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Reviewer: maggiegurle Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2015 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 20

Karma, karma, karma. I think most all of em need a little bit to bite em on their butts. Newton & family a whole lot more though! 😁. U go girl! (Tia) Next..... 😉

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2015 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 20

Newton and his daughter need to take plenty in their faces and asses. I just hope Tia is able to sue them. Great chapter, as always. Thank you and till next time.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2015 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 20

The Newton pair are such slime balls I am sure Tia will take care of them. I am glad Bella is in the hospital so she can get the nutrition she needs.  Wow twins that is awesome.  I hope we don't have to deal with Bella's parents any more now that the house is sold they can be out of her life for good. 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2015 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 20

It never occurred to me that there was anything up Tia's sleeve. I thought she was just being a good friend to both Edward and Bella.

I sure hope that Bella does something about the way Newton treated her. She is of legal age and he can't legally put her father's wishes over hers. He should get punished also for not doing anything about his daughter harming Bella! I get that Bella just wants to let it all go and get on with her life, but right is right!

Twins! Wow. I think that's good news for them, isn't it? I'm glad they worked out some things here and hope the rest fall into place just as easily.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2015 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 20

I have my fingers crossed that Tia knows how to get at Newton and make it look like anaccident! Then she should slap hell out of Kate for bullying Bella! I think Edward is really thrilled about the babies, and will soon have Bella convinced! Things aren't perfect, life never is but I'm seeing a light at the end of the tunnel!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2015 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 20

I hope that Tia has some dirt on Newton and/or his daughter.

 

Twins? Awesome!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2015 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 20

:) 

Reviewer: dap Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2015 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 20

Things went well. They got a lot of things straight. What is Tia up to?

Reviewer: AMRA Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2015 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 20

Twins... Wow! I can hardly wait to see what happen next.

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2015 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 20

Great chapter, I hope Edward makes sure Newton and his brat both get dragged out of the school in cuffs. 

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2015 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 20

Yay twins. Can't wait for Karma to catch up with Mike and his demon spawn. Glad Bella and Edward got to talk some

Reviewer: FeelingBella Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2015 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 20

I really love how this story is going... I'm curious how it all goes further! :)

Reviewer: yagalinus0420 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2015 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 19

Here we go....NOW her parents care...Newton's always been a douche...but I get the feeling he'll be a jobless one soon! If not...hope they end up moving somewhere else!

Reviewer: 2loveybunnies Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2015 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 19

Wow, I didn't realize this story was set in the 1950's!  Not sure where Edward got his stats and information about gender differences and age but he sounds absolutely ridiculous with what he spouted off to Rose about men and women and maturity levels.  We knew Edward was a bit of a throwback based on earlier chapters, but this seals the deal.  I understand he's upset that Rose is so much older than Emmett, but he is doing the same thing with Bella.

It's not the age differences or the pairings that bother me, it's the way the Emmett lied and made Bella lie (not necessarily forcing her but he knew she had nobody else in her life and he used her vulnerability for his own gain!).  Emmett is the biggest selfish idiot and douche in this story!  And I question Edward's parenting abilities if this is how his son turned out....first a mean bully, then a user and a liar.  And bringing Rose into his father's house and having sex with her (tying her up, no less!) - wow, what poor judgement Rose has too!  She's really immature and has questionable judgement....did they not think Edward would come home at some point?  WTF?

I honestly don't blame Bella for what happened, but Emmett and Rose were wrong and both handled this situation poorly. Even Edward tried to stay away from Bella and hide his feelings for his son's sake and probably wouldn't have acted on them if things hadn't hit the fan with her asshole father.  He acted selflessly and put his son's needs ahead of his own. 

