Date: 20 Mar 2016 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 23
You are so mean. Meanest person in the entire world. Please update now. As in right now. Please
Date: 20 Mar 2016 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 22
Loving this story.
Date: 20 Mar 2016 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 23
Epic, your writing is so great. I will be waiting by my in box until third installment. Thank you madam heartoftwilight.
Date: 20 Mar 2016 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 23
Holy shit! Can't believe you ended it like that...I hope and pray you have already started part 3, the wait is going to drive me crazy. I can't wait to see what happens next!!!
Date: 20 Mar 2016 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 23
OMG!!! I cant believe you just left us hanging!!! lol well i hope the third story is up soon!!!
Date: 20 Mar 2016 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 23
You stop there, seriously. You're kiiling us. Great chapter.
Date: 20 Mar 2016 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 23
Evil woman. Good, but evil
Date: 20 Mar 2016 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 22
Only one. Ore chapter? What is the name of the next installment? The next one has to be be huge right? I can only imagine. Great job.
Date: 20 Mar 2016 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 20 Mar 2016 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 22
awesome chapter it was hot and beautiful
Date: 20 Mar 2016 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 22
So will Maria be getting together with Carmine or his father???Guess Elizabeth got Sean's lucky charm. Lol!!!
Ah Bella is starting to get tired is there a little mafia prince or priness in her belly???
What do you mean only 1 more chapter left
KEEP WRITING!!!!🚒🚑🐰
Date: 20 Mar 2016 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 22
Happy for Sean and Elizabeth.
Bella is pregnant?
Date: 19 Mar 2016 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 22
Glad for Sean and Elizabeth. Happy for Maria, too! Hope no one but the bad guys get whacked next chapter! Edward feels something bad is coming!
Date: 19 Mar 2016 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 22
:O :O bella is preggos :) :)
Date: 19 Mar 2016 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 22
Great chapter. Hope Edward listens to his gut feeling that something is wrong.
Date: 19 Mar 2016 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it!
But just one more chapter? Waaa! Waaa! Haha
Date: 19 Mar 2016 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 22
Xoxo for the update
Date: 19 Mar 2016 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 21
God this chapter is perfect, they are now available to rule. To me Charlie and Jessica must be watched, especially Jessica she will be trouble. I can only say maybe trouble, Edward and Bella will take on anyone.
Date: 18 Mar 2016 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 21
Whole lots of love
Date: 17 Mar 2016 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 21
Love this story from the beginning and I'm looking forward for more interesting chapters. Please keep up the good work.
Date: 16 Mar 2016 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 21
I love Edwards reaction to Bella's tattoo placement ideas.
Date: 14 Mar 2016 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 13 Mar 2016 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 21
awesome chapter
Date: 13 Mar 2016 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 21
Love these two, and love all the pics!
Date: 13 Mar 2016 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 21
Really great chapter love your stories so much x
Date: 13 Mar 2016 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 21
Great chapter as always. Soooooo! Can we expect a third installment to this possibly never ending greatness???? It would be such a shsme to not be able to follow..... Bella's pregnancy and the birth of thee future"HEIR" 😊 ( just a thought.... he he he ) READ YOU SOON.
Date: 13 Mar 2016 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 21
Good chapter although short . Keep up the great work !
Date: 13 Mar 2016 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 21
amazing as always! can't wait for your next update!!!
Date: 13 Mar 2016 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 21
I like this fiction.
Je vous remercie.
Date: 13 Mar 2016 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 21
What?? The ending!!!! NO!!!!!!! I am notready for this to end but I guess all great things must come to an end.
Date: 13 Mar 2016 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 21
Wonder when Edward and Sean will find out they are fighting the same person .
Can't wait for the explosions!!! Does Edward and Bella need fire fighters, paramedics or heck I teach and do swift water in the coven cause I do all three. Me and my crew can figure out fires and patch the team up.
KEEP WRITING!!!🚒🚑🍀
Date: 12 Mar 2016 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it cant wait for more
Date: 12 Mar 2016 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 21
I do so love this Mobward and Mobella story. I'd love to know where you got the idea for the Coven tat? Looking very forward to MORE!
Hard Hugs
Dinia/Carol
Date: 12 Mar 2016 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 21
Don't know why but was kinda expecting a picture of a young Andy Garcia, who I think to this day is still hot. Glad it wasn't as I don't want him to wind up a bad guy. Oh yeah, go Sean! Love his irish ass.
Date: 12 Mar 2016 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 21
Excellent chapter, I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 12 Mar 2016 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 21
Awesome.... :) is there going to be another part.
Date: 12 Mar 2016 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 21
Great chapter!
Date: 12 Mar 2016 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 21
It was great to have a peaceful chapter before the fireworks start again. Love all the pictures you picked for this one.
Date: 11 Mar 2016 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 20
So Charlie makes an appearance wonder if he finds about Bellas new life or even care when he does
Date: 11 Mar 2016 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 20
Jessica isn't very smart. It was a beautiful funeral.
Date: 10 Mar 2016 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 20
OMG....really Lol and the plot continues to thicken......
Date: 10 Mar 2016 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 19
Good lord that was gruesome.... but well deserved love your story 😍
Date: 10 Mar 2016 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 6
I love how you put bound to the family in there as the movie the ladies were watching so perfect
Date: 09 Mar 2016 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 20
I had hoped Elizabeth and Sean would get together. Jessica will cause a bit of trouble, I hope Jasper is looking for her, she knows to much it seems to me that she is a loose end that should be tied up. Great chapter, great pictures.
Date: 08 Mar 2016 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 18
Love the story but I wish for more Bella and Edward.
