[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2016 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 37
YES, Edward is innocent.
Date: 24 Sep 2016 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 37
what a horrendous "gift". somebody wants her to think badly of Edward. maybe the real rapist? what a startling and unsettling turn of events. no wonder he was reluctant to kiss her....great job, dear one!
Author's Response:
I'm sorry I haven't been replying to your reviews but keeping two stories going is proving to be hard work !!! I do read them xx
Date: 20 Sep 2016 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 35
What happened to Edward? Some other woman treated him badly? After 6 years homeless, anyone would need to adjust to being back in society, but whatever trauma he had in addition to that must make it extra hard. He is just the most adorable thing, ever! Thanks for all you give us!!
Date: 19 Sep 2016 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 34
Wow, I am so curious about what happened with Edward's Mom now.
Date: 18 Sep 2016 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 34
What a mystery is developing here! Why would Edward think Bella, or any woman, had sinister motives toward him? What happened to his mother? I think Caius' case is tied in somehow. This is wonderful! I love being stumped and trying to figure things out! Thanks again!
Date: 16 Sep 2016 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 33
Bella needs to be more patient. Edward is going through many changes a day fast. She should know by now that he has coping difficulties.
Date: 15 Sep 2016 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 33
He thinks he killed his own mother? Did he? I'd bet not, but can't wait to see the story unfold. Poor baby, I feel for him! Thanks for the chapter!
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2016 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 32
Ugh! I hate cliffies.
Date: 10 Sep 2016 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 32
OOh sounds sinister! The end part, I mean! I'm guessing that Edward leaving had something to do with his mother's death, or vice versa. This mystery POV wants harm to come to Edward, it seems. Is it Jacob? Great chapter, wonderful story. As always, I thoroughly enjoy it!
Date: 07 Sep 2016 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 31
I loved this chapter and I love seeing my name every time in this story! Sorry I was so abrupt about what I saw. Was it in this story or The Body? I forgot.
Date: 07 Sep 2016 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 31
I really love this story . You are doing a great job !
Date: 04 Sep 2016 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 30
Good chapter. Esme is lucky in the timing of this attack as she now has people who will support her.
Date: 04 Sep 2016 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 30
Someone is trying to ruin Esme? I wonder who it could be. Is this a story within a story or does it have something to do with Edward? You have 2 grammatical usage/spelling errors in the story. Do you want to know what they are?
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2016 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 30
I do not think that is the ex of Esmé which paid to make for him(her) of twists.
Why not Jacob?
Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2016 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 29
I like this chapter.
Thank you.
Date: 04 Sep 2016 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 30
Nice that Caius seems to have a conscious
Date: 01 Sep 2016 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 29
I'm interested if Edward will see Jake & co at the gym & if he recognizes them as his attackers
Date: 01 Sep 2016 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 29
So why is he leery of being alone with her? Have his father and brother told him to do that? The mystery of the PI and the videos is getting closer to being solved, but who is behind it? Good mystery, good story!
Date: 01 Sep 2016 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 29
I wonder why Edward is scared to have dinner with Bella.
Date: 30 Aug 2016 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 28
I feel so bad for Edward. He is so scared and lost. It will take some time to get through the pain. Maybe Edward needs Bella to go with him to therapy. She seems to calm the anxiety down.
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2016 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 28
Good story keep on writing
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2016 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 8
Interesting storyline
Date: 27 Aug 2016 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 28
Hell no she isn't asexual! She just needed to find the right partner! I'm so curious to find out what was so bad for him that he had to run away for years! You've really got me going here! I love it. Thanks!
Date: 27 Aug 2016 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 27
Really like this story ! Keep up the great work !
Date: 25 Aug 2016 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 27
I'm so glad that Edward seems to be adjusting well. Bella needs to stop being naive about Jacob and his cronies.
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2016 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 27
I adore this chapter!
Thank you, kisses.
Date: 24 Aug 2016 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 27
I wonder if the same person and/or situation Edward was running from is related to Bella's video harrassment. Just a thought. Why is Judy confused? I'm not confused! I had trouble separating from the character me there for a moment. I'm OK now....sort of. Love that Edward and Bella are getting closer!
