[Report This]Date: 08 May 2010 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 23
Sweet and beautiful. ;)
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2010 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 22
I just love how they all support her and won't let her take any blame. And Emma calling Edward daddy...priceless! ;)
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2010 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 21
It only shows how much Edward and Bella belong together that everybody approves. Now I just hope they can get things started before it gets too out of control. Great job! ;)
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2010 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 20
Wow, talk about a roller coaster of a chapter. Excellent! Got to get back and find out her answer.
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2010 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 19
Now we're getting down to the nitty gritty. Can't wait! ;)
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2010 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 18
Beautiful...that's all I can say. ;)
Date: 07 May 2010 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 26
I couldn't stop crying during this chapter, it was sad. Bella having to save her family by going w/James and Aro and not only offering herself to them but also her daughter. All I can say is thank goodness, the rest of the family was out. I can't wait for the next chapter, please don't keep me in suspense for too long...GREAT STORY!
Author's Response:
Thank you!! And i'm hurrying
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2010 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 17
A really cute chapter. Especially since we've had a bit of drama lately. Excellent job! ;)
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2010 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 16
I soooo fell in love with Carlisle in this chapter! He flippen' rocked! Also a little Edward and Bella action. Nice! ;)
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2010 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 15
Was wondering when she was going to think of that. Great chapter, I'm on edge with each word! ;)
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2010 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 14
I honestly didn't think James would do that to her, I wonder what brought that on since he was so obsessed with her. I'm still worried about Ryan.
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2010 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 13
I knew it! Wow, that little piece was soooo teasing, but very welcomed. As great as this chapter was, I'm really scared for Ryan.
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2010 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 12
Okay, I'm starting to get a little freaked out now...
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2010 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 11
oh yeah, things are gonna get interesting. Great job! ;)
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2010 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 10
If it was any other guy, I would be in line to get me some of that. Dang, I hate to admit it, but the boy was smooth.
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2010 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 10
okay, if this wasn't James I would be in line to get me some of that. Dang, I hate to admit it, but the boy was smooth. ;)
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh Edward, if only you could have found the courage.
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 8
cute chapter, no shit from James, hmm...
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2010 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 7
Ah...silly blind little girl...
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2010 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 6
Yeah, Edward's definitely hiding his own feelings. I'm really scared to find out what finally brings Bella to her senses. ;)
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2010 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh my...tear jerker. Both from laughing and of course crying. ;)
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2010 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 4
So he was literally stalking her before she even laid eyes on him. Way to get the goose bumps raised. Great chapter, still wondering why Edward gets so upset, she didn't mention Jasper at all at the pizza place. ;)
Date: 07 May 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 26
oh my god update soon please
Author's Response:
I'm hurrying
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2010 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 3
I think she should have followed her instincts to be scared. Great chapter though, wondering if Edward has any feelings for her as well.
Date: 06 May 2010 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 26
ugh i really hate marcus/james porr bella
Date: 06 May 2010 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 26
Would love JamPov
Author's Response:
I'm workign on that... it's just taking a long time. Sry... but I will try hard to get one out.
Date: 06 May 2010 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 26
This story is pure addiction for me. please update soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you!!!
Date: 06 May 2010 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 26
Omg!!!! What?! I can't believe it. What a cliffhanger, your not right for that...lol! Great chapter though. This would make an awesome movie!
Author's Response:
Sorry about the cliffy... I am working on the next chatper. So glad to know you like my story!!!! Makes me all giddy. lol
Date: 06 May 2010 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 7
Just goes to prove a 15 year old really doesn't know anything and will believe whatever their told without seeing the waring signs.
Date: 06 May 2010 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 26
To be honest.... I am so freakin upset right now!!! How could you let James get her? I just want her and Edward to be happy and raise Emma together. Ugh... I'm gonna continue reading cause I have faith in you, but I can't help the way I feel at the moment.
Author's Response:
I'm sorry your upset but please keep reading. I promise a HEA but it won't be anytime soon.
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2010 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh he laid it on thick. Can't wait to see how this turns. Great job. ;)
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2010 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, I'm really glad I gave this story a shot. A really heart breaking chapter. Great job, can't wait to see where you took this. ;)
Author's Response:
i'm glad you gave my story a chance too. I hope you like the later chapters.
Date: 06 May 2010 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 26
Wow, that was intense.
Author's Response:
I hope you liked it.
Date: 06 May 2010 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 26
Cant wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thank you, working on next one... it'll be EPOV
Date: 06 May 2010 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 26
Damn, that was intense! I'm about to cry over here! I absolutely need an update soon! You are a gifted writer, I must say. And anyone who doesn't give your story a chance, is missing out on something great.
Author's Response:
Thank you for that... seriously that was awesome. I've had a lot of hate thrown my way over at ff.net so this is refreshing.
