Date: 09 Dec 2010 2:34 AM Title: Prologue
i'm already laughing out loud at Bella's thoughts on her mothers new found faith.
Date: 30 Aug 2010 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 18 Breath of Heaven
So far I only read until chapter 18, but I'm loving it. I love how you write AU/AH Twilight stories, you always develop great plots. (:
Date: 01 Aug 2010 3:07 PM Title: Outtake 2 Home
I loved this story! I couldn't stop reading it. i was a little uncomfortable about the religious aspect at first. I guess I thought that maybe you would make a mockery of it. You didn't. You had some great lessons and told a wonderful story that is very true to life. We all struggle with our faith at times. Thanks for writing this. I will continue to follow you to your other stories. I think you have a gift.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 6:46 AM Title: Outtake 2 Home
i remember those days! when baby would not stop crying and i had no idea what to do. having hubbie as backup was a definate god send!
Date: 15 Jul 2010 4:42 AM Title: Outtake: Live Like Your Dying
awesome song! i have had people at work comment that it is so sweet that i always end call with my family with 'i love you' i told the girls one day not too long ago that it is a rule i have.
- say 'i love you' in every conversation
- never go to bed mad
- never leave shit to fester
- never leave the important things unsaid
the reason? i never want to have the regret of something happening and knowing i was too busy, too embarassed, too whatever to have said/done one of those things and now will never have that chance to say/do it again.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 40 Epilogue; Agian
well happy everyone has there little family and b and e had a girl. i am dreading my kids making the same mistake i did. i love my babies and my hubbie but i would dfinately not promote being a teen mom who got 'knocked up' and i dread the thought of being made a grandma in my 30s! oh God help me!!! only 7 years till i hit 40, please not till i at LEAST hit 40!
loved the story and the ups and downs that we all call life. parts of this really hit home, bella is so much like me at that age (but hubbie is only 2 years older) and so much like my daughter now.
thank you for writing and sharing with us :)
Date: 15 Jul 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 39 Hold My Heart
faith is easy when things are good, it gets hard when things are darkest. but He always caries us though.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 38 Never Gonna Be Alone
i was wondering with all of the faith that eddie and the rest have why no one has laid hands on bella and the baby and accepted their healing and strength? that was the first thing my mother in law did when my daughter ended up in the NICU. and start a prayer chain. even a non believer feels the power of prayer when you know there are people all over the world, that have never met you or probably ever will meet you but they are joining you in the prayer that everything will be ok and God will bless the outcome. seriously it is amazing and powerful!
Date: 15 Jul 2010 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 37 We Live
dum, dum, da, dum, dum, dum, da, dum...
here comes the bride! can they even get married? most places you have to be 18 at least. well i guess this answers the question of living arrangements after the baby is born.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 36 Mighty To Save
but wasn't eddie having issues with the blurred lines? but now he is ok with them? just don't want him to feel bad and pull away again.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 35 Whatever it Takes
congrats you two a baby is a wonderful blessing and a joy in your life. it's the teenage years that suck ass! lol.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 34 By Your Side
well it will definately be an uphill battle for this little family in the making.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 33 Still Calls Me Son
don't worry bella it will all work out! robicorn started the sequel already. lol
Date: 14 Jul 2010 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 32 White Flag
Doesn't look like bella is ready to just let him off the hook. Boy has some work to do.
Date: 14 Jul 2010 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 31 Grace
So eddie is coming home there is still more shit yet to hit the fan.
Date: 14 Jul 2010 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 30 Stand in the Rain
Well I hate to say I was right but this is just the reality check they both needed. God and beliefs are not the only reason to wait for sex.
Date: 14 Jul 2010 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 29 Losing My Religon
Edward you fucking pansy as mother fucker! I am so mad at you right now! Jasper and em better knock some sence into you!
And what about the fact that the sex happened so fast there was no mention of a condom.........?
Date: 14 Jul 2010 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 28 Hallelujah
But he can't leave for 6 months! Poor eddie! Poor bella! :(
Date: 14 Jul 2010 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 27 I'd Lie
Ok who else saw the kate thing coming a mile away? Being on the phone with b was the only shoker. Can't wait for eddie to come home!
Date: 14 Jul 2010 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 25 Iris
well good byes suck ass. good for you edward that you stuck to your guns and stopped.
Date: 14 Jul 2010 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 24 Angels
this is a huge step for b and the coming separation is gonna suck for both of them.
Date: 14 Jul 2010 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 23 Lonesome Town
time for alice to bitch slap jasper and knock some sence into him.
Date: 14 Jul 2010 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 22 Love is the Movement
well bella got to see a bit of the everybody loves edward groupies. but he only haseyes for her.