Date: 20 Aug 2016 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 26
I knew it was Jake & co that attacked him
Date: 20 Aug 2016 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 26
Thank you so much for Edward's POV! It's good to hear at least his inner voice and his take of things. I'm wondering what horrible thing he thinks he did that woud warrant him punishing himself like that. I'm guessing you'll tell us in due time! I truly enjoy ALL your stories and thank you for giving them to us. I get hours of entertainment from all you kind writers who write fan fiction!
Date: 17 Aug 2016 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 25
Jacob is so obnoxious! It's good she set Edward straight about him! He seems to be adjusting, albeit slowly, to being a part of civilization again. I'm glad you're taking this slowly and hope to hear his story soon. Thanks for making me an ongoing character. I giggle every time I read my name here.....
Date: 17 Aug 2016 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 25
So glad E got to hear the truth
Date: 15 Aug 2016 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 24
I hope before she leaves the diner you have her take put her cell, call (or pretend to call) someone and ask how one gets a restraining order.
Either that or have her order 2 burittos
Date: 14 Aug 2016 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 24
Edward! I he there to see Bella? I am curious about his story also! Is it Jacob who is doing this to Bella? Who else could it be? So we have another plot line going on here, or are they tied together, somehow? So many questions, I have. I have faith that you'll answer them all, so I'll just keep reading! Thanks!
Date: 10 Aug 2016 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 23
I initially thought Jacob was behind the videos but I don't think he's smart enough. I think it is Esme's ex
Date: 10 Aug 2016 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 23
Pretty obviously Jake and his posse have been hired to do this 2 a day are likely also the ones that beat Edward up. Hope they get what they deserve ! Good story!
Date: 06 Aug 2016 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 22
So now that we have brought him home, what could be next? I am eager to find out the details of how he became homeless. Jacob is disgusting and I hope he goes away soon. I'm glad you're getting so many new readers! It's about time! Thanks for all you give us!
Date: 06 Aug 2016 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 22
Jacob sounds like a restraining order waiting to happen
Date: 02 Aug 2016 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 21
I love it! I am excited for these two to really talk. Jake is a jerk...I hope he gets what he deserves. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 02 Aug 2016 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 21
Ah! So Jacob, the cheapskate, got the flowers for free for his "fiancee", huh? What a douchbag move that was, along with taking her to his fuck buddy's restaurant and proposing a threesome! Then he left her with half the bill! Unbelievable! Good riddance to him and hello, Edward! I am very eager to hear his story as to what made him stay away from his family, and be homeless, for 6 years!
Date: 30 Jul 2016 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 20
What a dick! Jake did so many low class things on the date that I can't believe she stayed as long as she did! So much for her first and only date! I wonder how Edward is doing?
Date: 30 Jul 2016 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 20
I guess he blew all his money on flowers. Either that or he expensed them to his job. What a jerk. I'm glad she made it through the date without being raped
Date: 28 Jul 2016 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 19
I wonder if Edward knows where she went, as he seemed to be wanting to see her since his eyes sought her out every time he opened them. I wonder if he got upset at her not being there. I wonder what he thinks he did that is so bad he had to stay away all this time. Jake is pretty pushy, isn't he? I don't like it! I hope she doesn't cave to pressure and go out with him.
Date: 27 Jul 2016 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 19
She's insane. She should just leave him a message via the restaurant.
Date: 23 Jul 2016 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 18
I'm so glad Edward spoke up because Emmett was just going to dismiss her now that the family was there. I think Edward has become attached to Bella. I see we are going to find out more about his, Edward's, story soon. Thanks for the chapter!
Author's Response:
I think she was a familiar face in a room and he latched onto that. Whatever happens he a little weary off being home x
Date: 23 Jul 2016 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 18
Can't wait to find out what happened 6 years ago
Author's Response:
All will be revealed x
Date: 23 Jul 2016 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 18
I am glad Edward is awake and Carlisle is feeling better. I can't wait to see what Edward was running from. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
All will be revealed x
Date: 20 Jul 2016 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 17
I'm so glad! Still wondering if Edward will freak out when he sees everyone in his room! And I'm wondering what his story is and what made him run away in the first place! I have to be patient longer? OK....
