Date: 27 Apr 2010 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 17
Absolutely love this story. Have been waiting on an update. So excited.
Date: 25 Apr 2010 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 17
I absolutely loved this chapter. My fave so far. I loved how she stood up to him because he's being a total and complete &^**&. Great job, cannot wait for the update.
WHO IS IN THAT CAR?????!!!!!!!!!!! Congrats on having two stories in the top 10......VERY IMPRESSIVE. Guess everybody else realizes whan an epic, stellar, awesome writer you are too.
Date: 25 Apr 2010 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 17
What does HEA means? I love your plot. This possessiveness is quite crazy but it makes a good story. This Daemon & Tania's baby are huge problem s for our couple. The cliffy is terrible ! I hope to read you soon!!!
Date: 25 Apr 2010 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 6
Well still don't like him. I like all Dom/sub stuff but he's not a Dom he's creepy. All the BDSM stuff has rules and I don't think that Bella knows anything about it.
Date: 25 Apr 2010 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ok if you're saying that she likes him that way who am I to argue but I don't. And he's calling her in his mind bitch!
Date: 25 Apr 2010 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 4
OMG!!! Ok I like a little possessive and dominate Edward but like i said a little and here he is a way tooo much. Bella is only 17 and he's her first and I don't think that this is a good idea she does't know what she's dealing with. He's too creepy! I hope it will end good for everyone.
Date: 25 Apr 2010 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh God I'm a little scared of your Edward! Very Creepy!
Date: 23 Apr 2010 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 17
isn't it STI now or something??? not that important really, just curious.
anyway, i really like this story and it is sooooo hot!!! but your right possesive is fiction is one thing but in real life it can be bad!! and I know all about that side of things...any way keep up the good writing and I can't wait to read how Bella and Edward work things out!!!
P.S. I understand where everyone is coming from with seth and the accident, but her mum was a biatch...lol
Date: 22 Apr 2010 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 17
OH Fuck NOOOOOOOOOOOO, damn it..... I am sure it's gonna be Damon of course perfect timing when Bella is so upset with Edward.. Which she has every right to be... I can't believe he slept with her without a condom.. and if i was Bella ya i would be freaking... in this day and age pregnancy is the least of your worries there are sooo many STD's running around.. not to mention Aids and HIV.. please don't let that be the case.......Now I'm all for her being pissed i was pissed off at Edward since that day in the diner with Tanya but Damon NO cuz he is just a jerk i can already tell.. he isn't a caring sweet guy he is a total player for sure...........and he will only end up breaking Bella's heart.. I love Edward and i love the way he is but he is wrong on a lot of things and this whole thing with Tanya he was wrong with......from the moment he let her treat Bella the way he did.. he did it because he didn't want Tanya to know about him and Bella for some reason..i don't blame him for sleeping with Tanya his reason makes sense he didn't know if he would ever meet her again.. but everything after that was BS.......... i hope she tells Damon NO and waits for her friends.
Date: 21 Apr 2010 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 17
Oh, i can't wait for you to finish this story......
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2010 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter!!! Update again soon please!!!
Date: 21 Apr 2010 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 17
Hate to say it, but I wish Edward would get a taste of his own medicine.... Let me guess who is picking her up????? The new guy?? Hope so, he seems he will cause some drama. Maybe Edward will realize what he has
Date: 21 Apr 2010 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 17
How could he not have told Bella about that! That is terrible that she had to learn it from facebook.
Date: 21 Apr 2010 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 17
oh no...edward you are in big big big trouble
he is the experinced adult in the relationship
but he had unprotected sex with other woman and lied to bella
now who is the immature and irresponsible one? tsk, tsk, tsk
thanks for the dramatic and intense story~
Date: 21 Apr 2010 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 17
Oh crap...please let this skank be prego to someone else or even making it up!!! Edward u are so stupid!!!
Date: 21 Apr 2010 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 17
Bella had absolutely every right to do what she did, im so glad she stood her ground, Yay for her..in the car...its so gonna be Damon...
as for story rec's..personality by angelanharvey3. Totally consumed my life for about 6 days while i read...its been a LONG time since a story has done that.
Date: 21 Apr 2010 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 17
dumbass edward....enough said ...he is stupid ass..
Date: 21 Apr 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 13
Well I bet mom and dad feel like shit! Now things should start heating up.
Date: 21 Apr 2010 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 17
its seth! or someone else!
