i so knew rose was pregger! loved the chapter as per usual! how the hell do you accidently buzz someone through the gate?

Thanks so much for the update.  I am looking forward to hearing Jaspers explantation of that wrapper.  Great chapter and great punch from bella. 

I need to know...is Bella pregnant?????  Am I wrong to hope so?

I squealed when I saw the update!  I'm so hooked!

I knew it!  But both of them...I didn't see that coming!  I can see bella missing it, not just because of the birth control, but because it has been my observation that the really brainy types sometime miss the obvious.  I think Bella hormones are doing more than her shrink at this point as far as her mental attitude.  Also, Bella's instincts tell her not to trust James.  I'm a big believer in trusting your instincts!    Oh! Emmett!  He mentioned taking Rose to see Phantom of the Opera.  You could have him write or better yet recite (or sing) in public "All I Ask of You".  "Say you'll share with me one love, one lifetime..."  The public aspect would go a LONG way to prove just how valuable she is to Emmett.  He would be taking a huge risk at her rejection publicly, facing possible public scorn, all to let Rose and  everyone else know how much he truly loves her.  The "Grand Gesture", as it were.  Wonderful chapter!  I can't wait to see what you have for us next! 

Oh my god!! You're rotten. :] I can't wait for the next review!! I can't believe she's pregnant though.. one of my biggest fears; being prego before being married.

<3

So which one is pregnant or are they both?

Oh my god.. this story is amazing!! I haven't read anything this good in a long time.. like, the first time when you read a book and there are those moments when you have to put the book down because you're so giddy with excitment for the characters to have those moments or sexual tension and to finally say what needs to be said.. i love it. =] Write more soon.

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Wow, tough, scary Jasper.  Intense.  But finally a break in the case.  Hmm, what does Riley know?  Great job.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

Cheers,

Balti K

This chapter was a bit unique.  Putting rose and Jasper's heads together was brilliant.  Her perspective adds depth to Bella's story.  I loved the Calvin Klein bit in the kitchen with Emmett!  Knowing Kellan Lutz did their ads made me crack up!  I keep wondering...Rose's weight...is it all from overeating?  Just my  mind making interesting jumps.  Your updates never disappoint!  Loved it...and that cliffhanger!

Poor Jasper I hate reading about all mad and sad.  I love it when rose is all caring and logical.  I think they might be on to something.  And what is with Ben's text, I so hope that it isn't Bella getting kidnapped again.  Thanks so much for the update.  I seem to be a day behind on everything lately.  So hope I am finally caught up on updates.  Great chapter and thanks so much for the update.

what has happened

looove the story. It´s getting better by evey chapter and i like the way you do Crimeward.

Keep going :D

I love that Jasper got to beat him up and that bella got to wack him in the head and knock him out.  I am loving the fact that they tied him up in the basement and gave him a bowel of water to drink from "like the dog he is".  love it.  The fact that Jasper got her to talk was so good for her now it might be easier to tell her story to everyone else.  If you are still knitting you could knitt him a collar and a matching doggy sweater. As for Jasper from behind hole cow that boy could spank me anytime.  Thanks so much for the update and I am so looking forward to Hearing Bella's story.  I have wondered from the begining what exactly happened.  Maybe it will help them all figure out who it was that did that to her.  As for Bree I love how you wrapped that little part up and made it all happy.  Great chapter.

I can't wait to hear Bella's story

I'm glad you are sticking through this and will keep writing. Cannot wait for next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks for your support. I love writing this and I'm so glad that you like it!

I have no doubt that something will happen to get Jasper into that house, weither it is just Jasper or if he gets help he will get in.  I am so scared that Bella will be scared even further by this.   I get that you want assward around in to the end but I can't help but really want that boy shot in a very sensative area.  I can see Jasper flipping out and having to be pulled off of him by Peter and Emmett.  That would make sence.  Near death wold work for me.  You could knit Edward some new support undies for his hospital bed.  (haha)  I am just glad that Jasper is so close.  It would be even more fitting if Bella managed to get away and beat Edward up with a blunt Object and Jasper had to pull her off of Edward.  That would be good therapy for her.  I am so frantic for her to be resued that I would be good with just about any situation that would make him stop hurting her and have her back in Jasper's arms.  Thank you so mych for the update and I will be waiting by my computer for more on how you handle this ugly situation. 

evil person for this cliffy

I think Edward totally deserves a beat down. We all know Jasper is lethal, but I don't think he should kill him flat out. He should still die, but maybe from his own stupidity or by Jasper/Bella in self defence. Oooh! Or by Bella defending Jasper... Really, any way you write is going to be seriously awesome. I've loved the story so far and I can't wait to see how it continues.