Date: 14 Jul 2010 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 21 Halo
jasper why would you let them do that to her?!?! and edward, man you gotta learn to contrrol yourself.
Date: 14 Jul 2010 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 20 Have We Lost
oh boy eddie is not gonna be happy....
Date: 14 Jul 2010 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 19 Please Don't Leave
i agree with bella this is a pretty shity christmas. but eddie stood up for her. jasper may be hurt and confused but that was a shit move.
Date: 14 Jul 2010 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 18 Breath of Heaven
wonder what charlie is gonna think?
Date: 14 Jul 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 17 Monday Comes Around
woohoo go eddie! gettin all up in bella's ....well you know. heehee! and don't worry sweety you'll be makin her scream a lot more i am sure and once you get the hang of it you 2 can do it at the same time! then we move on to the oral assignment!
Date: 14 Jul 2010 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 16 Lifesong
what time of year is it now? how long do they have till the tour? what about their birthdays? they will miss both. eddie - june bella - sept.
oh yeah and jane is a bitch!
Date: 13 Jul 2010 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 15 Slow Fade
Well it seems that the important people are being allowed in on the 'secret'. I remember when my mom brought up birth control and I had to tell her I already had it covered. She did it at the food court at the mall at a table full of our friends and my then boyfriend, now hubbie. I could have died! And hubbie about ran away! To funny!
Date: 13 Jul 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 14 Your Grace is Enough
You never know what you have until it's gone. But I agree with b I don't think jasper is in love with her, he is feeling left behind and like he has been replaced. He will find his happy again, I know it!
Date: 13 Jul 2010 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 13 Broken Wing
Poor eddie! The guy can't lie or keep a secret very well. He is just to much of a nice guy.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 12 Is This Love
Sneaking around is hard on the friendship because youy can not really meet everyone for a movie or dinner and hang out together with friends and boyfriend.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 11 Give Me Your Eyes
poor jasper i wonder what happened with alice to make him drop e? or was it just his dad?
and edward? wow the boy is starting to let loose!
Date: 13 Jul 2010 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 10 Let Me Sign
wow she really brings the bad boy out in him.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 9 Hanging by a Moment
they are to cute! and they are gonna snuggle.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 8 Live For Today
this should be a good little talk.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 7 Anyway
looks like someone is in over his head....
Date: 13 Jul 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 6 The Blessing
now there is an interesting prayer request. i am not so sure how the church ladies would respond....
Date: 13 Jul 2010 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 5 Walk By Faith
it is amazing the feeling of being someplace where you can just feel the faith of others and you want to feel that too even if you don't really believe. and like bella mentioned you can tell the true believers and the ones who are there going through the motions for other reasons.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 4 I Still Believe
poor eddie he is so torn... will he get the answer to his prayers? has he already?
Date: 13 Jul 2010 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 3 Opposite Way
Bella and jasper have a really cool relationship. Love how they look out for eachother. I guess I got my answer on how old b and e are.
Date: 12 Jul 2010 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 2 Beautiful One
Ok so how old is our eddie here? He is done collegeso that would make him 22-ish? And bella 17-18? Not too big of a gap in the big picture but huge to outsiders now...
Date: 12 Jul 2010 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 1 What A Wonderful Maker
Ok how bad is it that in order to make googly eyes at edward she has to go down on jasper?! And maybe more. I wonder what eddie would think of that! Lol to funny!
Date: 12 Jul 2010 2:56 PM Title: Prologue
Man I remember those days! Totally describes my mother in law!
Date: 03 Jul 2010 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 40 Epilogue; Agian
This was a great story! I loved the character's relationships and the development of the story. It is a great example of dealing with the consequences of your actions and how it not only affects the 2 people involved but those around you.
I've started reading the sequel and I love it!!
Date: 09 Jun 2010 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 5 Walk By Faith
This is an awesome story. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Date: 24 May 2010 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 39 Hold My Heart
I've been reading your story nonstop and I just had to stop and tell u i was in tears over here. I am so happy she woke up!
Date: 17 May 2010 1:30 PM Title: Outtake 3 - Owned By Edward
Wow, the Jasper/Alice divorce bomb was a huge surprise. Definitely didn't see that one coming. The claiming sex was awesome. I love that they are married with kids that are pre-teen and teens and can still be animalistic like that. Gabe hearing them was greatness :)
The closeness between Evie and Bella is wonderful. Evie seems to really need a strong mother figure in her life.
Yes, Edward, learn your lesson. It's better to be open about safe sex and let your child know they can talk to you rather than ignoring it.
LOL, I can't tell you how many times my hubby and I will say that's YOUR son not mine, so I can totally relate to that last little exchange.
