[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2010 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 6
please tell me that edward got shot and is dead i would love that it would take care of at least one of bellas problems but why do i have a feeling that it was jasper that got shot because bella was the target for the shooting i cant wait to find out so please update soon
Author's Response:
Aww, everyone's so hard on poor Eddie. I think he's kinda sexy!
Thank you for reading and reviewing. Stay tuned for more J&B action!
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2010 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 5
loving it can't wait for more. Want to know what is going to happen and if Jasper and Edward are going to go at it.
Until next time :)
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2010 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 5
oh shit why do i have a feeling that jasper is about to get a price put on his head by edward and now i can see him trying to pull something like a surprise wedding that he thinks that he can force her into i cant wait to find out what is going to happen so please update soon
Author's Response:
WOW! You've got a very active imagination!
Thanks for reading and stay tuned!
Date: 05 Apr 2010 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 5
Damn you Edward.
Great story. You are doing a wonderful job with it so far.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading!
We've got a little bit of action on the horizon!
Date: 05 Apr 2010 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 5
cock block Edward arrives....
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading.
Nothing can keep J & B apart, not even cock blocking Eddie!
Date: 05 Apr 2010 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 5
He's ba-a-ack!! Loving this story so much. So many possibilities!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Yes, dear old Eddie boy is back, but that won't keep J & B apart.
Stay tuned for some upcoming action!
Date: 05 Apr 2010 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 5
love it and edward is an ass for doing that
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
We haven't seen the last of Ed yet, but no worries, he won't keep J & B apart.
Date: 05 Apr 2010 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 4
Hopefully Bella will hand the box back and leave with Jasper. No one needs the complications Edward brings with him!
Date: 04 Apr 2010 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 2
The end of this chapter broke my heart! So smart, so tough, so together...and so damaged! Luckily, there's a Jasper on her horizon!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading!
Yes, a sexy gun carryin' Jasper is just what the doctor ordered for Bella!
Date: 04 Apr 2010 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like the dynamic between the characters. Bella/Emmett truly sound like siblings giving each other grief and Bella/Jasper have true potential. I'll be looking forward to it!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
I'm glad that you like the relationship between Em and Bella. I wanted their interactions to be like a normal older brother looking after his baby sis!
Stay tuned!
Date: 04 Apr 2010 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 3
great chapter ...
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading.
I hope I can keep the creative juices flowing!
Date: 04 Apr 2010 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 2
thanks for the backround of what happened to Bella...
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading.
More info on all characters will develop over time, so stay tuned!
Date: 04 Apr 2010 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 4
she better say no after the way her treated her
Author's Response:
WOW! Thank you for your feed back on each chapter. It means so much to me to hear from those following my little story.
Please stay tuned and keep an open mind about whats to come.
I'm sure that you will have an interesting viewpoint on future chapters.
Date: 04 Apr 2010 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 3
i really love the banter between jasper and bella
Date: 04 Apr 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 2
love it and i hope that she sees that jasper is good for her
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and yes, things between J & B will heat up!
Date: 03 Apr 2010 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 03 Apr 2010 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
this looks to be interesting. ill follow it.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 03 Apr 2010 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
first chapter looks good, can't wait to see where this goes.. thank you
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing!