Date: 04 May 2010 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 19
I have a feeling that the blood work will show that Tanya is not pregnant but that Bella is...painkillers counteracted with her birthcontrol pills. I hope I am right.
Date: 04 May 2010 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 15
Oh the ideas that these girls come up with. I am so glad I don't live next door.
Date: 04 May 2010 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 9
She let him off WAY too easy!
Date: 04 May 2010 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 14
I'm glad to see that Bella's parents are being more reasonable. But that must kill Bella that she can't be with her best guy friend.
Date: 04 May 2010 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 19
Awesome cliffie and all. Cannot get up from my chair until i finished reading the story. Update soon.
Date: 04 May 2010 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 19
why must you tease me!?!??!?!
~tiffany
Date: 04 May 2010 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 19
she's not pregnant and they all have STD's... i have no idea
Date: 04 May 2010 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 19
I'm thinking that Tanya is not pregnant, but Bella is.
And as for Tanya, ick. Bella had her pegged. There's no way she's pregnant. She brought condoms and birth control pills. If you're pregnant, you don't use that stuff. And then she came on to Bella. Ewwwwww. God only knows where that mouth has been.
Date: 04 May 2010 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 19
Go Bella. Great job!
Date: 04 May 2010 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 13
This was my favorite chapter so far. I love that Bella forgave Seth and that she is finally taking a little control over her life.
Date: 04 May 2010 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 4
I love dominant Edward. How do I get my boyfriend to be more like that.....?
Date: 03 May 2010 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 12
Whoa, I thought Edward was going to skin Seth alive when he found out that he lied to Bella. Emmett and Edward are devious SOBs for suggesting the punishment to Charlie. That may come back to bite Edward in the ass if he is not careful.
Date: 03 May 2010 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 11
Holy hell! Emmett took that alot better than I expected. But then again, he can't say much since he is nailing Rose.
Date: 03 May 2010 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 10
I love how the girls didn't let the guys bully them into changing. Chaperones? Seriously? Can you say stalkers???
No, I did not see the accident coming. I can only imagine how the guys will use this as an I told you so moment.
Date: 03 May 2010 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 9
Loved the helicopter idea. I like that Edward isn't 100% possesive ass. But then he lost all the points he gained by being a dick in the restaurant. Bella shouldn't have answered. She should have found another way home just to piss him off.
Date: 03 May 2010 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 8
That was damned hot!!! I love the thought of Edward handcuffed to the bed. That is some serious mental candy!
Date: 03 May 2010 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 7
I love operation get Emmett Swan. I have a feeling this will be a successful venture for the girls.
Date: 03 May 2010 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 6
Edward needs to find a hobby rather than possesining every free minute that Bella has.
Date: 03 May 2010 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 5
Possesive Edward is fine..Assward is fine, but Bella needs to decide if she can stand him like this.
Date: 03 May 2010 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 4
Bella needs to make up her mind. Either she likes possesive overbearing Edward or she doesn't. He doesn't seem like he can switch off the intensity.
Date: 03 May 2010 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 3
Holy shit! Talk about 6 degrees of seperation! This can not be good for Bella.
Date: 03 May 2010 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 2
I don't know how I feel about this chapter. Things were going well until Bella wanted to leave and Edward wouldn't let her. I felt he kinda overstepped and was on the tightrope over the difference between rape and consentual (all age differences aside).
Date: 03 May 2010 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting beginning. I can't wait to see where bad girl Bella takes us.
Date: 03 May 2010 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 19
Was Bella so shocked that she forgot to knee that witch??? Tanya can't be that strong. At least I would have hit her with my cast sooner then Bella did! I really don't think Tanya is pregnant with Edward's baby. I would put it past her to pass it off as his though if she is pregnant. I am wondering if Bella is the one that is pregnant...I really hope that both of them are not pregnant. What a mess that would be!!!! Great job...I can't wait for more...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Yes, Bella was that shocked. I know for myself if another woman groped and coped a feel along with slobbering all over me I'd be a statue of SHOCK~lol. I'm halfway through the next chapter so it may be out soon...
Thanx for reading and reviewing.