And Rose, well aside from her poor judgement, is a mean, condescending, selfish, and nasty woman who only thought about herself.  First she was going to force Edward to stick to his agreement to marry her when they turned 40, and now she knowingly and willingly seduced his son!   I would seriously question her motives and her committment to Emmett at this point.  He's 19 and she's 40 - is she really going to wait for him to finish high school, go to college and get a job (i.e. finish growing up?!).  And what about children?  What if Emmett wants kids some day?   Yes, there is a total double standard for men and women, and society accepts older men and younger women much more easily than they do the reverse.   While perhaps scandalous, Bella and Edward being together will be more easily accepted by society, and they can have children and a family.  But it will be a much tougher road for Rose and Emmett, since she is so much older than he is, and eventually his wanting a family in 5 or 10 years could hamper their relationship since it will be more difficult or impossible for her to conceive.  I just speculating here because I don't know how much Rose and Em have talked, but I definitely see a tougher road ahead for them than I do for Edward and Bella.

And as for Newton, well let's just hope Emmett uses his ammunition against his stupid daughter and her friends.  Not sure how your laws work there, but he can't expel her from public school because she's pregnant.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2015 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 18

Thank God that there is finally some truths coming out. It is time for honesty. 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2015 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 19

Double standards from a male perspective will never go away. Due somewhat in part to the physical differences between man and woman. Men are built to withstand more intense labor, to be the hunter/gatherers. Women softer to attract the male and continue the human species through live birth. Very rudimentary really. Knowledge begins to clutter the basics of the human life cycle.
Tia was even more perceptive than Rose to Bell's plight. A good friend to both Edward and Bella.
Emmett seems to be getting off easy for his part in this whole mess.
I want Emmett to release all the dirt he has on each of the students as retribution for Bella being expelled!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2015 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 19

hoping newton gets fired and someone kicks kate's ass

Reviewer: FeelingBella Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2015 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 19

WTF?!!!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2015 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 19

I thought this chapter went well, but I am more concerned about the next.  I know Edward wants to kill Newton slowly, but if he goes off, the only ones that hurt will be Bella and Edward.  They need him to be fires and caught being the skeezy MFer he really is.  And maybe his delinquent child too.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2015 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 19

I can't believe this I hope Bella gets the strength to go after the Newton family and finally stand strong as she really is. And Edward let Rosalie and Emmett off to easy he should still be upset over the lies and deceit and hurt they caused Bella by being selfish. I loved it. Update soon

Reviewer: mayi Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2015 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 19

Newton needs to loose his job!!!!

 

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2015 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 19

Thanks good chapter 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2015 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 19

Newton is going to be sorry for what ever he did. I think Edward is right about the age thing to a point.

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2015 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 19

NNewtin is such a jerk. So glad they finally got together.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2015 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 19

Someone needs to kick Mike's ass.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2015 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 19

I knew Bella would not abort her baby. I think she and Edward will work things out, even if they have to move.  Edward is old fashioned when it came to his reasoning for Rose and Emmett not being together.  I hope Edward whips Mike's butt. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2015 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2015 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 19

Finally the truth came out all the way around.  Edward's age anology was something else.  I think Rose should go take care of Newton.  She will finish it once and for all.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2015 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 19

Talk about an action packed chapter! Everyone's secrets just came tumbling out into the open! I'm really kind of glad it's all come to light, they will all four deal better that way. Now, on to what to do to Newton! Something slow and extremely painful,I'm thinking!

Reviewer: maggiegurle Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2015 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 19

I think everyone needs a good kick in their ass! Especially Charlie! 😠 Great chapter. Next........ ;o)~

Reviewer: Suzanne Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2015 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 19

They need to talk, but she needs to let him in and give him a chance. They both have some obstacles to face, but if they work together, they can be one! Wonderful story, excellent chapter!💖

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2015 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 19

Solution: MOVE!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2015 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 19

So glad everything is out in the open!

 

Hope Edward can knock some sense into Newton!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2015 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 19

Edward's age difference explanation was totally ridiculous!  I was laughing all the way through reading it! It is a typical man brain logic, though, I'll give you that!  I guess I did forget Edward and Bella's one night of drunk sex. So it IS his baby and will be Emmett's brother or sister.  I'm gonna kick Newton's ass here. What has he done now?  I'm really loving this story.....

