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Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

oh emmett...

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great chapter...he was much calmer than I sure I would have been

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

I would completely flip out and then I would be devestated!!  I have a daughter who basically failed 9th grade this year, which means she'll be a year behind her twin brother until she finishes credit recovery!!!  It's been difficult to say the least, but I have my fingers crossed (and cracking the whip) to get her back on track. 

I can't wait for the next chapter!  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

Can't wait to see what yall do with this story. 

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love that Emmet is Edward's son that's going to be vary funny

Reviewer: dalejrfan0276 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

The start of this story is really good, I think that Edward handled things with Emmett really good, it's a hard situation and he handled like any parent would, if it were my kid I would have lost my marbles.  I am looking forward to the rest of the story and especially how things go between Edward and Bella.  I have to say older Edward/younger Bella is on of my favorites.  Update soon.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

I don't it would have been possible to not know your child was about flunt out of high-school.  But, I have to stick around to see where this goes.

Reviewer: branlc Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

I think Edward handled it pretty well. He seems like a good dad even though his son needs a good swift kick in the rear. 

Reviewer: FeelingBella Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great start... I kinda hate Emmett's behavior, maybe it will change!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wonderful!!

 

CAN NOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER :D

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

Excited to see how this one plays out.

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

Thanks good chapter 

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

Went through that with my daughter. In California, parents are notified by certified mail. Like students can all be trusted to bring a note home. Why did the school allow football

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

good start. surprised he was still able to play football consider he was failing

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow that is bad to fail every class wow and what he said I would have done just the same and taken all electronics away

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2015 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

look forward to reading. thanks

Reviewer: Angelmagnet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2015 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

Edward is a great Dad, he has good friends and so far, I can’t
wait to find out what happens next.  He
made a marriage promise, boy, that was a bad idea, especially with Rose.  LOL, ok, now that’s funny.  Pretty sure that’s not gonna happen.  Emmett seems sweet, a little clueless, but sweet. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2015 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

:) looking forward to reading this 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2015 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

You guys are probably among the fewest authors who tempt me to start a WIP. This one sure has some potential! Sounds to me as if Emmett needs what his dad is dishing out right now. His attitude definitely needs adjusting!

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2015 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

Em what the hell?  Ignoring a problem doesn't make then go away. Edward is trying. Ugh. Good story. 

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2015 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

Le sigh. Io e y'alls stories. I've read almost all of y'alls stories. Many more tham once. So far my favorite is still Diamond Dolls Kitty Cave. Cracks me up. Best name for a "genteman's club" ever. So looking forward to the unfolding of this one.

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2015 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

Rose and Edward? Ewwwww. 

Emmett got a appropriate punishment. Edward is a great dad.

Reviewer: robstenize Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2015 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

love it! cant wait for more :))

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2015 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting premise! I like it and look forward to more!

Reviewer: dap Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2015 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is going to be interesting. All your stories are.

Reviewer: maggiegurle Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2015 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

LOL. Gotta love Emmett! Good start....

Reviewer: mom23xx Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2015 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

How did the school not notify him ever?

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2015 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

I have total faith in your writing.  That said, this story line is one that balances the edge of exciting/cliche precariously.  What I do not understand is why Edward would make a deal like that with someone he met at work and can barely tolerate.  I too had a deal like that when I was younger and we never needed to fullfill it  But it was with someone I could have married easily but we both knew there was probably someone better out there for us.  Was this a joke that just escalated?  I just d knot see this as tangible.  As for Emmett, I would have chewed him a new asshole before implementing the summer homeschooling.  That said, I also would have been checking in on my own.  I do this now and it bugs my daughter to no end that I Email her teachers and ask for updates or other random things.  But I have kept her in line and it was worth it.

Reviewer: Suzanne Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2015 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

I always love your guy's writing! This will be no different!😘

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2015 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

I say Edward handled Emmett a whole lot calmer then I would have. He is doing a good job. I already want to hold Edward, he hasn't had the easiest time has he?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2015 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow Lame school to have not actually called.   Not to mention he wouldn't have been allowed to play football without a minimum c gpa, but I'll forget about that.  LOL

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