Date: 10 Mar 2017 1:01 PM Title: Ch10 - The Screaming Epiphany
I really enjoy reading this story. I absolutely love these two, they're too cute :)
Date: 10 Mar 2017 1:00 PM Title: Ch10 - The Screaming Epiphany
I really enjoy reading this story. I absolutely love these two, they're too cute :)
Date: 18 Oct 2015 5:46 PM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises
AWESOME!!! sequel ;) i hope edward lets bella reciprocate on the anal deal in part 3 though i think it was a bit rushed when it happened 'hehe' i hope your life is treating you well and all get to read pt3 asap because it's been 5 years since this was completed ;D
Date: 10 Sep 2014 2:57 AM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises
OMGosh! !!!!!!!! I love this chapter! !!!!!!! I have gone to your profile. .......where is the sequel? ????????????
PLEASE PLEASE post the sequel. Hope to hear from you soon. You are a wonderful writer. Thank you for sharing 2 great stories with us. Hope you will share your next one too.
Date: 09 Sep 2014 7:29 PM Title: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve
Wow!!!! Was not expecting anal sex in this chapter. I knew Bella wearing that outfit was not going to be a good idea
Date: 08 Sep 2014 3:24 PM Title: Ch21 - Closure
So glad Phil is put away!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 08 Sep 2014 2:24 PM Title: Ch20 - Repercussions
Glad things are working out for them.
Date: 08 Sep 2014 3:09 AM Title: Ch 19 - Boxer Cullen
OMGosh! !!!!! I just knew that Angela was going to tell Edward that he had a k8d. I am glad that did not happen. Loved the Bella knocked her out. Lol. I busted out laughing when Bella fell a sleep on Edward. Lol
Date: 07 Sep 2014 7:08 PM Title: Ch18 - First Time for Everything
Edward messed up big time with the Angela mess. Glad they worked it out. Excited for Emmett and Rose.
Date: 06 Sep 2014 11:28 PM Title: Ch17 - Back to Reality
So glad that I do not have to wait for an update. I am off to read the next chapter.
Date: 06 Sep 2014 12:39 AM Title: Ch16 - Fighting with the In-laws
Esme is going to kill Alice!!!!!!!! At least Edward and Bella are off the hot seat now. Lol
Date: 05 Sep 2014 11:54 PM Title: Ch15 - The Big Day
I am so glad that everything went PERFECT! !!!!!!!
Glad that Jasper is back and it looks like Alice is welcoming him back .
Date: 05 Sep 2014 4:24 PM Title: Ch14 - Forgiveness
I am glad that Renee believes Bella now and that Bella can forgive her.
Date: 05 Sep 2014 1:16 PM Title: Ch13 - The Truth
So glad that Edward got there in time. I hope it opened Renee ' s eyes. Also glad she did not pull away from Edward.
Date: 05 Sep 2014 11:10 AM Title: Ch12 - The Proposition
I hope Edward and Emmett ' s plan works. I hope Edward can keep his promise to Bella.
Date: 05 Sep 2014 2:49 AM Title: Ch11 - Provoking the Groom
I just hope Phil does not ruin their wedding.
Date: 05 Sep 2014 2:04 AM Title: Ch10 - The Screaming Epiphany
Phil is pushing his luck. I have a feeling that Edward is going to get a hit in before Phil leaves.
Date: 05 Sep 2014 12:24 AM Title: Ch9 - Step Daddy Dearest
Yes I see some drama coming!!!!
Date: 04 Sep 2014 6:10 PM Title: Ch8 - The Memoirs of a Fairy
Lots of drama in this chapter. I feel sorry for Alice but I am glad that Bella stood up to her.
Date: 04 Sep 2014 1:57 AM Title: Ch7 - A Change of Plans
Loved Esme calling and blessings Edward out. Lol.
Date: 04 Sep 2014 1:01 AM Title: Ch6 - The Birthday Gift
Awesome job with your 1st Dom/sub scene.
Date: 03 Sep 2014 3:19 PM Title: Ch5 - The Birthday Boy
I just knew they had some Dom/sub in them. Love it!!!!!!!!
Date: 03 Sep 2014 2:48 AM Title: Ch4 - Party Time
Love that Bella did not let those shanks ruin her party.
