Date: 06 May 2010 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 21
great chatper cant wait for telling mom and dad ! its going to be epic!
Date: 06 May 2010 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 21
Great job!
Date: 06 May 2010 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 4
interested to see if this is D/s or if he's just crazy possessive.
Date: 06 May 2010 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 21
i just want to know why Bella wouldn't let Edward tell Emmett about the mom putting the pill in her drink?? And yes Emmett has no room to talk ... and now Edward is going to go to jail this sucks... and yes it is Bella's right to have a abortion or not....... i think it should be decided between both ppl but it doesn't have to be...... Edward is of age where children aren't a "big deal" but Bella is in high school still with her whole life ahead of her.....so yes she does have a right to consider that .......she shouldn't be forced into mother hood if she doesn't want to be.......no matter what.
Author's Response:
All I will say is that Edward will NOT go to jail....
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 06 May 2010 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 21
OH SNAP EDWARDS GONNA BE A DEAD MAN.
Date: 06 May 2010 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 3
no way!!! uh-oh.
Date: 06 May 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 2
a little worried this is gonna be a crazyward....
Date: 06 May 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 21
I love me some Emmett. I can't wait for Charlie's reaction, helmet and jock strap....too funny!
Date: 06 May 2010 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 21
Always can count on Emmett for a little humor in the end. look forward to more.
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2010 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 21
That is fuckin amazin!!!!!!!! i can't wait to read more!!!!!!!!!
Date: 05 May 2010 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 21
Oh buddy..so that's the ripple effect huh?...or does tanya come in the picture again?
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2010 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 21
LOL Helmet and Jock Strap! LOL Seriously LMAO.....My kids are staring at me! Ohh how funny! I can nto wait to read renee and charlies reactions!!!!!
Date: 05 May 2010 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 21
Whoa! Emmett needs some bi-polar meds and anger management classes. I don't think that could have gone any worse. And now they are heading into the lion's den. Good luck Edward! Hope you got that life insurance paid up. You didn't really want your balls anymore, right?
Date: 05 May 2010 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 21
I'm hoping that Bella doesn't get an abortion. doen't she know that would be murdering their baby. I think it would be something that she would regret doing. I agree with Edward it's not up to just her but the both of them.
Date: 05 May 2010 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 21
Great chapter, I was able to pretty much call what was going to happen. I think the problem is that Edward is use to being so forceful with her and what he wants for them that it's going to cause issues. I think she's going to decide with her parents that she can't do this at her age and a abortion would be in her best interest. Edward is going to flip and they are going to spend some time apart. Edward is going to do whatever he has to, to try to hold on to her and the baby. Can't wait to see if I'm right
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Author's Response:
For sure Bella is most definitely toying with the idea of an abortion. I think it would be a very natural reaction to a being blindsided by a surprise pregnancy. As for the rest of your review, I can't comment on as I do not want to give anything away. Thanks for following this story and for reviewing.
SC
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 21
i loved it i knew em would lose his shit i hope edward can run fast after they they tell her parents this story is so good
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2010 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 21
love it! Poor Edward!
Date: 05 May 2010 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 21
I hope she does not have an abortion. She is smarter than that... Will a wedding be in their future. tks for the quick update
Author's Response:
Now that shall remain a secret ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 05 May 2010 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 21
That was amazing! I really hope Bella keeps the baby :) I will be patient in waiting for the next chapter, don't worry ;) Amazing job, once again! :) I shall be following you on twitter now, yay!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the compliment as well as understanding if there is a wait :) I'll see you on twitter.
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2010 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 21
that was great can't wait to see what happens next thanks.....
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2010 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 20
I hoped that this would happen :)
Love the chapter
Date: 05 May 2010 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 20
Well I guess that it is kinna Renee's fault that she got pregnant but in her defense she doesn't know about Bella and Edward. I wonder how Emmett is going to take this news?
Date: 05 May 2010 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 20
I guessed she was preggers. I did not guess Renee was the cause of it.. LOL wow what a way to end it. I love it. Ready for Emmett's POV.. on all of it
Date: 05 May 2010 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 20
It was kinda predictable, but not the partabout her mom..stupid bitch...
~tiffany
Date: 05 May 2010 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 20
I knew it!!!! Thanks for not making me wait for the update. You are the greatest!!
