Date: 08 Aug 2015 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 12
While I have enjoyed your story and will keep it on alert . I think I will wait until it is complete because I am to impatient for a slow burn.
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2015 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 12
Wow it's like they can't help it they just get closer and closer to each other without realizing it and I am happy he is not dating Tia and that she was right there with him on the friend thing
Date: 08 Aug 2015 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 12
Great chapter.
Date: 08 Aug 2015 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
I don't think it will be easy for Edward to convince Bella to let him pay for college. I also worry about her writing that letter to her parents. It might make things worse.
Date: 08 Aug 2015 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 12
I think Bella is devious. While Edward feels guilt and remorse for his feelings, it seems like Bella likes playing him. As for the college plans she seems to have things in order. Maybe she should write a letter to her folks like he suggested
Date: 08 Aug 2015 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 11
Emmett needs a few more slaps upside his head!
Date: 07 Aug 2015 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 11
Yay! following you on TWCS now, because who wants an edited chapter?! hehe....nah, I understand about needing to comply with FFn's TOS. Loved this chapter -- more and more pieces added to E & B's puzzle, and we get to see Emmett's childlike side. I love the "mom" moments that Emmett and Bella share at times, so she should be able to slip right into that role quite well ;-) And Christmas holiday coming up -- can't wait!!! ho ho ho 'fo 'sho!!! LOL I love the frequent updates - thank you!!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2015 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 11
To pass another test of physical torture and patience will be on Edward's Christmas wish list.
Did Bella make that bear for Edward? Or for someone at the place she volunteers?
Emmett is a bit over the top for a nineteen year old where Santa is concerned.
Is Emmett buying sex toys for Rosalie?
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2015 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 11
I really think Emmett is trying to set them up. He does these crazy things to push them more together. I even think that Bella might know what he is doing. I could see Emmett picking her out for his dad since he is leaving for college.
Date: 06 Aug 2015 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 11
You know you could just move her out of that house and they would never know. Perhaps just get her a new phone and wait and see if they even care.
Date: 06 Aug 2015 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 11
I loved the 50 shades reference! All my friends were telling me "You have to read it! It's so hot!" My response was always the same "It was poorly written when it was Twilight FanFiction and all they did was change the names. I've read WAAAY hotter stuff!" Haha!
Lula
Date: 06 Aug 2015 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 06 Aug 2015 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 11
Bella and Emmett are not a real couple right?? Edward is so lost about what to do. Her parents are assholes straight up not cool.
Date: 06 Aug 2015 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 11
Bell's egg and sperm donor are not parents. Emmett needs to tell his dad that he thinks Bella would be good for him!
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2015 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 11
I'm not getting a boyfriend/girlfriend vibe between Emmett and Bella.
Date: 06 Aug 2015 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 11
Ok so Emmett didnt even care that Edward was in the same bed as Bella!!! They are definitely not together!!! What is the story there??? Oh No Edward is going to pull away and try and stay away from Bella, That is never a good idea!!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2015 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 11
Thanks good chapter
Date: 06 Aug 2015 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 11
Poor Edward.... to be so in love with and watch her with his son. Being terrifed to hurt Emmett..
Damn poor guy!
Date: 05 Aug 2015 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 11
Who's the bear for hmmmm I wonder
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2015 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 11
Poor Bella her parents are awful but will Edward and Emmett makes Christmas better for her update soon
Date: 05 Aug 2015 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 11
I can't wait for them to get together.LOVE IT!
Date: 05 Aug 2015 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 11
Emmett is much more smarter than how he's been acting lately. He has a plan, a twisted weird plan, I just wonder how much of Emmett's plan does Bella know about.
and Christmas... It's going to be interesting and clean... Inguess someone will be needing many showers....
Date: 05 Aug 2015 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 11
It's more and more complicated for poor Edward. Great chapter. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 05 Aug 2015 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 11
WHEN ARE BELLA AND EDWARD GOING TO KISS ?
Date: 05 Aug 2015 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 11
Christmas break is going to be sexually frustrating. LOL.
Date: 05 Aug 2015 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 11
Poor Edward. He has it so bad for her. Emmett is a clueless doufus! I can't wait to see how you bring E and B together....
Date: 05 Aug 2015 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 11
Emmett is such a little boy, with that sitting on Santa routine! Santa was kind of a perv, by the way! The terip to the adult toy shop was embarassing for Edward, but the teddy bear place was sweet, especially when Bella had him kiss the heart! I'm thinking, she may have bought that for Edward! Can't wait for Christmas at their house! Bella's parents just keep getting worse, don't they? Cats treat their kittens better than she is treated by her parents!
