[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2020 7:47 PM Title: Chapter One
So Edward is a scary boss.
Poor Bella
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2020 6:34 PM Title: Prologue
Angela is a slut. Edward has become weird!
I’m waiting to give an opinion!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2020 11:53 PM Title: Chapter One
I so love this story. Please update soon!
Date: 21 May 2020 12:03 AM Title: Chapter One
Please update!! I am so loving this story :)
I rec'd it on Cheatwards Spot on Facebook....
Since Angela is a cheated on Edward. Loving this D
Date: 11 May 2020 6:45 AM Title: Chapter One
Poor Bella, Charlie sounds like a pretty pathetic excuse for a parent.
Date: 11 May 2020 6:44 AM Title: Prologue
It's a shame that Angela never spoke to Edward about her real thoughts and feelings regarding him enlisting, she just took herself out of the decision making. I'm not excusing her infidelity but, she clearly didn't feel in control of her life or family.
Date: 07 May 2020 2:56 AM Title: Chapter One
Loved it can't wait for more..
Date: 07 May 2020 2:56 AM Title: Prologue
Loved it can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2020 2:45 PM Title: Chapter One
Wow, Edward has really changed. With just cause. Can hardly wait for the next update.
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2020 12:43 PM Title: Prologue
Wow, that was.....there are no words. Great writing.
Date: 05 May 2020 7:34 PM Title: Chapter One
Bella has really had a rough life. I hope eventually, Edward and Bella can fix each other. And I hate Sue. Charlie is no better. Bella should not do anything else for Charlie. Let his stupid wife do it.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 05 May 2020 7:11 PM Title: Prologue
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Date: 05 May 2020 7:10 PM Title: Chapter One
Wowsers. Sue is a real piece of work. What a bitch. Elderly my arse. Glad B has Billy, Jamie, and Victoria in her corner. Can't wait for more
Date: 05 May 2020 6:54 PM Title: Prologue
Sadly this happens way too often. I initially from the summary that he was the cheater; glad to see he's not. Can't wait to see where this goes
Date: 05 May 2020 6:48 PM Title: Prologue
Wow! Angela isn't a good person after all. She destroyed everything. Poor Edward. I hope he can learn to love again.
I can't wait for more.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 05 May 2020 5:56 PM Title: Chapter One
Very good start, can't wait to read the next chapter!
Date: 05 May 2020 10:59 AM Title: Prologue
Oh it's all Angela's fault? F**k that, you leave your wife to her own devices because of some hero complex and then get shocked when she looks elsewhere for attention? This is so one sided, it's ridiculous. As for her family, who the hell does that to their blood? It's one thing to disapprove of what your sister, child does but, to outright betray and dispose of them is disgusting.
Date: 05 May 2020 7:55 AM Title: Chapter One
I greatly dislike Charlie. I don't know if I'd trust him to pay Bella back for all the money she's spending.
Edward sounds like he'll be a nightmare to work for. Will Bella be the nanny for his son?
Looking forward to more.
Date: 05 May 2020 6:30 AM Title: Chapter One
Very interesting and enjoyable. Thank you
Date: 05 May 2020 5:47 AM Title: Prologue
Really interesting start. Thank you
Date: 05 May 2020 4:28 AM Title: Chapter One
Mercy!!! Please post your updates on Facebook,.. for some reason I am not getting my story updates from Stars.
I usually like Charlie but he sounds like a spineless lizard!!
Cannot wait to see what happens next.
Date: 23 Apr 2020 2:03 AM Title: Prologue
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