Date: 05 Mar 2018 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Past Collides with the Future
Whew! Malcolm survived and now Edward has another asset in Charlie.
Date: 09 Feb 2018 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 13 It Must be a Dream
They are in shock but he should not have said that he is a killer
Date: 09 Feb 2018 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 12 Revelations
Missed her by that much(get smart). Carlisle is the creepest fucker he needs to DIE
Date: 09 Feb 2018 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 11 Cold Black Heart
So close
Date: 09 Feb 2018 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 10 Wandering Heart
She is so lost
Date: 09 Feb 2018 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Saying Goodbye to Your Heart
Carlisle is beyond an evil prick
Date: 07 Feb 2018 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
this is serious action story better then any mafia movies i watch so war so well writen , can i say i miss your writting alot . thank you for taking time and writing it
Date: 06 Feb 2018 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
I loved it now anxiously waiting for the next chapter,
Date: 04 Feb 2018 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 01 Feb 2018 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
Bella and Alice were stupid and Carlisle have to die. Great chapter, thx.
Date: 01 Feb 2018 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
OMG ! Can't wait to read more. Love your story.
Date: 31 Jan 2018 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
OMG Bobby needs to be added to the kill list now too.
Date: 31 Jan 2018 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
great story
Date: 31 Jan 2018 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
nice update
Date: 30 Jan 2018 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
Loving this story, can't wait to read more.
Date: 30 Jan 2018 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
:)
Date: 30 Jan 2018 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
holy crap, I hope Edward hurts Bobby so badly and Carlisle too, they need to go down hurting.
Date: 30 Jan 2018 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
Thank you for the update....NO!!! Carlise shouldn't have her...Can't Edward & Esme catch a break...Like Carlise will not harm Bella...Of course he will!!! I just hope she opens a can of whip ass on him when he tries something with her...Where are the men that are loyal to Edward? Why would Jasper act that way with Alice? Edward needs to get to forks and get the disk..better yet get Charlie to bring it, so he can whip Carlise ASS!!!...I really can't wait for the next update...until you post again..WELL DONE!!!
Date: 30 Jan 2018 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
Oh shit is right! Carlsle is a dead man but just a little sooner than expected.
Date: 30 Jan 2018 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
Oh shit is right!!! Edward and Jasper have been planning this for a very very long time. I hope they have back plans in place! I hope you don’t keep us in suspense for too long! Love this story so much.
Date: 30 Jan 2018 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
can't wait for more
Date: 30 Jan 2018 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
Bella should have told Malcolm!
Date: 30 Jan 2018 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
Alice put her in this mess because she could have gone to her
Date: 30 Jan 2018 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
I really hope Edward gets to kill Carlisle. I hope he really makes him suffer.
Date: 30 Jan 2018 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
I really hope Edward gets to kill Carlisle. I hope he really makes him suffer.
Date: 30 Jan 2018 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
Oh shit is right ! Now you've got to get her out of there!
Date: 30 Jan 2018 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
O.M.G.Hurry back soon plz....
Date: 30 Jan 2018 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
Heart is racing so ready for Carlisle to die
Date: 30 Jan 2018 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
Oh hell no somebody protect Bella from carslie plz
Date: 30 Jan 2018 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
Darn!
Date: 30 Jan 2018 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
Edward is going to hurt Malcolm and probably Jasper. If Jasper wasn't such as ass to Alice, Alice would not have called Bell all upset and went out to see her. I hope Carlisle suffers.
Date: 30 Jan 2018 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
Noooooo!
Date: 30 Jan 2018 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
Happy Belated birthday to me.
Bet: Will Carlise have sex with Bella or will Bella give Carlise blue balls??
10 say Carlise will take Bella
20 say Bella will give Carlise blue balls
KEEP WRITING โ๏ธ!!!!โค๏ธ๐’๐”ฅ๐‘๐
Date: 30 Jan 2018 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
Hope Malcolm survives Edward's anger.
Date: 27 Jan 2018 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 17 Preparing for Battle
I got a couple chapters behind and had to play catch-up. So glad the takedown has begun. Uh oh! What is Jasper going to think about Alice?! Alice needs to start explaining quickly. Looking forward to the next chapter.
And I loved the the Eddie Murphy reference in the last chapter. I loved the Eddie Murphy movies in the 80’s. Uh
Date: 27 Jan 2018 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 15 Finding Their Way Back to Each Other
I’m so glad they’re back together but taking things slowly. I’m sure they will have their issues to overcome, but they can do anything together!!!