Date: 03 May 2010 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 19
that is so not fucking fair to leave it there!!!
pms pretty pretty please
Author's Response:
Chapter 20 is almost completed. Hopefully will be out much sooner than later. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 03 May 2010 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
You are mean! But I get it. Can't wait to find out what you have in store for us. Edward is definitely getting with the program, thank goodness. Why do I have the feeling he's going to have to man up even more asap? :)
Date: 03 May 2010 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 19
You. Are. Mean. I know there was no other way to end that chapter but with that cliffie but still!!!!!
Author's Response:
I totally had to end it there, trust me. The next chapter is nearly completed so it most definitely HAD to end where it did. ;)
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2010 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 19
Way to go Bella for putting that slut in her place now I wonder what the results are?
Date: 03 May 2010 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 19
I can't believe you're leaving it there!!! Ugh lol You have me hooked! Great job :)
Date: 03 May 2010 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 19
I swear if Tanya is not pregnant and has an STD but bella is pregnant and Edward is on fucking cloud nine I'll be fucking blown away!!!!
How cool was that cliffie???!!!
xoxo
Marianne
Author's Response:
Chapter 20 is near completion. Apparently from some reviews I am predictable for the next chapter...so we'll see :)
Thx for reading and reviewing.
Date: 03 May 2010 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 19
cant wait till the next one
Date: 03 May 2010 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 19
How do u forget to show Edward the birth control.. OMFG ....... I would have wiped them out in the waiting room.... when she went to pee..... and told him all about the condoms.......
Now Nasty......... i know kneeing works great on guys but screw that.. the minute that nasty bitch put her lips on mine I would have kneed her so hard in her "private" it hurts not as much as a guy but it would hurt......
This is not good...... i am pretty sure she isn't pregnant but now i'm worried she may have some disease...... and she gave it to Edward who gave it to Bella... but if she wasn't pregnant would she really have come all the way there to see Edward?? Would she really be that stupid?? If i was her I just never would have gotten on the plane once he called my bluff... and even after Bella found the condoms and the pills she still stayed now i am worried somehow she may have gotten pregnant and if she did by Edward I wonder if she slipped him the date rape drug??? Oh please post again soon.. i'm dying to know.
Author's Response:
Bella has a reason for holding that knowledge out on Edward...you'll see. Chapter 20, is near completion...out sooner rather than later, I hope.
Thx for reading and reviewing.
Date: 03 May 2010 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 19
oh crap. PLEASE tell me Tanya is not pregnant! She is just foul! Poor Bella for having to put up with that trash. CANT WAIT for more
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2010 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh no!!!! I want to know why they need to sit down!!!!! Can't wait for next update! Maybe they are sitting down becuase Bella is the one who is actually pregnant!!!!!
Date: 03 May 2010 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 19
"I just wanted to see if she tasted good..."- gross! I really hope she isn't preggers, but who is to say? Or is Bella going to be preggers on accident? She hasn't manifested the symptoms, but that doesn't mean anything. Now that would be drama....
Date: 03 May 2010 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 19
not Tanya but BELLA, right? lol I love guessing and I can't BELIEVE that Tanya attacked Bella like that. that woman is psycho. :D I love it. keep up the amazing work. thanks again bye
Date: 03 May 2010 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 19
WHY did you do that??? Gosh, update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 03 May 2010 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 19
Is Bella pregnant and Tanya not? Now that would really piss her off. It would be bad for Bella though since she is too young to be a mom and her parents will kill her and Edward.
Date: 03 May 2010 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 19
Cliffie!
this scene: "Dr. Benson strolls in with two files in her hand and sits at her desk. Déjà-vu much? She cleared her throat and looked at Tanya. “The results are in for all three of you. It’s good that you’re all sitting down.”"
Sorry I need to parody it: "Tanya you're not preggo with Edward. Edward you're preggo" xD Sorry...
Tanya likes girls and boys? lmao
Date: 03 May 2010 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 19
not fair..update soon!
Date: 03 May 2010 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 19
Great update!! Why do I have the feeling that it is Bella and not Skankya that is pregnant? On with the fun and games.
Date: 03 May 2010 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 19
Tanya is not prego, but has an STI... Bella and Edward are both clean but she's pregnant.
Date: 03 May 2010 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 19
OMG Love the drama! I wonder what's happening now!
Could Bells be preggers oooooooooh can not wait.
