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Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2015 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 25

wow Just WOW!!!

Reviewer: wee scot Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2015 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 25

That's our girl!  Take your life back!  We should all write letters to ourself!  Loved it as always!

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2015 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 24

GREAT chapter!!! They are both finding their way back  to eachother.  Hurry I cant wait to read how you let them be together!!! Love your writing!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: wee scot Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2015 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love these two. I can see the healing beginning. We all need a Tess in our lives.  Great job as usual

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2015 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

i made something for you i hope you really like it :) http://pizap.com/image/canadiantwififtypizapw1432573842.jpg



Author's Response:

Oh my gosh, thank you so much!  That is so awesome!  I was just asking Kelly Trobaugh this morning how to make a banner and she gave me a link to something on the site, but I hadn't gotten to look at it yet.  YOU ROCK!  

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2015 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 24

awww :) cant wait to read more

 

BTW what do your characters look like??? :)



Author's Response:

haha, I only just figured out how to add pictures!  I've put them at the beginning of the story.  I picture her hair curlier, but I couldn't find anything else that captured her better.  Also I never talk about Xander with facial hair (except for stubble) but I imagine he'd look just yummy like this... 

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2015 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 24

loved it, cant wait to read more

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2015 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 23

Please update soon can't wait to read more

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2015 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 23

i wanna hug Xander :(

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2015 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 22

omg Please I need to know how Olivia and Xander  resolve this.  Can't wait Hurry and Update

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2015 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 21

What a great Chapter So very happy Olivia and Xander are finding there way back to eachother!  Can't wait hopefully soon!!!!

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2015 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 20

alittle drama is always good love there thanksgiving very sweet

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2015 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 22

cant wait for this bump to go away :( i feel bad for Xander :(

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2015 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 22

wow! I understand both sides but damn!!! cant wait to read more

Reviewer: wee scot Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2015 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 21

Aww.  They are getting there. I imagine it is going to take a while, but the love is there. Another great chapter!  Your talent just never disappoints! 

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2015 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 21

need more please :) :) :) that bad nick lol

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2015 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 20

another great chapter, cant wait to read more!!!!!!! had to throw in arizona.lol

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2015 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 20

:) :) :) :) need more please

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2015 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 19

loved it!! very deep and intense... great job! cant wait to read more:)

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2015 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 19

:) :) :) :)

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2015 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 18

:)

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2015 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 18

Love this chapter. What a love Xander has for Olivia. Hurry update

Reviewer: wee scot Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2015 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 17

When I saw your warning at the beginning of the chapter my first instinct was to skip it. You are a wonderful writer. I started reading and couldn't stop. I was in awe of the strength of these two. What an incredibly difficult thing to face, individually and as a couple. I love these two and this story. As difficult as this is to read at times, I'm with you to the end!  I know these two are going to make it!

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2015 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 17

wow what agreat chapter!! Please update soon.  Please

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2015 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 16

its great she letting him go with her, you mke this so real, your doing a great job!!!!I cant say im excided to read the next chapter but its a hump in the right direction.... c you soon

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2015 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 16

Can't wait to get the next chapter over and done with -so Xander and Olivia can get back to their  happy place again!!!!! Love TESS !!!!

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2015 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 15

great chapter

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2015 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 15

:)

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2015 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 14

i want a man lik Xander :)

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2015 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 14

this is so sad, but they never should have tried right now!!!!! I cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2015 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 14

omg please let them get through this fast i hate to see Xander and Olivia like this

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2015 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 13

LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!!!  UPDATE NOW PLEASE

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2015 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 12

Loved the chapter, can't wait to read more!!! Hope it's not raining for at the caves. Enjoy Arizona 

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2015 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 11

what a wonderful chapter again Thanks update soon

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2015 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 11

loved it, cant wait to read more.

