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Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2016 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?

WOW! Nicely done! ;)

Reviewer: PoseyRosey Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2016 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?

This is a great story, I always look forward to the updates. It is fabulous to see Bella coming into her own, she is going to be someone to reckon with for the ones swindling.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2016 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants

Great ending 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2016 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants

I am loving this story. I hope you are able to update soon!  I hope Edward hears about Bella's interaction with his former in-laws. I'm sure he will be quite amused and impressed.  

Reviewer: Terass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2016 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants

I love how Bella seems to be fitting right in and not letting people push her around!!! I'm glad Edwards home and look forward to finding out what's going on with the things she found out about the businesses also!

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2016 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants

LOVE Love Love YOUR Story ! Can not wait for more more to read!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2016 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants

Bella is the perfect women for them and I dont like Tanya's parents they thought they where going to run over the top of Bella lol.  So happy Edward is home ;)

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2016 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants

hot

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2016 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants

That was a great update

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2016 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants

LOVED IT. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2016 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants

Love the way bella handled the woods couple

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2016 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants

I'm impressed how Bella handled Tanya's parents. They do seem to be up to something. Bella handled the household like a pro, as well as her researching the documents Edward left her. I think there is some embezzling going on.

"Oh Edward." indeed.

Sherry

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2016 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants

Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2016 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2016 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants

love it

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2016 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants

I absolutely love the way Isabella handled the in-laws!! I love the relationships she has around her! She is so great with Lizzie!! :) She was perfect!! I love this story and I am very excited for more!! ;)

Reviewer: shaztastic Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2016 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants

Glad Bella has found her place and put the woods in their place, mrs woods is so snotty is too funny lol look forward to Bella and Edwards reunion and for him to see lizzie xx

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2016 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants

I simply love a strong, confident, and loving Bella.  Yours is a treasure!

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2016 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants

God I love this story so much! Probably one of my favorite mafia Edward stories! Like every week I eagerly await for the next chapter not to mention that the Edward in this story is so sexy and hot I absolutely love him! Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2016 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants

:)

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2016 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2016 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 6 - breathe, kitten

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2016 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 5 - About time

Elizabeth is adorable!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2016 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2016 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous

Loved it!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2016 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: bonghi Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2016 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice

So good. I love it. Something new and refreshing, a bit cruel but still a very good read.

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2016 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2016 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

Loved it!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2016 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice

Ha! Ha! Ouais.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2016 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice

tough one.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2016 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 6 - breathe, kitten

I love this Edward.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2016 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 5 - About time

Bon chapitre.

Lizzie est très mignon.

Reviewer: eileenapr Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2016 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice

Love it.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2016 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice

I think she is going to love pulling his tail lol. 

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2016 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice

can't wait for more to come

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2016 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice

I love it!! :)

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2016 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice

I LOVE THIS! THANK YOU!

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2016 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice

It's such a great story

Reviewer: dreamstar1995 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2016 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice

Please update soon!  I waited forever and this isn't enough!!!  I can't wait to read more!!

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2016 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice

Real good

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2016 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice

Stefan and Vladmirare something else, lol. Embry got what he deserved. I'm looking forward to more.

Sherry

Reviewer: eileenapr Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2016 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

Didn't see that coming 🙈

Reviewer: forever21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2016 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

I´m loving this story!!!

Reviewer: shaztastic Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2016 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice

Mafia Edward is on a roll can't wait to hear from Bella about how she got on when Edward was away x

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2016 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice

Bella is in for some good lovin lemons!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2016 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice

:) 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2016 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice

Edward is a little frightening.  Hard to believe he owns that club but doesn't partake, he is more loyal than most men of his kind.

Reviewer: SilverNova3082 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2016 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice

Love this story

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2016 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice

I like this Edward, he don't play when it comes to business matters. Can't wait to see who the next person he has to kill is.

Reviewer: faith2905able Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2016 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice

KItty goes meow.  Can't wait

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2016 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 6 - breathe, kitten

I foudn this story today and couldn't stop reading.  Can't wait for an update.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2016 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 6 - breathe, kitten

Bella will flourish with Edward. 

