Date: 16 Feb 2022 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting concept.
I look forward to reading.
Date: 16 Feb 2022 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting concept.
I look forward to reading.
Date: 04 Sep 2019 6:02 PM Title: Futuretake 2
I just reread story and love it so much.
Date: 18 Jul 2019 8:26 PM Title: Futuretake 2
Great story! :)
Date: 23 May 2018 9:43 AM Title: Futuretake 2
nice update
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 18 May 2018 8:45 PM Title: Futuretake 1
Sweet, Charlie has finally come to peace with his family.
Author's Response:
He really has. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 18 May 2018 2:05 PM Title: Futuretake 2
Loved it
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 17 May 2018 6:48 PM Title: Futuretake 2
Thanks for another chapter! I love how you just skimmed right by the more tricky elements of the birth, like those in the canon story. The point was the birth of the child and not the gore involved in the birth. I like how you prioritized that. Will there be more? I'm good, whenever you choose to end it. I would love to save it to pdf whenever that is...
Author's Response:
I believe ths is it. I dont have anything else in mind just now for more from this family. Thank you for all of your support, it really means so much to me.
Date: 17 May 2018 1:16 PM Title: Futuretake 2
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 15 May 2018 8:00 PM Title: Futuretake 1
Beautiful
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 15 May 2018 5:00 PM Title: Futuretake 1
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 15 May 2018 12:44 PM Title: Futuretake 1
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 15 May 2018 7:00 AM Title: Futuretake 1
What a lovely glimpse into their future! I love the name you've given their daughter. Mara. So much lovelier than Renesmee. Thanks!
Author's Response:
There might have been a mob riot if I'd named her Renesmee.
Date: 18 Apr 2018 4:15 PM Title: Epilogue
Loved the story. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!
Date: 04 Apr 2018 10:15 PM Title: Epilogue
Theses characters were amazing. I loved your Bella and Edwards was extremely romantic. A very original story also. I loved this. Looking forward to more.☮Ajfflady
Author's Response:
I don't know how I missed this, but I'm glad I saw it! Thank you so much for your kind words.
Date: 31 Mar 2018 5:42 AM Title: Epilogue
I'm glad to have been on this journey with you. I've enjoyed this story, as I knew I would given other stories I've read by you. I look forward to what's coming next! Before then, I'm waiting happily for the rest of the future take. This truly is a beautifully written story. Thank you for following this particular plot bunny down the rabbit hole. (:
Author's Response:
Thank you! It's been the best decision to follow this plot bunny. I appreciate you always reviewing!
Date: 30 Mar 2018 1:23 AM Title: Epilogue
nice update
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 29 Mar 2018 10:06 PM Title: Epilogue
This was an awesome story, loved it and so going to miss it.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I appreciate that!
Date: 29 Mar 2018 9:26 PM Title: Epilogue
:) loved this story
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, Deb!
Date: 29 Mar 2018 6:17 PM Title: Epilogue
Can I first say that I feel badly for Connor. He can't help it if he has a giant crush on Bella. He also can't help that her husband is a mindreader. Poor kid. This kind of thing happens to many of us. Well, not the mindreader part, but you know....the crush part.
I am very sad to see t his story end. I have loved reading it, from the beginning, and believe I have told you so for most of the way through. I very much enjoy reading all of you wonderful fan fiction authors. What you do with the original story entertains, surprises, and endlessly fascinates me. These wonderful stories of yours, and others, give this old woman a rich fantasy life, without which I would have gone crazy years ago. I hold you all in my heart of hearts and have much gratitude and appriciation for all I receive from you. Again, thank you so much.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much Judy, for always having a kind word and never failing to articulate your appreciation and pleasure in all of my stories. You make it worthwhile, and give me a boost every time I read something you've said.
Date: 29 Mar 2018 2:28 PM Title: Epilogue
Such a beautiful ending love it!
Author's Response:
Than you so much Alyscia!
Date: 24 Mar 2018 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 40
C-sections are the best sections. I'm so happy you won the awards you did, you deserve them. Excited for the end of this journey, it's been a great one. Thank you.
Author's Response:
That's really very nice of you! C-sections are the best when dealing with supernatural hybrid babies.
Date: 23 Mar 2018 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 40
Loved it.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 23 Mar 2018 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 40
Nice update, and congrats on the awards.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for that! :)
Date: 22 Mar 2018 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 40
Amazing as always!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I appreciate it!