 

What part of Arizona are you going to? Im  in Tucson Az! the weather has been great but it windy latley so allergy season is now!!! Bring Benadryl with you!!! Hope you enjoy my sunny state:)



Author's Response:

My family/friends I'm visiting are scattered on all sides of the Phoenix area; Surprise, Glendale, Mesa, Apache Junction, Sedona.  I lived in Glendale as a child for about 8 years, and then again about 4 years ago for a year.  I love Arizona and would live there again in a heartbeat (and intend to if I can ever afford to retire, LOL!)  My best friend and I will be near Tucson next week; we're going to explore Kartcher Caverns State Park.  Have you been?   Thanks for the tip about allergy meds.  I have terrible seasonal allergies and with the mild winter we had here in Washington everything has bloomed much earlier than usual so mine are driving me crazy!  I'm just excited to see my family and spend my birthday with them (23rd) and drink lots of wine with my big sis!  :)

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2015 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 11

:) :) :))

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2015 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 10

Love your story update soon.  What fun --the Holidays are coming for Olivia and Xander can't wait.

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2015 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 9

great coming home

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2015 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 8

love your writting

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2015 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 10

:)

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2015 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 10

loved it, cant wait to read more!!!!!

Reviewer: MyLadyAnne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2015 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 9

The guilt he must carry; he feels responsible for what happened to her, and I suppose in a way he is.  She is a strong willed woman and he's never been prepared for her strength; I think he's amazed by her.  He couldn't save her from her fate, but she survived the worst to get back to him.  He loves her in a way most women would die for...I know I would!  Please let them have their happy ending!

Reviewer: MyLadyAnne Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2015 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 5

Oh Lord I love these two.  Please don't let anything tear them apart again!

Reviewer: MyLadyAnne Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2015 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 4

I love the friendship between Tess and Olivia.  Tess is always Olivia's champion, no matter what, and she doesn't pull any punches.  She keeps it real.  I'm counting on Tess to remain Olivia's rock through all she has ahead of her.

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2015 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 9

yay she is home :)

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2015 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 9

loved it chica. its going to be a long road thats for sure! cant wait toread more.

Reviewer: wee scot Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2015 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 9

This is so hard to read and to think at the same time that there are actually couples out there dealing with this. You are such a wonderful writer. You make these two come alive in our minds with your words. As difficult as it is to read right now, I couldn't turn away if I tried. They are both strong. Their love is strong. I know they will come through this even stronger. Thank you for sharing this with us. d84;a039;

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2015 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 7

This chapter was so good please update soon

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2015 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 6

GREAT CHAPTER LOVE YOUR WRITING

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2015 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 5

SWEET

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2015 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 4

GREAT CHAPTER

Reviewer: macera Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2015 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 2

 REAL GOOD NO CHEATING PLEASE

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2015 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 6

loved it, cantr wait to read more!

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2015 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 5

love it! cant wait to read more. Happy weekend:-)

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2015 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 4

Poor Liv. She's a fighter. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2015 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 3

Poor thing! I hope that Xander steps up to an even higher level of love and devotion to her, as she recovers.

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2015 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 3

I feel so bad for both of them, they both have a long journey ahead of them!!!! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: ellabell Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2015 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 3

As I read, I feel tense and anxious for this couple.  You really write  emotionally raw dialogue.  Hunter brings the thought of Xander possibly being unfaithful and how he would feel so badly disappointed if he did.  I hope you do not go this route.

It would be very interesting  to see Xander remain faithful while they struggle to get back to a loving serene place.  I feel they were both complicit in enabling Caleb's actions and Olivia would again be emotionally brutalized if her husband committed adultery.  I don't know if I could continue to read on even with being enthralled by your writing style.

By the way, I really appreciate your quick updates.  I am embarrassed to admit that I kept checking on Easter for an update. Thanks for the Easter treat!

Your Blue Ridge Mountain Fan

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind words, and I'm thrilled to know that you were anxiously awaiting updates over Easter, LOL!  I get excited when I see I have new reviews!  

I believe that Xander and Olivia have been through enough pain to last five lifetimes!  That doesn't mean there won't be more turmoil and heartache, but in the end, what I love most is writing about their love story.  I really want them to have their 'happily ever after', so we'll see where they take me next!

I'll keep writing if you keep reading!   It was so nice to see a new name...I've been secretly wondering if it's the same half dozen people re-reading over and over again!  (Just kidding; that's a lot of re-reading!)

~Ann

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2015 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 2

yay!!!!!!! im glad ur back! cant wait to read more

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2015 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 2

holy cats :O

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2015 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

WOW LOVE THE BEGINING PLEASE DON'T KEEP US WAITING. 

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