Date: 05 May 2010 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 20
Wow!!
I did not see that coming!! I honestly never even considered it. So it wasnt predictible for me! Lol :)
Great chapter as always.
Please update again soon!!
xx
Date: 05 May 2010 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 20
You know, I did guess that Bella was going to come out pregnant. But I also thought you might have taken it a darker way and had Tanya still come back with Chlamydia (I guess she has it down their as well as her throat to, lol!). Also my mother is a nurse and if you have Chlamydia for a long time untreated, you'll end up having "Pelvic Infamatory disease" that can cause you to be steril, no longer be able to have children at all. Even though I wish you would have given Miss. Skankya I. Gobothaways a painful STD like Gonorrhea, or an incurable STD that is also painful...like Herpes. Still good job though. Cant wait to see how Emmett reacts to it in the next chapter.
Date: 05 May 2010 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 20
i cant swallow pills either!
i tried, but i can never bring myself to swallow it cuz im scared ill choke
so, once a month for a week, my mom has to crush Midol for me and put it in a small amount of orange juice for me to quickly chug (that stuff tastes like electric ****)
p.s. idk wut the antibiotics taste like, but if its like midol, then she would still be able to taste the pills in the smoothie
Date: 05 May 2010 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 20
Wow! This was amazing I didn't see it coming..I can't wait to see Emett's reaction..this story just keeps getting better!! ;)
Date: 04 May 2010 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 20
I knew it! LOL! Well, at least Tanya is out of the picture...hopefully for good. Bella's parents are going to flip shit when she tells them she is pregnant and Edward is the daddy. I wonder if Charlie is going to try and arrest him for statchatory rape?
Date: 04 May 2010 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 20
I can't wait to find out what Emmett does when he is told.
Date: 04 May 2010 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 20
I guessed that one. And Edward took the news well; actually, a lot better than I expected. He was dare I say, happy about it.
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2010 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 20
I knew it !!!!!!!!!!! They are going to have a baby!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 04 May 2010 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 20
time to confess to Mom and Dad. hope they make it through it still together.
Date: 04 May 2010 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 20
OUCH! Emmett is going to whip Edward's butt. lol I can't wait. I love her freak attack and just think, her being pregnant was predictable but how she got that way was a surprise at least for me so feel happy. lol keep up the great work. thansk again bye
Date: 04 May 2010 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 20
hmmm wonder if Edward is gonna get a beatdown for knocking up Emmy bears baby sis. Just dont hit him in the face Em. lol I was shocked by the way, thought my eyebrows were going to fall off my face when that little shocker popped up.
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2010 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 20
loved it I really hope Edward does give give Tanya an ASS KICKIN loved it can't wait to see what happens next thanks...
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2010 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 20
WTF did tanya think wld happpen when they found out she wasnt pregnant ... gutsy or more likely plain stupid to let it go this far .. talk about busted ...
sooner than even thought about but at least bella has edward .. he has been committed to them as a couple since the beginning for forever .. not going to be easy telling parents .. emmett's reaction is sure to be priceless
Date: 04 May 2010 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 20
Waou your plot is getting better ! So many twists... I didn't see this one coming. I hope this will not put an hold on all the good lemon in your chapter !!
Date: 04 May 2010 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 20
Predictable isn't bad at all, nothing worse that a story line that doesn't make any sense at all, this one works nicely!!
Great chapter, well done!!
Date: 04 May 2010 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 20
Wow! Shes pregnant. Great job!
Date: 04 May 2010 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 19
Good a little bit of action ! I love the sneaky Bella who discovered Tanya's birth controls !! Very funny !
Date: 04 May 2010 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 20
i am so loving your story.
Date: 04 May 2010 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 20
that was GOOD! can't wait for more.
Date: 04 May 2010 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 20
UGH i loved this story.......i really did.......
.first i want to say thank god she wasn't pregnant(didn't think she was) second.. thank god they didn't have sex (thought maybe it was a lie)......and third thank god she didn't give them a disease.....(loved that she got one though) serves her right).
now i really don't like unexpected pregnancy.. and more so when the couples just started to date......i like them to be together without being together for a baby......and now by all rights his dad can throw him in jail..... cuz he is a adult. and i really don't like teen pregnancy only because that happens so much in real life....i like to not read it in stories...