Reviewer: Terass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2016 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 6 - breathe, kitten

I love the story your writing and very much look forward to reading more!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2016 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 6 - breathe, kitten

Next time my husband is in chicago i'm going to make him bring me a piece of cake home!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2016 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 5 - About time

He over reacted a bit about the ring bearer but i'm sure he is going to make up for it.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2016 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 4

He is so mooshy!!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2016 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous

I figured he killed her i wasn't expecting his nonchalance about it.  Very funny! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2016 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now

Will she get to have a career like she always wanted?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2016 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

I thought one of the men were def. going to be shot.

Reviewer: hazeleyesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2016 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 6 - breathe, kitten

Interesting story line. Can't wait to see where this goes

Reviewer: TinksTwiHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2016 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 6 - breathe, kitten

I love this story! 

Reviewer: JenDawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2016 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 5 - About time

Just want to say I love this story, but I don't think it's very fair to Bella in this chapter when he gets mad because she asks the daughter if she wants be be a flower girl. This is Bella's first wedding and with how she was brought up what if she wants a more traditional all wedding party, he seems to be taking his daughters wishes/wants over Bella's and it is her wedding. Just something to think about, can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 6 - breathe, kitten

Another awesome chapter. I'm actually looking forward to Bella diving into the businesses to find out why they are losing money.

Sherry

Reviewer: mommabear0206 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2016 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 6 - breathe, kitten

looking forward to reading more :)

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2016 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

Oh my...loved chapter 1

Reviewer: shaztastic Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2016 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 6 - breathe, kitten

The cake does sound yummy I'm looking forward to next update x

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2016 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 6 - breathe, kitten

Loved it.    THANK YOU!

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2016 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 6 - breathe, kitten

Sad they will be apart

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2016 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 6 - breathe, kitten

Glad he is open to her using her degree and want her to be a partner, not just arm candy.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2016 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 4

Ms Cope sounds wonderful.  Glad he made her first time special.  Happy Lemon Dance.

dl

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2016 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 6 - breathe, kitten

I LOVE THIS!! :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2016 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 6 - breathe, kitten

She is the perfect fit they all love her

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2016 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 6 - breathe, kitten

:) 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2016 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 6 - breathe, kitten

Love your story can not wait for more and more  .Thank you for a wonderful story.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2016 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 6 - breathe, kitten

The interaction between them is great I like that she wants to keep some of how she was raised into the marriage it shows a different kind of strangth 

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2016 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 6 - breathe, kitten

I love this story. This is one that I stop everything when there is an update just to read it right away.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2016 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 6 - breathe, kitten

Love this story 

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2016 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 5 - About time

Just found this story and am really enjoying it. Can't wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2016 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 5 - About time

Great chapter. I like that he's a family man

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2016 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 5 - About time

So Lizzie can have whatever she wants be whatever she wants. Well lesson learned.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2016 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 5 - About time

I really love this! :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2016 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 5 - About time

Love how they can't get enough of each other. It will take her a little time to get that she is an equal. Love it

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2016 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 5 - About time

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2016 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 5 - About time

Excellent!

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2016 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 5 - About time

Real good

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2016 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 5 - About time

lol, oh Lizzy, out of the mouths of babes.

Sherry

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2016 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 5 - About time

Thank you for this story is love it!  Happy Good Friday to you and a very wonderful Easter 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2016 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 5 - About time

:) 

Reviewer: shaztastic Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2016 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 5 - About time

Glad he wants bellas input look forward to next update x

Reviewer: Thirlestane Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2016 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 5 - About time

Thank you!! T

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 4

Love it make me swoon WOW. Love that little girl so cute and she is so loved

Reviewer: shaztastic Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2016 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 4

He sure is sexy and I can picture his tattoo look forward to next update x

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2016 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 4

Looking forward to more.

Sherry

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2016 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 4

This was a great chapter can't wait for the next one

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2016 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 4

:) 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2016 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 4

Wow, is it hot in here, or is it just me?  Is there a location for any pictures associated with the story.  Keep up the excellent writing.  

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2016 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 4

Love this story 

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2016 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 4

OMG... I loved every minute of it! Thanks for the update!

 

Krazi 

Xoxo 

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