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2010 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 19
MWAH?!!! You are just plain mean to leave us, your loyal and loving readers, just hanging on a cliff like that. Meanie.
Anyway I LOVED this chapter and really can't wait for more. ;o)
Date: 03 May 2010 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 19
That was incredible! I loved how Bella found birth control for Tanya! Also, that she hit her! Amazing! The next chapter has me on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens!
Date: 03 May 2010 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 19
i think bella is the one to be pregnant instead...
Date: 03 May 2010 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 19
omg... talk about cockblocker!! that is if i have a penis lmao...
Date: 03 May 2010 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 19
I think Bella is the one who is pregnant. Tanya strikes me as the kind of woman who will take a lie all the way til she's proven a liar. I think she wanted the extra time so she could get pregnant so the result would be positive but in the end Bella and Edward's demand cut her time too short.
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2010 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 19
now that's definitely a cliffy .. hope u dont hold out on us for too long ...
ety
Date: 03 May 2010 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 19
Im wondering if Skanya has a STI and lol its Bella whose actually pregnant, from that one slip up they did :D:D:D
Date: 03 May 2010 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 19
Tanya's not but Bella is?
Date: 03 May 2010 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 19
oh no...i hope its not what i think it is
Date: 03 May 2010 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 19
WTF i hope you update soon dammmmm i hope you dont leave us hanging to long
Date: 03 May 2010 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 19
I think Tanya is a nasty skank and should be burried alive. The chapter was great I love that Belle found the pills when is she going to say something and what about the condums. Edward is a good guy. So is Bella pregnut??? Please tell me Tanya is not.
Date: 03 May 2010 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 19
Oh God they are both Pregnant aren't they? Emmett is going to kill Edward if that is the case!
Date: 03 May 2010 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 19
Tanya is a crazy ass and I can't believe Bella just curled up and slpet with Edward. I know they didn't have sex but still it seems too easy. I know she probably gave them something. Hey are they going to find our that Bella is pregnant not Tanya? Can't waut to see what happens next
Date: 03 May 2010 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 19
Interesting...my guess, Bella is the one that is pregnant?
Date: 03 May 2010 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 19
I can't believe that you ended it like that. I am looking forward to the results.
Date: 03 May 2010 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 19
yay! love it and that edward rejected her! tanya is fucking crazy.
please dont make bella pregnant!
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 19
loved it i hate tanya i bet little bella is preg.
Date: 03 May 2010 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 19
NOOOOOO! Please get the next chapter out. How can you do this....you evil writer you. Seriously though, love this story, can't wait for the next installment....soon...please. ;)
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2010 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 19
Ohh I hate cliff hangers but I think I may know where you are going! I am so excited to see the next chapter!!! post soon PLEASE!!!!!! pretty please!!!! With a big ass cherry on top?????
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2010 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 19
Oh no I want know !!!
:)
Love the chapter ^^
Date: 03 May 2010 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 18
Great job! I love the story so far.
Date: 02 May 2010 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 18
I don't like to choose : why not the confrontation AND the visit ? You could use Edward POV on this two events. But it's your choice in the end because it's your story and I don't know which POT you have for the events...
I really appreciate the strong mind that Bella expresses in this chapter!
Date: 01 May 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 18
Even if she is pregnant, I would not trust that it is Edwards. She could get pregnant from anyone and just try to frame him. They could have to wait unti the baby is born and check DNA to see if the baby is actually his or not.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 18
I thought it was SSTD too so i was ready to write it but thanks for telling us!!
Loved it!
I want the visit and the docs for next one PLEEEEEAAAAASEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!
