Date: 05 Mar 2016 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love how you have written all these characters so far!
Date: 05 Mar 2016 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 4
Let me guess Jack & Jill got married at Vegas;)
Loving the story looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 05 Mar 2016 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 4
I would love to read EPOV on meeting Bella. He briefly seemed to have some recognition of her. I'm really hoping he is a widower. And that Edward and Bella figure out who the other is soon. Though, I kinda feel he may have a glimmer of a memory of her. Looking forward to this story to unwind.
Sherry
Date: 05 Mar 2016 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 05 Mar 2016 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 4
Hmmmm I think Dr. Cullen is our little pea's daddy!!!! lol
Date: 05 Mar 2016 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 4
I'm pretty sure it wasn't "Jack", surely she would have seen the eyebrow pericing, right. But I'll bet he's related older brother, dad.
Date: 05 Mar 2016 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 4
Time to switch doctors before you are too invested Bella.....
Date: 05 Mar 2016 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 4
All we know is that ots doctor Cullen like it could be Edward or Carlisle we don't know! Plus she didnt exactly describe him and why would Edward if he was married sleep with some random girl in Vegas unless he was celebrating his divorce from the skank which could be anyone from Tanya to Irina to Kate or Lauren like we don't know anything really! Which is annoying to be honest but I will have to be patient and wait and see how the story unfolds.
Date: 05 Mar 2016 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 4
was wondering if it could have been e but that would have been weird for her not to recognize him at all
Date: 04 Mar 2016 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 4
she didn't see his eyes
wonder why he keeps "looking" at her??
Date: 04 Mar 2016 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 4
What are the chances? Would her new doctor be related to the stranger baby daddy? I would be uncomfortable at getting wet while being examined by an obgyn. I'm sure he would also!
Date: 04 Mar 2016 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 4
That would be so embarrassing glad my doc is female lol look forward to next update x
Date: 04 Mar 2016 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 4
I know in my heart that you all have more twists and turns planned than a mountain road so I'm not guessing anything. Love that Tanya is a friend in this one.
Date: 04 Mar 2016 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 4
I think the picture is to keep others away from him and the ring is the one Bella put on him
Date: 04 Mar 2016 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 4
Loving the story! There's a reason you guys are my favorite authors. Thank you for writing.
Date: 04 Mar 2016 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 4
I seem to like Aro. Good thing he is her Godfather and will look out for her.
Charlie's reaction is going to be an interesting read.
What is the physical connection Bella is experiencing with Dr. Cullen? Pregnancy hormones or the fact that he is related to the baby-daddy?
Date: 04 Mar 2016 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 4
Dr. Cullen huh ? Interesting twist there and his yellow tinted glasses. I am guessing Bella is back to her brown hair color. I love how he had to leave the room quickly and off to his office. Loving it.
Date: 04 Mar 2016 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 3
Is Jasper the answer to Bella's questions? Is his wife, Alice, related to her 'Jack'? It's obviously Edward, but, how will she find him?
Date: 04 Mar 2016 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 2
She got what she came for.
Will she heed Jasper's warning and keep her name and location concealed?
Date: 04 Mar 2016 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 3
Is she pregnant and married? What if Emmett is sterile nf yurns out Rosalie was pregnant by someone else? Comeuppance indeed!
Date: 04 Mar 2016 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 3
I think that Tanya is the right amount of pushy for Bella if she wasn't Bella wouldn't do anything fun. Loved it hope you update soon.
Date: 03 Mar 2016 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 3
Emmett is an ass. I don't remember any fic where I wanted to slap him more. On the other hand, Bella has been on a roller coaster of emotions for weeks. I can hardly wait for Edward make an appearance in her life again.
Sherry
Date: 03 Mar 2016 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 3
Of course she is pregnant by a man with Tattoos and no name..Oh yes Jack
Date: 03 Mar 2016 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 3
So many questions like, Where was "Jack"? and Are they married?
I can't wait for more.