Date: 02 Sep 2014 5:03 PM Title: Ch3 - The Big News
Edward is so sweet. Doing all that for Bella and then having the cake taste awful. Lol. Loved that they were playing out a fantasy. I am wondering if Edward enjoyed Bella sitting at his feet......that could be another fantasy. ..Dom/sub. Lol. Just a thought. He does seem to like to spank her ass. Lol
Date: 02 Sep 2014 3:21 PM Title: Ch2 - The Day After
Glad Bella handled Jane like she did.
Date: 01 Sep 2014 8:25 PM Title: Ch1 - The Wedding
So glad that you are continuing their story.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 8:51 PM Title: Ch1 - The Wedding
I guess that looking at the date on the last two stories there is no third one on the way. Which may I add is such a shame because your other stories were great and I really enjoyed them so thanks for that and I hope I'm wrong and you update the story soon.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:23 PM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises
Hi, I spent the last week reading both your stories!! I absolutely love them!
I love the relationship you've created between Bella and Edward!
Do you still plan of writing the last sequel of the story?
I really hope so...
Date: 28 Jul 2011 5:30 PM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises
I haved love both storys. I can't wait for the next story to come out. Any time from of when that will be?
Date: 02 Apr 2011 10:22 PM Title: Ch1 - The Wedding
well trouble in paradise... well at least you made him human he was alittle too perfect!!
Date: 14 Mar 2011 5:03 PM Title: Ch7 - A Change of Plans
she's prego!!!
Date: 29 Dec 2010 3:13 PM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises
Again I loved this story. I can't wait for the next (last?) one. It's been a while is it almost ready??? Please I must have more.
Kim
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the story! :D
The next one will be the last one. This was only ever supposed to be a one shot... so... it's already went on for too long. LOL! It's not ready though, but I am working on it. I'd like to get it finished before college starts, but that probably won't happen. Regardless, I promise that this story will happen. :)
Thanks for reading!! :D :D
Date: 16 Dec 2010 4:42 AM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises
ok so forget my last review question. You have an amazing talent/gift. Thank you so much for sharing with us.
Author's Response:
I knew you'd find it, so I stayed quiet. ;) Thank you so much for the compliment. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reading. I hope to have the next one out as soon as I can. :)
Date: 16 Dec 2010 4:12 AM Title: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve
Really loving this story, do you have the name for the third segment yet?
Date: 14 Dec 2010 10:07 PM Title: Ch14 - Forgiveness
Too funny with the Rpatz joke !!!
Date: 10 Oct 2010 11:04 PM Title: Ch2 - The Day After
Thank you for not going the "misunderstanding route" with Jane that most authors go to. Bella knew Edward had been a "bad boy" type of guy before she met him. She was bound to run into his past and thank god he was honest with her. I hope. The fact that they talked it out shows their maturity about the whole ordeal.
Date: 04 Sep 2010 9:22 PM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises
This was great! I especially love happy Daddy Edward!
Date: 28 Aug 2010 4:38 AM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises
wow i wish every guy was lie that. its a wonderful dream world you have set up here and its a nice brae from reality. i love it your writting is do detailed. i love stories that have ending lie this i cany wait for " the matron swan and the cullen offspring'
Date: 27 Aug 2010 10:36 PM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises
If you need a beta, I can help you with it. I have lots of free time on my hands. Im a stay at home wife with nothing really to do 60% of the day.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 5:44 AM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises
Awww, he's got everything he ever wanted. Very sweet. Surprised Esme took things so well though. Don't know where else the story has to go, but I'm trusting that you have it worked out. I do hope that Bella continues school and doesn't give up, though.
See you when you've got the next chapter of this saga ready for us.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 21 Aug 2010 1:06 AM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises
Loved the story can't wait for the nxt story amazing loved the chapter so sweet
Date: 20 Aug 2010 6:32 AM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises
welcome back!!!!!!!! That was an amazing chapter and I am beyond excited about the sequel!!!!!!!!!!! I don't have Twitter so I will be checking in to make sure I dont' miss this one.
Again, great series of stories and I can't wait for the next installment. You are an official franchise now!!!
Date: 20 Aug 2010 5:56 AM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises
Nice eventful chapter and great story.