Date: 05 Aug 2015 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 11
dying to know what is really up between em and b
Date: 05 Aug 2015 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter poor Edwardv
Date: 05 Aug 2015 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow Em is acting like he's 5. Makes me wonder why B is with him.
Date: 05 Aug 2015 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 11
I usually read & review on FFN, but when you saw there's "more" to the chapter 3 come here. I can feel Edward's emotional pain. I feel so bad for him.
Date: 05 Aug 2015 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 11
She is giving Edward that bear for Christmas.
Date: 05 Aug 2015 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 11
Now there is a really thin line between them.....
Date: 05 Aug 2015 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 10
Jasper is on to them
Date: 03 Aug 2015 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 10
I think Edward is gonna fall asleep and Emmett is going to find him in there with Bella. Can't wait until the next chapter.
Date: 03 Aug 2015 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 10
what am I going to say. She needs parents. Edward is there and loving to Emmett she is confused. I Know fan fiction and all of that... Just saying
Date: 03 Aug 2015 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 02 Aug 2015 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 10
hmm Wondering if Bella's and Em's deal is more of an arrangement. The animal shelter thing is cool. I volunteer at one on weekends.
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2015 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wow they both can't fight what is between them but will Edward end things with Tia
Date: 02 Aug 2015 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 10
The energy and longing between them is palpable! Now they need to fess up to whatever is happening with she and Emmitt, what plutonic relationship and why?!
Love it! Thanks for the update :)
Date: 02 Aug 2015 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter.
Date: 02 Aug 2015 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 10
Rose seems jealous of her.
Date: 02 Aug 2015 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 10
Some people see the stuff between Bella And Edward...
Date: 02 Aug 2015 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 10
Wonder what was up with rose
Date: 02 Aug 2015 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 10
For some reason I'm not getting the feeling Em and Bella have a normal girlfriend and boyfriend relationship. Seems like he is just protecting her. Maybe she is helping keep girls off Emmett back.
Date: 02 Aug 2015 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 10
I love this so much! I just want B and E to get married and have babies already.Am I making myself clear? Just kidding.NOT!!!!!! Love Ya P.S. EDWARD not EMMETTE
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2015 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh man...this is building to be a crazy interesting story! I'm loving the suspense you put us in waiting to read what's next to happen between Edward and Bella. Well done, I love this story!!!
Date: 02 Aug 2015 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 10
I vote for them being so comfortable that he falls asleep, too and Emmett finds them in the morning! Jasper is right about one thing, Edward needs to let Tia know how he feels about her! It's not fair to string her along if he he just wants to be friends!
Date: 02 Aug 2015 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 10
Jasper knows but I feel Emmett has a secret
Date: 02 Aug 2015 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 10
Bella said Emmett loves Rose. Yep, I called that. Rose is jealous. Jasper knows, so pretty soon everyone will.
Date: 02 Aug 2015 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 10
If Jasper has noticed who else could have noticed.
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2015 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 10
I'm not convinced that Bella and Emmett have the relationship everyone thinks they have.
Can you give me a hint of which chapter explains Rose's part? I honestly can't remember reading about her.
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2015 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 10
Thanks good chapter
Date: 01 Aug 2015 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 10
He needs to kick Tia to the curb. surely she should have figured out by now that he isnt interested in her? Are Bella and Emmett really dating or are they just close friends?
Date: 01 Aug 2015 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 10
Trouble with a capital T
Date: 01 Aug 2015 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 10
I'm really thinking Rose and Emmett have something going with her looking hurt. They just all need to sort stuff out so no one gets hurt.
Date: 01 Aug 2015 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 10
I can't see how this can end with Bella together with Edward...without hurting Emmett. I'm sure you have a plan, but it's well hidden from me. I am eager to see how you accomplish this. Kudos to Jasper for seeing the elephant in the room. He's right and Edward should gently move away from Tia....
Date: 01 Aug 2015 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 10
It's not easy to see his son"s girlfriend, to love her and to have to stay away from her. I like this fiction very much. THank you for this great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2015 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh Edward is so head over heels it's not funny, but he should let Tia go already that's not right.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2015 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh my poor poor Bella her parents are so selfish how could they do that to her now how long will Edward be able to hold himself back with Bella because he is slipping up more and more
Date: 30 Jul 2015 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter, as always, thank you for sharing.