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2015 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 19

Great chapter...wouldnt want to be Newton when Edward gets done with him  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2015 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 19

Newton is an ass 

Reviewer: Vampqueen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2015 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 19

Bella should complete her schooling by distance education, whilst living with Edward.  Newton needs a swift kick in the pants , preferably by Rose. Maybe Emmett could make sure that 'info' he has on the kids gets out. Still waiting for Bellas parents to get a big dose of Karma.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2015 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 19

Mercy!!

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: dap Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2015 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 19

I totally like all four of them right now in spite of all the misunderstandings and deceptions. I especially like Tia.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2015 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 19

Excellent chapter, thank you.

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2015 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 19

Really Rose trying to blame Edward? This is all on you and Emmett more than anyone else. Newton is gonna get it

Reviewer: heartfortwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2015 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 19

Great update....can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Jdonovan09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2015 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 19

Love it 

Reviewer: saint_kitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2015 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 18

I don't want until Wednesday to read that Bella kept the baby.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2015 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 18

Emmett not only abused Bella when he taunted her but also by not admitting to using her as a tutor. Then he avoided his own consequences by withholding Rosalie's name as his girlfriend. Has he learned nothing in this entire mess?
I'm glad Tia is there for Bella.
Edward has a lousy track record of how he becomes a father.
Charlie and Renee are unbelievably selfish.

Reviewer: Suzanne Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2015 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 18

Incredible story!😘

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2015 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 18

Finally Edward let em come clean. Em is in love with Rose?  Edward seems destined to repeat history again but with the right girl. 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2015 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 18

Thank you for Tia. I hoped she ran there for help. Charlie and Renee abandoned her. I bet she did not get the abortion. She ran away when he left.

hurry up Wee I have surgery 9-1 and I hope to read again before then.  selfish I know.. Luv u

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2015 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 18

I hope the plane goes down with Charlie and Renee on it they do not deserve there happy ending. That was to crule sorry.  I am so glad Bella is with Tia and Emmett told him most of it but when is he going to tell him about Rose?

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2015 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 18

I am very angry with emmit. Granted, he is young but he said he wanted to change and do the right thing but yet, he resorted back to being a coward when Bella really needed him to be honest and true for her and his dad. Since Bella is 18, I hope she discontinues/sever any and all contact and relationship with Charlie and Renee. She obviously doesn't need them. She has been taking care of herself for years. If necessary she can get some state funds for herself and her baby-I'm sure she wouldn't need to hopefully with Edwards eventual help. She can also finish her school online and doesn't have to deal with all of those losers/bullies at school, wish she could do more against them...

I'm sure rose also has something to do with emmit keeping quiet as well so she needs to get some blame here along with emmit. Looking forward to Edward and Bella reuniting for their HEA... Btw, love how Bella is such a lovely girl but I wish she wouldn't allow her parents to push her around esp now that she is an adult and out of their home.

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2015 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 18

OH I CANT WAIT !!!!!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2015 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 18

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2015 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 18

Great chapter you connected most of the dots think Emmet knew his dad could only take so much.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2015 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 18

Emmette finally manned up,about damn time! I think we allknew the baby was Edwards and she went to Tia's. Edward was an asshole to Bella last chapter. I hope he begs her for her forgivness.Emmette is an asshole for being a bully and lying and being a manwhore and for not telling Edward about Bella.The only nice thing Emette did was buy Bella some new clothes.I wonder when he's going to tell Edward about Rose?What a loser Emmette is.   Christ your such a great writer. You bring out emotions in me I didn't know I had!   Thank you for sharing your gift with us.    LOVE YA!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2015 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 18

OOMGosh!  Finally it is all out in the open, we'll at least everything with Bella and Edward,  nor so much with Emmett.  I can't believe that Edward did not think about it being his baby until Emmett told him. Bella's dad is a real jerk. I can not believe all that he said. I wonder if herreally feels the same way. They are a lot worse than I thought they were.  Can't wait for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2015 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 18

Omg! She's didn't have the procedure! I know it.