Date: 20 Aug 2010 4:58 AM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises
Loved it very much and very excited to see the 3rd part of this update when you can thanks.....
Date: 20 Aug 2010 4:20 AM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises
I have loved this story from the begining and i can't wait to read what next for Edward and Bella.
Date: 20 Aug 2010 2:29 AM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises
Aww...that was the perfect ending :) I cannot wait to see what happens in the next story :) I will try my hardest to be patient while waiting for you to finish the entire story (so you can start posting it). I am happy Alice and Jasper finally told Esme the truth. Wonderful job, once again!
Date: 20 Aug 2010 1:01 AM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises
great chapter. cant wait for the next part
Date: 20 Aug 2010 12:30 AM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises
yayyyyyyyyyyy! another go 'round with E & B.......a small favour to ask tho.......the Cullen Offspring, can you make him/her realistic....we all know babies dont sleep and the FF versions of E & B babies (all perfect, non crying, always sleeping) makes me want to pull my hair out! Just saying...........
Date: 20 Aug 2010 12:21 AM Title: Ch 23 - Surprises
i loved it this was really good and i can't wait till the next part but i will read it when ever you are ready to post great job
Date: 24 Jul 2010 3:45 PM Title: Ch1 - The Wedding
i am loving the story i wish u would update soon!!!!
Date: 20 Jul 2010 12:16 AM Title: Ch1 - The Wedding
I am so
Waiting Patiently Impatiently,
OH MIA MYA
Date: 04 Jun 2010 1:15 AM Title: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve
this is so great i love this story so far and i love the first part to this srry i didnt review previously i was so into the story that i wanted to know what was going to happen next so yeah and this is freaking FUCKTASTIC FUCKAWESOME just.....yeah i love it cant wait to find out what happens next keep up the good work and harry and hermione should have been together and not with their respected weasleys even though ron is FUCKHOT okay i better stop because now im rambling so um yeah buy :)
Date: 26 May 2010 3:59 PM Title: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve
i love your stories so much...your characters ar so amazing and touching...hope for a sequel and an update !! thanks so much
Date: 23 May 2010 4:34 PM Title: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve
Can't wait to see what's next.
Date: 18 May 2010 2:59 AM Title: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve
Great publishing, this had a lot of good twists to it. I've read alot of them and this is awesome!!!!!
Date: 04 May 2010 1:54 PM Title: Ch12 - The Proposition
Not to sound like a crazy woman or anything but where is her dad during all of this? With him being the Chief of Police shouldn't he be in on the plan with catching Phil in the act
Date: 03 May 2010 8:08 PM Title: Ch12 - The Proposition
The last chapters are so full of suspense : I'm so happy I didn't have to wait to read them one after the other !! Beware, too much cliffy frustrated the readers !!!! But it could also give them a reason to come read next chapter... All is a question of proportioning!! LOL
Date: 03 May 2010 6:54 PM Title: Ch10 - The Screaming Epiphany
I don't understand Renee behaviour. How could she not believed her ouwn child? And her attitude with the other mother... it's sad for her : she is loosing her daughter for a man.
Date: 03 May 2010 6:20 PM Title: Ch9 - Step Daddy Dearest
HOT HOT HOT : the lemons of course ! She does as he commands and it's beautiful : domineering but not controlling ! It's a nice way to say this.
CREEPY CRREPY CREEPY : Phil ! It's smells like a huge drama !! ;-)
I want MORE MORE MORE of it : love, sex & drama !
Date: 03 May 2010 5:43 PM Title: Ch8 - The Memoirs of a Fairy
I think I can understand why Jasper freeks out & Alice's reaction but I don't understand her blame on Bella. It's unfair.
I don't really like Alice anymore in your story : she always interupt them, says nasty things to Bella or the other, isn't happy for her friend& brother... She acts like an ungrateful brat with everybody!
And where are Emmet & Rosalie? MIA?
Date: 03 May 2010 4:26 PM Title: Ch7 - A Change of Plans
I love the lemons : you are amazing with them!! Just enough description to please without given into porn. B&E seems to like having a D/s relationship... I think it suits them well. What the hell is Alice problem?????
Date: 29 Apr 2010 4:10 PM Title: Ch14 - Forgiveness
LMAO @ “What? Oh, my God! Rob Pattinson is going to be here?!”
