Date: 18 Mar 2016 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 8
I freaking love this story, but I kinda want to bash their heads together. I would do it really gently though...honest. I'm glad to know I got some of it right, makes me feel better. I love that Tanya and Tori and James aren't scrappy people in this story....it's always nice to see the good side of them. Emmett is a piece of crap that gets stuck on your shoe.....I so want to see someone kick his arse. I look forward to watching them figure it out....I can't wait to see who figures it out first.
Date: 18 Mar 2016 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 8
Dose Edward think that James is Bella's husband? What does he think about Bella's mother-in-law? Love Esme. Ok, is Jane adopted? Can't wait for more! !!!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2016 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 7
I absolutely love this story!! I check all throughout the day on wednesday and fridays... you have me acting like a junkie, lol!! I really cant wait until SOMEONE realized that these two are ... well ... Jack and Jill i guess. Come on people: Alice, Jasper... freaking ANYONE !! I need it!! Luv yas and keep writing this gold for me!
Date: 17 Mar 2016 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 7
I have enjoyed this a lot. Love when it finally update. I have a question though. When is bell and or Edward going to realize who the other is and that that at Edwards babies?
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2016 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 7
Is Bella still wearing the wedding ring as a pendant?
Jessica is a pleasant surprise.
Dr. Cullen is sure to notice the prefix change to Bella's name on her chart. He's observant.
Will Jasper put the pieces together before Edward and Bella figure out who they are to each other?
Date: 17 Mar 2016 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 7
Glad Jessica is being nice to her. So they are married. Twins???? I am loving this story. Can't wait for you to update again.
Date: 17 Mar 2016 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 7
I have one. Does Edward have the marriage licence? I just figured if he is getting an annument then he must have some idea who he married. If that is true why hasn't he connected the dots yet.
Oh and twins that's great since she may never be able to have any more.
Date: 17 Mar 2016 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 17 Mar 2016 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 7
I love this so much, thank you. Ok my question is... Since Edward is wearing the wedding ring why is he not trying to find out who he is married to? Also when will they find out the twins are Edward's? LOVE YOU GUYS!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 17 Mar 2016 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 7
Edward's disguise is like Clark Kent's. He puts those glasses on he's a completely different guy! Bella doesn't even recognize him. ;-)
Date: 16 Mar 2016 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 7
Love, love this story. Can't believe they don't know, despite drunkenness, but I like him as her Dr, getting to see everything. I hope she loses it now and tells him....
Thank you!
Date: 16 Mar 2016 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 7
OK HOW LONG IS THIS STORY GOING TO BE ? AND HOW LONG TILL BELLA OR EDWARD PUT IT TOGETHER ?
Date: 16 Mar 2016 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 7
That's certainly enough to make her get sick again ! But I really like this story !
Date: 16 Mar 2016 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 7
so they got married in vegas and she doesn't remember it? she is jill and edward is jack, right? oh boy this will be great to watch as she finds all this out! thanks!
Date: 16 Mar 2016 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 16 Mar 2016 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh my twins no wonder she is so tried her little body is feeding two little peas. Jasper is So funny let him continue Bella and you would have heard sexy docs names baby daddy in question. He is so sweet coming into work just for her. I love how playfull he is.
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2016 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 7
Last chapter Bella assumed the woman in the picture was his wife if she wasn't then who was she? READ YOU SOON😊
Date: 16 Mar 2016 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 7
Big surprises in store for the good Dr when he realizes it is his wife and his children he is taking care of. Can't wait to see if he passes out at the news!!!!
Date: 16 Mar 2016 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 7
Priceless Edward will be able to see his baby's grow
Date: 16 Mar 2016 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great story! But I do have a question. Who is the woman in the photo in Edward's office? He COULDN'T be married if he married Bella in Vegas? Is it the other sister?
Date: 16 Mar 2016 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 7
Your stories are so much fun to read.
Date: 16 Mar 2016 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 7
The ring he's wearing is from Vegas? Check!
Who's the woman in the picture in his office?? Obviously not the bitch!
Date: 16 Mar 2016 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 7
Awe yeah!! Can't wait for when things click into place
Date: 15 Mar 2016 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 6
Can't wait until they figure out that they are Jack and Jill. Bella's life is a mess.
Date: 13 Mar 2016 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 5
The whole ring scene was a little confusing for me. Was she talking to herself? I was thinking that for most of she was but then the "voice" with the Jack Daniels breath confused me a little bit.
Date: 13 Mar 2016 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wait! Who was that doc? He can't be baby's daddy can he?? And I don't care what other people say, I like the storyline so far even if the Vegas one night thing has been used before.
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2016 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 6
Is alice the designer that is coming? Edward might be in the runway show. Is that why he had the brow ring? For her runway show? Rose & emmett are ridiculous! How is he finding out her personal info?
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2016 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 5
Once she found the ring i realized dr. Cullen was edward for sure. They even got married!!! Funny he is still wearing his ring, or does he normally wear it as a decoy?