Date: 22 Mar 2018 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 40
I like how you wrote this birth scene. Much less violence and drama. I am very sad to know this journey is almost over. I have loved reading this story. It was always creative while following canon, loosely, but given your own personal touched to twist that canon. I voted for you every time I saw your name. Thanks for everything and congratulations on your four awards!
Author's Response:
I voted for you as favorite fangirl, as well! It is almost over, and it feels sad. They've become like my family. Thank you so much for your support.
Date: 22 Mar 2018 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 40
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you, Deb!
Date: 20 Mar 2018 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 39
Loved it, so glad they pretty much all came out unscathed.
Author's Response:
I couldn't have written it any other way!
Date: 16 Mar 2018 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 39
Huzzah!
Also I was watching tge Kitten Academy Live stream on YouTube while reading this so I have far more warm and fuzzies than this chapter actually gave off. I hope that Esme heals properly, but at the same time a small limp or so would totally help them blend with humans better. In the end though she's an easier target among the supernatural if it doesn't heal properly so for that sake "Get Well Esme!"
I can't wait to see what's left of this journey!
Author's Response:
Yeah, that little bit of realism that they can be injured felt important. Just no major deaths.
Date: 16 Mar 2018 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 39
Oh wow! This chapter was just as amazing as the last.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Hopefully Edward cleared everything up.
Date: 15 Mar 2018 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 39
nice update
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 15 Mar 2018 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 39
Yay! We won! That wasn't even a contest! I love that Bella is so bad ass. What a magnificent battle. Thanks!
Author's Response:
Yes! I needed her to be bad ass. :)
Date: 15 Mar 2018 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 39
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 11 Mar 2018 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 38
What. A. Doozy. But also the not-fight fight scene from the movies? At least it mirrored it. Don't Stephanie Meyer me and this just turns out to be a nightmare because I love stories when the Volturi reign comes to an end. Particularly in ways that doesn't send the vampire world into a tizzy which this outcome could, but still totally worth it since Aro got a firball to the face. That's a good martini on a Sunday morning.
Thanks for another great chapter!
Author's Response:
LMAO. It's real- I felt it was important to put the Volturi to rest.
Date: 09 Mar 2018 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 38
nice update
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 08 Mar 2018 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 38
Awe I love the name! Amazing chapter, I was at teh edge of my seat the whole time.
Author's Response:
Thank you! It was hard to write.
Date: 08 Mar 2018 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 38
yikes. I read the chapter, reviewed, then when I clicked submit, it said I wasn't authorized. STARS had kicked me out while I was reading the chapter. After I signed back in, came here, I saw that my review had not been saved. I loved the chapter!
Author's Response:
Isn't that weeird? Its been acting up lately. Thanks for coming back in to review.
Date: 08 Mar 2018 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 38
Damn that was a hellva fight. Love this story to pieces.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I love you to pieces!
Date: 08 Mar 2018 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 38
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 08 Mar 2018 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 37
Def should've added a dun dun dun. It popped into my head. I wonder what's next, if we're going off of cannon Bella's ability everything should be set if not then Bells and Renee coveri g everyone should work right? Regardless I'm excited for the battle. Thsnks for another great chapter. Really needed this since hospitals are so boring.
Author's Response:
I'm sorry you're in the hospital! It's going to be interesting, that's for sure.
Date: 02 Mar 2018 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 37
nice update
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 01 Mar 2018 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 37
Loving this story.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
Date: 01 Mar 2018 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 37
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 01 Mar 2018 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 37
Thanks for the chapter! I've said it before, many times, and I'll say it again. I love reading your stories. I love that you FINISH your stories! You never disappoint, but even if you did, we are all only human. Thanks for many hours of entertainment. I need to go vote again...
Author's Response:
Thank you, that is really kind of you. I do believe this one is almost complete.
Date: 01 Mar 2018 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 37
OMG I just want it to happen the suspense is killing me lol
Author's Response:
Next week!
Date: 23 Feb 2018 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 36
nice update
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 23 Feb 2018 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 36
El Jardin is a pretty sick fic.
This was a nice chapter, I like how you snuck in the fact that Eddie boy basically breaks Bella everytime they have sex. I caught that. Anywho, it's too bad that Bella can't use more powers as a wolf. Sure that has the potential for being too OP so it's a realistic and (to be honest the) correct choice, but a real life in fiction pokemon Bella would've been awesome just sayin'. Can't wait for the next update when they practice together and not apart. Hint hint. (PLEASE)
Author's Response:
I just don't want her to be too incredibly perfect. Next chapter will be EPOV, maybe he'll brag about breaking Bella in bed! LOL
Date: 22 Feb 2018 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 36
Loved it, the ladies know what they can do now.
