Date: 14 Jan 2023 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wish the story went on
Date: 14 Jan 2023 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wish the story went on
Date: 28 Aug 2022 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds awesome. Wish it was completed.
Date: 11 Apr 2022 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
bonjour y aura t'il un suite svp merci j'ai adorer rien que le debut
Date: 03 Dec 2021 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
When will there be another update on this story
Date: 17 Nov 2021 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh... 🤭 they are gonna kill each other 😂. I can't wait to see where this goes, and how are the gonna react to this being paired up.
Date: 16 Nov 2021 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Such a funny beginning please keep it up and give us another chapter
Date: 31 Aug 2021 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please oh please.......
We need so much more!!!!
Date: 31 Aug 2021 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please oh please.......
We need so much more!!!!
Date: 10 Apr 2021 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
This story is AMAZING!! Please continue it!!!!
Date: 07 Apr 2021 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it hope there’s more
Date: 09 Feb 2021 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
Omg I really hope you will continue this!! Oh I can only imagine the snarky banter and even hotter sexy time. Loved it
Date: 18 Nov 2020 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please Please continue this story. Loving it so far!!
Date: 10 Nov 2020 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really hope you plan on continuing this!
Date: 27 Sep 2020 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loving your story
Date: 24 Sep 2020 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please, please, please expand this story
Date: 07 Aug 2020 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love it! Are you thinking about continuing it? Or this is it?
I'd love to read more
Date: 02 Aug 2020 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMG! I love it! I can see these two having a lot of bumps in the road as they learn to love each other. I love a badass Bella and she'll give Mobward a good run for his money. I really hope you have plans to continue with this story. I think it's already awesome, but to continue it would be absolutely amazing!! I've got my fingers crossed and this story on alert...
Date: 25 Jul 2020 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good beginning. I'm love it when they start out hating each other.
Date: 05 Jul 2020 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Another story of yours im in love with. Please keep updating
Date: 03 Jul 2020 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
great story so far.
Date: 21 Jun 2020 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
lol please keep it up, I'm looking forward to read more.
Date: 21 Jun 2020 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great character introduction, I'm really excited to see where you take this storyline.
Date: 20 Jun 2020 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm in love with this story already! Cannot wait for the next chapter!! Love the head strong Bella :)
Date: 16 Jun 2020 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ahhh! Great. Are you going to make this a full-blown story?
Date: 14 Jun 2020 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love it more please! Thank you!!!
Date: 09 Jun 2020 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome! I cant wait to read more soon!
Date: 08 Jun 2020 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
It's always so much more fun when Edward and Bella start out "at odds" with each other, which is puttin' it mildly in this case LOL!
Date: 06 Jun 2020 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it!❤️❤️❤️❤️
Date: 06 Jun 2020 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
:) loved this. Looking forward to reading more
Date: 06 Jun 2020 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 05 Jun 2020 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
LMAO, I loved this story when I read for the contest, but had to read it again, it was awesome.
Date: 05 Jun 2020 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loving it!! Cannot wait for the next chapter!!
Date: 05 Jun 2020 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
I hope this story becomes more than a one shot. Loving it so far.
Date: 04 Jun 2020 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh snap will they go through with it or kill each other
Date: 04 Jun 2020 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it . Is Edward going to cheat on bella?
Date: 04 Jun 2020 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Omg! I loved reading this again! ;)
Date: 04 Jun 2020 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
I loved this in the contest. I hope you are going to continue it. I want to see if Edward keeps his side of the bargain at the minute I don't think he can.
Date: 04 Jun 2020 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love it OMG they have been tricked and it will be the best for them and the family. cant wait for moree.
Date: 04 Jun 2020 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh boy! Can't wait to watch these two figure shit out!
Date: 04 Jun 2020 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
This story is going to be one crazy ride and I can't wait.
Date: 04 Jun 2020 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story so far can't wai to read mo
Date: 04 Jun 2020 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh lord that man would get a certificate from a doctor that he was STD free! Even kissing.
Wow... that is pretty crappy for both of them... The sparks are going to amazing! LOL
Looking forward to more :D
Date: 04 Jun 2020 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome start. Can't wait to see where it goes.....and how long until Edward steps out on her.
Date: 04 Jun 2020 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
GAH! I love it! Please continue :)
Date: 04 Jun 2020 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Please, pretty please continue this story!
Date: 03 Jun 2020 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
Omg I hope Bella makes it hell for him, please update soon.
Date: 03 Jun 2020 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
Lol. I love a good Mobward story
Date: 03 Jun 2020 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
loven this story,great job