Date: 26 Feb 2017 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 44
Gotta just say this story just keeps getting better and better love it xx
Date: 26 Feb 2017 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 44
Wonder who might have been spying on them. Could Aro, have someone spying on Bella so he can be CEO instead of Charlie handing over the company to Bella?
Date: 25 Feb 2017 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 44
ahhh.....I love these two and what they do to each other! what a lovely titillating chapter!
Date: 21 Feb 2017 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 43
Oh I love it heheheheheheh her dad makes me laugh though heheheheheheh more please
Hmmmmm I say doctor Oh and military yeah those would be great
Date: 19 Feb 2017 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 42
Yes, please do!
Date: 19 Feb 2017 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 43
greasy motor mechainc, can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 18 Feb 2017 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 43
I love my sailor boy...if only he had some tatoos. In the Navy, don;t they look great in dress whites!
as a second choice a marine in dress uniform will do.
Date: 18 Feb 2017 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 43
I really like the mechanic idea. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 18 Feb 2017 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 42
Yes please continue the storyline. I hope your other readers enjoy this escape into fantasy as I do. Please continue. Thank you
Date: 17 Feb 2017 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 42
I am curious if they'll continue to post on blog or if they'll stop after the final scene. I will continue to read as long as you want to carry on!!!
Date: 17 Feb 2017 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 42
Addicted to these two. Please continue
Date: 16 Feb 2017 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 42
Ooh yes please I love these guys, cheers Lou
Date: 16 Feb 2017 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 42
So the final shot on his blog will be of them together fulfilling his fantasy. That will be some video. I can just imagine the ecstasy that he will show on his face and the look on her face when she gives him that pleasure.
Date: 16 Feb 2017 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 41
Whoa that was hot! He knows how to work her body.
Date: 16 Feb 2017 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 42
Yes, Yes, And Yes!
Date: 16 Feb 2017 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 42
Yes Ms Aliciaw this has been a great story. I love all of your works. This Edward is so sweet . You are writing a wonderful relationship. Thank you.
FYI I am voting Daily for Deprivation to be fic of the year. Out of so many great stories I read last year Deprivation stands out as a favorite of mine which I read on this site-original plot, nicely developed characters and some really hot a** scenes. I am a fan of yours for life!
Date: 16 Feb 2017 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 42
I am happy for you to carry. I very much enjoy this story./
Date: 15 Feb 2017 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 42
yes keep going as long as they keep talking to you. this is a unique story in that there is nobody out in fanfiction land doing anything quite like this in any story I've come across. I love reading you and this one especially does it for me. I wonder what Edward's reluctance really is about. I'm sure you will let us know. thanks for everything!
Date: 12 Feb 2017 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 41
Are you trying to make me spontaneously combust holy hell that was intense i loved it
Date: 10 Feb 2017 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 41
I love how you can get me so involved with them. I can't wait to see what you have planned next
Date: 09 Feb 2017 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 41
oh wow. that was so good. i don't know what it is about you British girls. you, especially, really know how to let loose and write a good, creative, sexy lemon. I love that about your stories. I'm also reading a few books by another Brit named Jade West. have you read her? she's a bit different than you are but also good. I'm very much enjoying this. it really gives me a physical reaction to read your work!
Date: 02 Feb 2017 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 40
Now that's funny. He watches his diet so carefully so I was surprised when he indulged in the chocolate bar, the brownie, and the white roll. He was sweet asking what she got out of the experience. She was so focused on him this time, but I wouldn't be surprised if the next time they role play like this that he finds some way for her to get pleasure out of it too.
Date: 02 Feb 2017 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 40
Well that was a great and important talk and now they are each in the play back hmmmmm what will happen hehehehehehe
Date: 02 Feb 2017 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 40
I liked the last chapter so much that I had to go back and read it again before I read this one. It made me wish I had someone to play with like this. I'm too old to attract anyone these days, but I love reading about it. You write it so well that it just leaps off the page. I can't wait to see where they go from here. Thanks for it all!
Date: 01 Feb 2017 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 40
I am just in love with these two and their kinky ways. I can't wait for the next update.
Date: 31 Jan 2017 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 39
Omg x what a chapter love it can't wait for the next one xxx
Date: 27 Jan 2017 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 39
This chapter was so hot! Looks like Edward was able to experience another one of his fantasies. I'm curious to know what was going through his mind while Bella was spanking him. I look forward to reading the next chapter, I'm absolutely loving this story so far!!
Date: 26 Jan 2017 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 39
Wow the way you wrote this I could picture it all I loved it
Date: 25 Jan 2017 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 39
Edward really enjoyed that. Another fantasy fulfilled. That's something he couldn't do to himself.
Date: 25 Jan 2017 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 39
Loved it!
Date: 25 Jan 2017 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 39
Defiantly worth the wait. Absolutely love the chapter.
Date: 24 Jan 2017 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 39
oooh that was wonderful! Thank you, I loved it!
Date: 22 Jan 2017 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 38
Enjoying it so far!