xoxo
Marianne
Author's Response:
Hey, I guess we're old school b.c I think STD sounds better than STI at any rate. Due to the popular response the visit will be next. Also, on a note you will love, Explosive Encounters new chapter will be out tonight sometime :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 18
hope first that she isn;t pregnant at all, second that if she is it isn't his and that bella and edward manage to make it long enough to figure that out.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing my story. All kinds are fuckery is on its way for B/E...and a whole lot of Tanya :P
Date: 29 Apr 2010 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 18
OMG I CANT WAIT TILL THE NEXT
Date: 29 Apr 2010 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 18
Please the visit I need to know that the bitch is a lieing and just want to get with Edward. If she is preggers it is not Edwards????? Thanks for clearing up the HEA I didnt know what it ment either now you put it up there I feel stupid should of know. LOL
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 18
Let's jump to the visit please.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
lol I went to Google and asked what OOC meant one day! lol So........I know what you went through on that. Also, that AU on as well. I'm 54 years old so, some of them I know...but those through me. You take care...and I just wanted to tell you something funny that happened tonight when my husband of 35 years came in from work tonight. I'm not even sure what we were talking about but I ended with that line from your story...with "Man Dave..thats like hundred shared of fucked up!" lol He was like...."What the hell ?" It was so funny I about peed my pants. Thanks for that line...it was priceless!
Mary
Author's Response:
I don't think I know AU lol...Well I'm going to bed its midnight here. But I had to let you know you made me laugh! Glad my line came to use ;) Thanks...
Lisa
Date: 29 Apr 2010 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 18
I wanna see the visit, but i want the confrontation too...maybe do that part in Edwards POV and then switch to Bellas for the visit...
~Tiffany
Date: 29 Apr 2010 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 18
I can't believe that Edward told Emmett!! That says alot for him. Next we get to deal with Tanya again Oh Boy!!
Author's Response:
Yes Edward may actually be an adult after all...perhaps! All kinds of fuckery on the way in the next few chapters ;) Thx for reading and reviewing.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well that went better than I expected. Really glad to see Edward (apparently) pull his head out and do the right things all around. I see a lot of angst coming, though. It will be interesting to watch how they handle everything from here on out. Thanks for sharing your story!
Date: 29 Apr 2010 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 18
loving it............
Author's Response:
Thanks! Stay tuned, there's all kinds of fuckery on the way in the next few chapters ;) Thx for reading and reviewing.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 18
well i am actually impressed with both of them. I mean she took charge and made him do things her way......and he took blame and told Emmett the truth and did everything Bella asked so i am happy about that...... i am also glad he brought up what happened that day when he allowed Tanya to treat Bella like crap.. still was a shitting thing to do and i don't know if i totally believe him in why he did it but i am glad he said something to her about it..So Bella is thinking that maybe he was so drunk he either really didn't sleep with Tanya or maybe she slipped him something like a date rape drug?? Damon nope don't like him AT ALL .......he annoys me he is too full of himself and there is something about him I so do not trust AT ALL.. Bella better watch out for him. maybe he is Tanya's little brother.......lol....... Can't wait for the next chapter..
Author's Response:
Damon may not be as he appears...
As for B/E/T, There's all kinds of fuckery coming up in the next couple chapters for them. thx for reading and reviewing.
Author's Response:
Damon may not be as he appears...
As for B/E/T, There's all kinds of fuckery coming up in the next couple chapters for them. thx for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2010 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 18
I want to see what happened between Edward and Emmett. I was highly surprise that Edward id still alive. Good chapter and can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
The majority is wanting the visit...so my thoughts are possibly doing an outtake of Em/Edward's confrontation...
Thx for reading and reviewing
Date: 28 Apr 2010 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 18
I am excited to see where this goes from here!
Author's Response:
All kinds of fuckery on the way in the next few chapters ;) Thx for reading and reviewing.
Date: 28 Apr 2010 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 18
I love this Edward you've writter and I can't wait for the visit. keep up the great work and I just LOVED a little of Bella's saucy possessive side coming out to play. I wouldn't mind seeing more of that. She needs to brand that boy right in front of Tanya. lol keep up the great work thanks bye
Author's Response:
I love this Edward too! I also Love a strong, confident Bella. Oh, she's gonna make it known that Edward is hers ;) Thx for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2010 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 18
you mean there was more then one of us that didn't know what HEA meant? Or are you being kind to me? lol
Great story. I would like to go right into the tonya crap and get it on the road. Please. Its like ordering MickyD's. lol I'll have a large drink with that as well.
Keep up the great job!!!
Mary
Author's Response:
Yes my darling, there was more than one who didn't know what 'HEA' was. But don't feel bad, for the longest time I didn't know what 'OOC' was...(Out of Character).
As for Mickey D's, Do you also want to upsize to large fries :P Thank you for reading and reviewing. But stay tuned there's all kinds of fuckery on the way...