Author's Response:
All will be revealed but you know me very slowly I'm afraid x
Date: 17 Jul 2016 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh dear! I wonder what Edward will do when he wakes up! Who could have done this to him? How awful. The short chapter leaves me wanting more....but I'll be patient!
Author's Response:
He is in a safe place now
Date: 17 Jul 2016 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 16
I hope Edward is still there. I bet that Jacob & Co were his attackers
Author's Response:
He is safe now
Date: 13 Jul 2016 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 15
I sincerely hope Bella calls Emmett to go with her or from the hospital.
Date: 12 Jul 2016 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 15
well good for you! happy early birthday and have a great time with your friends at the spa!
Poor Edward! I wonder what happened to him! I'm glad he didn't just blow off the meeting with Emmett. Let's hope Bella can help him!
Date: 12 Jul 2016 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 15
I guess being hospitalized is a good reason for being a no show. I hope he'll recover quickly & that Bella will reach out to Emmett
Author's Response:
Bella to the rescue again x
Date: 08 Jul 2016 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 14
I suspect Edward may be Emmett's brother. I have many thoughts about why he might have left the family and why he is homeless, but nothing concrete. I really hope Emmett doesn't scare him away with his enthusiasm. It is a great idea for Bella to go along with Emmett to meet Edward, since Edward may feel a bit more comfortable with her there. The part about Rose and the video kind of slipped by me before so you saying this is the second time took me by surprise. Sorry! Thanks for continuing to use my name as a regular character here. I am really honored that you're doing that!
Author's Response:
This is the second video posted. Sorry if it read funny.
Date: 07 Jul 2016 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 13
I cannot wait for more!! Loving this story!
Author's Response:
Thank you x
Date: 06 Jul 2016 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 13
I need more!!! I love this story!!! Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Glad your enjoying it x
Date: 05 Jul 2016 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 13
Loved Emmett's reaction.
Jake is insane. Do people like him really exist?
Author's Response:
Oh he does and he is going to get so much worse x
Date: 05 Jul 2016 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh thank god! I bet they're brothers. I really want to know what happened to Edward! Jake is insufferable and I wish he would bo away! great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2016 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 12
Emmett knows Edward, I hope that he is going to agree to meet him.
Thank you, kisses
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2016 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 11
J'ai aimé la lecture de cette fiction, il est une bonne histoire.
Merci. Bisous
Date: 02 Jul 2016 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 12
Please don't apologize fo your "American" English. I, for one, wish you would use your native speak and phrases more in your stories, but you do just fine adapting your language to the English WE have ruined with our colloquialisms.
It IS Edward! Now we well begin to know how he came to be homeless. Thanks for the chapte!
Author's Response:
I really don't mind people commenting on spelling and grammar but I worry about AJG my beta , we both realise just how different the language is even though it's supposed to be the same . I love the word 'whilst' but I keep getting messages from people saying they don't understand it and I shouldn't use it !! Ax
Date: 02 Jul 2016 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 12
That went well. I can't wait for Emmett to talk to him. I hope Bella can find him and get him to the meeting. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you I'm so glad you enjoyed it .x
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2016 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 8
Why he does not speak?
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2016 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 7
It is to whom these beautiful green eyes?
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2016 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 6
Strange this man.
Author's Response:
Not strange cautious
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2016 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 4
I like this fiction.
Author's Response:
Thank you x
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2016 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 3
Bella is solitary, I hope that she is going to meet her companion.
Author's Response:
It will take a while so be patient x
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2016 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 2
Good choice!
Author's Response:
Thank you x
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2016 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like this début!
Author's Response:
Thank you x
Date: 28 Jun 2016 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 11
She's a sweetie to do all this for the homeless. Did she have seeing Edward again in mind when she started all this? You are still being quite mysterious about him and that piques my interest a lot! I am thrilled and flattered that I have become part of this story. Judy the perfectionist. That's me!