Date: 26 Jan 2018 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 17 Preparing for Battle
I am positively salivating for Carlisle to get what he deserves.
Date: 23 Jan 2018 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 17 Preparing for Battle
Hope Ben can take care of Esme. E will really take it bad if she dies I think.
Date: 22 Jan 2018 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 17 Preparing for Battle
Good chapter hurry all in motion
Date: 22 Jan 2018 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 17 Preparing for Battle
nice update
Date: 22 Jan 2018 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 17 Preparing for Battle
He should ask Bella to go and get the disk.
Date: 22 Jan 2018 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 17 Preparing for Battle
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 22 Jan 2018 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 17 Preparing for Battle
:)
Date: 21 Jan 2018 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 17 Preparing for Battle
I am so fearful for Esme and Benjamin.
Date: 21 Jan 2018 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 17 Preparing for Battle
I'm wondering why he doesn't send Bella back to get the video. Then he would not have to leave town and Carlisle would not miss him. After what Edward told Carlisle about Bella being frigid in bed I'm sure Carlisle would not be watching or looking for Bella . As always can't wait for another update.
Date: 19 Jan 2018 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 16 Shakedown, Breakdown, Takedown
Yes, Carlisle is going down, let it be painful.
Date: 19 Jan 2018 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 15 Finding Their Way Back to Each Other
So glad they're working to be together and Carlisle will get his just desserts, hope he suffers.
Date: 19 Jan 2018 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 14 Ripping off the Bandaid
Glad they're talking and getting it all out there.
Date: 13 Jan 2018 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 16 Shakedown, Breakdown, Takedown
Love it can't wait to read more
Date: 12 Jan 2018 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 16 Shakedown, Breakdown, Takedown
GO GO GO ! HARO ON CARLISLE, the hunting dogs are out to kill. Great chapter, thank you.
Date: 12 Jan 2018 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 16 Shakedown, Breakdown, Takedown
Glad to see E's been making plans. Hope Alice gets somewhere safe too.
Date: 12 Jan 2018 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 15 Finding Their Way Back to Each Other
Glad they talked things out.
Date: 12 Jan 2018 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 16 Shakedown, Breakdown, Takedown
hurry their lices are in Danger
Date: 11 Jan 2018 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 16 Shakedown, Breakdown, Takedown
Can't wait to read more. Really enjoying this story.
Date: 11 Jan 2018 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 16 Shakedown, Breakdown, Takedown
Great update
Date: 11 Jan 2018 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 16 Shakedown, Breakdown, Takedown
His plan had better be foolproof.
Date: 11 Jan 2018 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 16 Shakedown, Breakdown, Takedown
thank you so much for the update...Carlisle will finally get whats coming to him...I want Edward to find the proof his mother has for him under the floor boards...well done!! Can't wait for next upate
Date: 11 Jan 2018 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 16 Shakedown, Breakdown, Takedown
Love this chapter. Serious been waiting so long for the last one that when I saw this update, not only was my week great from Chicago 15, it became even better !!!!! Still love it. Can’t wait to see where you’ll take this story.
Date: 11 Jan 2018 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 16 Shakedown, Breakdown, Takedown
Omg! Time to take Carlisle out! Can't wait!
Date: 11 Jan 2018 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 16 Shakedown, Breakdown, Takedown
Yes! This story is so good
Date: 11 Jan 2018 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 16 Shakedown, Breakdown, Takedown
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 11 Jan 2018 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 16 Shakedown, Breakdown, Takedown
:)
Date: 11 Jan 2018 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 16 Shakedown, Breakdown, Takedown
nice updates
Date: 11 Jan 2018 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 16 Shakedown, Breakdown, Takedown
Just love this story lots. Thanks for updating and l can't wait to see the demise of evil Carlisle.
Date: 11 Jan 2018 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 16 Shakedown, Breakdown, Takedown
Ok, again I have readd this chapter some where. Have you posted some where else maybe?
Author's Response:
If you are part of my book group you are getting a first look at them on my blog page.
Date: 11 Jan 2018 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 16 Shakedown, Breakdown, Takedown
We don’t know if we should trust Malcom. Now if Emmett was watching Bella then we would trust him. But Malcom sounds double cross.
KEEP WRITING!!!!!โค๏ธ๐’๐”ฅ๐‘
Date: 11 Jan 2018 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 16 Shakedown, Breakdown, Takedown
Glad to see its starting. I hope he can get the info about the dvd from Esme
Date: 11 Jan 2018 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 16 Shakedown, Breakdown, Takedown
Love those movies!
