Date: 28 Jan 2023 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 44
I don't read many Poly stories, but this one intriged me and I can tell you I wasn't disappointed with any of it. You did great and the sex scenes were excellent in every way that matters :P lolz
Thank you for writing this, but I have to ask, Have you ever thought of a sequal to this? and I don't mean telling us all to go and watch something on Netflix.
I would very much love to know if they all make it to thier happily ever after.
Thanks again for writing this story!
Ezzy
Date: 11 Mar 2022 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 44
So I have to say after this story I Google searched the movie and dude the excitement was unreal lol! I totally saw the characters come to life. Especially Jasper/Ben
Date: 20 Jul 2021 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 40
Oh my...poor Bella and Edward
Date: 17 Jul 2021 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 20
So happy to see this one updated!
Date: 17 Jul 2021 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 30
Love your story can't wait to read more
Date: 17 Jul 2021 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 30
Love your story can't wait to read more
Date: 17 Jul 2021 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 30
Love your story can't wait to read more
Date: 17 Jul 2021 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 30
Love your story can't wait to read more
Date: 17 Jul 2021 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 30
Love your story can't wait to read more
Date: 17 Jul 2021 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 30
Love your story can't wait to read more
Date: 17 Jul 2021 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 30
Love your story can't wait to read more
Date: 17 Jul 2021 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 30
Love your story can't wait to read more
Date: 05 Jan 2019 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 25
Love this strory. Will you please update!! Need more!
Date: 26 Feb 2018 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 25
I hope with all my heart you haven't given up on this story??????
It's amazing and I love it!!!! You've woven a story which is impossible to put down. I simply adore Bella, Jasper and Edward!!!1 Their love is lie Anthony and Cleopatra without all the death drama!!!!
It's a magnificent tale and I hope I get the opportunity to read more chapters!!! It's a solid ten from chapter one to twenty-five!!!!
Date: 23 Feb 2018 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 8
I'm confused and not sure what's going on with Edward and Jasper???
Date: 23 Feb 2018 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 5
Lot's of things going on under the surface!!!!
I wonder what will happen when he learns her age and goes back to school!!!
Date: 23 Feb 2018 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 3
Charlie has truly gone off the grid!!!! How does Renee not know how much being shot changed him!!!!
Jasper's a "Poor" little rich kid!!!!
Bella has found herself on a roller coaster!!!
Date: 15 Feb 2018 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 25
I just found this and couldnt stop reading. I love it please tell me you will be finishing it :(.
Date: 11 Feb 2018 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 25
I reread this one again. I hope you’re gonna update this soon and finish it!!!
Date: 17 Apr 2017 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 25
Just found this!!! Omg it's Amazing!! Will you be updating again soon??
-Kate
Date: 12 Mar 2017 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 24
Uh oh...
Worried that video she sent rose might cause trouble
Date: 12 Mar 2017 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 23
I have a feeling things might turn bad
Date: 11 Mar 2017 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 19
Yes please.
Curious what they're going home to, jail?
Date: 11 Mar 2017 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 15
Spoiled girl lol
Date: 11 Mar 2017 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 8
Like that E is aggressive one
Date: 11 Mar 2017 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 4
Bad girl...bad boy...bad dad...lol
Date: 10 Mar 2017 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 24
Awwwwwweeeee! That super hard, aggressive and painful fucking to this teddy bear...love it!
Date: 10 Mar 2017 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 23
I LOVE his parents! They are wonderful and hopefully Bella will get to spend some time with them!
Date: 10 Mar 2017 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 22
LOVED this Jasper and Bella moment!
Date: 10 Mar 2017 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 21
Thank goodness the Renee thing is okay!
They said it! Yay! It's been totally obvious for a while now. Yay!
Date: 10 Mar 2017 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 20
That was ome sizzling, smoking hot chapter.
I loved it for the connection amd growth of the characters!
Date: 10 Mar 2017 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 19
I'm glad she is at least going back to school in some way.
Date: 10 Mar 2017 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 18
Bahamas!!!! I want in!
Charlie man.....dang.....
Date: 10 Mar 2017 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 17
Love that animalistic side of sex! You write it so well!
Ahhh those boys!
Date: 10 Mar 2017 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 16
Love Edward's sweer side.
