[Report This]Date: 01 May 2010 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 28
omg that was awesome i am so glad they are moving forward i so want them together forever so keep it coming i await the next chapter
Date: 01 May 2010 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 28
I love this story! I really do hope you write a sequel! It's wonderful!
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2010 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 28
Great chapter! I am glad they had some fun together.
Date: 26 Apr 2010 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 27
Loved it love Edward such a sweet heart cant wait for the nxt chapter
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2010 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 27
please tell me that he will ask her to go to seattle with him and that they will be togetehr i don't want him to leave her in la and them not together i wanted them to have him ask her to marry him please go that way i await the next chapter
Author's Response:
I can't give too much away... but Bella will find out where Edward wants to go in the next couple of chapters.
Date: 23 Apr 2010 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 27
Edward should have told her as soon as he decided what team he wanted to play for. I can't imagine she won't be pissed.
Date: 20 Apr 2010 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 26
Awesome loved it can't wait for the nxt chapter
Date: 20 Apr 2010 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 26
Love this story! I hope you write a sequel!
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2010 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 26
So mean to stop it right there.
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2010 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 26
omg that was awesome i was so excited for them now it gets down to the real test for them hopefully they will discuss his choice and they will start being a couple now i really want a happy ending for them so let it roll i await the next chapter you are a great writer
Date: 16 Apr 2010 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 25
awesome loved it cant wait for the nxt 1
Date: 14 Apr 2010 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 25
enjoyed the chapter!!
Date: 13 Apr 2010 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 25
Yay! This brings a smile to my face, I can't wait until the next chapter! I already know Bella & Edward win, but i really wanna see how they handle their life after teh show. Please hurry! :D
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2010 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 25
MOOOOOOORE! :D
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2010 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 25
Great chapter cant wait to hear their scores.
Date: 11 Apr 2010 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 3
Aww=) I like this story =)
And I feel like this Bella is very pretty, maybe because of the dancing..
Looking forward to read some more =)
Date: 09 Apr 2010 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2010 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 24
i am so excited for them hopefully they will be together forever after the dance show i want them to win and then tour and then fall in love him going to seattle and her going there to open a clothing line store and bw with him vze13yama@verizon.net
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2010 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 24
Looking forward to reading about their "proper date".
Date: 08 Apr 2010 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 16
that was cute what is the meeting about? i wonder how Bella feels not knowing about the meeting.
Date: 07 Apr 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 23
Hi I just wanted to say that your story is awesome!! I just watched this week's episode of DWTS and it's just awesome how it reminded me so much of your story (this week they did the waltz and paso doble) and I kept picturing your Edward and Bella doing the dance and ... yeah. It was great! Keep it up! :o)
Date: 06 Apr 2010 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 23
loved it
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2010 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 23
omg this is getting really good i can not wait and she said earlier in the story if he goes to seattle she could go there and open her own clothing line and dance school i think that would be great and they could be together for the long hall i am hoping for a happy ending of wedded bliss keep me posted on next chapter vze13yama@verizon.net
Date: 05 Apr 2010 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 23
Hey what happend to the "I Love You" from chapter 22. I love the story by the way, but what happend with that.
Author's Response:
I left it at that on purpose. Don't worry, it'll come back up in the next few chapters. We're not done yet. ;)
Date: 05 Apr 2010 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 23
Awe I hope you do a sequel. It would be interesting to see how their lives are affected after the show and Edward has to go back to baseball!
Great chapter though! Can not wait for more! :)
Date: 04 Apr 2010 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 22
OME loved it so amazing...love the story so far it's epically awesome can't wait for the nxt chapter
Date: 04 Apr 2010 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it
Date: 04 Apr 2010 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it
Date: 04 Apr 2010 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it
Date: 04 Apr 2010 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 18
Awesome loved it
Date: 04 Apr 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it
Date: 03 Apr 2010 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 22
LEMONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 03 Apr 2010 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it
Date: 03 Apr 2010 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 15
Hey r so freaking cute love them & love the chapter
Date: 03 Apr 2010 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 14
Awesome loved it
Date: 03 Apr 2010 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 13
OME awesome loved it
Date: 03 Apr 2010 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 12
They kissed sooo cute loved it
Date: 03 Apr 2010 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it
Date: 03 Apr 2010 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 10
Soooo sweet & cute loved it
Date: 03 Apr 2010 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 9
They r so cute loved it really funni
Date: 03 Apr 2010 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 22
Great story, I love the interaction between them and properly won't be the only one that recommends a lemon
Date: 03 Apr 2010 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 8
Awesome loved it
Date: 03 Apr 2010 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it
Date: 03 Apr 2010 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 22
I want a lemon! I'll be sad to see this end? A sequel in the works? Awesome chatper! Can not wait for more, you're updates are amazing btw. I love how fast you update! It's fantastic.
:)
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2010 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
love DWTS, can't wait to see EDWARD and BELLA dancing. thanks.
