Date: 25 Sep 2016 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 25
Yay new chapter
Date: 24 Sep 2016 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 25
well that was just wonderful!
Date: 24 Sep 2016 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 25
That was hot! He got so turned on watching her get off. I wonder how much of her he got on film. It obviously took a lot out of him as he came and came and came and dozed off after.
Date: 24 Sep 2016 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 24
OH MY GOSH! YES!!! :D Will you be posting those pics on here for us to see what you imagine it to look like?
Date: 19 Sep 2016 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 23
OMG.....why most you tease me so.......I love it!!!
Date: 19 Sep 2016 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 24
I just spontaneously combusted!
Date: 18 Sep 2016 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 24
Give him an inch and he takes a mile. Lol
Date: 18 Sep 2016 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 24
Love this so much cant wait for next update
Date: 18 Sep 2016 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 24
oh yes. what a thing for me to read, first thing in the morning! that contraption Bella put on sounds fascinating. Can't wait to read them in action, using it! Thanks for this story. It's a doozie!
Date: 18 Sep 2016 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 24
Oh my...what's Bella going to do
Date: 18 Sep 2016 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 24
Your killing me
Date: 18 Sep 2016 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 24
Edward was totally turned on at the thought of Bella using the harness with the dildo in it on him. Funny that he asked her about a drink so he could get away and take care of things. I'm sure he was very turned on seeing her wear it. I wonder if there will be some action after Edward posts those pics on his blog. Or will he post the action on his blog too. That's so hot.
Date: 18 Sep 2016 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 24
She'll probably end up agreeing after he assures her of anonymity. I bet his blog might explode after posting it.
Date: 12 Sep 2016 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 23
So pegging is all about physical pleasure. There's no romantic making love. It's all about giving Edward an unbelievable orgasm, and maybe giving Bella pleasure at the same time using the right toy.
Date: 12 Sep 2016 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 22
He wants, needs to be pegged but it sounds like he will love her regardless. I think she will do it because she loves him. But if she doesn't enjoy it will that be enough for him? Can he live with that?
Date: 12 Sep 2016 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 20
Edward really did react to Bella's use of the word kinky. The way she said it made it sound negative. He's afraid that she will find her participation will horrify her.
Date: 12 Sep 2016 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 19
Edward got turned on thinking about his blog and what it does to her. Their conversation should be interesting. I bet he remembers talking to BBS.
Date: 11 Sep 2016 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 23
Love Love your story Can not wait to read more!
Date: 10 Sep 2016 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 23
I'd say she was open to try pegging. Especially if the strap-on had a built in clit stimulator! I've hear of those, but never seen one. Over all, this is quite an arousing chapter! Thanks!
Date: 10 Sep 2016 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 23
Lucky beyotch.
Date: 10 Sep 2016 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 23
Ahhhhhh you tease you tease
Date: 10 Sep 2016 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 23
Holy SHIT!!!!!! Is all I can say.....
Date: 04 Sep 2016 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 22
yay! that couldn't have gone better! fabulous! on to the pegging....just kidding. I'll wait!
Date: 04 Sep 2016 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 22
Dang it to SHORT!!! Need more please!!!!!!
Date: 03 Sep 2016 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 21
great story
looking forward to more
Date: 31 Aug 2016 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 21
Oh wow hurry up and update i want to see her reaction!
Date: 29 Aug 2016 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 21
YAY! :) I'm sure that Bella will not yet be fully up to it, but I'm also sure that she will try playing with Edward and he will SO play with her as well :P *phew*
I think this brutal honesty is very important to their relationship and it will bring them SO much pleasure and trust.....
And BTW: My man is also not opposed to this stuff and it IS a lot of fun indeed, seeing him come apart like this! ;)
Date: 28 Aug 2016 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 21
I find it sad that what one considers normal is taboo to the masses. Don't knock it until you try it.
Date: 27 Aug 2016 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 21
Good for him! I'm so glad he told her. I think she might be open to this. I hope so! I also think he senses the same or he wouldn't have told her his story. Great chapter! Thanks.
Date: 27 Aug 2016 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 21
Your Killing me
Date: 23 Aug 2016 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 20
Ok I saw a rec for this fic in a different one and was hooked after the first chapter.
You write wonderfully and I really like the development of the story so far! Edward and Bella for once are quite normal people who act how real humans would. That Edward has some of the more special 'interests' that get him off is desribed very well I think, at least it feels like it.
I'm curious to see Bella's answer to his hidden enquiry - he does not know that he's going to probably have the time of his life coming up ;)
Date: 20 Aug 2016 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 20
Poor Edward! I feel for him. I think he wants her to peg him and is afraid she'll run away, screaming! I don't think she would, but I may be wrong. I love this conversation they're having, everything from the ice cream to sex! I wonder if he has been rejected before by another woman for this and that is why he's so skittish....great chapter!
Date: 15 Aug 2016 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 19
No! Just as I was getting to the good part 😫. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 15 Aug 2016 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 19
OMG!!!! I need a everyday update because ONCE a week is KILLING me!!!
