Date: 07 Jan 2015 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 2
Okay, it's Christmas time and who is going to deny a six year old with a request like that? I couldn't, for sure!
Date: 07 Jan 2015 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was rather gross and disgusting! Poor Edward!
Date: 07 Jan 2015 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 21
What a tear-jerker. I am a mess. Can't wait for the HEA.
Date: 07 Jan 2015 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 21
This is just so sweet with Charlie & Edward!
Date: 07 Jan 2015 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 21
Love this!
Date: 01 Jan 2015 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 20
Will Charlie be just the thing that gets Edward to walk away from his wacko family....
Date: 31 Dec 2014 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 20
Yeah, good question.
Date: 31 Dec 2014 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 20
hmm wonder what he'll do. And wonder whatEd Sr will have to say about it.
Date: 31 Dec 2014 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 19
Thanks for the author note and for this update! It was a nice surprise!
Date: 31 Dec 2014 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 19
I am so proud of Edward for being a man and standing up to his sperm donner
Date: 31 Dec 2014 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 19
Glad he's going to help though. Ed Sr is going to be a problem I bet though.
Date: 30 Dec 2014 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 18
I have to say this. I usually don't review... But this must be said, I have been having trouble not crying when reading this fic. It is a heart tugging, major tissue warning story. Every morning I wake and get excited about what I'm about to read, and there it is pulling HARD tears and a running nose from me. This is an amazing fic and I am happy to cry every morning. Thank you.
Til tomorrow's cry fest
E/k
Date: 30 Dec 2014 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 18
Ok that was a tear jerker!
Date: 30 Dec 2014 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 17
Bc of your author note this just came to mind...did rose have an affair with Edward's dad? Does that make Charlie Edward's brother?
Date: 30 Dec 2014 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 18
Poor Charlie. Sucks that cancer takes so many good people in the world
Date: 30 Dec 2014 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 17
wonder if the father of the kid will show up since I bet Rose had a life insurance policy out to benefit Charlie.
Date: 29 Dec 2014 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 16
Dang that was tough. Good story though.
Date: 29 Dec 2014 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 16
I hope she is able to tell Emmet she wants Edward to raise Charlie
Date: 29 Dec 2014 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 16
How much harder can it get I am crying already.
Date: 29 Dec 2014 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 16
Poor little Charlie.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2014 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 15
I can't see the others agreeing with Rose's decision
Date: 29 Dec 2014 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 15
You like to keep us on the edge....
Date: 29 Dec 2014 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 15
Dont leave it there Nooooooo
Date: 29 Dec 2014 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 15
oh wow. A lot to ask of a virtual stranger. Ed will have a cow.
Date: 28 Dec 2014 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 14
wow that is not what I was expecting
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2014 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 14
He wasn't expecting that
Date: 28 Dec 2014 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 14
hmmm wonder what made her ask him
Date: 28 Dec 2014 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 13
Okay, you officially have my heart on the rack! Nicely done and yet I still have so many questions..... Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2014 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 13
Oh, this is good, but I can tell it is gonna be a tearjerker!
Date: 28 Dec 2014 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 13
Is he going to have a hand in raising Charlie????
Date: 28 Dec 2014 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 13
hmmm sounds like Jasper has a nice chip on his shoulder.
Date: 28 Dec 2014 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 12
Wow Ed has a lot to answer for. What a manipulative arsehole.
Date: 28 Dec 2014 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 11
Sucks that cancer takes so many good people with all the evil ones in the world
Date: 28 Dec 2014 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 10
hmmm wont to hear that backstory. Ugh I'm hating Ed more and more
Date: 28 Dec 2014 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 9
oooh def wasn't expecting Rose.
Date: 28 Dec 2014 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 8
ah Charlie sneaking out. At least it wasn't something nefarious. Sounds like the Masens have a "wonderful" reputation, based on Ed I bet.
Date: 28 Dec 2014 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 7
oh wow. Guessing they are going to feel bad thinking ill of Charlie's mom.
Date: 28 Dec 2014 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 6
Ed needs to have an accident. Elizabeth too.
Date: 28 Dec 2014 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 5
oooh Time for Ed to die. Batterers get abso no sympathy from me.... cheaters are a close second
Date: 28 Dec 2014 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 4
Smart boy. Glad he knows things aren't free.
Date: 28 Dec 2014 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 3
awww little charlie huh?
Date: 28 Dec 2014 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 2
awww sweet boy....both of them
Date: 28 Dec 2014 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
interesting start. Hope someone shoots me if I ever act like that (the cougar).
Date: 28 Dec 2014 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 13
Jasper is not being fare to Edward
Date: 27 Dec 2014 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 12
I figured Ed had something to do with why they didnt seem to like Edward but Edward is such a good guy.
Date: 27 Dec 2014 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 11
A box of tissue please so sad
Date: 27 Dec 2014 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 10
My heart is still breaking
Date: 27 Dec 2014 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 9
not expecting Rose is right
Date: 27 Dec 2014 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 8
makes me want to cry
Date: 27 Dec 2014 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 7
My heart is breaking for Charlie and I dont even know why
Date: 27 Dec 2014 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 6
Good for Edward I love how much he cares about his sister.
Date: 27 Dec 2014 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 5
Someone needs to kick that old mans ass
Date: 27 Dec 2014 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 4
very smart little boy what happened to his mom
Date: 27 Dec 2014 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 3
A little Charlie to cute
Date: 27 Dec 2014 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 2
cute kid why is he by himself
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2014 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 12
Seems like Edward's father has ruined quite a few lives
Date: 27 Dec 2014 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 12
Poor baby!
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2014 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 11
poor Rose. I hope she doesn't
Date: 27 Dec 2014 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 11
No tissues but I'm excited to see what Edward does....
Date: 27 Dec 2014 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 11
Wonderful story! You touch all the right "heartstrings" and the real kick in the teeth moment is Edward discovering he went to school with Charlie's mother yet doesn't recognize her. Beautiful touch there! I look forward to reading more!
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2014 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 10
Loving it! I'm really enjoying the ride and can't wait to see where it goes and how it gets there.
XoxoxoxoxoX
Ashmerlin
Date: 26 Dec 2014 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh now I think Edward needs a little hug.
Date: 26 Dec 2014 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 9
No I wasn't expecting Rose at all.
Date: 26 Dec 2014 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 9
I sure wasn't. If the big man is Emmett is he husband or brother here?
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2014 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 9
No. I wasn't expecting Rose
Date: 26 Dec 2014 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 8
Ok so it's obvious Charlie's family isn't nice.
Date: 26 Dec 2014 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 7
Now this is even sweeter but sad too!
Date: 25 Dec 2014 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 7
What a great story!
[Report This]Date: 25 Dec 2014 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 7
loving this. Merry Christmas to you too
Date: 25 Dec 2014 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 6
What an asshole!
[Report This]Date: 25 Dec 2014 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 6
so glad Esme has a brother like Edward
Date: 25 Dec 2014 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 6
I was so worried they would sit back down & start eying as if nothing happened . I'm glad they left!
Date: 25 Dec 2014 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 5
So I definately hate Edward SR
Date: 24 Dec 2014 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 4
Little Charlie needs a great big hug!
Date: 24 Dec 2014 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 4
Lovely. Looking forward to more! Merry Christmas!
Date: 24 Dec 2014 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
This is going to be so sweet! Sad I'm betting but I'm hooked already!
Date: 24 Dec 2014 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 3
Thus is fascinating and shows all kinds of promise! I look forward to the journey!