Date: 26 Aug 2020 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 7
Glad he loosened up a bit at the party. Sounds like there are some men who need a kick in the pants about how to treat women. Nice lunch time
Date: 20 Aug 2020 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 6
Rose is roo funny, but I like her. Lol for the Frozen sisters.
Date: 20 Aug 2020 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 6
Rose is roo funny, but I like her. Lol for the Frozen sisters.
Date: 20 Aug 2020 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 5
Glad E is making it up to her. I think B and K need some family therapy too. Aww for the soup.
Date: 20 Aug 2020 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 4
Women like Anna are so pathetic. E does need more help. Love him and Katie though
Date: 19 Aug 2020 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 3
Aww for Katie taming E's monster.
Date: 19 Aug 2020 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 2
He's Def had a hard life, but that doesn't excuse basic manners. Glad everyone called him out on it
Date: 19 Aug 2020 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well what a piece of work he is. Poor Katie. Hard to adjust when she remembers her parents
Date: 15 Aug 2020 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 6
It has been so long since I heard the name of Excalibur. I organized my Sister-in-law's Bachelorette party there. It was about 20 21 year olds who never left their small town outside Green Bay, 2 Moms, and my Best Friend (who is from Chicago) to spend the night in an apartment like hotel. They took the train from Milwaukee, shopped all day, dinner at Maggianios followed by a night at Excalibur. They had an organized Bachelorette event and many other fun activities. I did win the fake orgasm contest. I won a cheap bottle of wine which came in handy trying to keep all the girl straight off the from gone wild from getting lost. Good times, thanks for that memory.
Date: 15 Aug 2020 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 6
Keep on writing
Date: 13 Aug 2020 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 6
Edward is getting better.
Date: 12 Aug 2020 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 6
I love it Edward is really changing for the better hope he keeps it up and Tanya seems to be a torn in his side but Bella and Katie seem to be the light he needs
Date: 12 Aug 2020 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 6
Edward is trying to embrace some changes. He sure wants to anyway. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 12 Aug 2020 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 6
Edward is trying to embrace some changes. He sure wants to anyway. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 12 Aug 2020 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 6
Love seeing Edward's progress as he matures and becomes more self aware. Great chapter.
Date: 12 Aug 2020 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 6
Love seeing Edward's progress as he matures and becomes more self aware. Great chapter.
Date: 12 Aug 2020 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 6
Love seeing Edward's progress as he matures and becomes more self aware. Great chapter.
Date: 12 Aug 2020 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 6
Love seeing Edward's progress as he matures and becomes more self aware. Great chapter.
Date: 12 Aug 2020 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 6
Love seeing Edward's progress as he matures and becomes more self aware. Great chapter.
Date: 12 Aug 2020 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 6
Love seeing Edward's progress as he matures and becomes more self aware. Great chapter.
Date: 12 Aug 2020 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 6
Love seeing Edward's progress as he matures and becomes more self aware. Great chapter.
Date: 12 Aug 2020 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 6
Love this story. As always fantastic writing. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter xxx
Date: 11 Aug 2020 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 6
Rose is keeping Edward on his toes, hehehe.
Baby steps for Edward.
Date: 02 Aug 2020 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 5
I loved it I think Edward is just what she needs
Date: 30 Jul 2020 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great update! Sorry to hear about Carey, and wish I could help but I'm a truck driver without a job so money is tight.
Date: 30 Jul 2020 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 5
I imagine it would be hard for a sister to take over parenting like that. Edward was really sweet by getting Bella and Katie some groceries along with the soup and bringing Sam. And he topped it off with a stuffed doggy for KitKat. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 29 Jul 2020 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 5
Thank you for this chapter! I like the person Edward is becoming so much! I really enjoyed reading this chapter and I am very curious about the recipe for the soup :-)
Date: 29 Jul 2020 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 5
What is the office policy regarding employees dating?
Edward seems to have jumped right in to that mode.
Date: 29 Jul 2020 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 5
Anytime you want to have different POV's in a chapter is fine with me. I love that you include Katie in the story and not just mentioning her. Love her interaction.
Date: 22 Jul 2020 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 4
This chapter prompted the tears.
Edward and Carlise talking through his situation just crushed me.
Well done!
Date: 16 Jul 2020 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 4
enjoying your new story looking forward to reading more
Date: 16 Jul 2020 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 16 Jul 2020 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 15 Jul 2020 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 4
Poor Edward. He breaks my heart..
Date: 15 Jul 2020 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 4
Wow oh wow I think this is the start to something new
Date: 15 Jul 2020 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 4
This chapter made me ugly cry. I want to give your poor, sweet, broken Edward a hug. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 15 Jul 2020 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 4
Yeah! I love this fic! :) Great insight into Edward and so glad he took the help from his family. Healing! :)
Date: 10 Jul 2020 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 3
I loved it. I can't wait for more.
Date: 07 Jul 2020 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 3
I loved it Bella is so great with her it's sweet
Date: 05 Jul 2020 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 3
The journey through their heartbreaks will be slow, but together they will find that common ground is the perfect foundation for building a solid friendship.
What's the age difference between Edward and Bella?
Date: 04 Jul 2020 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 3
Thank you for this chapter! It is so well written! As a single mom of two I know what it means to work while one or both children are sick. Life is challenging enough without them being sick! I am glad that Katie ca break through Edward's walls. But I guess he has to work through a lot of his issues before he can start a relationship without hurting himself and his partner all the time.
