[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2016 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 12
Emmett knows Edward, I hope that he is going to agree to meet him.
Thank you, kisses
Date: 02 Jul 2016 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 12
Please don't apologize fo your "American" English. I, for one, wish you would use your native speak and phrases more in your stories, but you do just fine adapting your language to the English WE have ruined with our colloquialisms.
It IS Edward! Now we well begin to know how he came to be homeless. Thanks for the chapte!
Author's Response:
I really don't mind people commenting on spelling and grammar but I worry about AJG my beta , we both realise just how different the language is even though it's supposed to be the same . I love the word 'whilst' but I keep getting messages from people saying they don't understand it and I shouldn't use it !! Ax
Date: 02 Jul 2016 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 12
That went well. I can't wait for Emmett to talk to him. I hope Bella can find him and get him to the meeting. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you I'm so glad you enjoyed it .x