Date: 21 Jan 2017 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 38
Thank goodness she talked to Alice and got her mind in the right head space. Edward was very worried about her and felt bad he had spoiled her surprise. I think he will be very surprised by what will happen when he gets home. What a turn on for both of them. Plus Bella will be able to get her frustrations out on Edward.
Date: 21 Jan 2017 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 38
I love the doughnut bun...lol
Date: 20 Jan 2017 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 38
Oh my that was awesome and having Alice as a friend to help her like that was perfect now I can't wait to what's next
Date: 19 Jan 2017 2:05 PM Title: The Body
Interesting, different Edward.
Date: 19 Jan 2017 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 38
I'll definitely be waiting anxiously for the next chapter...
Date: 18 Jan 2017 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 38
The pacing of this story is just right. You didn't rush the paddling scene to come and instead delved into Bella's headspace with her chat with Alice clearing things up for her and for us. Hot hot hot of you to leave the semen stains on her skirt and stockings. I think Edward will go nuts for that! See ya next time!
Date: 17 Jan 2017 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 37
Ooh! I can't wait for the next chapter! Will Bella use the paddle? How will Edward react being caught? I'll be anxiously waiting...
Date: 13 Jan 2017 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 37
Well I'M mad he ruined the surprise, I was looking forward to that.
Date: 13 Jan 2017 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 37
Edward is so controlling with regards to himself and his life. It really bothered him that she hasd left her shopping bags out, her clothes on the floor, and the tops off her bottles. He just had to set things right before he could relax. And even then he couldn't just relax. His curiousity got the better of him and he just had to look. What a surprise! He hadn't divulged his fantasy about the paddle to her. That will be a sexy scene when it happens, can't wait!
Date: 12 Jan 2017 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 37
I feel really worked up with norealease dang you :P. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 11 Jan 2017 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 37
oooooooooo Edward has been a very naughty boy. Methinks he'll get his paddling soon. Can't wait to read all about it. I freakin' love this story, it's sexiness, it's kinkiness, just everything. Thanks for the new chapter!
Date: 09 Jan 2017 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 36
Rose likes to drink. No wonder Edward gave Bella that look when she left. I'm surprised Bella wasn't toally out of it. What a fun shop. Can't wait to see what Edward thinks of the whole scene.
Date: 07 Jan 2017 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 31
I absolutely adored this, you really made the story yours, you changed the original plot line and I think that made the twist thta more enjoyable. How ever there was a few mistakes here and there a few sentences I had to back on and re read, some fragmented sentences but other than that I loved it can't wait for you to write more.~R
Date: 07 Jan 2017 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 36
Oh I loved it hehehehehehehe Rose is a lot of fun more please
I hope you feel better soon
Date: 07 Jan 2017 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 36
Oh I loved it hehehehehehehe Rose is a lot of fun more please
I hope you feel better soon
Date: 07 Jan 2017 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 36
Oh I loved it hehehehehehehe Rose is a lot of fun more please
I hope you feel better soon
Date: 06 Jan 2017 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 36
Glad Bella has found a friend in Roselie, sounds like they had loads of fun.
Hope you get better soon..
Date: 05 Jan 2017 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 36
I had a note by your story on my story list that said you wouldn't be back until 2017 so I wasn't surprised that we didn't hear from you. Sorry to hear you're sick and hope you have some antibiotics to help you get better!
Its a great chapter, one where it is revealed that Rosalie also knows about Edward so that Bella has someone else to speak to about him and his appetites. Love that she got her paddle. Can't wait to read her using it on him. Feel better, and happy new year!
Date: 29 Dec 2016 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 35
Hehehehehe I loved it and Charlie is too cute now what's next for Edward and Bella
Date: 22 Dec 2016 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 35
I don't think anyone wants to hear what their parents like to do in the privacy of their bedroom. So Bella discovered another little kink of Edward's. That website actually exists. I didn't find it very helpful though.
Date: 22 Dec 2016 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 34
What Edward did of making her body sensitive to his touch sounds incredible. And I didn't know the big toe was an errogenous zone.
Date: 22 Dec 2016 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 33
Mom knew what was going on. Dad disapporved. Typical family dynamic. Poor Edwaerd. He was frightened of them finding out his secret kink.
Date: 07 Dec 2016 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 35
Merry Christmas and happpy New Year to you too. So Bella comes by the kink naturally. Bet Renee is going to give a good spanking, which he deserves. Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 06 Dec 2016 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 35
Thanks for leaving me with the image of Bella spanking and fucking Edward in this chapter while you take an extended Holiday break! LOL! Now I can let that ruminate around in my brain until after the new year. Have a wonderful Holiday season and take care of you and yours. You know I love your stories....
Date: 30 Nov 2016 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 34
I can't wait to see what they post next. I see Rose finding out about the blog, and them telling Alice and Jasper about it. Even with all the security he put in place Rose does know his body, since she has giving him tats and piecings.
Date: 29 Nov 2016 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 34
Have I told you lately that I LOVE this story! I love that Edward is so free and uninhibited, love that Bella is not only accepting of his kink, but has become a willing participant, and love that they talk openly and frequently about themselves, each other, and all this! Would that people everywhere were like this. There would be no more time for war or any negativity, I think! I'm so glad I found you and your lovely stories!