Date: 16 May 2010 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 40 Epilogue; Agian
Good chapter.
Date: 16 May 2010 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 39 Hold My Heart
Shes awake.
Date: 16 May 2010 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 38 Never Gonna Be Alone
Sooo sad.
Date: 15 May 2010 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 37 We Live
How sweet.
Date: 15 May 2010 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 36 Mighty To Save
No worries now, just keep doing it,lol.
Date: 15 May 2010 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 35 Whatever it Takes
Good chapter.
Date: 15 May 2010 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 34 By Your Side
Good chapter.
Date: 15 May 2010 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 33 Still Calls Me Son
well he is home now, lets see what happens.
Date: 15 May 2010 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 32 White Flag
The cat is out of the bag now.
Date: 15 May 2010 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 31 Grace
She need to tell him, he is no good for just leaving like that.
Date: 15 May 2010 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 30 Stand in the Rain
I guess it is going to hit the fan now.
Date: 15 May 2010 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 29 Losing My Religon
How can he just run, I think he needs slapped.
Date: 15 May 2010 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 29 Losing My Religon
How can he just run, I think he needs slapped.
Date: 15 May 2010 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 28 Hallelujah
I cant believe he is leaving. They had sex with no condom!!
Date: 15 May 2010 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 27 I'd Lie
Good chapter.
Date: 15 May 2010 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 25 Iris
I cant believe he stopped.
Date: 15 May 2010 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 24 Angels
Look how helpful Robby is.
Date: 15 May 2010 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 23 Lonesome Town
Good chapter.
Date: 15 May 2010 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 22 Love is the Movement
Good chapter.
Date: 15 May 2010 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 21 Halo
He was asking for trouble telling her to go.
Date: 15 May 2010 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 20 Have We Lost
I see trouble coming.
Date: 15 May 2010 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 19 Please Don't Leave
Holidays are fun, lol.
Date: 15 May 2010 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 18 Breath of Heaven
Good chapter.
Date: 15 May 2010 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 17 Monday Comes Around
Breaking his rules already.
Date: 15 May 2010 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 16 Lifesong
Alot of churches are really bad for gossip.
Date: 15 May 2010 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 15 Slow Fade
Renee really is dense.
Date: 15 May 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 14 Your Grace is Enough
Jasper is late with his confessions.
Date: 15 May 2010 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 13 Broken Wing
Ooo how the mighty fall, lol, secrets never stay that way for long.
Date: 15 May 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 12 Is This Love
Now Jasper is getting jealous.
Date: 15 May 2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 11 Give Me Your Eyes
Maybe Edward will help Jasper and Bella.
Date: 15 May 2010 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 10 Let Me Sign
Boy she works fast, he. is already changing, and now she feels bad about it.
Date: 15 May 2010 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 9 Hanging by a Moment
Good chapter.
Date: 15 May 2010 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 8 Live For Today
Wonder how forgiving and non judgmental he will be after she tells him of Jasper.
Date: 15 May 2010 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 7 Anyway
Of course Tanya will want to sing.
Date: 15 May 2010 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 6 The Blessing
Now she wants her mother to pray for her.
Date: 15 May 2010 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 5 Walk By Faith
Good chapter.
Date: 15 May 2010 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 4 I Still Believe
Good chapter.
Date: 15 May 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 3 Opposite Way
Good chapter.
Date: 15 May 2010 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 2 Beautiful One
I find this story funny and interesting.
Date: 15 May 2010 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 1 What A Wonderful Maker
LOL, giving head as a bribe to go to church. Too funny.
Date: 15 May 2010 1:31 AM Title: Prologue
Sounds like she went all holy roller alright.
Date: 13 May 2010 9:46 PM Title: Outtake 3 - Owned By Edward
Thanks for the chapter and the B&E look in!
Date: 12 May 2010 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 40 Epilogue; Agian
Loved your story.
Date: 11 May 2010 6:54 PM Title: Outtake 2 Home
OH MY GOD !!! I LOVE this story soooooooooooooo much :)
Date: 11 May 2010 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 33 Still Calls Me Son
yeah forgive him but kick his arse first...
Date: 11 May 2010 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 32 White Flag
oh god....... I am saying that alot huh?
Date: 11 May 2010 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 31 Grace
oh goodie.. please ring him...
Date: 11 May 2010 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 30 Stand in the Rain
omg... omg....
thank god for the sequel....
Date: 11 May 2010 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 29 Losing My Religon
okay I am going to kick his arse...
And I am supposed to be asleep... you know it is good when you can't put a book down..
Date: 11 May 2010 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 28 Hallelujah
oh god.............
Date: 11 May 2010 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 27 I'd Lie
LOL that was cute..