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2015 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 18

Oh wow he finally knows!! I really hope they talk and figure things out soon. Emmett needs to come clean too. You guys made my day since I am sitting in the hospital after having to have an unexpected caesarian with baby number 8. I was so happy to see he now knows about Bella. Great story as usual.

Reviewer: vamp_luvor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2015 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 18

OMG ....I love it

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2015 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 18

I didn't figure Tia into the equation but that was a good solution for Bella. I can't get over what a prick Charlie is. I hope we've seen the last of him.

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2015 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 18

Great chapter.  Glad Tia was somewhere safe for Bella to go.  I hope a house falls on Bella's parents. 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2015 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 18

What a messed up situation! I would kick Emmett's ass, except he's still a kid in many ways, so maybe I should kick Edward? He better get over to Tia's and hash this all out with Bella. They both need to hear the truth from each other! Then Emmett needs to man up and tell his dad he loves Rose! Then may I suggest that the two of them go beat the hell out of Charlie Swan? Perhaps yell at Renee for being the worst mother ? Just a thought!

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2015 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 17

I can't believe how clueless Edward is about everything. It's almost comical.

Reviewer: 2loveybunnies Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2015 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 18

Well, I am still holding out hope that Bella didn't abort their baby, and that eventually they'll figure it out.  Tia is a great friend to Bella and I'm stupified as to why she just didn't say in her voicemail that Bella was with her?  Why keep calling and not leave a damn message? No one in this story knows how to communicate!

I am still confused as to why Edward didn't press Emmett for details about "his girl" - that just doesn't make any sense.  I feel like Edward is in a coma and not thinking clearly!  The miscommunication and assumption level here is so ridiculous, its amazing that Edward managed to raise Emmett on his own!  Neither one of them actually SAY anything directly and explicitly! 

I almost take offense at the way those stupid teenagers behave and speak, and the way in which you deal with things in your country.  Quite backwards from how thing would be handled by our school systems here and by our social services and law enforcement officials.   It's insulting to listen to what Kate and her friends did and said, and then claim that they are American.  Those kids would be in jail or juvenile detention (depending on their ages)!

Edward needs to get his head out of his ass and have a direct and succinct conversations with both his son, and with Bella.  Stop beating around the bush and just say what you mean, ask the proper questions and get the REAL answers. 

As for Bella's parents, they should be in jail.  However, she is now 18 and a legal adult, so they have NO say over her, or what she does legally anymore.  But unfortunately, they don't have to take care of her either. 

Depending on which state you live in, statutory rape is only applicable if the victim is under the legal age of consent, which in most states is 17, and if there is a significant age difference between the offender and the victim.  Meaning that if a 17 year old girl has consensual sex with a 19 year old boy it is legal.  Usually, it could be applied if someone OVER the age of 21 has sex with someone under the age of consent (like a 16 year old girls and a 21 year old boy).  The age difference constraint may vary from state to state and sometimes the age span is different.  In some states it may be a minimum 5 year age difference between parties if one is a minor.  In Emmett and Bella's case, he would not be prosecuted for statutory rape if he had had sex with Bella if she was under age 17.  However, if Edward had sex - consensual or otherwise - with Bella when she was under 17, he could be prosecuted for statutory rape if she was 16, even if she said it was consensual because their age difference is greater.

But enough about our differences, because we all know the details don't matter because you're writing the story and the whole point of this is to get the people that love each other back together!  I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter because I expect a good, long conversation between Bella and Edward, and then a clearing of the air with Edward and Emmett so we can finally find out WHO Emmett is actually sleeping with!