Yes! Jasper is back!
Date: 09 Mar 2017 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 15
Those guys... yum! I really like their differences.... night and freaking day, but still the same 24 hours...ya know...make sense?
Date: 09 Mar 2017 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 14
So... I'll admit...I cried in that one! Powerful chapter!
Date: 09 Mar 2017 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 13
Edward was so sweet with the gummies!
Date: 09 Mar 2017 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 12
That little bitch needs to get a frickin clue! ...or punched in the face!
Date: 09 Mar 2017 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 11
Yes! I love how they have evolved...b & j...... now to work on e.
Date: 09 Mar 2017 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 10
Yes, let him in!
Date: 09 Mar 2017 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 9
Take charge Edward!
Date: 09 Mar 2017 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 8
Hot shit! Lucky girl!
Date: 09 Mar 2017 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 7
Dun dum dun.... loved the chapter!
Date: 09 Mar 2017 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 6
Gah......so close!
Date: 09 Mar 2017 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 5
I like how she doesn't back down. I can just imagine how hot he looked! 😍😍
Date: 09 Mar 2017 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 4
Dads! Ugh...and hers especially
:)
Date: 09 Mar 2017 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 3
Pushy isn't he?
Date: 09 Mar 2017 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wowza...what a dad!
Date: 09 Mar 2017 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting.....
Date: 09 Mar 2017 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 25
I'm sad I don't have more to read! Love that Rose is there now! Update soon please!
Date: 09 Mar 2017 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 25
I'm sad I don't have note to read! Love that Rose is there now! Update soon please!
Date: 08 Mar 2017 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 6
I have really enjoyed the story so far....but this chapter...man... it gave me all the feels! Loved it! It spoke to me!
Date: 12 Oct 2016 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 25
Loooooveeee this story
Date: 14 Aug 2016 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 25
Started to read and then got hooked :) cnt wait for next chapter
Date: 01 Aug 2016 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 24
Glad to see this update! I had been missing this story! Can't wait for more! ;)
Date: 16 Jun 2016 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 23
Aw, poor Jasper is all alone.
Date: 02 Feb 2016 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 22
Great chapter! I enjoyed the party and seeing E all protective and about business and then B and J's time alone on the beach was just perfect
Date: 01 Feb 2016 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 21
I just love reading about these guys. What a sweet moment they had there on the beach.
Date: 01 Feb 2016 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 20
Wow! (fans self) this was a fun read. I like that now they know they can really be who they are and express their feelings for each other however they want and B will still be right there loving them. Thank you for sending that out take of the conversation between E and J. That was awesome I really enjoyed seeing that glimpse of things through their eyes.
Date: 30 Jan 2016 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm glad to hear B has a plan. I do agree I don't think she should go back to the high school, judging by how they acted the day she left they'd eat her alive especially since she doesnt have any friends there. I'd like to see her take some college classes and be a great artist. Really enjoying their time away together.
Date: 30 Jan 2016 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 18
I totally see were Charlie is coming from too bad it had to go down that way. Maybe in the future he'll come around. I'm glad B has her boy's to lean on. They aren't going to let her go anywhere :0)
Date: 30 Jan 2016 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 17
I'm so glad J came home early. I love seeing them all interact with each other.
Date: 29 Jan 2016 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 16
The phone convo with J was fun. Not sure what to say about Alice besides she's crazy. B was right her drama seems so petty high school. E, J, and B are so above that. Glad E blacklisted her. I do hope Rose moves to Laguna or at least comes to visit. Jasper's home yay!
Date: 29 Jan 2016 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 15
soft and gentle he is not. Oh what fun.
Date: 29 Jan 2016 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 14
The ladies at the rest area..."Well, young lady," she offers me a smile and congratulatory wink, "good for you." ... That made me chuckle. Too bad things had to go down that way with Charlie, but I'm so excited to see B living with E and J when he's able to come home.
Date: 29 Jan 2016 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 13
aww man, things were just about to get real interesting at that rest stop. ha ha I liked where Edward caught B loading up to steal that stuff and then gave her the stolen gummy's, again I say it's about the little things with E because it's not a side of his personality that he shows real often. It shows me he's got genuine feelings for her he's not just going along because J wants to.