Date: 03 Apr 2010 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 22
Noooooooo I can't believe you left it there! I want to know what is B going to say. And I have a question are they going to do IT or not XD
Date: 03 Apr 2010 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 22
I'm all about the citrus but only add it if you feel it will benefit yor story which I am enjoying immensely by the way.
Date: 03 Apr 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it awesome
Date: 03 Apr 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 22
im starting to tear up!
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2010 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 21
omg this is getting so good please tell me they will be getting it on now lemons away and then tell me that he will tell her he loves her and her tell him the same and then if he goes to seattle she can go also
Author's Response:
No lemons. Sorry, this story is primarily rated T. I only put an M rating cause of my swearing. There will be more intense stuff though. You'll have to wait for the next few chapters.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 3
awesome loved it
Date: 02 Apr 2010 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 2
loved it awesome
Date: 02 Apr 2010 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 21
Glad things seemed to work out after Rose's interference.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 21
aww.. to whoose house? and will she be okay with that in the morning?
Author's Response:
She'll be okay. ;)
Oh, thanks for the forum. Umm, I can't access it... am I not supposed to? I'm sorry I'mvery new to this site... so I don't know what to do.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 21
aww.. to whoose house? and will she be okay with that in the morning?
Date: 02 Apr 2010 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 21
aww.. to whoose house? and will she be okay with that in the morning?
Date: 02 Apr 2010 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 21
aww.. to whoose house? and will she be okay with that in the morning?
Date: 02 Apr 2010 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 17
LOL oh yeah she is pissed.. I would be too..
MEN!!!!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 17
LOL oh yeah she is pissed.. I would be too..
MEN!!!!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 17
LOL oh yeah she is pissed.. I would be too..
MEN!!!!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 21
Awe loved it! <3
Date: 02 Apr 2010 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 16
hmmm don't know if I like the sound of lunch... what does jasper want to talk about?
Date: 02 Apr 2010 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 15
aww that was so cute!!!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 14
LOL I love you have asked for DWTS faves! LOL Shame I don't get to see the American version.. we have our own here in Australia but yeah it would mean jack shit to you! Although Kim who is over there now... basically had a similar affair with one of our male celebrities.. and it was very HOT!!!!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 14
LOL I love you have asked for DWTS faves! LOL Shame I don't get to see the American version.. we have our own here in Australia but yeah it would mean jack shit to you! Although Kim who is over there now... basically had a similar affair with one of our male celebrities.. and it was very HOT!!!!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 14
LOL I love you have asked for DWTS faves! LOL Shame I don't get to see the American version.. we have our own here in Australia but yeah it would mean jack shit to you! Although Kim who is over there now... basically had a similar affair with one of our male celebrities.. and it was very HOT!!!!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 13
LOL ha ha ha ha ha ha.. that was a great chapter.. I am smiling huge!!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 12
awww.. sexy.. that was hot.. nice nice nice...
Date: 02 Apr 2010 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 12
awww.. sexy.. that was hot.. nice nice nice...
Date: 02 Apr 2010 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 12
awww.. sexy.. that was hot.. nice nice nice...
Date: 02 Apr 2010 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 11
Awww.. I love their chemistry.. it is great..
Date: 02 Apr 2010 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 10
LOL you have done your home work I like it..
Date: 02 Apr 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 9
I like he didn't do it perfectly very realistic.. thank god! LOL
Date: 02 Apr 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 9
I like he didn't do it perfectly very realistic.. thank god! LOL
Date: 02 Apr 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 8
lol and again with the music!!! brilliant
Date: 02 Apr 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 7
I liked that it was cute and you can see it growing as she normally doesn't hang out like that.. very good..
Date: 02 Apr 2010 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 6
okay I am going to feature your story on TWCS I am loving it.. thanks for writing it.. do you want a forum for it I can put up the link and put it up if you would like..
Author's Response:
Ahh sure. You can do that if you want. A forum for it is cool too. I'll sign up for an account to the forums.
Thanks for all your help. :)
Date: 02 Apr 2010 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 5
LOL you are even putting the songs they are dancing too.. wow that is commitment!!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 5
LOL you are even putting the songs they are dancing too.. wow that is commitment!!
Author's Response:
I figured some of you might be curious. :)
Date: 01 Apr 2010 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 4
LOL really enjoying it..
Date: 01 Apr 2010 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 3
awww.. that is so cute.. I felt awkward for him LOL
Date: 01 Apr 2010 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 3
awww.. that is so cute.. I felt awkward for him LOL
Date: 01 Apr 2010 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 2
LOL I like that she doesn't want him cause he would waste her time and not take it seriously.. that is funny.. and probably oh so true!
Date: 01 Apr 2010 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
ooh nice first chapter..
Date: 01 Apr 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 20
That really wasn't Rosalie's place to say anything to Bella. She should have talked to Edward about it and told him to talk to Bella. I can see the wheels turning in her head already.
Author's Response:
No, Rosalie shouldn't have done that, but she's nosy. She had good intentions, but it wasn't her place.
Thanks for reading!