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2010 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 18
He better be kissing the ground Bella walks on to put up with all this. He better realize how much she truly loves him. I hope she Tanya in her place when she gets their if she doesn't Edward better!
Author's Response:
Oh Edward realizes how good he got it, trust me. But I'm itching to write the next chapter...gotta put Explosive Encounters new chapter out first ;) Thx for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2010 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 18
Good chapter. Even if Tayna is prego, it does mean that it's Edward's baby. She couldbe trying to trap him. Would Bella wait for a pertnity test?
Author's Response:
You'll have to wait and see. All kinds of delicious fuckery on its way. Thx for reading and reviewing.
Date: 28 Apr 2010 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 18
I want the next chapter to be the visit, I am in total suspense waiting to see what happens next! Anyway, great chapter! I am so happy they talked again and are taking it one step at a time. Damon just irks me though, I wish he were out of the picture!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 28 Apr 2010 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 18
Good chapter!!
Date: 28 Apr 2010 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 18
Good chapter!!
Date: 28 Apr 2010 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 18
no bring on the visit...
Date: 28 Apr 2010 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 18
Love your story. Keep doing whatever your doing :D
Author's Response:
Thanks so much :) I love to write so thank you for reading it and for reviewing ;)
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2010 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 18
Ive got a feeling Tanya is lying...Edward is ballsy for telling Emmett everything.
Angel
Author's Response:
Edward is doing anything he can to prove his love for his lady...hmmm Edward. YUMMY. Thx for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2010 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 18
I am so glad she didn't do anything stupid w/damon and iam very glad edward told tanya like it is and not let her wait to get knocked up by someone else loved it
Author's Response:
Bella is a smart cookie! All kinds of fuckery on the way in the next few chapters ;) Thx for reading and reviewing.
Date: 28 Apr 2010 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 18
I want the next chapter to be the visit. I don't really care what was said between him and Emmet. They'll be fine, him and Bella's relationship should be the focus. There's so much riding on these results. I mean she could be having someone else's baby and they won't know that for what like 8 months. By then Bella would have already walked away, what would Edward do?
Author's Response:
All kinds of fuckery on the way in the next few chapters ;) Thx for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2010 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 18
if tanya is pregnant edward and bella need her to do a paternity test .. sounds like tanya sleeps around and who knows who the father is and how many guys she is scamming ...prob is dont u have to wait till child is born to do paternity test .. if so the waiting can b very wearing on bella and edward .. tho technically they werent together yet so edward wasnt cheating its still a big elephant in the room so to spk .. can they recover from this?????????
eager 4 ur update
hugs ety
Author's Response:
I think, no matter what happens in a relationship if two ppl care about each other enough, anything is workable. On that note, All kinds of fuckery on the way in the next few chapters ;) Thx for reading and reviewing.
Date: 28 Apr 2010 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 18
Tanya better not be pregnant!
Date: 28 Apr 2010 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 18
I have read this story on FF and i love it...i think it should work out that Tanya isnt pregnant but if she is she isnt as far along and Edward isnt the father..
Author's Response:
Thanks for following my story :) Time will tell if T is pregnant...oh my the lovely angst to come...thx for reading and reviewing.
Date: 28 Apr 2010 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 18
I am ready for the visit. I don't think its Edwards. I think she is trying to pin it on him... Update soon. I like this new side of Edward. Ready for some Bella and Edward loving(LOL)
Date: 28 Apr 2010 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 18
aww im glad they kinda sorta made up! why does she need a few weeks?! shes so sketchy ugh i hate tanya!! was she like trying to get preggers from someone else so that she can say its his?! shes fucking nasty! im glad bella finally stood her ground and im proud of edward for telling emmett! cant wait til the next chapter! hope you update soon!
Author's Response:
Tanya is a sneaky little vixen. One never knows what to expect from her. Thx for reading and reviewing.
Date: 28 Apr 2010 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 18
I don't care what E/Em said to one another... I was just want the fuckery that is Tanya. :) Look forward to next chapter! Glad to see E actually act like a grown up and not a dick- that's progress.
Author's Response:
And the fuckery you shall get ;) thx for reading and reviewing.
Date: 27 Apr 2010 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 17
What do u have cooked up? I really like this story, keep going.