Date: 28 Jan 2016 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 12
Aww When you think E might not care too much he does little things that mean so much like having Bean put on the coffee cup. I love his little sweet moments. I would have found it hard to leave the boys to walk into that school too. Yay road trip!
Date: 28 Jan 2016 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 11
Yep still just as good the second time through. I did catch something that I'm not sure I noticed the first time. When J mentions E talking about B and the smell of her perfume. How I'd love to hear the conversations between those two because that's a side of E we really haven't gotten to see much of yet. Love this story you're doing an awesome job!
Author's Response:
+No Holds Barred+
I've been sitting in this parking lot for nearly an hour. It's about half of a mile away from Bean's apartment. My teeth grind. I need to stop calling her that. She played it off as a nickname, but to Jasper it means something. He's serious about her. That's the only reason I agreed to stick around and babysit her while he's off doing his shit in Berkeley.
I tried to convince him she would be a complication. We've tried this before. It never worked. There's too many cooks, and some of these Laguna bitches were out of their damn mind. That's why when he told me about his Bean, I wanted to distance myself from it. If he wanted the girl, good luck to him, but I wasn't going to have anything to do with it. He'll only find himself bored, fucked over by her when she bolts, or in jail.
Isabella is Charlie Swan's little girl. He's not a guy you wanted to mess with. I know he's changed a bit since he's dealt with me in Juvie and far more docile, but a father is a father, no matter how stoned or lost he may be. Jasper's poking around and fucking with the Chief's seventeen year old daughter. I'm not a man of many morals, but there's lines you don't cross.
"Just hang out with her while I'm gone," Jasper had said. He made it sound like a duty to keep her safe. He'd mentioned her hanging out with Alice Branden and running in her circles. I fucking hated this town because of that family. "And keep her out of trouble."
I didn't know it at the time, but he was setting me up. He knew. The girl's different. She's underage, but has already grown into a woman. She's taller than most girls here, and had long, elegant legs. Jasper told me she used to be a ballerina, but now she surfed. I could see it by her muscle tone. That's what attracted me to her that night at the party. I didn't even know who she was when I'd stumbled across her passed out in the Whitlock library. Some fucking douche was putting his hands all over her. What kind of piece of shit does that to a girl who's unconscious? He's fucking lucky I didn't kill him. My knife was out and I would've slit his damn throat from ear to ear, but she'd hummed in her sleep. I resorted to busting him in his jaw and throwing his ass out of the room.
I couldn't leave her alone after that. She needed to be protected. I felt responsible for her then.
When I found out she was Jasper's Bean, I couldn't believe how I'd missed it. She's exactly how he described her: beautiful, quirky, and sincere. That's what I noticed most when looking into her eyes. No judgment. Especially with my scars. Which was fucking nice. I'd spent most of my life failing to meet people's expectations, but what's worse than their disappointment was their pity.
Yeah, I've seen some shit, and still wake up in a cold sweat, not knowing where I am, but terrified. The paranoia is what gets me. I can't look at people and not think they want to kill me. Then there's that urge to act out on the aggression, or it festers and festers, until you want to fucking blow your own brains out. Anything to stop the racing thoughts.
It's a life you can't escape.
War takes everything you are and destroys it. You're nothing more than fragments of shrapnel.
Jasper's Bean numbs that. I don't have to pretend I'm not fucked up or even happy. When I kissed her that night, I lost control, but it was like she was that bullet. Everything went away. The pain and anger and hate...God, the hate I feel...all of it vanished, like being killed. A peaceful silence. The only thing I did feel was her soft, unbelievably soft, lips and sweet taste of her tongue.
It was a bliss only Jasper had given me, but even he didn't know how to pull me back.
I think we both knew that night.
Bean was a risk I didn't think we could take. There were complications with her father being retired DEA, and a frequent customer, but she was young. I didn't believe she understood what she would be getting herself into. Jasper tried to tell me that night after the beach how mature she was or how she got it.
What girl in their right mind would want to be shared?
"Just hang out with her while I'm gone."
I did.
Taking my phone out of my pocket, I stare at the screen. "Jesus," I mutter, and dial up Jasper. It rings and rings. "What the fuck am I doing?"
"Hey, bro," Jasper answers and yawns. "How's Bean?"