Date: 06 May 2010 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 26
I am addicted to this story! Im nervous for Emma, I want James to accept her as his so he doesn't hurt her. I'm so excited to see what happens to Bella in Italy! Great Update :)
Author's Response:
Thank you and I will tell you this, Aro will not let anything happen to Emma.
Date: 06 May 2010 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 26
james needs to have his balls burned off
Author's Response:
I agree. He will get his in the end... but your going to have to tolerate him a little longer. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2010 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 26
ohmygod...love the story awesome job!!!
Author's Response:
thank you!!
Date: 06 May 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 26
oh my god i would have fought tooth and nail to leave emma there... cant wait till the next chapter !
Author's Response:
glad you liked it.
Date: 05 May 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 25
Just a guess but is it going to go down where they actually have to choose Bella or Emma? Or at least to the point where something happens to both? Mysterious cliffys make me think...
Date: 30 Apr 2010 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 25
oh my god update soon i want to know what happens next
Author's Response:
I'm hurrying.. i promise
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2010 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 10
i really like this story...i cant wait to find out when he changes...awesome job!
Author's Response:
So glad you like it... hope i don't disappoint
Date: 30 Apr 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 25
that was just plain creppy
Author's Response:
James is very creepy.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 25
shit now hurry please
Author's Response:
lol.. I'm typing as fast as i can
Date: 29 Apr 2010 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 25
good really really good i like how thing r going and i love this storty please update soon
Author's Response:
thank you for the review, I am working on ch. 26 right now.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2010 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm not sure why on my previous post it gave the wrong rating! Anyway this is the right rating!
Author's Response:
well thank you!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2010 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 25
Greatness! Man Bella just can't catch a break!! James is truley demented.
Author's Response:
I know!! james is truely sick in the head.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 25
Oh shit!! How the fuck did he get in the house?!?!? Someone has to go check on her right? She need to make some noise somehow.... start breaking shit! Dude, I can't believe you left us hanging like that!!!! Tell me James doesn't take her or hurt her.... Tell me the guys come in and rip his ass apart!
Author's Response:
what i will tell you is next chapter is in the works and is going to be intense. I promise it wont' be too long for the update.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2010 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 25
I started reading this story yesterday and I am loving it. You have done a great job with character & plot development. I had total heart fail when there was no "next" button at the bottom of this page. Please don't keep us in suspense for too long!! I can't wait for what is coming next:)
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2010 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 25
I started reading this story yesterday and I am loving it. You have done a great job with character & plot development. I had total heart fail when there was no "next" button at the bottom of this page. Please don't keep us in suspense for too long!! I can't wait for what is coming next:)
Author's Response:
Glad you stumbled across my story and I promise it wont be long for an update.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2010 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 25
Yet again another amazing chapter, cant wait for the next update :)
Author's Response:
Thank you. I am typing up the next one right now.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 25
Wow! This story is amazing. It took me two days to read to this point, I would have finished last night, but I was so tired, and knew that I shouldn't stay up till 3 a.m. finishing this :)
Thank you SO much for putting this on here, I only read twilight stuff on this site, so I would have missed this entirely if you hadn't put it on here!
Please let James have LOTS more time in this story, I love reading about him, and you have written him so well!
Author's Response:
Thank you!!! James is going to be a mjor player in the next 2 chapters... a little FYI
Date: 29 Apr 2010 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 25
I am right along with Bella, choose my children over my safety any day.
Author's Response:
yeah... she's going to do what ever she has to to keep Emma safe.
Date: 28 Apr 2010 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 24
oh my god update soon please
Author's Response:
part 2 will be up tongiht or in the AM... glad you liked it.
Date: 28 Apr 2010 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 24
YOU TEASE!!! I need to know more!! LOL.... Holy SHIT! I can't believe James is such a freak! Someone needs to take him down NOW! Shit if I was Bella... I would carry a gun with me at ALL time, and not once hesitate to shot that fucker in the head to protect me and my family.
Author's Response:
lol... sorry... but a little cliffy never hurt anyone...lol. shit is about to hit the fan in the next few chapters, i will tell you that.
Date: 28 Apr 2010 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 24
Ahhh! It keeps getting better! James is even more evil than I presumed and now it seems it has all the corrupted power to back him up, ugh!
Author's Response:
I am so glad you liked it!!! james is an evil bastard...
Date: 28 Apr 2010 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 24
never saw that coming
Author's Response:
yeah i had to twist it up a bit. Hope you liked it.
Date: 28 Apr 2010 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 24
hot damn time for a chip! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
LMAO.... thank you.
