital since Alice couldn't see them there. Hmmm.
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2010 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 17
That was not how I saw their first kiss happeing. Ugh, I really hope this story starts taking a happier turn soon cause it is starting to bum me out. :(
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2010 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 16
I love how Jasper took charge, but he should have checked her room for any other cutting utensils.
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2010 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 15
I'm glad she is getting some of her fire back.
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2010 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 14
As sad as this chapter was, I am so glad that she admitted to Jasper everything that Edward said to her.
I think Jasper was wrong to rub up on Bella the way he did, but you gotta cut the guy some slack. He really likes her and it is probably killing him every time she shuts down like that.
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2010 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 13
I am so glad they are finally having real conversations. And Jasper didn't have to eat anything at lunch! Yea!!!
Their first kiss, I can not wait, but I suspect it will be at least five more chapters before we get there. ;)
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2010 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 12
Poor Jasper. I can only imagine what Bella said when he wasn't listening. But I would bet my copies of the Twilight books that it wasn't that she liked Mike. It was probably more like she wouldn't date him if he was the last man on earth.
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2010 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 11
I liked the impropmtu vampire sleepover. Very cute idea. ;)
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2010 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 10
I loved it!!! Jasper and Rose can be one hell of a scary duo!!!
Date: 08 Aug 2010 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 40
OMG what a rollercoaster!! I soo curious what will happen with Fuckward comes into the picture!! Hope there is an update coming soon!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2010 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 9
Okay, the last part about the guys calling Charlie Dad was really funny. It had me giggling.
I am glad that Jasper warned Emmett and Rose about Bella's cutting. That is so sad that she just wants to let herself die. I am glad you are taking her recovery slow because it is more believable.
I really hope Jasper does something evil to Mike. I can not wait to see.
Oh, and I like the idea of Jasper needing a gym credit. Very creative.
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 8
I can not wait to see what Jasper has come up with to get himself into the school. Maybe a teacher assistant type position?
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh shit! Please tell me it isn't Edward. She isn't strong enough for that yet. I know you said in a previous note that Edward would show up, but I hope it is after she is much better and her and Jasper are together.
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2010 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 6
I thought it was Ema nd Rose at the beginning, but I liked the surprise of the wolves showing up.
I like how Jasper keeps the pressure on Bella to make her respond to things and not let her retreat back into herself.
Oh, I forgot to mention before, so I will now. I love how Jasper is slowly falling in love with Bella. It is sweet and very, very slow, but it is perfect.
Author's Response:
Aww Thanks Darlin' I'm glad you are loving Jasper's slow but sure love interest. Thank you for your continuous reviews, I appreciate them all. I hope you'll continue to enjoy the story and Jasper pushing Bella cause she needs it a lot. :)
xoxooxoxoxox
M & J
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2010 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 5
That sucks that Em and Rose coming has made Bella backslide in her recovery. I really hope when she sees them it will be better.
Author's Response:
I'll be honest here...Bella goes back and forth in her recovery. I tried to do realistic which really has drawn the story out but I didn't want the "oh they're back! Like is great!" scenario.
Hope you'll continue to enjoy!
Thanks again!
xoxoxooxoxo
M & J
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2010 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 4
Jasper has a sick sense of humor setting those guys up like that. I love him!
Author's Response:
*giggles* I'm glad you liked it. I know I honestly saw it in a movie somewhere and I can't remember where so I can't give the movie credit but it's still hilarious.
They got what was coming to them. That's what was important.
Thanks again for all the review! They're great! I love hearing people's favorite parts, lines, or just what they took note to mention.
xoxoxoxoo
M & J
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2010 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 3
I am glad that Jasper made her go out. Left to her own devices, she would probably stay in that house until she willed herself to die.
I wonder of she sees the sign for Bella Italiana and that is what has her nearly freaking out.
Author's Response:
You're right she needed to get out. Jasper agreed. I did what Jasper told me to. We're happy ;)
Thanks for the review!
xoxoxoox
M & J
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2010 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 2
I am really lovin how you are writing Jasper in this story. I just want to wrap my arms around him. I loved his little breakfast challenge to Bella. Very creative.
Author's Response:
The breaksfast scene with Bella is still one of my favorites. There's a popcorn scene coming up that is rather amusing also but for a different reason.
Thank you for the review!
xoxooxoxoxo
M & J
Date: 07 Aug 2010 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 40
well that was really stupid bella.
Author's Response:
*gigglesnort* She's not always the brightest bulb but I think you'll like what's coming up :D
Thanks for R & R
xoxooxxoxo
M & J
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2010 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was one hell of an emotional beginning. I could totally picture the whole scene play out the way you described Bella. I hope Jasper can fix her, somehow.