Date: 10 Jan 2018 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 15 Finding Their Way Back to Each Other
Thanks for the new chapter. But I could have sworn I had read this chapter before.
Date: 09 Jan 2018 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 15 Finding Their Way Back to Each Other
thank you for the updates..well done...They really need to play it safe...I can't believe Carlisle doesn't recognize Bella...Atleast I hope he dosen't...I hope Edwards gets the proof quick, it has to be in the floor of their playhouse....That means they will have to go to Forks...until you post again
Date: 08 Jan 2018 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 15 Finding Their Way Back to Each Other
:)
Date: 08 Jan 2018 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 15 Finding Their Way Back to Each Other
I can't believe they didn't ravage each other but maybe the night he kills carlisle will be the perfect celebration!!
Date: 08 Jan 2018 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 15 Finding Their Way Back to Each Other
There is a long and nasty road ahead of them to get rid of Carlisle and not be found out. The proof must be under the floorboards in the playhouse.
Date: 07 Jan 2018 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 15 Finding Their Way Back to Each Other
YESSS, THEY ARE TOGETHER AGAIN ! Great chapter, thank you.
Date: 07 Jan 2018 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 15 Finding Their Way Back to Each Other
Thanks fpr the update.
Date: 16 Dec 2017 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 14 Ripping off the Bandaid
Oh my so good!!
Date: 05 Dec 2017 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 14 Ripping off the Bandaid
Oh man, they need a plan to get Carlisle dead!
Date: 05 Dec 2017 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 13 It Must be a Dream
Oh Bella's a bit angry.
Date: 05 Dec 2017 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 14 Ripping off the Bandaid
Yeah Carlisle really needs to die. But E needs to watch his mouth before B decks him again
Date: 05 Dec 2017 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 14 Ripping off the Bandaid
Bella needs to calm down and listen. Edward has a lot to say and explain. Then she can make comments and ask questions.
Date: 29 Nov 2017 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 14 Ripping off the Bandaid
What a mess.
Date: 29 Nov 2017 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
I can't stand that he found them.
I hope that Bella & Edward's connection has left her "feeling" him out there.
Please, please don't kill Esme or harm her too much. I want to see her get revenge.
I don't want to believe that Edward will become like his father.
Date: 29 Nov 2017 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 4 Friends or Not?
It's a big mistake going public with her paintings.
Don't say I didn't warn you.
Date: 27 Nov 2017 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 14 Ripping off the Bandaid
nice update
Date: 26 Nov 2017 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 14 Ripping off the Bandaid
I can’t wait for the next chapter! I really really hope that Edward can make Carlisle suffer like he deserves to suffer!
Date: 25 Nov 2017 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 14 Ripping off the Bandaid
They have a lot to discuss before they run into each others arms. Great chapter, thank you.
Date: 25 Nov 2017 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 14 Ripping off the Bandaid
Ok now they can kiss and be together!!
Date: 24 Nov 2017 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 14 Ripping off the Bandaid
I a worried what Carlisle will do.
Date: 24 Nov 2017 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 14 Ripping off the Bandaid
ITS ABOUT TIME ...LOL CANT WAIT FOR MORE
Date: 24 Nov 2017 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 14 Ripping off the Bandaid
Happy Thanksgiving ๐ฆ!!!!
Ok Bella tell us why you started an Escort service cause some of us still don’t get why you would do that???
KEEP WRITING!!!!โค๏ธ๐’๐”ฅ๐‘๐ฆ
Date: 24 Nov 2017 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 14 Ripping off the Bandaid
:)
Date: 24 Nov 2017 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 14 Ripping off the Bandaid
The tatoo was the crucial element for Bella to trust him.
Date: 24 Nov 2017 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 14 Ripping off the Bandaid
Thanks for the update. Glad they talked
Date: 20 Nov 2017 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 13 It Must be a Dream
Looking forward to the update!
Date: 17 Nov 2017 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 13 It Must be a Dream
thank you for the update...that went better than I thought....until you post again
Date: 16 Nov 2017 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 13 It Must be a Dream
What! That's how their long awaited reunion went
Date: 15 Nov 2017 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 13 It Must be a Dream
Ouch Edward that was a low blow and Bella got you good look forward to next update x
Date: 15 Nov 2017 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 13 It Must be a Dream
Not the way I thought is was going to go but that was good if he would not have said the whore work it would have went better lol
Date: 14 Nov 2017 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 13 It Must be a Dream
Carlisle has so much to answer for. Go Bella. Be strong
Date: 14 Nov 2017 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 12 Revelations
OMG cant wait for the fire works.