[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2016 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 12
I want Emmett stung up by his gonads! He is sabotaging her home and putting the safety of her unborn children at risk.
Is Edward's unhealthy obsession with his beautiful patient and her unborn twins the reason why he seems to be driving passed her neighborhood so frequently?
He is being offered the position of the Knight in Shining Armor due to the frequency of his appearances.
Date: 31 Mar 2016 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 11
oh my Jasper is having too much fun razzing Edward. Poor B. Hope they find each other soon
Date: 31 Mar 2016 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 10
Holy Crap!!! Royce will be getting a lawsuit I see in the future. As if I didn't already want Em dead. Lying POS
Date: 31 Mar 2016 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 9
the motorcycle doesn't bode well. I don't think its E's. They both like to make assumptions about weddings it seems.
Date: 31 Mar 2016 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 8
Poor b. Gladesme was there to help her
Date: 31 Mar 2016 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wonder how long till Alice and Bella meet up. Nice Jessica I like it. Lol twins
Date: 31 Mar 2016 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh no poor Bella!! Good luck with the surgery and hope it goes well. Can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 31 Mar 2016 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love this story. How many chapters will this story have?
Date: 31 Mar 2016 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 11
Love reading Edward's POV. Hope we get it again sometime during this story.
Date: 30 Mar 2016 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter. I'm happy that Jane turned out to be Edward's sister. Maybe Rachel, Emmette and Rose could end up sharing a padded cell together. All of them are crazy.
Thanks for the update. I hope everything goes well with your surgery. Take care.
Date: 30 Mar 2016 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 11
Love hearing his point of view
Date: 30 Mar 2016 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh dear! When will they realize that they are Jack and Jill! She doesn't even know she's married yet! Somebody know, but I can't figure out who yet....
Good luck on your upcoming surgery!
Date: 30 Mar 2016 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 30 Mar 2016 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 11
I'm so in love with this story and good luck on your surgery take care xo
Date: 30 Mar 2016 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter.
Date: 30 Mar 2016 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 11
Best of luck with your surgery. Edward is looking for her but now he sees he wants Bella he is going to be so happy when he figures out she is the same one
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2016 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 11
I hope all goes well and don't hurry back til you feel better. READ YOU SOON😊
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2016 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 11
Edward remembers so much more than Bella does. He should give the number she programmed in his phone another call. Emmett's mischeif has come to fold. Good thing Edward is there to rescue her.
Sherry
Date: 30 Mar 2016 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh my gosh that makes so much sense but why did she leave she should have stayed with him. For a second Jasper almost figured it out but she had changed her look. Damn emmett and answered the phone he is going to fix the washer that the douche broke. Good luck with the surgery.
Date: 30 Mar 2016 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 11
So is the next chapter the chapter they figure things out. Please don't keep up waiting to much longer. I want her babies to be all right, and her and Edward to make a life together. I also want them to get Emmett. I hope that Jasper shows up to help Edward. Can't wait until Friday
Date: 30 Mar 2016 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 11
worried what em will do to b. he is pretty unstable
hopeefully e will get the marriage certificate soon
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2016 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 11
Wishing Kasi a speedy recovery from her hand and elbow surgery.
Edward's ex-girlfriend is a total disaster. How could he get himself so
tangled up with someone so heinous?
Edward's instincts are leading him in the right direction as far as his Jill is concerned.
Has Bella learned of Emmett's break-in to her home?
Date: 27 Mar 2016 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 10
Wow he is a bigger piece of shit that I thought. He has so many buying into his shit. So he meet Edward. I hope another letter comes soon to her
Date: 27 Mar 2016 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2016 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 10
Reading this chapter made my stomach hurt. Emmett is god-awful. I think this is the first fic I've not liked Emmett in. I feel even worse for Bella than I did before. She's gonna have her hands full as long as he is running free.
Sherry
Date: 26 Mar 2016 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 10
I am not sure what is with me, but I really cannot handle all this angst right now. I sure hope that that Karma comes around full force. I an struggling with this story right now. I LOVE your stories, but his evil is just too much.
Date: 26 Mar 2016 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 10
Emmett is a real ass, but we already new that. I hope Rose comes to her senses and finds out what kind of Asshole she has. Bella needs to wise up too, and start checking things out. I hope she sees her necklace and earrings on Roselie, and accuse her of stealing it. That way maybe Rose will know that Emmett stole from Bella, of course she will think that she is just lieing.
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2016 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 10
I thought Jasper had cameras installed as well as the security system......
Did Bella notice her jewelry was missing?
That the lockbox was tampered with and she was ripped off?