Date: 03 Mar 2016 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 3
Awwww Edward left her with something alright. Can't wait to see when he comes into the picture again.
Date: 03 Mar 2016 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 3
I figured she got pregnant, in Vegas. She needs to remember that Jasper is a cop and needs to call him, have him get after Emmett, scare him off. I hope her doctor turns out to be Dr Cullen.
Date: 02 Mar 2016 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 3
I don't know how Bella will find Edward or vice versa since they both used fake names. And Emmett is a total dick in this story. There seriously needs to be some police and legal involvement right the fuck now!!
Date: 02 Mar 2016 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 3
Emmett is annoying and stalkerish on the edge of homicidal!! I wonder how crazy his a-- is about to become??? How much longer until they meet up again or how they meet up again?? I can't wait!!!!!
Date: 02 Mar 2016 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter, great story! Love it! What I don't understand is why if Bella was awarded the house in the divorce, does Emmett think he can serve her an eviction notice? Is he really all round stupid? Lol...
Can't wait til the next chapter. Wonder when "Jack" will make a reappearance 😊
Date: 02 Mar 2016 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 3
I wish I had a friend like Tanya. Emmett is a big whinny ass bully he needs his ass kicked. Can't wait for more your the best
Date: 02 Mar 2016 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 3
I'm glad she's pregnant! That scum bag Emmett must be the cause of Rosie losing both their babies, not Bella! I wonder how she will go about finding "Jack", or if she will even want to! I wonder if Emmett will give her shit about being pregnant and not by him, or will he think it's his? Can't wait for more!!
Date: 02 Mar 2016 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 3
HOLYEFFINSHIT!!! OMG!! OMG!!! Jack got her pregnant!!! OMG!! That's awesome!! And I am thinking the ring, yep it was a wedding ring! lol I am so freaking excited for the next update!! I'm dying!!! Oh, btw Emmett is the biggest piece of shit douche bag ever!! What an effin dickhead!! ;)
Date: 02 Mar 2016 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 3
Nah Tanya is being a supportive friend. Emmett is such a douche in this story. Like it is Bella's fault rose can't keep a baby. Now to find "jack"
Date: 02 Mar 2016 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ohhhh. sad that Emmett is a meanie but so far I like it.
Date: 02 Mar 2016 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
I love jasper he is so adorable. Oh yeah I know jack with those stunning green eyes.
Date: 02 Mar 2016 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter and wow emmett is some piece of work look forward to next update x
Date: 02 Mar 2016 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 3
I can't believe I'm about to type this but... I love this Tanya! The only thing she could do to make me like her more is to have a run in with Emmett... with her car, fists or anything else she has handy will work. lol
Date: 02 Mar 2016 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 02 Mar 2016 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow She really needs a restraining order against Em. What a dick.
Date: 02 Mar 2016 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter, I hope Marcus threw Emmett out of the building a infornt of a speeding bus.
Date: 01 Mar 2016 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
I've donated my hair 4 times but last year was my last. Ulta cuts my hair or free and they send it to locks of love. I would continue but my hair hasn't been growing as fast as when I was younger. Loving this chapter do far. Can't wait for Bella to get her groove back!
Date: 29 Feb 2016 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 2
oooh Go Bella. Since I know its fiction, I'm going to ignore the safety factor. LOL
Date: 28 Feb 2016 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 2
Well shit. I sure hope that Jack is Edward and Edward is Alice's brother. Irony is a bitch that I enjoy watching.
Date: 28 Feb 2016 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 27 Feb 2016 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 2
Looking forward to reading more!
Date: 27 Feb 2016 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 2
no I did try one of everything night, I did not get far into that. Shots did me in.
Date: 27 Feb 2016 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
Always get excited when you post new stories!!
Date: 27 Feb 2016 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 2
I think Tanya is going to be beyond proud but Bella forgot about protection I wonder what will happen l lol
Date: 27 Feb 2016 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh man she's definitely getting her groove on, the girls have done their job getting her to get out and let loose for sure.