I love this story and this cliff hanger has mme hanging on by a thread. :D

For God sake, put the knitting needles away!!!!!!  This story reads like a book capable of being turned into a movie!  I had a bad feeling about Edward's sister showing up just then....I think she's an innocent pawn though.  Imagine having to live with him as a brother!  You did an amazing job with the whole Emmett/ Jasper fight.  It flowed so perrfectly and all the while I had this picture of Emmett's first view of Jasper as he bounced naked in front of his sister.  Too funny!  Let's see, Riley?  That's a puzzle, but  I keep thinking he's involved with Edward somehow...blackmail possibly?  That would make Bella's original ordeal an inside job.  Just puzzling....  Please don't give this story up!!  You really make it work and work well!  Just think Hitchcock!!!  As always, I'm loving every syllable!

Oh shit!  Edward is pissed.  Jasper and Emmett are going to go crazy

Oh ya i love car sex.  With four kids it gets really hard to find time for that but some how we manage hehe.  James should be an interesting addition to the story and I really hate Alice already.  thanks so much for the update and I can't wait to see how things go with Emmett.  I hope there isn't to much blood when Bella kicks the crap out of him (wishfull thinking on my part) Till next time.

Oh shit!  Well we knew it was coming some time.  And now Alice is in the mix.  Can't wait!

great chapter! Can't wait to see more!

and I know that Emmett will be mad about their relationship it isn't logical that he would be ok with it right away.... but i think that he shouldn't be too hard on them and should give his blessing fairly quickly once he realizes how much they care about each other and that it isn't just about sex or whatever else he may think! :)

Another amazing update!  I loved that you brought that lowering your guard in situations like this can be deadly!  Professional bodyguards take this VERY seriously...well, the great ones.  The story Bella told Peter about her father...my how the plot does thicken!  My favorite line?  I cracked up: "Who pissed in your corn flakes?"  So good...and so perfect!  The romance at the end was outstanding!  The flowers?  He remembers!  Let's see, How should Emmett find out and what would his reaction be?  I can picture him coming home unexpectedly at night and overhearing Rose and Char and their girltalk.  Rose is rather open about discussing it and almost like Bella's mother in her reactions, "My baby has grown up!"  Initially, I think Emmett will want to beat the crap out of Jasper!  Remember, he has been much more than a brother to her.  I can see Jasper laying it out for him forcefully...I'm sorry you don't like it but tough!  I love her!  And I'm going to make damn sure NO ONE touches her!!  In the end though, I think Rosalie will be the one that makes him see that if Bella is going to love someone, isn't Jasper the best candidate?  The man is uber- professional and protective.  I think Emmett is sure to come around once he cools down.   Remember, he' s known him since college and trusted Jasper enough to guard Bella to begin with.  Again, I more than loved the chapter.  When you update, my voice literally squeaks in excitment while I'm clicking the mouse! 

P.S.  If Emmett comes home at night, hears them and heads upstairs, wouldn't it be some confrontation if Jasper was with Bella when Emmett when in to yell at her for it?!  I'm just sayin'....

i bet that it is edward

oh your mean!!!! I want to know who is at the door and yes to both of your questions...need more J&B lovin and some stalker action!!!!

until next time :0

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Awesome chapter!!! Loved it! but gah.. you can't just leave it there! :) LOL....Can't wait to see more

Dear God that was good!  I think interspersing the action with the lemons is a good idea.  Always leave them wanting more is my motto!

Motherthing

Love it!  Can't wait to see what's next!

I love your story, I love your Jasper, Bella & Emmy.... Please Update soon.. Can't wait for more, Please Please Update as soon as you can.....

Ok Emmett's gone, let them have some fun with each other.  It won't change anything for neither one and you know it.  It will just cement the shit and make them realize things.  I love your story and how you write keep up the good work.

