Date: 18 Feb 2018 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 38
God, this edward has to be the most
patient guy for a mob i have ever read. this bella
is the most frustrating crazy girl. surprised she
is even still pregnant with everything she is
purposely putting herself through...very foolish.
Date: 18 Feb 2018 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 28
ahhh, this bella is so damn annoying sometimes.
she obviously is way too impulsive... does she even
care about her pregnancy? i get that she is pissed and
want to rescue her brother but her behavior is without
thought... love your story but wish bella had some
smarts instead of being so rash and careless.
she'a lucky edward loves her and has guys protecting her.
she would have been dead a long time ago.
Date: 01 Feb 2018 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 52
Again just loved it.
Date: 23 Mar 2016 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 52
AWESOME!!! sequel thanks for sharing ;D
Date: 08 Apr 2015 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 52
Great story:) Thanks for sharing
Date: 06 Apr 2015 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 52
Loved it.
Author's Response:
I just want to say a HUGE thank you for all your reviews and for supporting me on this journey. I've hoped you've enjoyed 'Betrayal' and 'Revenge' as much as I have. Until next time.
Kara x
Date: 01 Apr 2015 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 52
Thank you I have enjoyed your story.
Author's Response:
I just want to say a HUGE thank you for all your reviews and for supporting me on this journey. I've hoped you've enjoyed 'Betrayal' and 'Revenge' as much as I have. Until next time.
Kara x
Date: 01 Apr 2015 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 52
; )
Author's Response:
I just want to say a HUGE thank you for all your reviews and for supporting me on this journey. I've hoped you've enjoyed 'Betrayal' and 'Revenge' as much as I have. Until next time.
Kara x
Date: 01 Apr 2015 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 52
I love the way you ended it with B & E having four children and Emmett finding love having Izzy.
I have enjoyed every chapter and I grateful for your dedication to your posting schedule. You also recognize your Beta's contributions.
Sherry Rocks but in my humble opinion YOU ROCK, MORE!!!!
Loved it and thanks.
Author's Response:
I just want to say a HUGE thank you for all your reviews and for supporting me on this journey. I've hoped you've enjoyed 'Betrayal' and 'Revenge' as much as I have. Until next time.
Kara x
Date: 31 Mar 2015 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 52
thank you I loved ths story!!!well done!!
Author's Response:
I just want to say a HUGE thank you for all your reviews and for supporting me on this journey. I've hoped you've enjoyed 'Betrayal' and 'Revenge' as much as I have. Until next time.
Kara x
Date: 31 Mar 2015 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 52
Thank you for two terrific "updates"! Seeing into the future for this family is a real treat, and I'm so glad Emmett found someone to love him for himself! Yeah to having ESME in the birthing room too, by the way! That was a nice tie of loose ends! Her family always was what came first. Thank you for two amazing fictions that were more than a pleasure to inhale!!!!
Author's Response:
I just want to say a HUGE thank you for all your reviews and for supporting me on this journey. I've hoped you've enjoyed 'Betrayal' and 'Revenge' as much as I have. Until next time.
Kara x
Date: 31 Mar 2015 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 52
good
Author's Response:
I just want to say a HUGE thank you for all your reviews and for supporting me on this journey. I've hoped you've enjoyed 'Betrayal' and 'Revenge' as much as I have. Until next time.
Kara x
Date: 31 Mar 2015 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 52
Well done.
Author's Response:
I just want to say a HUGE thank you for all your reviews and for supporting me on this journey. I've hoped you've enjoyed 'Betrayal' and 'Revenge' as much as I have. Until next time.
Kara x
Date: 31 Mar 2015 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 52
Realy the end I think there is more lol. Love it thanks so much
Author's Response:
I just want to say a HUGE thank you for all your reviews and for supporting me on this journey. I've hoped you've enjoyed 'Betrayal' and 'Revenge' as much as I have. Until next time.
Kara x
Date: 31 Mar 2015 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 52
I loved it!! Thank you!!
Author's Response:
I just want to say a HUGE thank you for all your reviews and for supporting me on this journey. I've hoped you've enjoyed 'Betrayal' and 'Revenge' as much as I have. Until next time.
Kara x
Date: 31 Mar 2015 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 51
I think this is the first chapter where Bella finally has happiness. I love the baby name.
Date: 31 Mar 2015 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 51
That was a fast birth she is tough.
Date: 31 Mar 2015 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 51
:) loved this story
Date: 31 Mar 2015 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 50
Wonderful!! Thank you for two stories filled with excitement, passion and thrills. I loved them both and look forward to your epilogues! Bella's a tough lady with smarts and quick wits. I have to love her. She loves unflinchingly. Thank you for all the hard work and all the great reading!! I look forward to your next works!
Date: 30 Mar 2015 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 50
I look forward to the epi! This was a perfect spot to end it and finally E & B are in a good spot!
Author's Response:
I just want to say a HUGE thank you for all your reviews and for supporting me on this journey. I've hoped you've enjoyed 'Betrayal' and 'Revenge' as much as I have. Until next time.