Date: 07 Mar 2016 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 20
Nice touch at the end with Jessica hiding in forks
Date: 07 Mar 2016 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 20
Interesting chapter. RIP Lisa:( can't wait to see what jessica and charlie do and also bella and edward having a baby...so excited for that.Clo you are an amazing writer and I can't wait for your next update. Update soon!
Date: 07 Mar 2016 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 20
I like very much this chapter, thank you.
Date: 07 Mar 2016 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 20
Wonderful update. Post more quickly please.
Date: 07 Mar 2016 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 20
Another great chapter can't wait for the next
Date: 07 Mar 2016 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 20
OMG!! I love it!!! :)
Date: 06 Mar 2016 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 20
Glad Lisa got a good farewell. . Nice that e is giving Sean a chance. . Can't wait for Jessica to get caught
Date: 06 Mar 2016 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 19
You reap what you sow, he got what he deserved!!!!!!!!!
Date: 06 Mar 2016 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 20
I love this story and can't wait until the next update!!!
Date: 06 Mar 2016 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 19
WOW!!! Thats all I'M saying!! Well done.
Date: 06 Mar 2016 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 8
Awwww!!!!
Date: 06 Mar 2016 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 7
Jacob deserved everything he got!!!! Oh no!!! is AV Aro or Alec??? I guess we shall see!!!
Date: 06 Mar 2016 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 20
can't wait intill bella find her in forks let the game begain lol
Date: 06 Mar 2016 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 20
So excited to get this update . Glad Elizabeth is giving Sean a chance. Can't wait to see what is going on with Jessica.
Date: 06 Mar 2016 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 20
Great chapter! Loved that poem. Is it really Irish? wish I could have read that at my husband's funeral 7 months ago!
Author's Response:
Yes it is really Irish. Also my full first name is the River Goddess in Ireland. So sorry about your husband. Blessings to you.
http://www.appleseeds.org/Irish-Blessings-Prayers.htm
Date: 06 Mar 2016 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 20
fantastic chapter so emotional
Date: 06 Mar 2016 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 20
Hmmm. I'm going to have to go back and read the first part of this. For some reason I thought Charlie was dead. I can't wait for an update. Great chapter.
Date: 06 Mar 2016 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 20
Jessica is in Forks and has run into Charlie!!! Will she become Bella new step mother????
Bets are up if so!!!
17 say yes
13 say no
KEEP WRITING!!!!🍀🚒🚑
Date: 06 Mar 2016 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 20
It feels like the end is co ing soon.
Date: 06 Mar 2016 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 20
Thank you for the update! Ive been missing you :D
Loved the chapter :D
Date: 06 Mar 2016 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 20
loved it, Jessica is by charlie
Date: 06 Mar 2016 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 06 Mar 2016 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 20
I am really enjoying this my friend I hope see B & E have a baby and.E & s get together soon please.
Date: 06 Mar 2016 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 20
:) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
Date: 06 Mar 2016 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 20
Cant wait for more
Date: 06 Mar 2016 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 20
I think the baby is on his or her way now. Great chapter, as always. Thank you.
Date: 06 Mar 2016 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 20
Sad chapter but glad Sean and Elizabeth are opening up to each other don't look promising for jess look forward to next update. Ps . Is the chief bellas Charlie xx
Date: 06 Mar 2016 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 20
The return of Jessica. Should be good.
Date: 06 Mar 2016 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 20
Beautifully done as expected. Poor Edward just humping away at his task. *snickers*
Date: 06 Mar 2016 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 20
Happy times and sadness. Jessica sure is smarter than we thought except for ending up in Forks. Great chapter Clo!
Date: 04 Mar 2016 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 19
i love this story. i was reading it on fanfiction. i'm so glad i still have the chance to read it. hope you update really soon :)
Date: 02 Mar 2016 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm slightly afraid of you! lol lol
I don't get my jolly's reading torture but I never skip over those parts. In mafia stories, torture is pretty much a requirement. The torture in this chapter is fascinating since it came across more as a ceremony instead of just a slice an' dice good ole time. Good job
Author's Response:
I am so glad you saw it that way, because that is how I meant for it to come across. Each person had a reason for what they did. Thanks for a great review.
Date: 02 Mar 2016 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 19
I read your first story Bound and Dangerous and love it. This sequel is wonderful I love your story can't wait for the next chapters.
Date: 01 Mar 2016 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 19
What about Roberto Cortez now? Aro didn't tell them anything about Aro's plot concerning Isabella. 0_0
Date: 28 Feb 2016 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 19
I am so sorry it took so long to read but getting the crew together with my kindle cause TWCS isn't on my phone and this week has been us going to other fire stations due to deaths of firemen. I had to lock up my Kindle in my locker and forgot to take it.
OK now that Aro is dead Elizabeth and Sean can talk and get together but some us think Bella should have killed him since he was her father and he didn't give crap about her. She should have said and done something since she is the Donna.
KEEP WRITING!!!!🚒🚑💓🍀
Date: 27 Feb 2016 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oui, Aro est mort, Il est une bonne chose.
Je n'aimais pas nécessairement la torture mais je comprends qu'il est la coutume des gens de la mafia.
Il est un bon chapitre.
Merci. Bisous.
Date: 26 Feb 2016 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'd have shoved all kinds of stuff up his ass and down his throat!
Date: 26 Feb 2016 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 19
A well deserved death sentence for aro and mike. Jessica's next
Date: 26 Feb 2016 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 19
I really enjoyed Aro's torture. Now I'm scared cause I don't know what that say about me. It was awesome. I love ur attention to details. I can't wait to see what they do to Jessica. I love that u did a Dom/Don is the best. Thanks