 

Reviewer: AMRA Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2015 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 18

Great chapter... I can hardly wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2015 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 18

I have a feeling this is the first and only time I will say this Emmett is a huge douchebag if only he would not had been a selfish prick they could have been together and she would not have been alone and he could have taken care of her and got her away from her awful father.   But I hope now that Edward knows the truth he can clear everything up with Bella.  

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2015 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 18

It was about time Emmett tell the all story to his father.

Bella's genitors are really two fucked up people. They abandoned her one more time, but for good this time. I'm sure they have nothing prepared for her after the house is sold. She would have been thrown in the streets, pregnant and without any money.

I just hope Edward will take Bella home and help her getting through the pregnancy. Also, they could move out of this shitty hole of Forks and have a new beginning in a more friendly city where Bella could go to college. After all, Bella is more than 18 YO, she no longer "need" her parents to "take responsibilities" for her (not that they have before, as she was always alone taking care of herself).

 Difficult chapter, thank you for sharing. Till next time.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2015 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 18

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2015 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 18

Kinda figured that would be the story.  Jeez I really hate Charlie

Reviewer: 2loveybunnies Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2015 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 17

This is so fucked up, I can't even believe it!  What kind of place is this town?  What is wrong with these people?!   And what the hell is going on with law enforcement?!   That would never have happened in the U.S. - there is no way they would not have taken both Charlie and Edward into the station in handcuffs immediately when it was so clear that Bella was injured and bleeding!  THey never would have let her go with Charlie!  That is negligence!  Yes, it's a domestic issue, but her life could be in danger and they would have arrested both of them on the spot.

I totally understand that this is a story about misconceptions and misunderstandings, but it's getting really ridiculous that Emmett and Bella are both hiding a huge secret and Edward has no clue what is actually going on.  I'm not really sure why Bella is covering for Emmett?   He obviously has another girl (who I assume is Rose), but why is he hiding it from his father?  Why the elaborate ruse that they're a couple and in love? 

And I have to say that if Bella doesn't get the hell out of her father's house ASAP then she deserves whatever she gets.  She is obviously pregnant by Edward, and she's an idiot for not telling him the truth. They are in love and should be together, especially now.  It sounds like Emmett might suspect that Bella and his father are involved, but I don't understand WHY he isn't confronting him, or telling him the truth about Rose?

Not quite sure how you're going to get them out of this jam, but I'm anxious to find out!

 

Reviewer: thegr8stofthese Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2015 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 18

Dayum...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2015 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 18

Charlie and Renee win the prize for being the most horrible, undeserving of a child, parents ever in the history of Twilight fanfiction stories. What they continue to do to Bella should be a crime and end them up in prison. That being said, I'll not waste another word of thought on them. I'm sorry to say I forgot about the drunken one night stand between Edward and Bella. I hope he can make her and himself happy by finally being with her now. Emmett should have fessed up sooner, but he did now and that's a good thing. I still say his girl is Rosalie. What a pair this father and son are. Not anything bad, but certainly unusual in their tastes in women. I like it! A lot. I hope Edward won't be too angry when he finds out. How could he? His situation is the reverse of his son's and I hope he sees it that way. Thanks for writing such an interesting and entertaining story!

Reviewer: heartfortwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2015 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 18

Great, great, great update. Thank you so much.  I just wanted to let you know that I am promoting your story at the of my current chapter.  Again thanks for the wonderful update.

Reviewer: maggiegurle Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2015 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 18

All the men in this story are tools. Hope both Bella and Tia rip Edward and Emmett a new asshole, and the baby is fine. Is it Wednesday yet? ;o)~

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2015 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 18

Oh that goodness she went somewhere safe poor Bella I hope her and Edward have a long talk and work it all out

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2015 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 18

cant wait till wed :)

Reviewer: FeelingBella Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2015 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 18

And my gut feeling is telling me the baby is still there! And when is Rose back!

Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2015 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 18

This story is truly amazing!  I love how everything connects. Can't wait for the next chapter! 

