Date: 07 Nov 2023 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 14
When are you going to write the sequel to this story?
Date: 20 Feb 2023 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 14
Great story. Can't wait for the sequel.
Date: 26 Jan 2023 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 14
Beautiful!
Thank you!
Date: 26 Jan 2023 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 7
Smooth, Edward...... Just like Carlisle. ;)
Date: 26 Jan 2023 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 5
God, I love that song. I cry every time I watch "Furious 7" and that song is played.
Date: 26 Jan 2023 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 2
I am bawling!!!!!!!
Date: 14 Jan 2023 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 14
Is there stil going to a second story to this one
Date: 01 Jun 2022 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 13
What Carlisle did was illegal there are heppa laws against showing or talking about someone else's medical history. I would not want Edward at all after he walked out like he did. Not to mention I wouldn't know if he was with be ausr of me or because of his wife's heart. Bella should of walked away
Date: 01 Jun 2022 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 13
What Carlisle did was illegal there are heppa laws against showing or talking about someone else's medical history. I would not want Edward at all after he walked out like he did. Not to mention I wouldn't know if he was with be ausr of me or because of his wife's heart. Bella should of walked away
Date: 08 Jul 2021 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 14
I took some time away from reading twilight fanfiction and after my husband of 21 yrs unexpectidly ran out on me its taken a year to get to where I feel like I can now read these type stories again and this was my first vinture back into the fanfic world. Very happy I started with this one. Hoping for the sequel soon!!!!
Date: 01 Aug 2020 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 14
Fantastic story! I love how Maggie came to both of them in a dream. I think Maggie should visit one more time the night before they get married and say while she'll always look over them, she won't be back.
Looking forward to the sequel
Date: 27 Jul 2020 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 14
Thanks, I loved the book. Ready for the 2nd one.
Date: 26 Jul 2020 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 10
Nice choice in flowers...
Date: 26 Jul 2020 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 9
Awww..sweet. Love a man that can dance!
Date: 26 Jul 2020 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 7
Holy hell! This was a good chapter. Ha!
Date: 26 Jul 2020 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 6
I wonder what music she was dancing to...
Date: 13 Jun 2020 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 14
First I just love this story. Its a favotite of mine. Second, I noticed at the end you said that there is a book 2. Is that still a possibilty?
Date: 26 May 2020 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 13
OUI! Va le chercher, Bella.
Date: 26 May 2020 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 12
it’s sad! I hope Edward will accept this discovery.
Date: 26 May 2020 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 11
I love those three, thanks for the chapter.
Date: 26 May 2020 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 10
It’s beautiful! I love
Date: 25 May 2020 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 7
I think Edward is seduced.
Date: 25 May 2020 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 6
will there be love at first sight
Date: 25 May 2020 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 5
Can’t wait to read more.
Date: 25 May 2020 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 5
Can’t wait to read more.
Date: 25 May 2020 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 4
It’s good that Edward and his father reconciled in any case Esmé is happier.
Date: 25 May 2020 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 3
Of course I think Bella’s heart will be Maggie’s! It’s a beautiful story.
Date: 25 May 2020 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 3
Of course I think Bella’s heart will be Maggie’s! It’s a beautiful story.
Date: 25 May 2020 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 2
God even sadder! Thank God I know it will get better!
Date: 25 May 2020 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 2
God even sadder! Thank God I know it will get better!
Date: 25 May 2020 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
God, it’s sad! It hurts my heart.
Date: 25 May 2020 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
God, it’s sad! It hurts my heart.
Date: 28 Apr 2020 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 14
I love this storyn I'm looking forward to reading book two!
Date: 19 Mar 2020 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 14
Can't wait for part 2.
Date: 19 Mar 2020 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 12
She needs to trust Edward and stop listening to her inner fears.
Date: 10 Mar 2020 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 14
Can't wait to read the sequel.
Date: 16 Feb 2020 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 14
Very lovely story. Can't wait for the next one.
Date: 14 Feb 2020 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 14
Awesome as always. Can't wait for the sequel
TY for writing and sharing
Date: 09 Feb 2020 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 14
Such a beautiful story. I'm glad that Edward got his head back on straight and accepted that Bella is more than her heart.
Date: 07 Feb 2020 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 14
Thank you for giving us more of their story. Although you ended this chapter in the perfect place.
Date: 07 Feb 2020 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 12
Finally in love and the big reveal. I wonder if Carlisle knows the donor. More drama I hope.
Date: 07 Feb 2020 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 12
Finally in love and the big reveal. I wonder if Carlisle knows the donor. More drama I hope.
Date: 07 Feb 2020 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 12
Finally in love and the big reveal. I wonder if Carlisle knows the donor. More drama I hope.
Date: 07 Feb 2020 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 12
Finally in love and the big reveal. I wonder if Carlisle knows the donor. More drama I hope.
Date: 07 Feb 2020 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 12
Finally in love and the big reveal. I wonder if Carlisle knows the donor. More drama I hope.
Date: 07 Feb 2020 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 10
Moving fast forward but I like it. A very Romantic chapter
Date: 07 Feb 2020 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 9
Beautiful choice of song. I can see the slow dance between them.