Author's Response:
Well I hope you enjoy the story please let me know if you have any questions or suggestions. It is a long process and can be a bit of a downer but many people are loving it just the same. I typically try to throw a little comedic relief in each chapter somewhere.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
xoxoxoxooxox
Mynxi & Jasper
Date: 07 Aug 2010 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 39
hmm yumminess
Author's Response:
*giggles* Thank you. Glad you liked it!
xoxooxoxo
M & J
Date: 07 Aug 2010 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 37
peter is an evil prankster. And bellas a pretty good actress. Lauren deserved the punch.
Author's Response:
*giggles* Peter has his moments I will agree. Bella never thought she was good at lying but because of her ability to control her emotions so well I thought she may have overcome that :)
And yes Lauren so deserved that punch! I wanted Bella to hit her more than that but I couldn't convince anyone. *sighs* I just do what I'm told.
Thanks for the review!
xoxoxoxoxo
M & J
Date: 07 Aug 2010 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 36
lol Like defensiveee dad
Author's Response:
Thanks! I think Charlie as a cop and dad would naturally take that position. :D
xoxoxoxoxoox
M & J
Date: 06 Aug 2010 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 40
As angry as he is, Jasper still manages to control it all. Brilliant! It fits him perfectly. After alll he controlled newborns - stepping back is second nature to him. Kudos!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much *big cheesey grin* You're flattery will get you anywhere :) I'm thrilled you are enjoying the story and so is Jasper.
xoxoxoxo
M
Date: 06 Aug 2010 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 39
Wonderfully, lusciously erotic! Amazing!
Author's Response:
*Smiles* Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! And thank you for taking the time to review!
xoxoxoxoxo
M
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2010 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 35
Loved the chapter, =)
best wishes, Linda
Author's Response:
Sorry about my delayed response. I am glad you are loving the story, hope you'll continue to read and review.
xoxooxoxox
Mynxi & Jasper
Date: 26 Jun 2010 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 35
Mmmm, what is Bella going to do that suprises Jasper. I hope that it's something I'd like to do to Jasper myself. LOL
Author's Response:
*giggles* Well I hope you you were happy with the suprise. Not what you were thinking I'm sure. :D
Thanks for reading and reviewing
xoxoxooxox
M & J
Date: 26 Jun 2010 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 35
i want to smack those guys for what they did to charlie
Author's Response:
Well keep reading and get your freak on lol. Sorry for my majorly delayed response but I'm on it now :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing
xoxooxoxoxoxo
Mynxi & Jasper
Date: 26 Jun 2010 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 34
i would have killed carlisle for doing that
Date: 26 Jun 2010 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 33
well what did carlisle and esme think that she would forgive them right away
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2010 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 33
Love that she exploded!!
Date: 25 Jun 2010 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 32
OH GOD! OH GOD! OH GOD! OH GOD! OH GOD! OH GOD! OH GOD! OH GOD! OH GOD! OH GOD! OH GOD! OH GOD! OH GOD! OH GOD! OH GOD!
OMG! i just hope that she doesn't change! plz! I was going PERFECT between them!! PLZ! That nothing changes!!! GOD! plz! Let him get the venom out and don't let Emmet and Rose smell it!! PLZ!! GOD! It was going PERFECT!
btw: LOVE THIS STORYY!!! OMG! LOVED IT!!!!!
Author's Response: OMG *hugs* this has to be the most enthusiastic response I have ever gotten! *giggle* Thank you so much. I'm going to reward you with a couple more chapters! xoxoooxox M & J
Date: 08 Jun 2010 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 32
Uh oh! This could be interesting! LOVED this chapter!!! It had it all...even Bella's unwilling admittal about orgasms. I so loved her comment to Emmett about the blow torch!! Perfection! I can't wait to see where this newest development takes them.
Author's Response:
Glad you loved the chapter. The blow torch comment was one of my favs too :) I love Bella when she's pissy. LOL.
Hope you'll continue to read and review and thank you for taking the time to do so even if it takes me 2 months to thank you for it I do appreciate it.
xoxooxoxoxo
Mynxi & Jasper
Date: 08 Jun 2010 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 32
MMMMMMMMMMMMM mommy want more of that!
Date: 08 Jun 2010 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 32
ahhhhh I must know what happens now! Great update! God I love Jasper
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2010 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 32
Loved the chapter, =) as always,
loved the heated-angry-smutty-fluff, and that
she told off Emmett, you go girl *smile*
best wishes, Linda
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2010 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 32
he's not going to eat her, we wouldn't have this awesome story if he did! lol
Date: 07 Jun 2010 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 32
Great chapter...so excited for your return!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2010 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 32
so mean weilding the cliffy there Ms.