Date: 28 Apr 2010 7:04 PM Title: Ch4 - Party Time
I love Bella's outburst..serves those heifers RIGHT! Cant wait to continue reading
Date: 28 Apr 2010 6:20 PM Title: Ch3 - The Big News
ok soooo I really want to know what the deal was with the cake LOL Did his ex Jane work there or something???
Date: 24 Apr 2010 7:38 PM Title: Ch2 - The Day After
Will it not cause any problem the fact that Bella refuses to experiment the real life as a student? Jane was a very nice spicy surprise! I love this sequel !!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 11:30 AM Title: Ch2 - The Day After
everyone has a past, glad to see bella isn't gonna blow a fit over edward's
Date: 22 Apr 2010 5:39 AM Title: Ch1 - The Wedding
it is nice to see that edward is not infallable and perfect all of the time. you had me going in the begining of the chapter that it was b & e getting married. keep up the writting, thank you.
Date: 19 Apr 2010 11:48 PM Title: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve
This was good, but I would have liked for them to have practiced a bit on other occasions and built up to the event. I think Edward needs a little penetration as well, maybe during a BJ?...
Date: 17 Apr 2010 12:48 AM Title: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve
I am a litle worried about Royce King being in this story and the fact he has now been embarrased by a woman, Bella. Oh Boy are you setting us up again:)
Date: 16 Apr 2010 4:12 PM Title: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve
well bella proved she can handle herself and does so, edward can be rest assured she does not crave any attention other than his, as for how the ended the end of the evening it's a very personal choice that type of sex depending on who you are with and how much you trust them not to hurt you, but bella did not seem to enjoy it so much as edward, i wonder if they will again? more please thanks tracy
Date: 16 Apr 2010 1:52 PM Title: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve
loved it awesome...cant wait for the nxt 1
Date: 15 Apr 2010 5:26 PM Title: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve
That was fuck awesome. So happy to have you back. Loved it.
Date: 15 Apr 2010 9:34 AM Title: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve
Loved it, as always, but can you help me out here..Why are Bella's thighs bruised? Did I miss some hot spanking or something? I went back a bit but found nothing.(scratches head) I'm sure it's out there in plain sight and I'm being dump..
Author's Response:
If I said thigh's I meant hips. Not thighs. I haven't went back and looked to see what I said... LOL! but whatever I said, I meant hips. :D Sorry for the confusion.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!! :D
Date: 15 Apr 2010 1:09 AM Title: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve
I liked it! I really enjoyed Edward's POV!
Date: 14 Apr 2010 11:56 PM Title: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve
Good chapter! I was wondering why there hadn't been any updates!
Date: 14 Apr 2010 11:32 PM Title: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve
yeah, doesnt matter which way you look at it, its still icky. i'm just saying...........
Date: 14 Apr 2010 11:05 PM Title: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve
thanks that was great can't wait to see what happens next update soon thanks.....
Date: 14 Apr 2010 10:18 PM Title: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve
I loved the chapter. Although, I kinda missed the possessive Edward at the party. LOL I'm glad Bella showed him she can take care of herself. Thanks for the update and looking forward to the next one.
Date: 11 Apr 2010 7:52 AM Title: Ch21 - Closure
good result
Date: 11 Apr 2010 7:36 AM Title: Ch20 - Repercussions
good shes gone
Date: 11 Apr 2010 7:21 AM Title: Ch 19 - Boxer Cullen
go bella defend your man
Date: 11 Apr 2010 6:47 AM Title: Ch18 - First Time for Everything
cool
Date: 11 Apr 2010 6:10 AM Title: Ch17 - Back to Reality
nice lunch time for the newlwed cullens
Date: 31 Mar 2010 9:05 PM Title: Ch21 - Closure
gotta love Halloween you get to dress up like a whore and no one can really call you out on it cause it Halloween can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 29 Mar 2010 2:01 PM Title: Ch6 - The Birthday Gift
The Ducati streetfighter is a real nice bike - that was a goog idea for Edwards bithdaypresent; but Bella has had the best present at all. And now she knows what she wants to study at the university.
Go on...