Kara x
Date: 30 Mar 2015 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 49
In the neck and she just kept stabbing! I love it!!!
Date: 30 Mar 2015 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 50
I will miss her and her protecter
Date: 30 Mar 2015 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 48
Love it can not wait for more with bad ass Bella .
Date: 30 Mar 2015 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 48
I hope she sticks it right into his juggler!
Date: 30 Mar 2015 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 48
She is my hero she will never give up or let him get the best of her.
Date: 30 Mar 2015 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 47
Superb chapters!! You really keep the action and tension high while always remembering the personal relationships within the story that make it so special! Thank you for that! Right now we really CARE about Bella and her baby. We care a lot! Right now I'm hoping they missed Bella's knife!! Loved it!
Date: 29 Mar 2015 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 47
Hurry Edward! Hurry!
Date: 29 Mar 2015 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 47
Let's hope Edward is on his way
Date: 29 Mar 2015 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 47
OMFG not Aro. Edward better hurry up and find her NOW!!!!!!
Date: 28 Mar 2015 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 46
Crap!!!! When she finally does the right thing for her & the baby everything goes to hell!
Date: 27 Mar 2015 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 46
Edward is freaking out right about now
Date: 26 Mar 2015 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 45
So happy they found him but what's the problem just kill him
Date: 25 Mar 2015 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 44
I love chapters where Edward & Bella are snugly!
Date: 25 Mar 2015 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 43
I'm so glad Emmett finished her off!
Date: 25 Mar 2015 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 44
That is so sad poor Emmett he needs help
Date: 24 Mar 2015 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 43
I am so glad he ended Rose and he has went to Bella
Date: 24 Mar 2015 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 41
Whoa, Rosalie is pregnant!
Date: 24 Mar 2015 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 42
I'm really confused regarding Bella's change of heart and attitude. I think she's been an awesome sister fighting for Emmett's life. I don't want anything to happen to Em's child. I hope I understand better soon. Awesome story whether I'm confused or not
Date: 23 Mar 2015 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 42
Crap! Roselie is pregnant.
Date: 23 Mar 2015 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 42
Good for Edward! Never take chances. Not when you're pregnant! ESME might be the one to understand and help Bella come to terms with being pregnant. Her family is her life. Great chapter! Aro's escape certainly came as a surprise! Nice one!!! Thanks for all the hard work you put in - it always shows!
Date: 23 Mar 2015 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 42
Poor girl she is going to blame herself for everything
Date: 22 Mar 2015 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 41
Now she is not going to feel bad about Rose just keep her alive long enough to get the baby.
Date: 22 Mar 2015 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 41
Uh oh! Nice twist here. I was sure if she was pregnant, it wouldn't be Emmett's! Somehow I can't see Emmett getting mad at his sister for doing what she did. He knows her. Which means he should also know she wouldn't give up on him! Great chapter with a heck of a twist! Thank you!
Date: 22 Mar 2015 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 41
Why didn't Rosalie say anything?
Date: 22 Mar 2015 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 40
I'm sad she's so distressed and I hope she wakes up understands she's really loves this child and undestands it might be bad timing. It will work ut for the best and she'll will be a nuturing ad d loving Mom!
Date: 22 Mar 2015 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 40
Something tells me that impending motherhood just hit Bella's brain. She knew it logically, but now she is weighing the implications and the fact tha the'so had no mothering as a guide. Edward better tred gently here! Great work! Thank you!
Date: 21 Mar 2015 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 40
It is all catching up to her now
Date: 19 Mar 2015 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 39
Sorry to have missed several reviews! RL is fascinating sometimes! Why do I have the feeling that Edward knows something about Emmett that he isn't sharing? I love the fact that no one can stop Sunday dinner! I understand it. But between attacks, explosions, etc. you would think Edward's Mom could slow it down. Gotta love her though. Those dinners ARE life to her. Like firefighters who see too much death, there's a learning to appreciate the things that really matter - and that's familglia! I loved the chapters! They solved some things and brought more questions to the forefront! Thank you for being so consistently amazing!
Date: 18 Mar 2015 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 39
he is so patient with her.
Date: 18 Mar 2015 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 39
He knows what she need :) I think they both need that.
Date: 17 Mar 2015 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 38
ugh.. you could have put that in this chapter.. sigh
Date: 17 Mar 2015 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 38
She needs to know something poor girl
Date: 16 Mar 2015 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 37
Someone just give the poor girl what she needs lol
Date: 15 Mar 2015 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 36
I love this Bella's determination,spunk, ability to confront Edward or anyone else except maybe Esme and her passion in caring about the ones she loves. It was an wonderful chapter and I so happy Emmett is going to be okay physically. I dread his process for dealing with his feelings regarding Rose.
Thanks.
Date: 15 Mar 2015 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 36
She is just so worried about him and them Edward is so worried about her.
Date: 15 Mar 2015 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 36
Men, they need to be hurt in private.
Date: 15 Mar 2015 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 35
Bella is far from being the meek & obedient mob wife.
Date: 15 Mar 2015 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 35
Of course you brought him back. I just knew he was out there some where. :-) thanks