Why would Edward's mail be sent to Bella's home?
Date: 26 Mar 2016 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 10
Wow that was sooo fucked up. SCARY!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 25 Mar 2016 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 10
What a great chapter you have me really disliking Emmet
Date: 25 Mar 2016 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 10
OMG I can't even stomach Emmett! He is whiny, arrogant, self-entitled asshole! His mother more than enables him, she's clueless too! I almost couldn't stand to read just how delusional he is! Ugh! So Mr. and Mrs. E Cullen are going to rent Bella's house? Neither of them still know that he and Bella are Jack and Jill, do they? All he needs to do is take off his glasses and look at her and she will know....
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2016 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 10
What an asshole!!!!!!
Date: 25 Mar 2016 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 10
OMG!!! Emmett is a piece of work!!! Please tell me him and his mother will get what is coming to them???? Hmmmm what was the letter he tore up??? Can't wait to read EPOV.
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2016 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 10
Omg had he not ripped up that paper Bella would know she's married! God Emmett is such an asshole hopefully Bella soon realizes that he's been in the house and gets a new system and of course finds out shes married and her and Edward live happily ever after!
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2016 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 10
I really hope Bella notices right away and Emmett really is delusional on how things are that's for sure
Date: 25 Mar 2016 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 10
Geez emmett is an ass to put it politely lol look forward to Edwards pov xx
Date: 25 Mar 2016 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 10
Emmett is crazy psycho. He doesn't love Rose. He doesn't love any one but himself. He is breaking into Bella's house. That is how he is finding things out. Was it Edward or Jasper the called? I am thinking that the mail he ripped up was Edward and Bella's marriage certificate. Can't wait for more.
Date: 25 Mar 2016 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 10
That was super heart strong pulling... Damn!!! I really hope he gets what's coming cuzz there's no way our B deserves that. Omg, how horrible is Emmett???!!! Wants me to kick his ass and then some.... Gggrrrrrr haha!!!!
Date: 25 Mar 2016 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 10
OMG so that's what happened to their license!!!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2016 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 10
WOW!! I am really worked up about this chapter! They better get that antique jewelry back to Bella; how stupid is Emmett? Seriously? Please please please make Edawrd realize who Bella is soon (since i am assuming he doesnt at this point). GAH! I so love this and wish you would post like every single day.... yeah yeah i know that is unrealistic but STILL!!! <3
Date: 25 Mar 2016 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 10
Emmett is a delusional psychotic. I hope Royce turns out to be a good guy on this one if only to turn Emmett's ass into the authorities. I'm sure someone should be doing random checks on who accesses their clients homes....especially when Bella reports missing jewelry with no apparent break in....would love for Rosie to begin wearing the stolen jewelry & Royce recognizes it.
Seems like Edward was trying to find Bella.....can't wait for all the pieces to start falling into place. Wonder who will have the "aha" moment first!
Date: 25 Mar 2016 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 10
Didn't like Emmett before but now I feel like I need to bleach my brain. What a pig! Wait that is insulting to the pig. What a f***ng asshole!!!!!!
Okay, now I feel a little better.
Date: 25 Mar 2016 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 10
I hope Emmett gets his soon! I also hope Rosalie pays, too. Sure, she's being manipulated by Emmett, buy she's mean enough to Bella to deserve it.
Will Bella find out about Edward soon?
Date: 25 Mar 2016 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 10
Yikes, he's the just plain scary kind of crazy.
Date: 25 Mar 2016 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh my gosh Emmett answered when Edward called looking for her that sucks. Edward eats the exact thing Bella does. So that is why Emmett knows all that stuff about her that makes sense. Wow he is even more of a scum bag then originally shown. He could of walked away with 6500 but no he had to be a high roller. Emmett's mom is so snowed by his good little boy act. I can't believe he was Hibbing both of them birth control and then the meds for a miscarriage. He is the one that meeds the bad karma. So many times they could have learned the truth about the night in Vegas I wonder what the letter to mr and mrs e Cullen was.
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2016 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 10
OMG....Emmett is a pure scumbag!!!!
Date: 25 Mar 2016 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 9
Who was on the motorcycle? Was it in Word? Jasper is killing me with the sex doll. LOL. Can't wait for your next update
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2016 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 9
I think Emmett is a nut case. The man needs more than a restraining order to keep him away from Bella. I cracked up at 'Jill', though, I'm wondering if that name shouldn't trigger a memory for Bella. Edward seems like he knows more than he's saying, or acknowledging to himself at the moment. Looking forward to more.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2016 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 9
I feel sad that Bella is lying to Edward about being married. He's been nothing but kind, generous and attentive... Surely she's noted that he's only that way with her, right?? I know she's not that oblivious - she's a well-educated professional, for crimeny's sake! She's smart, is what I'm implying. Maybe her pregnancy brain is hindering her powers of observation...