Daily conversations are done in this order. He pries, and then asks how she looks. My answer: Okay. But she's stunning. Luckily, I've been able to keep my distance for weeks now because it's felt more like a mission or a job. It kept me from crossing lines by kissing her. My mind has been racing every day since that night. No peace or silence. Constant nightmares. If I could just fuck the war out of me.
Maybe if I was allowed to be that intimate with Bean, no holds barred...
"She's good, man," I say, and he's about to ask how she looks, but I interrupt him before he has the chance. "Do you know that perfume she wears?"
"I don't know what brand it is or anything," he replies, and I hear his confusion, because we've had this discussion for the past week.
"Yeah, well, it's in my car a lot. I can't get it out. It's imbedded its way down into my damn upholstery," I say, and I breathe in deep, getting a fresh wave of it. She's everywhere, and escaping this girl is impossible. "I like that perfume. Not heavy or anything. It's floral or..." I rub my forehead and force my brain to produce the right word, "...or, shit. No, it's not shit. I don't know what the fuck I'm saying."
"Edward," Jasper says slowly.
"Yeah?"
"She got to you, didn't she?"
"She won't go for it, man."
"I told you what she said," Jasper says.
The night Jasper left, we dropped Bean off at her house and he walked her to the door. He wanted more with her, but knew the risk involved. We'd agreed to cut ties with her that night. That was the plan. It was a good plan. He didn't stick with it. When he came back to the truck, he looked like someone fucking hit him. I knew it wasn't good. Either he punked out, or she decked him. Bean's a feisty girl, Charlie through and through, and wouldn't put it past her.
Then he fucking sidelined me. "She wants to be with us."
After that, there was no discussing it with him. She was part of the plan. I just needed to get on board. And I fought hard against that shit. I wasn't going to get caught up in with a female. Not while Jasper and I were doing our business.
We've tried this bullshit in the past and failed.
But I agreed to babysit her, and that's how I saw it, until today. When I saw the scar on her chest, I knew she was broken in a way that made her perfect. She was strong. There's a part of myself in her eyes. The sincere browns. I'm an asshole to her, but she looked past that wall and saw the Edward that only Jasper knew.
Then there was that fucking perfume. When she hugged me goodbye in the rain, it amplified her scent and I couldn't keep fighting.
"If she's willing," I shake my head, fucking floored that I'm actually considering this shit, "then I'm willing to give it a try."
"I'll talk to her."
"When?"
"Christmas," he says with an exhale. "I got exams coming up and..."
"Yeah, fine, man, let's do Christmas then."
I'm irritated with him. The motherfucker's getting high and delaying shit. After all his nagging about getting to know the girl. I'll be lucky to survive the next week without trying to kiss her again. And if that happens, I can't promise him first dibs.
You snooze, you lose, bro.
"This will be a good thing, I know it," Jasper says as parting words. "She's the one, man."
I don't even answer him before hanging up, because I fucking hate it when he's right.
Date: 28 Jan 2016 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 10
I think some good progress was made with Edward during their weeks together. I'm with Rose, I don't know how Bean was able to hold herself back from kissing him in the truck. Ha ha The scene at the end with J at her window and what follows is one I wish I could watch in a movie. I would definitely replay it over and over. I love it!
Date: 28 Jan 2016 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 9
And a great day was had by everyone. Now we get to see Edward and Bean try to get to know each other while J is away. He's a little rough around the edges, but I like how she pushes back. I think he does too.
Date: 28 Jan 2016 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 8
Ooh I want to play spin the bottle too
Date: 27 Jan 2016 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 7
Yay she's met Edward. Wonder what Jasper has said about her. He must have told Edward something for him to know that she's his Bean.
Date: 27 Jan 2016 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 6
and here I sing Kiss the girl (from the little mermaid) ha ha I'm with bean I really wanted it to happen, but it just didn't.
Date: 27 Jan 2016 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh how I'd like to have Jasper teach me how to surf. I'd totaly be distracted by him too.
Date: 27 Jan 2016 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 4
I like stoner Charlie better when he's more carefree. ha ha Guess it is nice to see that he does care for her though. Not gonna lie her klepto tendency does worry me a bit, but that's just me. I always worry when I think someone might get in trouble.
Date: 26 Jan 2016 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 3
and I still love how they meet...