Author's Response:
No this wasn't to find Edward she casually volunteers when she can so its a coincidence he's there. I love writing this one it's really testing me at the moment .
Date: 28 Jun 2016 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 11
Really enjoy the story
Author's Response:
Thank you x
Date: 25 Jun 2016 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 10
This Edward just pulls at my heart. I can't wait to see what happened to him. I am glad Bella is paying attention to him. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
We have a long way to go yet x
Date: 25 Jun 2016 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 10
A lot of people have that same attitude toward homeless people that Embry and his friends displayed. No empathy at all. I know that I am only one paycheck away from being there myself so feel lucky to be where I am. At my age, being homeless would kill me. I can't wait to find out what Edward's story is and how he knows Emmett.
Author's Response:
I thought most people are only too aware how quickly things can change. Right now the whole world seems to need to practice tolerance x
Date: 23 Jun 2016 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 9
Can't wait to hear Bella explain this
Date: 23 Jun 2016 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it hope you update soon.
Author's Response:
Than you so much x
Date: 22 Jun 2016 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 9
Poor Edward. He must have been scared. I am so curious about his story. My alter ego isn't happy with the mess, but I feel bad for him. Thanks and see you next time.
Author's Response:
He is scared and alone and he's finally reaching out x
Date: 18 Jun 2016 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 8
I am getting ready to have friends over to watch the next Outlander episode in a few hours. I have been hooked from the beginning!
So we have a bit of progress with our homeless man, whom I assume is Edward. I applaud her kindness and can't wait to hear his story.
Author's Response:
I watched 6 episodes yesterday have a numb bum and square. Eyes but so worth it xx
Date: 18 Jun 2016 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 8
I am glad he went to Bella. I hope he let's her help him. Great job...thanks!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you are enjoying this Edward is in a bad way and needs help x
Date: 16 Jun 2016 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 7
Thanks. Looking forward to this story developing over time.
Author's Response:
Glad you are enjoying it
Date: 16 Jun 2016 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 6
A good chapter. Thanks
Date: 15 Jun 2016 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it hope you update soon.
Author's Response:
I will as soon as I have my outlander addiction under control. X
Date: 14 Jun 2016 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 7
Thanks for the new chapter! I am eager to see where this goes!
Author's Response:
You're welcome x
Date: 11 Jun 2016 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 6
It IS Edward! Is this a stunt? Is he really homeless? So many questions I have. It's ok not to answer, I don't want you to. I'm just thinking out loud...
Author's Response:
All will be revealed you know me it will just take time x
Date: 11 Jun 2016 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 5
Well what a first impression that made. Looking forward to reading more. Thanks.
Author's Response:
She was certainly made aware of him
Date: 11 Jun 2016 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 4
Good chapter. Wish my gym offered those sorts of distractions.
Author's Response:
Glad your enjoying it x
Date: 11 Jun 2016 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 3
Nice mix of characters.
Author's Response:
Thank you x
Date: 11 Jun 2016 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
Good foundation chapter. Thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you x
Date: 11 Jun 2016 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
A really good start. Thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you x
Date: 09 Jun 2016 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 5
Bella obviously cursed out the wrong person. She should have let her temper loose on Michael instead of Edward.
Author's Response:
If she had made it to Cullen inc she probably would have but fate stepped in
Date: 09 Jun 2016 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 4
Bella must be a good boss if she lets Rosalie get away with her disappearing-act from the gymn.
Author's Response:
Bella is the boss everyone of us would want but infortunately in reality probably could not exist
Date: 09 Jun 2016 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 3
I'm hoping for Mr. Right to come a long and sweep Bella off her feet and make her want to reenact all the interesting things her co-workers were told her about.
Author's Response:
Me too but if you know my writing that could take a while x
Date: 09 Jun 2016 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 2
Looks like Bella built herself quite the team.
Author's Response:
She has been very careful because they are her family x
Date: 09 Jun 2016 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
It seemslike Bella has no personal life whatsoever, everyboda shemeets gets evaluated ant filed away.