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Reviewer: sassy973 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2016 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 5

Please update soon loved it.



Author's Response:

Thank you I will x

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2016 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 5

Could that homeless man with the funny colored hair have been Edward?  The picture you paint of her in the rain was priceless and spot on!  Wonderful chapter, thanks!



Author's Response:

It is our first meeting but all is not as it seems 

Reviewer: sassy973 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2016 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it update soon.



Author's Response:

Glad your enjoying it x

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2016 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 4

Very  interesting  story  so  far !    I like the setting and initial  investment  you  have  made  in establishing  the  characters .    Have  to  admit the initial summary kept  me from reading  at first.  Couldn't  tell what  the  story  was really  about .   Keep  up  the  great  work !  



Author's Response:

Thank you for your comments I've gone back and rewritten the summary, is it better ?

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 3

Liking what you have so far can't wait to read more I'm also reading your other story and loving that one as well..d84;a039;



Author's Response:

I'm glad your enjoying , I love that you take the time to read my ramblings x

Reviewer: sassy973 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it hope you update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you x

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2016 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 3

I love that she hires women who had difficulty getting jobs elsewhere and successful women also. Thanks for using my name as the bookkeeper! LOL! Thanks for writing a different kind of Bella!



Author's Response:

You are my first choice x

Reviewer: kessafan Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2016 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 2

Another great chapter.  The team has come together and I can't wait for a possible upcoming meeting between the other important players!  :-) 

Till next time,

Sandy



Author's Response:

You won't have to wait long x

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2016 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 2

I love this story so far, great new spin.



Author's Response:

Thank you x 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2016 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 2

My goodness, Bella sure is one hell of a motivated woman!  Hiring women only, so far, and disadvantaged ones, is a stroke of genius. Paying good wages and benefits to these women and making her business into almost a family is a smart move. I like her!



Author's Response:

She is very aware of her staff being her family x

Reviewer: kessafan Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2016 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

This looks awesome!  I can't wait to read more.  :-)

 



Author's Response:

So glad you are enjoying it

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2016 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very interesting. I can't wait to see how this plays out!

Author's Response:

Thank you I hope you continue to enjoy it

Reviewer: LadyLetters Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2016 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love Bella's voice. She is so in your face and unapologetic.

I have high hopes for this story!



Author's Response:

I'll do my best and i have a great team behind me if I get stuck xx

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2016 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is different for you, but I'll read it. The first chapter drew me in. I still have The Body and your completed stories for my lemon fix...thanks!



Author's Response:

You can thank this story for the body continuation I was having withdrawal symptoms from the lack of lemons !!

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