Date: 12 Mar 2016 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 6
Well speaking lies does complicate ones life. She has nothing to be sorry for. Just spit it out that she has a baby and no daddy that is all that has to be said. But Honesty always is less stress on the person speaking it.
Date: 12 Mar 2016 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 6
Sounds like Rose is as whacky as Emmett is in this case! I wasn't expecting that one! Waiting for them to start realizing who the other is. Yellow glasses would not keep me from recognizing Rob if he was my doctor !
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2016 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 6
Rosalie is a nut case. I'm wondering how Bella will figure out Edward is her baby daddy? Tell me it isn't so, that he's not married to Jane anymore or they are legally separated or something. I have a feeling Edward remembers Bella. Looking forward to more.
Sherry
Date: 12 Mar 2016 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 6
Why did'nt Bella correct Edward about being called mrs. Swan? When will they recognise each other? Hurry please!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 12 Mar 2016 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 12 Mar 2016 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 6
Okay, you said her dr. was Edward, and now in this chapter you suggested he was married to someone name Jane. If that was true and he's the one she met in Vegas that means he cheated on her. If that's the case and Bella finds out it will kill her after what Emmett did to her. Please tell me that she is married to a brother and not Edward, or even they got her name wrong and who she was married to, and it is really Esme and is married to Carlisle. Anything but you can't let Bella think she is attracted to a married man to much longer.
Date: 12 Mar 2016 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 6
So....who is Jane to Dr. Cullen aka Bella's baby daddy?
Date: 12 Mar 2016 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 6
So Rose had a hysterical pregnancy. Both Emmett and her are off their rockers blaming everyone else for their problems.
Date: 12 Mar 2016 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 6
Wow Rose and Emmett are both Assholes!!! Does Edward know that Bella is Jill????????
Date: 11 Mar 2016 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 6
So when will they realize that they are Jack and Jill? Love it and can't wait to read the next chapter.
Date: 11 Mar 2016 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
So emmett and rose are cray cray......
Date: 11 Mar 2016 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 6
I'm confused. I'm assuming Edward is the stranger who fathered her child, but puzzled as to why he doesn't recognize her. I'm guessing she doesn't recognize him because his yellow tinted glasses cover up his green eyes, which is the only thing she remembers about him. I'm puzzled because I don't know why he doesn't recognize her....
Date: 11 Mar 2016 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 6
Rose is crazy her and Emmett are perfect for each other. When is Edward going to find out she is single?
Date: 11 Mar 2016 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 6
Such a fun fic. How much longer will they not know each other?
Date: 11 Mar 2016 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
This is becoming hard......why won't they just figure it ou its them!!!!!! Tell him ur single woman!!!!-
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2016 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 6
OMG... the plan is to torture us slowly until we go crazy! I wanna smack these two. They keep answering questions wrong giving the wrong impression to each other... I'm going to be a chainsmoker btw the time this story is done! Lol... loved it!
Krazi
Xoxo
Date: 11 Mar 2016 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 6
hmmm so is he really married or is someone confusing him with someone else. Ugh for the Rosalie interaction.
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2016 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 6
Did Edward hear Rosalie's rant?
Is he now aware that Bella's alone in this pregnancy?
I just adore Bella's girlfriend circle. They are true and trustworthy women.
What makes Bella think Jane is Edward's wife? I seem to have missed that connection.
Date: 11 Mar 2016 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 6
Ok, so is Edward really married to Jane????????? I am so confused. Now I am really worried about Bella. Emmett and Rose are both crazy!!!!!!!!!! It is going to be a long time til Wednesday. I am sad.
Date: 11 Mar 2016 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 6
Interesting way to cover up him stunning green eyes. I think Edward may be feeling something for Bella as well. So the "wife" is a fashion designer hmmmm. So rose was only pregnant once and now the other baby was all in her head I bet Emmett does not know that.
Date: 10 Mar 2016 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 5
Glad Charlie and Sue ate supportive. Aro too. What luck that Jasper showed up. Emmett is being a real jerk. I have a feeling that he is not going to stay away. Can't wait for more. I am really enjoying this story.
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2016 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 5
I am an impatient reader always wanting more of a good thing so waiting drives me nuts.😅 seriously great story ! READ YOU SOON.
Date: 10 Mar 2016 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 5
I LOVE ALL OF YOUR STORIES! THIS ONE IS GOING TO BE GREAT AS WELL. THANK YOU SO MUCH! LOVE YOU GUYS
Date: 10 Mar 2016 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 4
Ok, I am thinking her doctor is Carlisle. But you keep mentioning she can't see his eye color. Is Edward her doctor? The wedding ring??? Bella had on a ring the "morning after". Did they get married in Vegas???? Who is the woman in the picture? Alice, his sister? ?? I can't remember if Bella saw Alice with Jasper or not. I know she never talked to her but did she see her from a distance?
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2016 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 5
Thanks for the clarification on the doc identity.
I'm sure Jasper is bound by a confidentiality clause but will he let his wife know he ran into the girl from the plane? Small world after all.....