Date: 21 Apr 2010 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 17
new reader...loving it!!
edward is so using a double standard with bella he can have an ex-fuck buddy as a friend but she can't simply have any male friends
i really hope that he does some thinking while bella is at home and understands why she is so upset about both the possible baby and the possible STD
update really soon please
Date: 20 Apr 2010 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 17
No I did NOT expect that to happen that's for sure. :D i hope its Damon that would be great. lol I can't wait till you update again. I love where this is going. thanks again bye
Date: 20 Apr 2010 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 17
Just discovered this today. I can deal with Obnoxious Caveward....Bella on the other hand...
I understand you won't change him & I applaud you for that but she is willingly in this effed up relationship and allows him to treat her as such... That's messed up.
After this little tidbit of what he did, how he's reacting to her being upset & al that, she's a freaking idiot to come back to him. She needs to teach him a lesson. He's disrespecting her in the biggest way there is. How can you say you love someone & then disrespect them to that extent.
It's one thing to deal w/his possesiveness & find it hot--but there is a point where it's not healthy and he's sooooo crossed it.
Regardless, I'll continue to read until Bella makes me want to bash my brains in.... =)
Date: 20 Apr 2010 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 17
I hope that you can post the new chapter soon! I am really loving this story but this drama has me on the edge. ARGHHHH!!!!!!!
Date: 20 Apr 2010 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 17
Please don't let Tanya be pregnant. Edward and Bella have enough to deal with regarding his possessiveness and his need to be right about everything. But either way, Bella was right; Edward should have told her about this. It was not fair to her to keep this a secret.
Date: 20 Apr 2010 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 2
smoking hot lemon I loved it!! loved the beginning of this story
Date: 20 Apr 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 17
What the hell does he expect from her?? I wish she would not of left and wanted to be there when Tanya came no matter how uncomfortable it would make her because she could do a preg test on her own. She wants Edward. Please tell me she doesnt get in the car with the kid.
Author's Response:
Edward is madly in love with her. Yes, he has a funny way of showing it. I'm thinking of doing a EPOV next, not sure. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 20 Apr 2010 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 17
I agree with Bella. How dare he have double standards. Not liking possessive Edward very much right now. It may help his case if I were to hear his pov on this chapter, maybe!!! I so hope Tanya is not pregnant. Well hello baby, could it maybe be the new good looking guy at school that has stopped to help a lady out in need. LOL I feel the need for the table to be turned in Bella's favor for once. Let her be the possessive one for awhile. Love the drama, though. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Right now Possessive Edward sucks ass! I agree. His POV may or may not be next, undecided. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2010 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 17
I loved it i know it's damon more trouble on the way lol i hope tanya isn't preggers that would suck
Date: 20 Apr 2010 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 17
Brilliant!! Edward is so so so well I just don't have the words!! Ok first an idiot!! How can someone be so possesive?! Love it and can't wait for the next update!! Is the car the good looking new guy? Or Seth? Be safe Bella but get away from Edward!
Date: 20 Apr 2010 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 17
HEA = Happy Ever After
Considering both Edward and Bella's immaturity, Edwards complete disregard for Bella's intelligence, feelings, and opinions, his lack of self-awareness, and his double standards, I don't see one coming. :( But I'm going to keep reading and hoping!
Date: 20 Apr 2010 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 17
yes he was wrong in not telling her about the unportected sex and then having sex with her. no question on that. the possible pregnancy I can see where he would be scared to death to tell her however he should have.
hope she isn;t pregnant, but that would probably be too easy.
circumstances/consequences suck for them all right now.
Date: 20 Apr 2010 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 17
Good for Bella standing her ground and leaving anyway. I am wondering if it is the new guy at scholl that drove up. I can't wait to see what happens next. I really hope that Tanya is not pregnant or if she is that it isn't Edward's. I can see it being someone else's baby and she is going to try and pass it off as Edward's.
Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 20 Apr 2010 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 17
Forogt to say this in my last review but Bella better not accept that ride from that guy.
Date: 20 Apr 2010 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 17
I thought Edward was a jerk, but I also thought that Bella was a bitch in this chapter. I'm hoping that Tanya isn't pregnant.
Date: 20 Apr 2010 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 17
Thank god she has finally grown a set! He is SUCH a fuckwit.
Date: 20 Apr 2010 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 17
I'm disapointed nit in the writing or the story at the way he is treating her. I hope she is not prego I'd have a hard time reading if so - bella dosen't deserve that
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2010 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 17
errrrr...I guess my age is showing....whats an HEA? lol
Date: 20 Apr 2010 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 17
Question... What is HEA? I want Bella to show his possessive ass what's up!!!! He is a bastard. :) I love the story.
Date: 20 Apr 2010 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 17
Actually I was in between pregnancy and money... I couldn't decide which cause the ;ater was blackmailing and I lov that shit!