Date: 04 May 2010 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 20
I would be more afraid to tell Emmett than Renee. LOL That is his baby sister, he is going to flip out. I'm hoping some of what happened between Em and Edward during their fight comes out while she is telling Emmett she is pregnant. Great chapter. So glad the skank is out of the picture.
Date: 04 May 2010 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 20
What? That was incredible! I am so happy Tanya has something and did NOT give it to Edward. I am also happy about Bella and Edward's pregnancy, although unplanned. Amazing job, once again! Thanks for the quick update :)
Date: 04 May 2010 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 20
ohhhhhhhh shit! I did not see that coming! Great job!
Date: 04 May 2010 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh gosh, they either all have a STD or Bella is the one that is pregnant. Can't wait to find out which. I really hope its not Edward or Bella with the disease. I can't believe the skank tried to put the moves on Bella. Thanks for another great chapter.
Date: 04 May 2010 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 20
I sort of hope that she doesn't have the baby. Not in terms of an abortion, but so not an ideal situation for her. But in the end, it is Renee's fault. Can't wait till they figure out she's been screwing Edward. Good times ahead.
Date: 04 May 2010 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 20
It was predictable, but it was also good. Edward's reaction to the news of the pregnancy was sweet.
Date: 04 May 2010 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 20
Emmett will punch Edward for kcnocking up his little sister. Hmm, Bella preggo nice :)
Date: 04 May 2010 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 20
I didn't think about her being pregnant. I was more afraid of them getting a sick disease! Thank goodness! Brilliant! I do look forward to your updates and now I look forward to seeing how they handle their next hurdle! A baby!! :)
Date: 04 May 2010 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 20
Well, I didn't expect that...so I guess I'm screwing up my deductive skills, huh? lol But I'm enjoying the story!!
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2010 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 20
I guessed right and I am excited to see where you take this from here! I love this story and I am loving it more and more so please write more and psot soon! Thank you for sharing this....thank you thank you thank you!
Date: 04 May 2010 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 20
Wow. I can't begin to wrap my mind around how everyone is going to react to this. Edward scared me a little with his Tanya tirade; the last thing Edward needs is to give Charlie and Co. any more reason to distrust or dislike him - pretty sure the pregnancy will do that! But Edward's being uber-supportive of Bella which is awesome. And so are you for giving us such a speedy update! Thank you, thank you, thank you!
Date: 04 May 2010 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 20
I was so hoping Tanya had something and didnt give it to Edward Thank you. I was pretty sure Bella was going to be pregers. Shit is going to hit the fan are they going to try to put Edward in jail I hope not.
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2010 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 20
no that very good poor edward and bella her parents are going to kill them lol loved it can't wait to see the next chapter
Date: 04 May 2010 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 20
damn charlie and renee are going to flip....and maybe emmett
Date: 04 May 2010 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 20
I cannot wait to see how her brother and parents respond to this news. I think I'm going to read the next chapter under a blanket because I have a feeling that Emmett is going to kill Edward...
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2010 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 20
Can't wait to see what Edward and Bella have to say about their news!
Date: 04 May 2010 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 20
Ha, this rock star knew it!
Date: 04 May 2010 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 20
Claps hands.... YAY! Skankya is gone... hopefully for good.... i never saw that coming with bella! i must be blind if every1 else saw it... cant wait for the next update...
Date: 04 May 2010 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 20
Renee definitely should have told Bella. I thought maybe Bella would be preggers but didnt see the Renee thing coming. Emmett will probably be chapped! Although its Renee he should be upset with! lol
Date: 04 May 2010 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 20
didnt see that one comming !
Date: 04 May 2010 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 20
That sneaky Renee!!! You can never trust her!!!! :)
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2010 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 20
Didn't see that one coming.
Date: 04 May 2010 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 20
I wondered whether Bella would be pregnant - let the games commence! Really enjoying this x
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2010 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it. :o)
I can't wait until Charlie finds out.
Date: 04 May 2010 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 20
knew this was coming but it was still a shocker. Poor thing is terrified....can only imagine how Controllinward will be now that she's preggers....smell drama ahead can't wait!