Date: 07 Feb 2020 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 8
Seems as if their chemistry is off the charts. Elizabeth seems excited to include Bella in everything .
Date: 06 Feb 2020 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 6
Such a sweet chapter, belly dancer indeed. Let’s get Edward to a HEA.
Date: 06 Feb 2020 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oh Edward such feels in this chapter.
Date: 06 Feb 2020 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh this is a heartbreak. It’s nice how the characters are lined up. And great original idea for Alices profession.
Date: 05 Feb 2020 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it! Poor Edward!
Date: 05 Feb 2020 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it! Poor Isabella and Edward!
Date: 05 Feb 2020 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! Poor Edward!
Date: 05 Feb 2020 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 14
Lovely. Lovely. Lovely.
Date: 04 Feb 2020 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 8
Why are Carlisle and Esme cockblocking?
Date: 04 Feb 2020 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 7
I guess Bella and Alice have the cock up/down on lock. ;-)
Date: 04 Feb 2020 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 6
Will he feel guilty, angry, fear at her having his wife's heart? I mean we all know the heart is a muscle with nerve endings but we like to believe it's the center of our soul. I'm curious to his response.
Date: 04 Feb 2020 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 3
A true sicpx degrees of separation. In a way Carlisle is there for Edward by being there for Bella. Im sure Edward won't see it that way though.
Date: 25 Jan 2020 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 25 Jan 2020 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 14
I'm looking forward to more. I love the new banners. So, this is the beginning. It's always part of "the best." I'm looking foward to the maturing of their relationship. Thanks for sharing! :)
Date: 24 Jan 2020 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 14
Yay! Beautiful conclusion to part 1 and so excited for part 2. Thanks so much for even considering continuing their story. I can’t wait and will certainly be all in.
I am thoroughly thrilled to have completed yet another story with you...and can’t wait for more on this one. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us.
Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!}
- FangirlinGranma Dee
Date: 24 Jan 2020 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 13
Yes! Go get him! *slobbers into shirt sleeve* Set him straight and fight for him. Silver lining, silver lining, silver lining”...I’m cheering it in my head to keep myself from falling apart. *sniffles*
Beautifully written chapter filled with the feels. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!}
- FangirlinGranma Dee
Date: 24 Jan 2020 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 12
Nooo, not the reason, Bella. Oh how sad. And would Edward leave just because she has Maggie’s heart? It’s not her fault. It saved her life. Would he that both died that day? I think this is more about Carlisle. Unfortunately it always goes back to his father for him. Which is sad cause Carlisle has come a long way...maybe it’s a little late for Edward (doesn’t have to be) but not for Elizabeth. *sniffles*
That pic really shows the dark cloud. Can’t wait to see what direction you take us in. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!}
- FangirlinGranma Dee
Date: 24 Jan 2020 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 11
Elizabeth is too cute and thrilled to be “dating” Miss Bella as well. *Sighs* But ohhh no not “a dark cloud”. I was just thinking how well everything was going and what a lovely family they’d make. Well hopefully there will be “a silver lining” behind the dark cloud. *sniffles*
I loved this chapter and I adore you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!}
- FangirlinGranma Dee
Date: 24 Jan 2020 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 10
The perfect setting for the perfect date. And giving each other their hearts is so symbolic since she has Maggie’s heart. I wonder how he will react to it. Though I think their connection goes beyond that, I will always believe in “fate”. *Sighs*
Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!}
- FangirlinGranma Dee
Date: 24 Jan 2020 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 14
okay.. now forward
Date: 23 Jan 2020 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 13
You go girl! I hope she tells Edward about the vision.
Date: 23 Jan 2020 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 14
Love your story can't wait to read next book
Date: 23 Jan 2020 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 14
Great story and look forward to Book 2. :)
Date: 22 Jan 2020 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 14
What an awesome story.I can't wait for the next series.
Date: 22 Jan 2020 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 14
:) loved this. Looking forward to reading the next part
Date: 22 Jan 2020 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 14
Thank you for a beautiful story..I so enjoyed reading it..Im happy Edward got it together..well done..until book 2
Date: 22 Jan 2020 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it and can't wait for part two
Date: 21 Jan 2020 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 14
Glad they got it together! Cant wait for B2, I miss sassy Elizabeth
Date: 21 Jan 2020 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 14
Really enjoyed reading this story and can't wait to read the next part.
Date: 21 Jan 2020 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 14
I absolutely love this story and I am dying to read the next book in this series! All the love! ;)
Date: 21 Jan 2020 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 5
this one was a tear jerker
Date: 21 Jan 2020 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 14
Very glad Maggie was able to talk some sense into Edward although I'm pretty sure he would have come to the same conclusion eventually! Of course, with Bella followin' hot on the heels of his dream, it was a foregone conclusion that he wasn't gonna be allowed to wallow more than absolutely necessary to assuage any residual guilt he may have felt over the situation!
More than glad to see we get a sequel *squeee!*
Date: 21 Jan 2020 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 14
great update, look forward to book 2.
Date: 21 Jan 2020 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 14
I don't like the dream appearances very much but I am glad they are fighting for their love and they could lay out everything in the open!
Date: 21 Jan 2020 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 14
Absolutely loved this sweet story.