Date: 28 Apr 2010 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 24
i cant wait till u post the second part.... i've been checking since the last chapter (chapter 23) to see if you've updated... i'm in suspense waiting.. lol. this story is awesome!!! its scary but soo sweet at same time.. its wonderful!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for that review!!! I am glad you liked it. Part two will be up tme or the next day... I promise.
Date: 28 Apr 2010 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 24
Keep up with posts. Cannot wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you.. will put up part two tmw or the next day.
Date: 28 Apr 2010 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 24
Wow, that is alot to take in.
Author's Response:
I know it was a very intense chapter. So will part 2
Date: 28 Apr 2010 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 24
Wow this chapter was so intense! Can't wait for part 2, Awesome writing as always! If I know Bella she will try to make a plan to go with James to protect Emma, Edward and her family from this.
Author's Response:
So peceptive...lol... thank you for the review.
Date: 25 Apr 2010 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 23
I love that Edward cried when his dad told him about the wedding not being in the courthouse. That is what a real man would do. I love this Edward alot.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review and I had to write that because that is EXACTLY what he would do!!
Date: 24 Apr 2010 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 23
fracken loved it , cant wait to read more . and no there is nothing wrong with court house weddings. all 3 of me kids got married in 1.but loved it loved it loved it.
Author's Response:
Thank you!! I am so glad you liked it.
Date: 24 Apr 2010 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 23
Love this story, the wedding was beautiful, and I was also married at the corthouse almost 15 years ago, and we are still together... Can't wait for more of this story, Lori
Author's Response:
lol... thank you so much! I didn't mind my courthouse wedding at all. Everyone that needed to be there was there.
Date: 23 Apr 2010 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 21
Awesome storyline. The twists are brilliant, this is by far my fav story!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!!! I love hearing that people like my story.
Date: 23 Apr 2010 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 18
I loved it! Brought back great memories :) I so love Carlisle and Esme!!! And of course Edward!
Author's Response:
lol.. thank you!
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2010 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 23
That was beautiful! I need more though!!! Please!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm really glad you like it. I'm hurrying with the update.
Date: 22 Apr 2010 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 23
Beautiful!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!!!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 20
Yea!!!! You don't know how good it felt when Edward and Emmett starting beating James ass!!! And when Edward yelled at James to stay away from his daughter... my heart leaped. AWESOME chapter! BTW... loved how you threw the ending to New Moon in there!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!!!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 23
loved it
Author's Response:
Thnak you for the review.
Date: 22 Apr 2010 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 3
I'm thinking Em is ridiculous and B's awkwardness is killing me! Lol
Date: 21 Apr 2010 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 23
Perfect chapter! LOVED the wedding and lemons lol. thanks for posting more chapters today! I'm hooked! Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response:
Awesome... I'm wedding night is almost finished.
Date: 21 Apr 2010 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 22
My heart melted at the end of this chapter!
I couldn't wait to hear more about emma and edward interacting together.
Author's Response:
There will definately be more Emma and Edward.
Date: 21 Apr 2010 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 13
Good story so far. James has to go, he is evil. Is he hiding something?
Date: 21 Apr 2010 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 13
Good story so far. James has to go, he is evil. Is he hiding something?
Author's Response:
James is very very evil.
Date: 21 Apr 2010 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 14
Ryan is a sweetheart! You know deep down I had a feeling James was cheating... after that night when Bella mentioned she wanted to tell Emmett and he freaked and told her NO! Yeah, dead giveaway!
Author's Response:
I love Ryan too... i almost changed where i was going with the story because i loved him so much... but in the end i had to stick to my story line.
Date: 21 Apr 2010 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 13
LOVE IT!! Just letting you know, I'm trying to catch up with reading all the new chapters you've posted. So please excuse my lack of reviewing.... I'm just so into this story I can't stop reading enought to do so.... keep it up love!!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it... and thank you for your reviews!
Date: 21 Apr 2010 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 15
great chapter. i love this story
Author's Response:
thank you
Date: 20 Apr 2010 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 10
i really like this when do we find out how come she is scared of him
Author's Response:
I'm in the middle of transferring them from FF.
Date: 20 Apr 2010 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh I love me some Patron!! And yes what they say is true ;). LOL, keep them coming love, this story is awesome!
Author's Response:
Patron is the devil!! lol... thanks for the review. And I am so glad you love my story.
Date: 20 Apr 2010 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 5
great chapter. plz continue soon
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!! Glad you like it.
Date: 19 Apr 2010 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 5
AWESOME! I wanted to read the whole story before I review and so far I really like it! James has this creepy vibe to him that I can't seem to shake off... I usually don't like stories where Edward and Bella aren't the amazing couple and where she gets all her warm and electric feeling from, but so far... I really like this story. Update soon please!
Author's Response:
Thank you!! I love E/B don't get me wrong but sometimes... you gotta have a twist. ya know.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
really good story update soon please
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.