I loved it but can't wait for an Epov!!
xoxo
Marianne
Date: 20 Apr 2010 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 17
......and here we have another fabuloso chappy! Waaay toooo gooo Bells - I love her!
Edwardo needs knocking down a peg or two ( I am in no doubt that he adores her) and our gal's gonna do it! There is such a thing a loving someone to death which is totally unhealthy! If he is going to be a dad he needs to man up!
For all his snarling shouting swearing again she got to do exactly what she wanted he could of crossed a line here and he didn't - speaks volumes!
Love your characters can't wait for update. Debs (UK)
Date: 20 Apr 2010 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 17
NO!! This cannot be happening! PLEASE don't let Tanya be pregnant or Bella leave Edward! I really hope Bella doesn't accept whoever is offering her a ride! Amazing job!
Date: 20 Apr 2010 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 17
Dude, Edward needs to get his ass kicked. I totally want Bella to just go balls out and slap the shit out of him- only problem is, the way this Edward is written, he might actually hit her back in a fit of rage. I think I need to see Edward tone it down just a little... he is actually scaring me! And to whoever asked you whether or not your husband is like Edward, that makes me laugh. Not only is that a deeply personal question, but as if you would actually answer in the affirmative on this board! Anyway, look forward to the next update of the "crazy Edward" show! :)
And I actually think it's Emmett in the car, just being an ass... just my thought. or Seth, but I don't think he'd be that stupid. Or a new guy- maybe I really don't know :)
Date: 20 Apr 2010 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 17
Lovvveeed it cannt wait for the next chapter! I'm glad she stood up for herself
Date: 20 Apr 2010 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 17
PLEASE tell me that Tanya is just trying to get Edward back and she isnt really pregnant? In a way, if I was bella I would tell him to get lost. I like the possessivness sometimes, but with something like this, with it being HIS fault, thats going too far! Cant wait to see how this turns out
Date: 20 Apr 2010 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 17
God Edward is beyond frustrating in this chapter! Is he truly that dense that he doesn't understand how many ways he's screwed up? How DARE he let Bella find out about the visit on facebook! How DARE he claim that it's none of her business! How DARE he lie about unprotected sex! If Bella did a fraction of what's been revealed in this chapter Edward would probably kill her. Yes it would be manslaughter and he'd feel remorse, but I honestly think he's borderline deranged at this point.
I don't know what it will take to redeem him in my eyes right now, but it's going to have to be BIG. I mean a life altering, no holds barred, absolutely no room for doubt that he RESPECTS Bella and that she is the number one priority in his life. They've already got a number of strikes against them (age is just one, but that can be overcome), but if he doesn't get a grip and make some serious changes I don't see how a HEA can come of this.
Date: 20 Apr 2010 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 17
My heart is crushed!
Date: 20 Apr 2010 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 17
Well I am hoping that she is not pregnant, and wondering who pulled up to her at the end there. Great chapter. Thanks for the update.
Date: 20 Apr 2010 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 17
He was wrong that's some mess up stuff to and hide. No this time he really needs to work to get back with her. Especially after he pulled that shit with Tanya in the restaurant.
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2010 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 17
OMG talk about cave man .. so edward somehow convinces himself that he can see anyone and do anything he likes .. i can just imagine if the sit'n was reversed and bella feared she was pregnant by someone else after having drunken unprotected sex .... bet edward wld freak ... so he is afraid he'll lose her if he lets her go but cant see her right to b upset or angry enuf to leave ... as she said he freaks every time she even talks to her male friends
talk about dbl standards .. he stalked her on facebook when he realised she was emmetts sister yet now he's upset coz she's been stalking him ....
so what will bella do ... does she love him enuf to stick with him .. i think she does and as she said, he didnt technically cheat on her coz he didnt know who she was or how to contact her ... hopefully tanya isnt pregnant .. long way to come just to take a pregnancy test .. perhaps she is angling for a relationship???
looking 4wd to ur updates
hugs ety
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2010 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 17
Wow what a drama filled chapter! This was crazy!! She dhoild have slapped the shit out of him.
Angel
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 16
Seriously, Edward wasn't going to tell Bella that his 'fuck buddy' was visiting him?!? She had to read about it on facebook...Not sure who is the most immature in this relationship. Good story for some but too much fucking stupidity for me. I have no patience for cheating or pulling crap like still seeing your 'fuck buddy' while in a so called relationship with someone else. I'm out. Good luck.
Author's Response:
Thanks! But a good idea would be to see why his 'fuck buddy' was comin'. Good luck in finding the story that works for you. :)
Date: 19 Apr 2010 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 16
Mmm, get your head out of your ass Edward. Turnabout is always fair play, so saddle up if you're going to continue to ride.