Author's Response:
More talents are shining through.
Date: 22 Feb 2018 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 36
Besides you, my favorites are RobzBeanie, Pattyrose, Write Sisters, AliciaW68, Bornonhalloween, CaraNo (who writes OF as Cara Dee), and just too many more to list. I tend to keep reading those who finish their stories with regularity and who write happy endings. I know there are a lot of you out there, but I'm down to just a dozen or so that I still read.
I love how they're gearing up for the fight, finding out just what each can do, and honing their strengths. Thanks for everything!
Author's Response:
Thank you as well! It's almost time for the fight.
I read most of them as well, but I've never heard of the Write Sisters. I'll have to check them out.
Date: 22 Feb 2018 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 36
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 22 Feb 2018 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 36
I am interested to see if this Bella will have the canon Bella shielding power...mmmm
Author's Response:
She's practicing with it.
Date: 17 Feb 2018 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 35
Sweet.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 16 Feb 2018 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 35
nice update
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 15 Feb 2018 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 35
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 15 Feb 2018 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 35
Beautiful ceremony and, he surprised her, so sweet. I loved Carlisle's way of doing the ceremony for them, so unique. And Charlie now sees that others love like he loves his wife.
Author's Response:
I think Charlie's eye were opened, for sure. Thank you.
Date: 15 Feb 2018 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 35
What a beautiful ceremony. I loved reading it! I voted once, but will try to vote again today or tomorrow. I always vote for you wherever I see your name. Thanks for everything!
Author's Response:
Well thank you! I tend to forget to vote every day, but I set a reminder on my phone for this. I get to vote for good authors, too!
Date: 15 Feb 2018 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 35
I am so happy for Bella and Edward. And that Charlie said he loves her.
Author's Response:
He needed to grow that pair and say it out loud.
Date: 15 Feb 2018 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 35
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 09 Feb 2018 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 34
nice update
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 09 Feb 2018 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 34
Idk why, but whenever people mention Chelsea breaking the bond of a mated pair my skin crawls. I thought she couldn't do that according to Marcus (or S.M. herelf stating it)? Anywho, That's cool, Bella should whip out a shield like magic.
Author's Response:
I have spent way too much time reading the Twilight Wiki. She can make or break bonds, and she's kept happy by Corin, who's gift is to make people near her content. She was only spoken of in Breaking Dawn, and Bella was easily able to deter her efforts.
Date: 08 Feb 2018 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 34
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 08 Feb 2018 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 34
So the fight is shaping up. I see that. Good. I'm eager to see how you play that! Thanks for the status update on your stories. I am happy to wait however long it takes you to get to where you can comfortable post whatever you have. Truly. I love reading all your stories!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I know what I want to happen, but it's hard to get the words down sometimes.
Date: 08 Feb 2018 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 34
God Em is spoiling for a fight, lol.
Author's Response:
Isn't he always? lol
Date: 08 Feb 2018 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 34
OMG! I am going to be honest, I prefer your description of the volturi coming than SM
Author's Response:
Thank you! Holy cow.
Date: 04 Feb 2018 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 33
nice update
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 03 Feb 2018 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 33
Hm.. welp. Should've listened to Charlie!
Author's Response:
Maybe they should have!
Date: 01 Feb 2018 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 33
it was excellent, Edward had to calm her down and what a way to do it, lol. So glad the ladies had a nice day out shopping, they needed that. That sucks that the Volturi are coming.
Author's Response:
And Charlie might be thawing out.
Date: 01 Feb 2018 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 33
I DO! OMG OMG! Waiting a week is too much! And all because they were going to be married right!
Author's Response:
You'll have to wait for the reason why!
Date: 01 Feb 2018 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 33
:) Happy Anniversary
Author's Response:
Thank you, hon!
Date: 27 Jan 2018 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 32
nice update
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 26 Jan 2018 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 32
Glad charlie opened up and yelled at okd quill. I wonder what causes her exhaustion. Can I suggest an outtake of Em trying to become Frank’s friend, I hope he does eventually
Author's Response:
I promise to fit it in somewhere, because I have always pictured him and Frank!