Date: 14 Aug 2016 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh goodness yes
Date: 14 Aug 2016 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 19
Omg
incant wait for part two of this convo.
handled very well
Date: 14 Aug 2016 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 19
I think that went well! I half expected him to be embarrassed that she was one of his followers, but instead, her telling him make him come in his pants! Wow! That was awesome. I wonder what more there is for him to tell her? Can't wait to find out....thanks so much for both stories. I love them both for different reasons.
Date: 14 Aug 2016 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 19
Holy crap! Whew!
Date: 11 Aug 2016 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 18
Love it! The lemons, smut, and all. Can't wait for some of that link to finally reveal itself.
Date: 08 Aug 2016 4:55 AM Title: The Body
I love the story. I find it very interesting and a huge turn on. Thanks for sharing you story and keep up the awesome job
Date: 08 Aug 2016 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 18
ruh roh....
Date: 07 Aug 2016 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh, SNAP! I cannot wait to see his further reaction! :D
Date: 06 Aug 2016 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 18
He did get a bit upset when she told him she knew, but I hope her explanation soothed him. I thought it sounded reasonable. Good for them! Now he can be more himself with her! Good chapter!
Date: 06 Aug 2016 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 18
OH no!!!!! Leave me hanging here!!! Of all places! GAH! ANd for the restaurant owner, if i were a patron embarrassed like that, i would have not given them a damn dime!!! Its not like they were humpng on the table. Snicker....
Date: 31 Jul 2016 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 17
Cannot wait to see what happens next for these two!
Date: 30 Jul 2016 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 17
So now they're out at the office. Good! I wonder how he will take the news that she knows he is "The Body" and about his blog. He may not take it as well as she thinks he will, huh? We shall see. I think being straightforward with him would be best. Thanks for the stories you give us. I enjoy them all!
Date: 30 Jul 2016 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 17
So ready for this conversation she is going to have with him and how she plans on revealing that she knows about the blog
Date: 28 Jul 2016 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 16
Thanks for the outtake. So it belongs in between chapters 9 and 10, hence the name 9a? It is good to see what is happening in Edward's mind. I'm SO glad he blew off Tanya...
Date: 23 Jul 2016 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 15
I`m loving this story and where it`s going but so hope that they find their HEA together, cheers Lou
Author's Response:
They will I love HEA x
Date: 23 Jul 2016 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
As always another great chapter I think she should bring up the adult store and wanting to go😋😋😋
Author's Response:
Ok I'll think about that x
Date: 23 Jul 2016 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
I would wait and see if he 'fessed up on his own. It's a little early for deep dark secrets.
Author's Response:
But what happens if he doesn't tell ?
Date: 23 Jul 2016 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 15
I think that he is going to reveal himself to her soon. I don't think she will have to ask many, if any, questions about him before he reveals all. He is very into her and I think sees the potential here for a real relationship. I think maybe she should wait and let him tell her. Then she can spill that she has been watching him, I think. Just my opinion. As for your reader's concern, I do hope one day you write a poly story. I like to read them. I know you've already written That Night, which involved more than 2 people, but a true poly story where all 3 are in love and involved with each other would strike my fancy a lot!
Author's Response:
Do you think he will be annoyed if he finds out she has been a follower and not said anything ?
as for the poly story I'm throwing an idea around but I can't get the plot line to work as I want it so we'll see .
xxxx
Date: 20 Jul 2016 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 14
I hope that she is going to have the courage to tell him!
Author's Response:
She will be not quite yet x
Date: 18 Jul 2016 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 14
Mmmmmmm
Author's Response:
Good mmmm or bad mmmmm?
Date: 17 Jul 2016 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 14
So now she knows for sure! How exciting to know it's really him! I'm glad she decided to wait for him to tell her his secretes. She did, didn't s she? Thanks for the terrific chapter!
Author's Response:
Yes she is trying to decide how to tell him
Date: 17 Jul 2016 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 14
Very interesting story. Like it a lot.
Author's Response:
Thank you glad your enjoying it
Date: 08 Jul 2016 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 13
That was so amazingly hot it has me so revved up right now
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed it x
Date: 08 Jul 2016 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 13
you removed the one-shot? wasn't it part of this story? I haven't checked yet, but i will. I want to save this story once it's done and I want that O/S to be part of it....so maybe he still is the man in the video but has his ring out at this time? Still she would be able to see the hole for it to go through. I know this from personal experience with a pierced man....so this is a mystery! hot as hell, though. since you ended this chapter seemingly in the middle of a lemon, should I expect the finish of it next time? I sure hope so!
Author's Response:
Hi I have the one shot saved so you can have a copy don't worry. I don't know anyone who is pierced so I tried to goggle it . Does it heal up quickly if you take the ring out ?
Date: 05 Jul 2016 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 2
Bella gets acquainted with "the body".
Author's Response:
She is trying to x
Date: 05 Jul 2016 2:18 PM Title: The Body
I like this first chapter.