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2015 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 18

I'm hoping Bella didn't go through with it!

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2015 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 18

Well his head was spinning.  Loved it!! Cant wait for Wednesday!!

Reviewer: Vampqueen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2015 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 18

AT LAST!! I just want to hit Charlie,  what a selfish SOB. Tia is proving to be a great friend to everyone 

Reviewer: Devils Fate Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2015 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 18

I hope Bella's tells him to go climb a tree and then jump. Actually I hope she tells both Cullens to do that. I also hope it was a false positive. Because of he actually wants a future with Bella he will need to convince her he wants her for her and not because he knocked her up

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2015 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 17

It's time for the truth.  Bella needs to find her backbone and talk to Edward and tell Charlie to leave like he always does. 

Reviewer: Angelmagnet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2015 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 17

OK, enough is enough.  Time for the truth to come out.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2015 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 17

so good

Reviewer: Onlooker59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2015 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 17

Well isn't this one giant clusterfuck! Your heart just breaks for them. I find myself so angry at Emmett. It's been weeks and he sees how much they both are suffering and still won't come clean. Plus when he sees how abusive Charlie is he does very little to help or protect her. I'm guessing with Edward in his current state he has forgotten that Bella was a virgin when they had sex. I have a feeling Bella is going to wind up at Tia's house. Can't wait for the moment Edward realizes that baby is his!

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2015 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 17

Thanks good chapter 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2015 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 17

Charlie needs the shit beat out of him poor Bella is so lost .  When is Edward going to find out the baby is his and when is Emmett going to tell him he knows?????????

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2015 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 17

No dont stop here :( Cant wait for more!!!

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2015 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 17

God this is just one giant cluster fuck. Edward got Bella pregnant and he doesn't even know it. Emmett won't come clean for some dumb ass reason that he and Rose are together and Charlie is an abusive asshole who doesn't seem to care at all about his daughter! Like what the fuck! First of all Edward is a god damn idiot for not clarifying with Emmett on who his girlfriend is and instead of just straight up asking him why he doesn't spend any time with Bella he just keeps skirting around the truth and its pissing me off! People need to get their shit together and their priorities straight because god damn it Bella is pregnant and for some reason she hasn't told Edward that he is the father! like what the fuck! I know she may be scared but damn girl sit his dumb ass down and tell him what the fuck is going on! Saturday better come quickly like I mean hella quickly! Okay end rant! Happily ever after it always happens but jesus people are stupid especially Edward for thinking that sleeping with Bella never happened like you are a moron Edward a moron.

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2015 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 17

I LOVE THIS STORY  PLZ DONT LET THEM HOLD IT IN . THEY NEED EACH OTHER   PLZ

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2015 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 17

It's Edwards and he's acting like such a dick.I thought he loved Bella? I really despise Edward right now,and I hurt for Bella.Emmette had better man up and tellthe truth for once.Can't wait until saturday.      LOVE YA!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2015 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 17

No one loves that girl. Sorry Wee but you have let us believe Em was her boyfriend. Even though some of us don't think so.  I think Edward got her pregnant. That is what I think. Charlie may beat her to death because she messed up His plans. They don't love her.

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2015 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 17

Oh my goodness 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2015 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 17

yikes, what a clusterfuck 

Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2015 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 17

Wow! This entire situation is a mess! I wonder if Emmett knows who the real father is. His comment towards the end of the chapter leads me to believe so.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2015 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 17

Wow psycho speem donor and lazy cops.  Wonder if charlie will throw her out now esp since shes 18

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2015 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 17

Oh my poor Bella and Edward has no clue the baby is his why won't Emmett just tell him it is making matters worse update soon I need to know what is next 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2015 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 17

Can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2015 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 17

Wow, we learned a lot in this chapter.  Bella 's dad is a jewel......not. Can't wait for Edward to figure out that he is the father of her baby.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2015 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 17

WOW!  Charlie is horrible!  Edward is blind as a bat! 

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