Date: 25 Jan 2018 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 32
I agree! Quil had no right to force his will on anybody! Imprinting happens by mutual feelings, not like someone imposing feelings on another. I'm glad that both Bella and Charlie were able to confront him. So the Volturi are still coming? How will the problem of he getting so tired after shifting be solved? Also her losing her shield while in animal form could also be dangerous in any battle. Can't wait to see how you play that out! Thanks.
Author's Response:
She has to figure out how to cope with her differing talents.
Date: 25 Jan 2018 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 32
I really wish I knew what was going on with Charlie. I love the confrontation.
Author's Response:
He's holding in hurt and anger, but that outburst really helped.
Date: 25 Jan 2018 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 32
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 19 Jan 2018 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 31
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 18 Jan 2018 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 31
yes, that was a thrilling time in the movie. you captured the feeling very well here. yours is a lovely alternate to canon, while staying true to the spirit of it. Thanks so much!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I thought they deserved it.
Date: 18 Jan 2018 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 31
Loved it, great surprise, and I just love Em's comments.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I love Emmett.
Date: 18 Jan 2018 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 31
I love how different this story is yet I love how you incorporated some things from the original
Author's Response:
I try to incorporate enough canon to recognize it. Thank you!
Date: 18 Jan 2018 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 31
nice update
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 18 Jan 2018 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 30
Sweet
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 13 Jan 2018 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 30
great update
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 12 Jan 2018 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 30
This story has short chapters. This one was nice, but it's hard to comment on any major plot points with this one. I think she's come to some sane conclusions regarding her parents. I am eager to see how the big battle plays out. Thanks!
Author's Response:
That's understandable. This was more about discussing her feelings about Charlie and the origins of the ring.
Date: 11 Jan 2018 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 30
That was nice that they had a good day making love and just enjoying time together.
Author's Response:
They're about to wind up back in the fray. They needed alone time. :)
Date: 11 Jan 2018 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 30
I just love this chapter. I hope Charlie comes to his senses!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 11 Jan 2018 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 30
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 05 Jan 2018 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 29
great update
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 04 Jan 2018 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 29
LOL, I loved them defiling the cab and hot tub. What a sweet proposal, loved it.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I love writing Edward's romantic side.
Date: 04 Jan 2018 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 29
I love the hyperbole with which each declared their devotion. LOVED it. It's that kind of fairy tale stuff that I always wanted for myself but at the same time knew it was only possible in stories. Thanks for a wonderful, romantic chapter!
Author's Response:
That's exacty what I'm thinking when I write Edward. What are all the most romantic things I'd love to hear? Thank you for your support!
Date: 04 Jan 2018 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 29
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 04 Jan 2018 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 29
And im off to the blog lol Awesome chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 01 Jan 2018 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 28
nice update
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 31 Dec 2017 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 28
Can’t wait to read the next chapter! I hope Charlie really thinks about what Edward said to him. Can’t wait to read what happens next!
Melissa
Author's Response:
Thank you, I appreciate it!
Date: 30 Dec 2017 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 28
I hope it's awhile before shit hits the fan. Right now I'd love to get to understand these characters a bit more, and maybe see some development. I love Bella's POV and her way of showing rather than telling.
Author's Response:
We'll have some time. :)
Date: 29 Dec 2017 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 28
Hmmm will Charlie ever warm up to his daughter and what will they find out when they return now it is fun time for Edward and Bella
Author's Response:
It's definitely going to be a fun time.
Date: 28 Dec 2017 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 28
:) Happy New Year to you too
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 28 Dec 2017 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 28
I'm not trusting Charlie so much by how you've described him so far. I hope that changes. Bella's powers are amazing! Are you building up to a fight with the Volturi? No, don't tell me, but I'm thinking you are. Love how you've written Renee and Bella. I like that Renee isn't a flighty air head in this story. See ya next year!
Author's Response:
I'm trying to sort of stay in line with canon. :)
Date: 28 Dec 2017 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 28
Hmm Charlie has issues. LOL Edward is horny!!
Author's Response:
Edward is always horny, lol.
Date: 28 Dec 2017 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 28
My family cant do laundry on new years day either lol very bad luck if we do.
I am very worried about Charlie I hope he doesnt turn against Bella turning her into to volturi so him and his wife can escape.
Author's Response:
That would be dastardly!
Date: 24 Dec 2017 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 27
He has reason to be Bella.
Nice chapter, happy holidays!
Author's Response:
That's true, he does!