Date: 27 Feb 2016 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 2
:)
Date: 27 Feb 2016 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loving this story already. Em's an ass.
Date: 27 Feb 2016 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 2
Is it Wednesday yet? She sure does cut loose and let her inibitions down.
Ahh, Jasper is the perfect southern gentleman.
Holy hell Jack and Jill was quick but hawt!! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Sherry
Date: 27 Feb 2016 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 2
Shot such a great 2,chapter love Tanya and how well she knows Bella
Date: 26 Feb 2016 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 2
OMG... this is amazing! I'm hooked girls!
Krazi
Date: 26 Feb 2016 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 2
oh let jack be a dirty talker....lol
Date: 26 Feb 2016 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 2
well that was hot! no, there is no doubt in my mind as to who that was. I also think he may be Jasper's brother-in-law, right? Wednesday is a long way off.....thanks, I enjoyed this!
Date: 26 Feb 2016 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 2
Lol glad Bella let loose sounds like she hasn't in years if ever and of course jack is Edward look forward to next update xx
Date: 26 Feb 2016 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 26 Feb 2016 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 2
No drinking through the alphabet for me...takes too long to get to the rum. LOL
Date: 26 Feb 2016 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm not sure I could make it past c... ;) lol
Date: 26 Feb 2016 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
good start. wonder what the letter was
can't wait to meet e :)
Date: 26 Feb 2016 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Em's a cheating bastard. Enough said. Can't wait to see who she meets in Vegas;)
Date: 26 Feb 2016 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 26 Feb 2016 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great chapter, looking forward to the next update!
Date: 25 Feb 2016 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice to see James and Victoria as "good" people for a change. Emmett as a not so good guy somehow works for me too.
Great start and I can't wait for the next update!
Date: 25 Feb 2016 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good for you change the characters up. I am so glad you have done this. Can not wait until you update.
Date: 25 Feb 2016 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! Great first chap. Looking forward to the next!
Date: 25 Feb 2016 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to more. Love that Bella is making changes in her life to rid herself of Emmett. Though, she may wished she had read that letter before tossing it in the trash.
Sherry
Date: 25 Feb 2016 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
Emmett can go f*ck off! The letter was Probably something to hurt Bella(pic of his new baby?), so I'm glad she threw it away.
Date: 25 Feb 2016 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
I can't wait for more!! I just wonder if there was something in that letter that Bella should have read? Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 24 Feb 2016 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
So excited about another story to read from y'all! Awesome start, can't wait to see the new Bella come face to face with Edward in Vegas lol. Love all your stories and the love that our favorite characters share for each other in your stories is such a delight to read! Looking forward to the next chapter.
P.S. I donated 22 inches of my hair 4 years ago to Locks of Love, it's a wonderful agency that makes hairpieces for children who can't afford them. Almost fainted when the girl cut it off, but was pleasantly surprised with how much better my new hairstyle looked, and felt much better knowing that my hair was going to brighten some child's life.
Date: 24 Feb 2016 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is going to be a great story
Date: 24 Feb 2016 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love it Emmett is a shit I hope he gets what he deserves. Can't wait for more
Date: 24 Feb 2016 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to reading more
Date: 24 Feb 2016 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
You write such good stories, can't wait for the next update
Date: 24 Feb 2016 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thanks for this new story! It looks great! Good riddance to Emmett and Rosie!
Date: 24 Feb 2016 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
This one sounds really good (as usual lol) love your stories look forward to next update x
Date: 24 Feb 2016 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
hmm What happens in Vegas, Ends up on Youtube. trust me I like in Vegas. Have her go to OGs for a little male ogling. Hee hee
Date: 24 Feb 2016 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love it I can't wait tell Friday and I grow my hair out to donate every few years
Date: 24 Feb 2016 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love the switching around of the usual characters. Makes it fun.
Date: 24 Feb 2016 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
I loved it! Looking forward to Vegas!