Date: 30 Jul 2015 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 9
Can we have a bella POV chapter? PLEASE!!!! she has to know that there is something going on
Date: 30 Jul 2015 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 9
Her parent are ass holes. Someone needs to lay claim on her Edward is the man for the job lol
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2015 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 9
Maybe Alice wasn't talking about Rose!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2015 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 9
Ugh, so frustrated with Bella's selfish parents! I don't understand how someone could treat their child that way? And I have felt from the beginning that somethign is off with Bella and Emmett's relationship. Are they really together and having sex, or is there something else going on with their relationship...maybe they are just good friends who are pretending to date? I don't know, it just seems like maybe they're together for a mutually beneficial reason, but I don't believe they're in love.
And Alice is quite irritating pushing the whole Rose and Edward thing...I would really like that to be resolved...those two would kill each other.
Anxiously waiting for Edward or Bella to make a move and Emmett to meet his true soulmate so that Bella can move on!
Date: 30 Jul 2015 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 30 Jul 2015 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 9
Tia is going to see what Edward feels for Bella. Everyone else already knows it's not going anywhere.
Date: 30 Jul 2015 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 9
Emmett looked at Edward funny when he mentioned taking Bella out on a date? Glad Edward went to get Bella.
Date: 29 Jul 2015 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter...poor Bella
Date: 29 Jul 2015 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 9
Love this I can't wait for saturday!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2015 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 9
Oh Thanksgiving will be interesting indeed!
Date: 29 Jul 2015 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 9
What will Emmett do when his dad steals his girl away.....?
Date: 29 Jul 2015 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 9
We need to hear what Bella is thinking in regards to Edward
Date: 29 Jul 2015 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 9
Loving it thanks
Date: 29 Jul 2015 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 9
At least Edward has admitted in his mind, that Bella is way more than his son's girlfriend! Now he needs to listen to Rose and let Tia down gently! Hope nothing too bad happens at dinner!
Date: 29 Jul 2015 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 9
Bell's parents are awful! That's so heartbreaking! Don't know what Edward is gonna do. Emmett is gonna be devestated!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2015 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 9
I feel so sad for Bella
Date: 29 Jul 2015 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 9
I am so sad for Bella.
Date: 29 Jul 2015 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 9
Bella is smart. She probably heard the slip and wanted it to be true.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2015 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 9
I think she has feelings for him too. They both shared it in this chapter. I also think bella is tutoring em and he is acting like her gf while in highschool. I also think bella knows em is dating rose behind the scenes too. So she still acts like the gf in front of everyone. I can say her parents are showing her no respect. My question is this are they really together or are her parents just saying that. So they can see other people without letting bella know.
Date: 29 Jul 2015 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 9
Agree that Tia and E need to have a talk. hmm Em's reaction to him telling Em to tell B that he loves her is interesting.
Date: 29 Jul 2015 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 9
The weird thing is I know there will be no cheating, but there is still Emmett and what are Bella's thoughts?
Date: 29 Jul 2015 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 9
Oh I loved this line that Edward said "So when we get married you won't invite them over to visit us on Thanksgiving?"
Loved that her called her MINE, now to just to get Bella and Emmett to break up and Tia gone. And Rose to back off, then to get Jasper and Alice on board..
Dang, thats a long review. Is the new chapter up yet??
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2015 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh dear, these two so need to be together. Emmett and Rose should run off therefore leaving the coast clear. lol
Date: 28 Jul 2015 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 8
I think Emmett might be in on this scheme. He has to hear her talking.
Date: 28 Jul 2015 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 8
I don't think Bella and Emmette are dating. I want Edward and Bella together soon please. Love Ya
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2015 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 8
Did Emmett approach Rosalie? Is that why she seemed more happy than usual as the party was winding down?
I think Rosalie knows that Edward's heart is taken by the sweet young Bella.
Jasper even recognized the suitability between Edward and Bella was more accurate than between Emmett and Bella.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2015 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 8
I honestly forgot what part Rose plays in this story so I'm going to have to back up to find out.
Something about Emmett and Bella's relationship seems off to me. I can't recall if they've been openly affectionate or heavy PDA.
Date: 27 Jul 2015 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 8
Wow Newton def needs to be reported for nepotism and for picking on Bella and Em.
Date: 27 Jul 2015 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 8
Emmett has to know something is up if she's talking in her sleep!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2015 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 8
Love it can not wait for more.