I get why she'd think Edward's married to Jane, I'd have made the same assumption with the photo, Esme's chat and with Edward showing up everywhere with his sister-in-law. But she's straight up lying to him (by omission is still a lie), left and right. I just feel that the least she can do is take him into her confidence as a friend. She blurted out her life's woes to Jessica --her childhood-long bully-- at the first little sign of that bint's "compassion" at the hospital. Honestly, who is telling Emmett and Rosalie all of Bella's medical history, anyway? (HIPPAA might have something to say about that one.)
And Jasper gave her that huge clue about his brother-in-law --- and now with the blow up doll, JILL! Come. On. Bella. Think, girl!
(Can you tell I'm invested? I'm laughing at myself.)
I'm hoping somehow this will all come together when Jasper brings the subject of his poor friend Bella from Forks up to Edward in some capacity somehow. I mean, she and Jasper are pals now, right? And that'll probably be awesome when they or anyone connect the dots - whee!!! lol;)
I'm loving this adorable romantic misadventure. I'm enjoying all the crazy characters and their nutty back stories. Thank you always for sharing! ~RoseE. x
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2016 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 8
Ok i have to say I am starting to believe that Emmett and Rose know more about J & J J than anyone might think of. Either that or it is on crazy coincidence that copies of the marriage certifacte "should have been mailed (Emmett is going through Bells mail and only AFTER she returnns from Vegas is there mention of him that adamant about taking the house) as well as the likeliness of Rose going to the same doctor's office for her "pregnancies"? I might be reading WAY too into this. I also hope Tanya is really Bellas friend cause iy nice to see her not be a grabby jealous slut like she is typically portraid in TONS of fan fiction stories. I hope it isnt James either for the same reason. I get freaked out yet all mushy when he is a nice guy, totally OOC but the EVIL EMMETT is a new one as well. <3 Please post fridays earlier than later i can't sleep at night!!
Sorry this is in Ch 8 but i already totally reviewed the other day on this too **blush**
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2016 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 9
The jack & jill story is hillarious and completely brilliant the way you all worked it into the story!
Date: 24 Mar 2016 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 24 Mar 2016 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 9
I want to know if we are going to find out anything new that will get these two together? Also I believe the doll is for Edward. Who is Jane to Edward? Also why did Edward follow Bella home? IS he drawn to her but doesn't understand why? LOVE YOU GUYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 24 Mar 2016 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 9
Emmett is a piece of shit and up to no good. Charlie would love to have Jasper as a son in law but he will be happy to have him in Bella's life as a friend. I cant wait to hear from Edward
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2016 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 9
MG I cant believe she didn't immediately get the Jill reference and get a little ... RUH ROH. I am really anxious for the reveal as well.... im chomping at the bit for it!!
Date: 23 Mar 2016 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 9
is it bad that i really wnat E&B to be married?? and that they will toguehther?? and he finds out its his babys?!?!?1
cant wait till that chap!!!! :)
till next time :)
Date: 23 Mar 2016 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 9
Emmett is one stupid fucker to be mouthing off like that in court! The judge saw exactly how he is and rightly sided with Bella. I can't imagine how he will justify his behavior in his POV but will read it anyway. So Jasper is Edward's BIL?? When will Bella really see Edward's eyes. I hope she will know who he is when she does. What is Edward and Jane's marriage like? Can't be good....I hope it isn't!
Date: 23 Mar 2016 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 9
The blow up doll is priceless!! Isn't Bella wearing the ring around her neck on a chain? If so maybe Edward will see it soon.
Date: 23 Mar 2016 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 9
I would think Bella will put 2&2 together and figure out she is Jill, and Edward is Jack. Now that Jasper has got him a blow up doll and named her Jill. Why didn't Bella correct him when said something about her husband? Can't wait for Friday to get her.
Date: 23 Mar 2016 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 9
I am loving this story! What a fun way to get over the middle of the week slump, with an update! I am looking forward to the time when they realize they are married. That will be great! Thank you for sharing your talent :)
Date: 23 Mar 2016 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 9
What I don't understand is that to be married, your real names that have to be taken from your ID, should been in the marriage certificate, oder wise your married to nobody
How come they don't know? Where's the certificate? Doesn't a copy was mailed to each one?
Date: 23 Mar 2016 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 9
When are they finally going to know that they are married to each other...I sure hope before the babies are due.