Date: 04 May 2010 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 20
It is a good thing that Edward is a fast runner. Emmett might like Edward and even be ok with them dating, but I don't know how he is going to deal with pregnancy. Then he will have to deal with Charlie and Renee, who has no one to blame but herself for drugging her child without her knowledge. She could have gotten pregnant from any guy. It just happens to be an older guy who is responsible, has his own business, a friend of the family, and is very handsome.
Date: 04 May 2010 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 20
This is getting good!!!! The way her parents are, I won't be surprised if they forbid her from seeing Edward and who knows pressing charges, as well since she is underage.
Date: 04 May 2010 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 20
good chapter loving it so far
B
Date: 04 May 2010 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 20
omg!! I bet emmett is going to be pissed!! Cant wait till the next
Date: 04 May 2010 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 20
No, I can honestly say I didn't see that coming. I am loving this story. Look forward to another update.
Date: 04 May 2010 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 20
Wow that was good, I did call that one right but it was still good. I want Bella to want an abortion and I want Edward to be dead set against it. She is still in high school with everything ahead of her. It's only reasonable to think she wouldn't want this at this point in her life. Edward being older will want the baby, Bella and that happy little family. Knowing him, he'll fight like hell to keep her from ending the pregnancy and ending things with him. Can't wait to see if I'm right
Date: 04 May 2010 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 20
i never saw it coming.... jiji i guess im not that predictable.
Date: 04 May 2010 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 20
Thanks for the quick update! I am so glad that it wasn't Tanya, but I feel bad for Bella. I love that he doctor is her Aunt. I can't wait to see what Emmett has to say about this. Great job...thanks!
Date: 04 May 2010 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 20
Looking forward to the family's reaction!
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2010 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 20
emmett is soooo gonna kick edward's ass...then I think he might have a go at his mother....and I definitely can't wait for chief swan's reaction!!! LOL
Date: 04 May 2010 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 20
ugh, why does everyone always feel the need to make bella pregnant. I hate this.....
Date: 04 May 2010 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 20
ooooo I hope Emmett blows a right fit with Edward it would make my day would that. Love the story. :)
Date: 04 May 2010 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh crap that did not sound good. Please tell me she didn't Eddie some nasty shit and he gave to Bella. Unprotected sex the gift that just keeps giving!
Date: 04 May 2010 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
:)
Date: 04 May 2010 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 19
OH man. I am so in love with this story and can't wait for the next update. I'm thinking it would be completely hilarious for her to tell them Tanya isn't pregnant but Bella is. Especially since she was only going in for STD testing. Can't wait to find out what happens next.
Date: 04 May 2010 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 19
Do not say that somehow Bella is pregnant, that is just wrong. She is 17 and on the pill she took responsiblity. Now if Tanya were newly pregnant say only a month and had a STD that would be righteous.
Date: 04 May 2010 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 18
Even is Tanya is pregnant, I'd want a paternaty test. She trying to trap Edward.
Date: 04 May 2010 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 16
OK he has absolutely NO room to lay down the law about Seth if he is still talking/seeing Tanya!!!!
Date: 04 May 2010 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 18
So, I am betting that the girls hit the nail on the head with Tanya trying to get back with Edward. And I am betting that she wanted a few extra weeks to try and get knocked up by someone else and claim it was Edward's...am I right?
Date: 04 May 2010 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 17
YES!!!! Bella has grown some balls and actually used them!!!! Don't even tell me that is Damon in the car. If she takes a ride from him knowing Alice is on her way, the shit is going to hit the fan!
Date: 04 May 2010 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 12
I just started reading, but as far as I concerned once a week is good, more ofter would be great, but you have to have a life too. ;) With kids that age and working fulltime that you even write is amazing.
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2010 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 19
please tell me hse is not pregnant and tha they did not catch a disease from her please and that she has been on birth control all along
Date: 04 May 2010 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh man, seriously? He is still friends with Tanya after that whole restaurant shit? That boy needs to get his priorities straight and Bella needs to stop being a floor mat.
Date: 04 May 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 19
:) What are the chances Bella is the one pregnant? Overthinking?
Date: 04 May 2010 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 10
Didn't really see an accident coming, thought maybe an OD or someone got too frisky. Edward is going to be worse than ever, NOTHING is worse than a guy proven to be right.