Damn!  You are an amazing writer!  This chapter was nothing short of awesome.  It had everything - action, emotion, intrigue, and let us not forget ...romance!  Onbehalf of your readers just let me say, "THANK YOU SO-O MUCH!"  I read it twice because I loved it so much!!  Ideas?  Let's see... the fact that someone showed up when Emmett was away on business makes me think either of two things.  1) They're after something Emmett's working on business wise and it's in the house, or 2) Edward is trying to "get at" Emmett through Bella.  I still think that Emmett's love life is and has been close at hand.  And yes!  Lemonaide or lemon anything, please!  Kudos on a chapter that is more than amazing!

oh crap! Great chapter! So excited to see more :)

NNNOOO don't leave it there.  I can't hate Emmett at all.  Who could really?  Jasper needs to get royally pissed and just shot  the hell out of the car and then it can flip.  Then of course Bella won't have to go to Edward's  and that will piss him off (funny huh).Bella and Jasper can go explore their feelings for each other, even though this is a job for Jasper.  Peter is there and will help Jasper keep Bella safe so Jasper can relax a little bit.  I hope this helps you a little bit, if not that's ok too.  Nice damn chapter though, even through the writers block.

I like how Emmett is protective of his sister. And I do understand some more why he is the way he is.

As far as to what I think is going to happen is, well, I think that they are going to know a little more of who is the one tring to kill Bella and that Edward is going to find out and do something about it. Maybe it is Edward himself that has hired someone to try and get Bella to stop working and make her feel that she needs to be with him. Maybe Tyler is going to be the only one who gets shot.

Well I guess I dont know what is going to happen, but I am very excited to find out. Can not wait for the next update which I hope will be soon.

Until then ;)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to share your thoughts.

Oh shit!  Not fair!!!  Please update soon.  I love how overprotective Emmett is being.  It's perfectly natural for his personality, the fact that he raised her and he knows someone is out to kill her.  Anything less and I'd be disappointed in him.

i only wished that i had a brother like that and i think that edward should be a punching for the boys

As so now we wait with you teasing us unmercifully. Not nice.

What purpose besides being a coat rack?

awesome story!!! wow!! I am so excited to see more ;)

Good chapter. Definitely can understand the nightmare!

Now THAT'S a cliffhanger!  I'm hoping it's Jasper or even Emmett behind her.  Let's see... yes, I still think Emmett's girl is Rose.  What was on the nightstand?  Emmett's cufflinks.  Bella wants to use them as evidnce when she confronts her brother.  Edward is WAY too possesive for my personal taste.  I'm on Team Jasper!  Your Edward is a great antagonist though.  Loved this chapter by the way...there's a first, hmm?  (Not!)  You should see the smile on my face when I see the update listed in my e-mail... It's better than eating a snack, so thanks for that too, by the way!  I'm looking forward to lots more smiles! 

Hmm, I hadn't thought of Edward & Rose possibly being together?  Her comment about needing to keep what she found for later has me over thinking things now.  Can't wait for the next chapter

Amazing chapter!  It pulls you in and doesn't let go un til the end...at which point you're left wanting more.  Let's see...Emmett's girl?  Rosalie.  That's why she backed out of the wine party.  The chance to be with Emmett was more important to her than meeting her idol.  Aaa!  My instinct is that Emmett has kept their relationship on the quiet to keep her safe.  If I'm right, he's forgetting one big thing.  Bella.  She would feel amazingly, stunningly betrayed.  Not because she doesn't want him involved with Rosalie, but because he feels their relationship is fine while denying her one with Jasper.  Just a guess though.  I can't tell you how much I love this story!  Sooner or later Bella's emotions are bound to hit the fan and then...watchout!  Bravo!

Rose has to be the one with Emmett.  Tanya wouldn't say anything nice about Bella & Jasper.  Can't wait for more

Once more you more than deliver.  Experiencing the drive-by from both perspectives was a genius move.  Bella may think she's tough, but streetwise, worldly Jasper really IS!  They saw and experienced things differently.  I'm not so sure it's Edward doing all this.  Tanya is my far more likely suspect.  I love that Emmett caught Bella and Jasper about to go at it.  It's smart and throws awrench into the works.  The one thing Jasper has going for him is the trust Emmett has placed in him.  They have a history and that may be the only thing to keep Jasper's oh so sexy butt out of a sling right now!  Knowing him as well as he does, trusting him that much, and knowing that Jasper almost died saving his sister may temper his ire somewhat.  Amazing chapter!  From beginning to end it kept us going and makes us think.

loved the ending

Please tell me Emmett is alive!  Stunning end on this, by the way.  It came out of nowhere and personally left my heart in my mouth.  Bravo!

ok, now i am starting to be upset....you have left cliffies twice now!!! LOL

Love it and want to know more. Hurry please, still addicted, need more...Grrr.LOL

until next time ;)

Author's Response:

More cliffies to come too! :)  The next two chapters are done and awaiting to be beta'ed. Believe me, I love posting new chappies and I can't wait to get them out to you guys.