[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2017 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 4
Does she even have any emotions?
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2016 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 4
I like this fiction.
Author's Response:
Thank you x
Date: 11 Jun 2016 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 4
Good chapter. Wish my gym offered those sorts of distractions.
Author's Response:
Glad your enjoying it x
Date: 09 Jun 2016 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 4
Bella must be a good boss if she lets Rosalie get away with her disappearing-act from the gymn.
Author's Response:
Bella is the boss everyone of us would want but infortunately in reality probably could not exist
Date: 06 Jun 2016 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it update soon.
Author's Response:
Glad your enjoying it x
Date: 06 Jun 2016 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 4
Very interesting story so far ! I like the setting and initial investment you have made in establishing the characters . Have to admit the initial summary kept me from reading at first. Couldn't tell what the story was really about . Keep up the great work !
Author's Response:
Thank you for your comments I've gone back and rewritten the summary, is it better ?