Date: 04 Jul 2020 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 3
Thank you for this chapter! It is so well written! As a single mom of two I know what it means to work while one or both children are sick. Life is challenging enough without them being sick! I am glad that Katie ca break through Edward's walls. But I guess he has to work through a lot of his issues before he can start a relationship without hurting himself and his partner all the time.
Date: 04 Jul 2020 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 3
Thank you for this chapter! It is so well written! As a single mom of two I know what it means to work while one or both children are sick. Life is challenging enough without them being sick! I am glad that Katie ca break through Edward's walls. But I guess he has to work through a lot of his issues before he can start a relationship without hurting himself and his partner all the time.
Date: 04 Jul 2020 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 3
Thank you for this chapter! It is so well written! As a single mom of two I know what it means to work while one or both children are sick. Life is challenging enough without them being sick! I am glad that Katie ca break through Edward's walls. But I guess he has to work through a lot of his issues before he can start a relationship without hurting himself and his partner all the time.
Date: 04 Jul 2020 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 3
Thank you for this chapter! It is so well written! As a single mom of two I know what it means to work while one or both children are sick. Life is challenging enough without them being sick! I am glad that Katie ca break through Edward's walls. But I guess he has to work through a lot of his issues before he can start a relationship without hurting himself and his partner all the time.
Date: 04 Jul 2020 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 3
Edward is a softie with Kit Kat.
Date: 04 Jul 2020 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 3
Little kids just mostly know who is or is not a good person. That's probably why little Katie was content with Edward. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 04 Jul 2020 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 3
I love how kit kat thaws Edward out.
Date: 04 Jul 2020 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 03 Jul 2020 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 2
Nice story so far.
Date: 23 Jun 2020 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow he is all kinds of F'ed up but will Bella and Kit Kat change that
Date: 22 Jun 2020 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 2
Edward has several triggers; his own upended life, his emotional abusive marriage, his loss of offspring. All culminating in his caustic behavior.
Rosalie and the rest of Bella's team are well within their rights to speak up about his disrespectful words.
The negotiating in the bathroom was a novel approach to begin correcting the imbalance of tensions in the work place.
Date: 22 Jun 2020 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
He's very prickly, ouch.
Date: 21 Jun 2020 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 2
I LOVE this! Of course I love all of your fics. The characters are amazing and I can't wait to get to know them. Can't wait for the next chapter. ;)
Date: 21 Jun 2020 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 2
I am surprised he caved so quick
Date: 21 Jun 2020 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 2
Thanks for giving us Edward's background. Tanya is a bitch. Glad Edward apologized to Bella. I can't wait for more.
Date: 20 Jun 2020 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 2
I can't imagine what kind of baggage a child carries with them when they have such a tumultuous experience like Edward's while growing up. Its got to be like trying to hug and love a cactus. Im glad Bella said her peace and is thawing out Edward's frozen heart.
Date: 20 Jun 2020 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 2
I'm so loving this story right now, looking forward to the next chapter, keep posting please maybe more frequently as I don't like waiting x
Date: 20 Jun 2020 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
I liked this chapter. Bella is well defended and Edward is excused. I love it.
Thank you. Kisses.
Date: 20 Jun 2020 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 2
Edward is all kinds of messed up. Hopefully Bella starts getting through to him. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 20 Jun 2020 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it can't wait for more more
Date: 20 Jun 2020 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 2
Great chapter. Glad she's not intimidated
Date: 18 Jun 2020 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
This sounds very interesting. Can't wait for you to continue it into a full story.
Date: 12 Jun 2020 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it so far
Date: 12 Jun 2020 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love your stories BUT hate the long waits in between times. I only now read the covers now because I have been so disappointed when the next update is months away, and the whole story takes years. i think you do a wonderful job writing but wish you would complete some of the older stories. To me it is just as bad as when a good story is stopped and we never hear from the author again.
Yes, I could move to other writers, but am vested in the already pre-read stories and would like a conclusion. Please, complete some of the older stories.
Written with love.
Date: 09 Jun 2020 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Enjoyed the beginning, looking forward to reading more, sounds like its going to another great read as always :)
Date: 08 Jun 2020 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Bitte mach eine Geschichte verursacht. Ich liebe wie du schreibst. Der Anfang ist fesselnd. Hoffe auf baldige Updates
Date: 08 Jun 2020 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 07 Jun 2020 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
The first chapter is intriguing. You have my interest piqued, that's for sure.
Sherry
Date: 06 Jun 2020 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to more
Date: 06 Jun 2020 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Impression of Edward in the park was very polite, even nice... Impression in the office was a very dedicated, direct, no-nonsense boss..... I could understand how someone would be confused about his different personalities. But I hope Bella makes her own decisions about him and doesn't lean on gossip,
My first impression of Sennaa is not good at all, because of the gossiping. ugh...
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 06 Jun 2020 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds interesting, will he be redeemable?
Date: 06 Jun 2020 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wowsers Bella has some big shoes to fill with Katie. Aww for dog. Edward is giving such an awesome second impression... Not
Date: 06 Jun 2020 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
I can't wait to read more!
Date: 06 Jun 2020 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
What a great start, looking forward to reading more!
Date: 06 Jun 2020 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
Yes, please continue , I love your stories!