Date: 23 Mar 2016 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 9
Emmett always sounds like a 2 yr old lol look forward to next update x
Date: 23 Mar 2016 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 9
Jasper is a hoot would love to see him interact with Edward
Date: 23 Mar 2016 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 9
Charlie loves jasper that is too funny he want Bella to be with him too bad he is married. Jill that is crazy that it is her alternative wife she. Just does not know it yet. Oh edward on a bike and she got caught checking him out. Edward now think james is her husband even more. That was sweet he feed her. Oh my Inside Emmett's twisted brain can't wait.
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2016 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 9
I'm sure Charlie will have a say in Bella's rejection of gun shooting and safety lessons with Jasper.
Will Bella figure out a link between blow up Jill and the inscription on her ring?
Did Edward confess to more than enjoying the singing when he said he liked Baby Spice?
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2016 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 9
Hey Emmett there's a bus leaving in 10 minutes...be UNDER it!
Date: 23 Mar 2016 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 9
Every time Edward mentions her husband I just want to shake her! lol I'm not sure how she plans to explain her lack of husband at the delivery... Though hopefully she won't have to!
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2016 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter but aargh......Bella should tell Edward there is no husband or let Jessica let it slip.
Edward is obviously attracted to Bella. Bree?? Omg - her hubby needs to make an appearance!
I love the anticipation for when they finally realize they are Jck & Jill but.....The waiting is tortuous!
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2016 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 9
Emmett is certainly not afraid to let his CRAZY show. And how can Bella and Edward still think each other is married (to other people)? I didn't think people could miscommunicate that much.
Date: 23 Mar 2016 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 9
Loved Charlie and Jasper.
Date: 22 Mar 2016 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 8
Edward is such a good guy and doctor.
Date: 21 Mar 2016 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 8
This is a very clever storyline . Keep up the great work !
Date: 21 Mar 2016 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 8
I really like this story! Can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 20 Mar 2016 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 8
The Q& A was very helpful!
[Report This]Date: 20 Mar 2016 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 7
I love that edward isn't going to have missed much of the pregnancy since he is her doctor.
Date: 20 Mar 2016 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 20 Mar 2016 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 8
lollol I forgot Jake was the bartender from that night!!!!
Date: 19 Mar 2016 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 8
OMG Emmetts mom is a real winner I think Edward almost hit the bitch. Esme likes Bella right off . I cant wait till they figure stuff out.
Date: 19 Mar 2016 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh I can bet that one of her girlfriends is feeding Emmett info, on what going on with Bella. I hate to think that Tayna, is the one, but I'll bet it is one of them from the shop. I know Edward said he seen Emmett mother when they came in but how did she find out what room Bella was in? I know that hospitals, don't give that info out freely. I know this because 2 of my daugthers just had babies in the last 6 months, in different hospitals, in different states. One of the hospitals was lock up and you had to be on the list of visiters.
Date: 19 Mar 2016 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 8
OK JAKE WILL BE BACK ???? AND WHEN
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2016 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 8
I'm dying for them to figure it out already.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2016 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 7
I'm a bit confused, Jasper said Edward was getting an annulment, doesn't that mean he knows the name of the woman he married? He has the marriage certificate or something? I'm almost sure Edward knows he 'married' Bella. I can hardly wait for him to realize she isn't really married.
Sherry
Date: 18 Mar 2016 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 8
Loving this story
Date: 18 Mar 2016 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 8
I suspected much of what you wrote in your Q and A at the end of this chapter. It's good to see Jessica is now a reformed bully. Emmett's mom is someone I never hope to see again! Poor Bella! I hope she can keep food down soon! I forgot all about Jake the bartender! I now wonder what he has to do with the story.....thanks!
Date: 18 Mar 2016 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 8
I try and ignore or forget jake any way shape or form. Emmett's mom is a piece of work. I like the saying douche canoe. Love james and then edward feeling over protective of Bella. They are so cute they are both thinking the other is married. Can't wait to see what else happens.
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2016 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 8
Thanks for answering two of my questions. And the others as well. It has filled in a few gaps in my thought processes.
Now you two had to go and mention Jake possibly re-entering the mayhem.
I thought Charlie was supposed to pop in to see his daughter and future grand babies?
Will Bella tell Charlie about Renata's hateful visit? He should suggest a restraining order against that old bat as well. Jessica needs to speak up as a witness to the stress caused to her patient by Mrs. McCarty.
James was sweet taking care of Bella. Are the girls still coming to visit? Will they find Dr. Cullen carefully tending to Bella as she sleeps?
Esme answered my question about twins being on Edward's side of the family.