Author's Response:
So glad your enjoying this I have a great time writing it xxx
Date: 27 Nov 2016 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 33
Well I'm caught up now, I read your one shot and didn't realize you have made it into a story. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 26 Nov 2016 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 33
I am definitely finding the balance of the "lifestyle" with family and work relationships interesting! Hopefully these guys can find an HEA that works on both levels.
Date: 23 Nov 2016 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 33
I just hope youd be more detailed with the sex next time, teehee
Date: 23 Nov 2016 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 33
Happy Thanksgiving! <3
Date: 23 Nov 2016 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 33
Charlie such the poop
Date: 22 Nov 2016 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 33
How gracious they were, in the face of such passive agressiveness that was shown to them. In my old age, I don't tolerate that well even from relatives. Good for them. I'd love to see more of that spanking that Edward seemed to like, even in his sleep! good going!
Date: 20 Nov 2016 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 32
Damn that was hot more please
Date: 19 Nov 2016 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 32
Ooh, there's something about Edward going down on her at the side of the reataurant that is such a turn on. And then him taking care of himself with such an explosion, OMG.
Date: 19 Nov 2016 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 31
Good thing Bella was by herself when she looked at that clip.
Date: 18 Nov 2016 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 32
Love that he took outside the restrount with her parents inside
Date: 17 Nov 2016 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 32
Delicious! I'm picturing Edward's shirt, suit, and tie...this is another wonderfully sexy chapter, my dear. You're the best!
Date: 11 Nov 2016 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 31
Its getting hot in here!
Date: 09 Nov 2016 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 31
Dads never want to let go of their little girls, no matter how old they are. Charlie will get used to it. I'm glad Renee is on her side. Edward's surprise video just whetted my appetite for more! Thanks, dear, for this lovely new chapter!
Date: 04 Nov 2016 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 30
Oh I loved it yummy can I watch him shower too that was hot
Date: 04 Nov 2016 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 30
Ooh, watching each other get off is so hot!
Date: 02 Nov 2016 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 30
Very nice! Can't wait for more. You always come through for me. I love the scenes you write!
Date: 27 Oct 2016 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 29
It was a relaxing chapter. I have a question. I've read this in other stories and always forget to ask. What is a "jumper"?
Author's Response:
A very English word for a sweater or pullover . Made of wool long sleeves and usually just a crew neck
Date: 26 Oct 2016 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 29
Awe Edward is too cute heheheheheheh I loved it
Date: 26 Oct 2016 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 29
Fluffy filler is just fine with me! It shows that even the kinkiest of people have everyday humdrum lives in some way. It lends realism to the kink. Thanks!
Date: 24 Oct 2016 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 28
This is super, super hot!
It's nice to read something sexy where there is a basis of deep love and respect underneath the hot stuff. I so want these two to end up happy!
Date: 17 Oct 2016 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 28
Ah, they discussed boundaries. And he asked her to move in with him. Looks like they're on the same pagw. Now they can work around their schedules to work on the blog.
Date: 17 Oct 2016 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 27
They're so honest with each other about they want and enjoy.
Date: 17 Oct 2016 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 26
Poor guy, he weas so wore out, lol. They're a perfect match. She's fulfilling his fantasies and getting a lot of enjoyment too.
Date: 16 Oct 2016 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 28
Well the reviews they got were not bad and gave them a couple of ideas and how sweet is Edward he asked her to move in I loved it
Date: 15 Oct 2016 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 28
he was bound to get some flak in the reviews, once he added a woman, Bella, into the filming....some folks just want to fantasize only THEY are his lover....I'm glad she was cool with those reviews. It just shows how in love she is with him! And how mature they both are. I LOVE that she agreed so readily to move in with him. Thanks, as always, for a splendid chapter!
Date: 09 Oct 2016 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 21
Oui, il lui a dit !
Qu'est-ce qu'elle va se mettre d'accord?
Date: 08 Oct 2016 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 27
This feels like things are winding down for the story. I hope I'm wrong, but I'll deal, eather way. I really love how compatible they are, how willing to explore things that either, or both, find stimulating and arousing. They really are a good match and you've done so well depicting this! I really enjoy reading what you write!
Date: 07 Oct 2016 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 20
Ils vont y arriver!
Bon chapitre.
Date: 02 Oct 2016 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 26
I think Edward could have started morning convo with some sweet nothings...he waste no time talking about the blog!!!
Date: 02 Oct 2016 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 26
ok! now we're talking! looks like they're going live as a couple! i'mexcited to see this. along witheir domestic bliss scene, this is such grear news for their future as a couple! loved this chapter!
Date: 01 Oct 2016 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 26
I commend you on your writing skills. Almost every chapter has left me with a racing heart & at my age that could be dangerous. LOL ;)
Date: 01 Oct 2016 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 26
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Date: 28 Sep 2016 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 25
Oh my gosh! I really love that she wanted to be on the blog ;) I cannot wait to see how things go from here :)