Bussy
Date: 28 Mar 2010 4:20 PM Title: Ch5 - The Birthday Boy
Hey, I can`t write a long review, because I want to go on with the next chapter.
Best spring-wishes
Bussy
Date: 28 Mar 2010 5:53 AM Title: Ch3 - The Big News
Was a little shocked about the Sue and Charlie marriage, but can't wait to see the trouble Leah will cause.
And interested to see how Edward's friends take to Bella at their party.
Date: 26 Mar 2010 4:57 PM Title: Ch16 - Fighting with the In-laws
oh lord so much going on i must admit i can see each side of the argument but being older and having kids i thinhk i would also be upset like esme of my kids ditched out of her own wedding, it would not have hurt them to stay, but then again i've never had that all consuming love that you describe them as having so yeah still undecided, and now alice is married in vegas no less esme is going to pitch a fit she felt cheated already, as for all that honeymoon sex all i can say is well i dont quite know what to say but they wont ever forget will they!!
Date: 26 Mar 2010 1:10 PM Title: Ch2 - The Day After
I didn't realise how badly Edward suffered when Bella wasn't around, and how significant his alchol stint was. I hope he has completely sobered up now.
Interesting to learn more of Edward's past. These are definitely issues that need to be aired prior to the wedding.
Date: 26 Mar 2010 8:02 AM Title: Ch15 - The Big Day
wow what a wedding they love each other so much i'm almost jealous, the notes they passed so sweet, loved this chapter a lot, and yay jasper is back, honeymoon yes please
Date: 26 Mar 2010 6:57 AM Title: Ch14 - Forgiveness
they almost gave in it wiould have been to easy too, i'm glad it all worked out with renee i'm also a fan of the hea, moving swiftly on to the big day
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:20 PM Title: Ch1 - The Wedding
So we jump a year ahead and the chemistry seems to have changed.
Bella still seems to be quite young and immature, sticking her tongue out, and just generally showing her age. This is okay except i feel she has some pretty serious grown-up things happening.
Edward has become much more needy, dependent, and just an all round emotional sap. He used to carry this air of confidence and strength, but i feel like some of that has disappeared, perhaps with Bella's absense throughout the year just gone?
And what is Edward's obsession with kissing Bella's scar? This small gesture really stood out to me this chapter.
Date: 24 Mar 2010 7:43 AM Title: Ch21 - Closure
Fucking....lovely!!!!
Date: 24 Mar 2010 4:04 AM Title: Ch21 - Closure
I really love how Edward kept Bella laughing all day after all the drama, just as she said. He is definitely wanting to get her preggers, but I'd like to hear them have a serious conversation about whether Bella wants to work right out of college, what kind of job/intership, where Edward will be with his career and what kind of situation they want to be in when they start having children. He clearly feels ready now, but they haven't talked about the fact they are both in school and living in an apartment. Edward might have to move somewhere across country for his matching after med school. Even if we don't witness the talk, I'd like to know they thought about it at least as much as having anal sex, which is another topic that requires revisiting...
Date: 24 Mar 2010 3:43 AM Title: Ch13 - The Truth
so now renn ee knows, the plan worked even if bella set it in motion early, phil is out of the picture for good (i hope) loved edward reasurances and the bath scene,
Date: 24 Mar 2010 3:16 AM Title: Ch12 - The Proposition
so much could go wrong with this plan, keeping my fingers crossed cause phil well out of order, invasion of privacy and those photos he should never have see n
Date: 23 Mar 2010 9:29 PM Title: Ch11 - Provoking the Groom
this wedding is not going to be disaster free, love the sex fantastic
Date: 23 Mar 2010 8:56 PM Title: Ch10 - The Screaming Epiphany
phil is well creepy, and it's sad that her mum chose wrong, i love that at the moment all is going well in the run up to the wedding that was organised in super fast time, alice is hiding her sadness well,
Date: 23 Mar 2010 7:40 PM Title: Ch7 - A Change of Plans
For the longest time I couldn't see the point behind marriage. Everyone we knew who was married, was getting divorced. It seemed their relationships were better before that piece of paper came into play. Once it was there it was like hell took over. I didn't want that so I waited and push off getting married. My husband and I had a baby first and only got married when he joined the military. Otherwise Ivy (our daughter) and I wouldn't have been able to be stationed with him.