Author's Response:
hahaha, I love your analogy! Thx for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2010 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 16
All caught up!!!! I love Dom Edward.... Keemp em cumming we want more of this fuckery!!!!
Author's Response:
New chapter should be posted NLT tomorrow...this is a pivottal chapter coming up...I foresee all kinds of fuckery in their future. Domward/Caveward LIVES! LOL thx for reading and reviewing.
Date: 18 Apr 2010 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 16
I love your story. I have to say, a bit of caveward is hot, but I could never deal with it in a real relationship. Which is why I have to read fics to get my pervy fix of dominance :) Can't wait to read more! (Oh, and if the poll is still open on longer vs. shorter chapters, I vote shorter chapters like you've been doing with frequent updates.)
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2010 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 16
I LOVE Caveward :)
Date: 18 Apr 2010 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 16
I love this chapter!! I absolutely love caveward..so HOT!! Can't wait to see what happens next ;)..the story that owns me now is California Waiting by teambella23 you should check it out..thanks for the update! This story it's great!
Date: 18 Apr 2010 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 16
Uh oh! She is going to get it from him one of these days. Great chapter.
Date: 18 Apr 2010 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
Ok, so normally I don't review until I've read all the posted chapters and have something of substance to say, but I think the ending to this chapter calls for a loud "DAMN!"
(BTW loving your story so far)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!~ That was such a fun chapter to write...next chapter will be very interesting!
Date: 18 Apr 2010 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
I am a lucky (daughte?!) of a bitch what can I say.... Actually he is around 6'2
broad shoulders dark messy hair ***blushes*** and gorgeous ice blue eyes.... Not to mention other parts ;)
Fuck... I am showing him off again.... He is going to be sooo pissed...
Ohhh Dimitri I've been a bad bad girl.... ****shouts and runs to find D....****
lol
Marianne
Date: 18 Apr 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 16
Ooooooooh getting good! Too possesive!! Go Bella! You tell him!!!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 16
fucking awesome chapter.. but how dare Edward be mad at Bella when he was keeping the whole Tayna thing a secret.. I hope that Edward doesn't mess around on Bella Great job please continue.. And enjoy your husband.. ;)
Date: 17 Apr 2010 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter!!! Update soon please!!!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh shit not happy..........ok Damon needs to back off Bella right now but stay close enough to bring out the caveward........got i do love the caveward...like he was in ealier chapters (when he took her to his hotel.. before him and Emmett got a place *wink).. anyways I fucking knew something was gonna happen with Tanya.. damn it....now i don't want her running to Damon but i am so glad she is finally back to giving him shit about Tanya cuz that night was fucked up and bullshit and she seemed to get over that a little to easy.... and i still don't buy his excuse of why he let Tanya talk to her like that......i will be eagerly awaiting this next chapter......
Date: 17 Apr 2010 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 16
OK I am totally loving this story and it can't update quick enough for me. I love this Edward and although she does not realise it yet Bella seems to actually have the power here. I love the way she calls him out on his crap!
Can't wait for vapid Tanya to arrive and I hope Edwardo does have a te ta te with her but remember oh so possesive one what is good for the goose is also good for the gander and with welcoming Damon on to the scene a hell storm just might ensue.
Great work - Debs (UK)
Date: 17 Apr 2010 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 16
oooh Edward is in TROUBLE!!! lol I can't believe he's still seeing Tanya though? hopefully just friends, nothing more. :( I can't wait for another update. this is going great. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2010 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh shit!!! Lemon was fabulous..... Fuck hawt!!! Cold shower!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much...glad you enjoyed it. I always stress about doing lemons, I always want to make hte reader feel like they are there and can picture it.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 16
oh please dont tell me he is going to do something with tanya and mess them up! Why is he hiding Tanya's visit anyways, it will make bella think something is going on even when its not
Author's Response:
God only knows how Caveward's mind works! We'll just have to wait and see. Thx for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2010 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 10
Damn, the girls are just a little immature. How would they have felt if the boys wanted to go out with some female "friends" of their own?