Date: 03 Jul 2016 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 12
Very cruel ! Very hot scene !
Author's Response:
Thank you so much more to come x
Date: 03 Jul 2016 12:38 AM Title: The Body
I would say that I think I might love u a little bit😝 !!!
Author's Response:
It's ok I understand it was very cruel. I'll update soon x
Date: 02 Jul 2016 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
So curl you have me so worked up😛😛😛
Author's Response:
I know but you know I'll see it through x
Date: 02 Jul 2016 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 12
Very cruel lol
Author's Response:
I know but you love it really x
Date: 02 Jul 2016 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 12
The cruelist! I'll forgive you because you gave us a lot this chapter and I KNOW you'll give us more soon!
Author's Response:
Very soon I promise x
Date: 02 Jul 2016 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 12
Exceptionally cruel
Author's Response:
I know I'm sorry ( not really he he) xx
Date: 02 Jul 2016 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 12
Just evil!!!!!! Can't wait
Author's Response:
Won't be long I promise x
Date: 02 Jul 2016 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 12
Yes! Very cruel! Lol
Author's Response:
I know sorry x
Date: 02 Jul 2016 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 12
Noooooooooooo!!!!
Author's Response:
What if I tell you the next chapter is so much hotter xx
Date: 26 Jun 2016 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 11
Great one
Author's Response:
Thank you xx
Date: 25 Jun 2016 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 11
what a sizzling chapter! yes, I think she is going to find out soon...unless he took his ring out to go dancing. I don't think so, so we shall see!
Author's Response:
As ever In tune with me !!!!
Date: 25 Jun 2016 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh my, er, what was the question? *wiping drool and other fluids*
Author's Response:
Just the response I was looking for x
Date: 25 Jun 2016 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 11
PLEASEEEEE update Super FAST!!!!! So DAMN good... In Need of new panties now!!!!
Author's Response:
Yes new panties all round
Date: 21 Jun 2016 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 10
Plz plz plzzzz let that be Edward dancing with Bella plzzz
Date: 20 Jun 2016 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 10
Nooo must have more
Author's Response:
Hopefully tomorrow x
Date: 18 Jun 2016 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh I sure hope it is Edward! I think he's taken with her as much as she's taken with him. He may even know she has guessed his secret. I love the way you described her outfit!
Author's Response:
Glad your enjoying it, I'm having a ball writing it x
Date: 12 Jun 2016 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 9
Let the fun begin
Author's Response:
Oh definiely x
Date: 11 Jun 2016 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 9
I don't know why I haven't been reading this all along here, but I am now. This site won't censor or delete anything for graphic content like FFn will.
So she finally gets a date, sort of, with Edward. How will she investigate the tattoo she thinks he has...? So glad his set-up with Tanya didn't work out!
Author's Response:
Sort of a date, it's up to them both now to make a move
Date: 04 Jun 2016 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 8
This is really a fascinating story with a different premise . Very good writing . I loved Deprivation .
Date: 04 Jun 2016 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 8
I hope we get to hear the ear full Charlie's going to get
Date: 26 May 2016 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 7
Love it as always
Date: 24 May 2016 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 6
Love the new banner and love the intrigue of wondering exactly what Mr Cullen has going on under his clothes!
Date: 19 May 2016 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 5
Need some more soon
Date: 14 May 2016 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 4
Very good chspter, all THREE versions of it!
Date: 12 May 2016 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 3
I hope you keep posting
Date: 07 May 2016 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow
Hot stuff from our Edward
Well done
Author's Response:
He seems to be pushing all the right buttons at the moment x
Date: 07 May 2016 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 2
Very fun fic so far. I like the premis, don't think I've read about this kink in a fanfic yet. Definitely will be looking for an update.
Author's Response:
I've really developed the story but the link will be the same x
Date: 06 May 2016 10:20 PM Title: The Body
Kinky!! :-)
Author's Response:
I know and I love writing it x
Date: 06 May 2016 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm curious to where the actual storyline will go. This chapter is a decent foundation for sure.
Author's Response:
It will follow the one shot
Date: 06 May 2016 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 2
HELL Yes!!! Can't wait love it
Author's Response:
Thank you x
Date: 06 May 2016 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 2
YES! THIS IS SO HOT! PLEASE CONTINUE. LOVE IT!!!!!!!
Date: 06 May 2016 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 2
Yes, please ! Very very hot!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review we'll see where this goes
Date: 06 May 2016 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 2
I was so excited to see a second chapter ... Again hope you write more hot hot hot
Author's Response:
I'll definitely try
Date: 04 Apr 2016 5:50 PM Title: The Body
Loved it hoping for more
Author's Response:
I am trying to see what I can do x
Date: 10 Mar 2016 1:10 PM Title: The Body
hot hot hot
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed it x
Date: 07 Jun 2015 1:18 PM Title: The Body
I now you set on my favorites list and for notifications of updates and new stories. That was hot!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much