Date: 07 Jun 2010 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 32
you are evil....ya know that.
But I loved the chapter
Date: 23 May 2010 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 31
love it started reading it on ffnet but went to this place cus its much better ^.^
Date: 17 Apr 2010 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hey Mynxi honey...we miss you! I haven't squeed in ages! I just needed to let you know how much I miss you and your Saving Bella...here and at that other site! Thank you as always for your amazing as hell story.
Date: 03 Apr 2010 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 31
Absolutely wonderful story, I am so hooked! I can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2010 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 30
its getting sooo good!
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2010 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 29
Yeah! Some action :-P
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2010 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 28
You go Bella!
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2010 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 27
Rose rocks! Throw darts at Edwards pics! lololol
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2010 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 26
God she is so feeling like she cannot let go of the pain
Date: 28 Mar 2010 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 31
Cool chapter! Hope you update some more soon.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 28
awww bella kissed him
Date: 28 Mar 2010 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 31
i loved it and that was a perfect date
Date: 28 Mar 2010 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 31
I love this chapter and the next one coming. Probably my favorites from your story.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 30
You know, I love your story. I've obviously been re-reading it and good thing I am. This chapter casued inspiration for the title of my Peter/Bella story. So, thanks! :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2010 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 29
I wish I was Bella in this chapter!
Date: 28 Mar 2010 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 28
Love that chapter!
Date: 28 Mar 2010 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 29
I'm blushing like Bella!
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 27
I knew it will be hard for Bella once she started opening up her feeling. I am glad Jasper is not babying Bella because she need that. I wondered how long it would be until either one of the vampires slipped or Bella figured out about the werewolves. You get a great job. I cant wait to see what happen at therapy this week. I have a funning feeling Emmett is going to make a big impression. Also with Bella opening up more her fierceness will be coming out more and more. I love this new Bella.
Author's Response:
Sorry it took me so long but thank you for the reiview!
xoxoxxo
M-
Date: 13 Mar 2010 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 7
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you for the reviews I'm glad you are enjoying it!
xoxoxoxo
M
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2010 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 25
hhhmmmm
Author's Response:
Mora Thanks for all your reviews. And I'm glad you liked the puppy!
I hope you'll continue to enjoy!
xoxoxoxoxo
M
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2010 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 24
Awe! The puppy is sleeping on Emmett!
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2010 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 23
I think there is a wolf at the door.
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2010 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 22
Emmett was too damn funny!
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2010 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 21
OMG! She is getting funnier.
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2010 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 27
Great as usual. Can't wait till the whole story is here. :)
Author's Response:
We're gettin' there. Thanks for the review!
xoxoxoxo
M-
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 26
Wow. I really am enjoying this story even though this chapter was more pain and sadness. It is good to see her finally opening up and letting Jasper helper. I have a feeling this will make both of them stronger once they work through all of it. Great job.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you are enjoying it. I know it can be depressing but I try to put a little goofy thing in every chapter too. I have a feeling you are right about making them both stronger, but we'll see.
Thanks for the review!
xoxoxo
M & J
Date: 12 Mar 2010 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 11
AWESOME
Author's Response:
You are a goofball! I love you for it though!
Thanks for all the reviews Sweet Pea!
xoxoooxoxoxxo
M & J
Date: 12 Mar 2010 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 9
Awesome! Quaker=D
Date: 12 Mar 2010 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 26
Awesome! ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks Darlin!
xoxoxoxo
M & J
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 26
Intense! I wish that you could put all that you have written about this story on the site. Update soon. :)
Author's Response:
I'll work on doin' better about updatin'. I'll try to get something up at least once a week. But I'll put another chapter up for you now :D
Thanks for the review!
M & J
Date: 12 Mar 2010 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 26
love hard ass jazz
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you liked it!
xoxoxox
M & J
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 26
AWESOME!!
Author's Response:
*giggles* You are a freak what are you doing? But thank you!
Love you BB!
xoxoxoxo
M
Date: 03 Mar 2010 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 25
ok so i think this was deleted on fanfiction which is why i'm coming out of the woodworks. This is a great story and i literally check everyday for an update. i'll probably start from the beginning again but that won't take me long so post the rest of the chapters por favor. i doubt i'll review again but i am reading, even when characters piss me off, and i love the whole swan residence dynamic.
now that i've exposed myself as a dork with bad grammar... finish your story.
Author's Response:
No it's still on fanfiction.net you can get caught up over there. It's up to 37 chapters so far over there. Thanks for finding me here.
xoxoxoxox
M