Charlie needs to know about the restraining order.
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2016 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 5
Glad Bella has someone looking out for her. How did Emmett find out about her being pregnant? How many more chapters before Bella realizes who Edward really is?
Sherry
Date: 10 Mar 2016 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 3
OMGosh! She did not even wake up with him. How much of the truth did she tell "Jack"? If Edward is talking to Jasper about his one night stand on how wonderful she was, Jasper will not make the connection because Bella dyed her hair darker . How are they going to find each other????? Maybe Bella will remember what Jasper does for a living and she has his card. Maybe she will call him and once she describes him Jasper will know it is Edward.
Date: 10 Mar 2016 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 10 Mar 2016 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 2
When Bella decidesto be bad.......she is really bad.
Date: 10 Mar 2016 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds very interesting. Bella may not want to know what Emmett had to say in his letter but I DO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 10 Mar 2016 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 5
good. kind of hope em violates that restraining order so that b has a stronger case against him. hoping em doesn't do anything to hurt b or the baby
Date: 10 Mar 2016 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 5
I can't wait for the next update! This is my favorite story!
Date: 09 Mar 2016 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 5
When will women ever learn that just because a man hits her with words and not fists that it is still abuse! So many don't get it! Thanks for approaching such a subject. It needs to be said.
I think Emmett will still try to bully Bella. I hope he doesn't hurt her. So Dr. Cullen IS Edward and Edward is Jack! I thought so! I really like this story. Bella deserves so much better than Emmett and I hope Edward is that someone for her! You haven't disappointed in that area yet.....
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2016 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 5
I'm hoping Emmett tries to contact her and gets his sorry ass thrown in jail.
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2016 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 5
Yay... love it! And thanks.. I was a bit confused on the Dr. Cullen thing too..
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2016 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 5
Glad emmett got arrested he's being a dick lol and jasper is really helpful look forward to next update xx
Date: 09 Mar 2016 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 5
Emmett is a creep so happy when he got his ass thrown in jail.
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2016 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 5
I knew it!!
Friday can't come soon enough! So....Doc Cullen is a widower?
Emmett better stay away if he's smart but he isn't so I hope they throw his ass in jail!
Date: 09 Mar 2016 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 5
Sadly TROs are just paper. Too many men just walk right through them (usually men, I know women can be evil too). Glad Dad and Sue are behind her.
Date: 09 Mar 2016 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter...now I wonder who Emmett's source is
Date: 09 Mar 2016 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love the teasers, of course it was Emmett at the door he is such a bastard first time I think I ever said that about Emmett this story makes me hate him. Hmmmm the extra ring in her bag what ever could that mean Bella. I love that it was jasper that came to her rescue, why did Emmett think Bella would not press charges after all the crap he did. How did he find out she was pregnant? Like she really wants him back kind of full of himself.
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2016 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 5
God did throw her a bone she doesn't know it yet. Lol.
Date: 09 Mar 2016 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 5
I don't think Emmett will follow a restraining order. How did he even find out she was pregnant? Thanks for the update.
Date: 09 Mar 2016 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 5
I'm so glad she called 911 and then followed through with the restraining order.
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2016 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 4
Are Jack & Edward the same? Guessing neither recognized the other due to the amount of alcohol consumed and Bella's slight disguise in Vegas.
Because there's no cheating, is Dr. Cullen a widower? I'm assuming he's also Alice's brother.....
Gonna get interesting! I can't wait for the updates!
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2016 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great story as always!
why does Emmett think he has a right to the house when it was awarded to Bella in the divorce decree? Whatever papers he has or eviction notice he serves means nothing. If if were Bella, I'd get a restraining order against him or have him arrested for trespassing if he comes to her house.
Other than that, love love love your work!
Date: 08 Mar 2016 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
What the fuck? When is the baby daddy?
Date: 07 Mar 2016 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 4
hmm Thinking the doc isn't her Jack....Unless he was too drunk to remember either. hmmm
Date: 07 Mar 2016 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 4
Well its gotta be "jack".
Date: 07 Mar 2016 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 4
I have a feeling the dr is Edward and he is married but to Bella. I bet they got married in Vegas and that's where the ring she had came in. Great story so far.
Date: 06 Mar 2016 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 2
Nasty romp in a bar? Hell yes ladies...
Date: 06 Mar 2016 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 4
OH I'm really liking this! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 06 Mar 2016 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 4
Well I am lost at the moment. She is prenant by tattoo boy in Vegas and Emmett is awful. If the doctor is Edward why did she not recognize him and why did he cheat on his wife if there is one? So many questions so little time. LOL
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2016 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 4
I think it's edward's dad. Aro's last comment was so funny! Does edward own a tatto shop? Bella has always wanted one.
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2016 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 3
Emmett can not find out. She needs to go see jasper so he can point her in the direction of jack. I wonder what jack does for a living??
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2016 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh my goodness! Jack & jill! I love it! I don't think they are going to be coherrant enough to get each others real names.