Author's Response:
They are a little more immature but then again a 17 yr old compared to a 25 yr old views things a little more in shades of gray. Thx for reading and reviewing.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 16
I loved this chapter. I love the drama and angst in stories, don't know why. LOL Uh oh, Edward has been talking to his ex on facebook, how will he get out of that situation? I'm sure alot of my favorite stuff is coming up in the next few chapters. Can't wait. By the way, did you base the character of Damon off of the Damon on Vampire Diaries? That man is fuck hawt!!! He would be the only one to be able to compete with Edward/RP. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
I actually did use the name Damon from Vampire Diaries and yes I completely agree, he is HOTTTTT! Its a great visual too. Glad you enjoyed that chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2010 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loved the lemon! I didn't see the new kid coming...way to spice things up! Now my question is are we basing the character Damon from Vampire Diaries cause thats HOT! BTW your two recommened fics have owned me from chapter one too!
Angel
Author's Response:
It is indeed based on Vampire Diaries Damon, he is insanely HOTTTT! Yah, I have situation coming up for Bella that will be inescapable. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 16
he is being a bit of an ass with the double standard
Author's Response:
Oh dear, isn't he always? LOL. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 16
Uh-Oh Edward is in trouble now.....
Author's Response:
I believe a shit storm cometh his way LOL Thx for reading and reviewing.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 16
Uh-Oh Edward is in trouble now.....
Date: 17 Apr 2010 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 16
Uh-Oh Edward is in trouble now.....
Date: 17 Apr 2010 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 16
Uh-Oh Edward is in trouble now.....
Date: 17 Apr 2010 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 16
I loved the chapter!!! Damon is hot and I must ay it reminds me of my bf.... ***blushes***
Bring Tanya on! It's goin to be soooo much fun!
xoxo
Marianne
Author's Response:
Honey if you got someone that looks like Damon, you need to share hahaha. Yes Tanya is going to be so much fun to write about. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 16
What Tanya visiting????? what the FUCK!
Author's Response:
Yup, she's visiting. Oh I wonder what is going to happen??? HMMM....lol. Thx for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2010 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 16
So Tanya is going to come in and Fuck everything up update when you can can't wait...
Author's Response:
I don't think she will screw everything up, she might throw a few monkey wrenches in the wheels though...
Thx for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens when Edwards ex comes for a visit! A story that owns me now is california waiting!
Author's Response:
Haven't heard of that one before, thanks, I'll check it out.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 16
I am so glad the Bella is standing up to Edward. He may not change, but she doesn't have to take his crap. He doesn't want her to be friends with any guys, but he can tell her that Tanya is a friend and to get the fuck over it...can we say double standard????
Great job....thanks!
Author's Response:
A complete double standard! Bella will not put up with that...
Thx for reading and reviewing.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 16
Ohhhh Noooo Bella is going to go Bitchella on him and he deserves it if he is having his ex over! More soon please and thank you!
Author's Response:
I love a strong Bella...its the only kind that could stand caveward :)
Thx for reading and reviewing.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 16
Wow! Great chapter!!! Please update soon.... Edward is a fucking douche!!! she shouldn't let him be friends with tanya if he's not letting her be friends with other guys. I hope she tears him a new asshole!!! I can't wait!
Author's Response:
I love it when they butt heads...so much fun to write. Thx for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 16
UhOh! Trouble is a brewing I can just smell it!
Author's Response:
Trouble is brewing and it smells like SKANK! lol.
Thx for reading and reviewing.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 16
OH SNAP! I hope Damon won't cause many problems with these two. I wonder when Edward was going to tell Bella about Tanya? I have a fic recommendation (as a reader), "Like a Moth to a Flame" by CitizenCullen25, it is amazing, I wouldn't call it "dark" but Edward is a Mob boss and very much a Caveward ;)
Author's Response:
Aww yes, they don't need any extra problems now do they ;) And Tanya just adds a whole lot of glorious angst, doesn't she?! As for your fic reccomendation, Like a moth to a flame, Love it!!! It's just enough caveward to make you drool. Her last chapter on fan fiction was dark and twisted, i loved it!!! Mobward, rocks!
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 16
i loved it i didn't see that comming at all but damon should bring some nice caveward out lol
Author's Response:
Absolutely! A strikingly handsome 'friend' for Bella and a jealous protective boyfriend, is always a fab combination lol. Thx for reading and reviewing.
Date: 13 Apr 2010 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 15
i loved it cant wait till the next one
Date: 13 Apr 2010 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 15
I really don't know who is worse Rose or Bella!
Date: 13 Apr 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 12
rant away, feels good doesnt it! lol
Date: 13 Apr 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 12
rant away, feels good doesnt it! lol
Date: 13 Apr 2010 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 15
i just think maybe bella is a little TOO dismisive of edward's behavior
sometimes i just wanna punch him, no matter how hot he is, and bella should feel the same
Date: 12 Apr 2010 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 15
Enjoy you man while he is home. We will be here waiting for the next update. Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2010 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter!!! Update again soon please!!!