Date: 28 Aug 2015 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Weather Warnings
I like Hawaiian magic if this is an example. They seem a gentle, forgiving people! On with the the weddings, and what a beautiful place for them to happen!
Author's Response:
Hawaiian is in truth very much like Voodum or Hoodoo very Earth Elemental centered. We'll find out a little later why the Kahuna Nui was willing to forgive. Yeah, I'm not a romantic, and I've never been to Hawaii but my cousin recently got married there and couldn't stop raving about it - the beaches, the food, the people, the greenary.
See you next chapter.
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Dinia/Carol
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2015 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 21 Hawaiian Dream
Oh this is going to be beautiful and fun I can't wait
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2015 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 21 Hawaiian Dream
:)
Author's Response:
<3 <3 <3
Date: 25 Jul 2015 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 21 Hawaiian Dream
Good chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
See you next chapter.
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Dinia
Date: 25 Jul 2015 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 21 Hawaiian Dream
This all sounds really wonderful and is just my idea of what spare no expense would look like! Can't wait for the three weddings!
Author's Response:
Thanks, though our "kids" still have some moutains to climb before they reach the wedding day.
I have pictures of the gowns for the wedding and I'll be sharing them with the group on Facebook. :D
See you next chapter.
Hard Hugs
Dinia
Date: 25 Jul 2015 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 21 Hawaiian Dream
What a great venue. Even though, I have been to Maui and Honolulu and it lost my interest after the second time. Id love to go to Tahiti or Fuji. Can't wait for the weddings.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Our "kids" have some tests to go through before the happy event takes place. :D The problem with being long lived is events can get forgotten and come back to bit you!
I don't think I'll get to Hawaii this life time, but I have been to Italy for two weeks and I'd go back there in a heart beat!
See you next chapter
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Dinia/Caro
Date: 14 Jul 2015 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Planning
Absolutely.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
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Dinia
Date: 13 Jul 2015 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 10 The Three Sister's Curse
I'm a bit confused. Didn't their mother die just a few months before they moved away from Salem at the beginning of the story?
Author's Response:
I think you're right. It's something that was never corrected and really should.
Thank you for pointing that out to me. I really appreicate it.
Hard Hugs
Dinia
Date: 11 Jul 2015 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Planning
Off to Hawaii to get married. So sweet.
Author's Response:
Here comes the HEA! Stand by. :D So happy you are enjoying this story line.
See you next chapter
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Dinia
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2015 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Planning
Oh thank goodness it have a real starting point
Author's Response:
Not sure what you mean, but get ready fir the HEA to come busting in.
Thank you so much for your readership and reviewing.
See you next chapter
Hard Hugs
Dinai
Date: 10 Jul 2015 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Planning
Great chapter
Author's Response:
Great Reader!
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Dinia
Date: 10 Jul 2015 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Planning
Love! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
;)
Date: 10 Jul 2015 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Planning
I think it would be nice if they have at least some portion of their powers back! The beach weddings in Hawaii sound wonderful, I can see it now!
Author's Response:
Hang on. We're not done yet. Going to have a really huge HEA.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
See you next chapter,
Hard Hugs
Dinia
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2015 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Planning
:)
Author's Response:
:) :) :)
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2015 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 19 - YES!
Great fun.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I try.
See you next chapter.
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Dinia
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2015 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 19 - YES!
:)
Author's Response:
=8^}
Date: 03 Jul 2015 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 19 - YES!
I know one wedding coordinator will be a very busy person, what with three sisters marrying one after the other! I really like that all three couples are going for theirHEA!
Author's Response:
I wouldn't want to be that wedding coordinator for sure!! I try to always deliever an HEA! If I can't tell everyone up front.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. You are one of my ROCKs. I will have a couple of surprises I hope before it ends.
Hard Hugs
Dinia/Carol
Author's Response:
I wouldn't want to be that wedding coordinator for sure!! I try to always deliever an HEA! If I can't tell everyone up front.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. You are one of my ROCKs. I will have a couple of surprises I hope before it ends.
Hard Hugs
Dinia/Carol
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2015 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 19 - YES!
I loved it they all found their happily ever after and now how big will the weddings be
Author's Response:
Thank you. We still have some chapters to go yet, so hang in there.
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Dinia/Carol
Date: 03 Jul 2015 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 19 - YES!
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you! <3
See you next time.
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Dinia
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2015 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue
Looking forward to it.
Author's Response:
Thank you.
See you next chapter.
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Dinia
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2015 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Realizations
They all took that well.
Author's Response:
Yes, they did. I was proud of them. Working towards the promised HEA. :D
See you next chapter.
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Dinia
Date: 27 Jun 2015 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Realizations
Nice! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! Appreciate it.
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Dinia
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2015 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Realizations
Well that was faster than I thought but he was right in his thinking UT did they all lose their powers update soon
Author's Response:
Thank you. Well I hate to drag things out. :D
See you next chapter.
Hard Hugs
Dinia
Date: 26 Jun 2015 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Realizations
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
See you next chapter.
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Dinia
Date: 26 Jun 2015 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Realizations
Love it!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I love that you love it!
See you next chapter,
Hard Hugs
Dinia
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2015 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Realizations
:)
Author's Response:
:) <3 ;)
Date: 26 Jun 2015 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Realizations
You scared me half silly, when I couldn't find the title, Thw Writer&The Witch! It just disappeared! Then I found you had simply changed the nameto Realizations., so all is well! I fear you are nearly done with this story, so guess I'll just enjoy it while I can! I;m really glad Edward came back and asked Bella to marry him. Probably the other two couples will also, right?
Author's Response:
Sorry! I don't know how that name got changed. I was trying to add the chapter's title in retrospect ( fucked up! )
Yep I'm just about done with this one. Maybe 3 or 4 more chapters.
THEN, I have several that we've been going through that I published when I first started writing that I'll be republishing. All I have to do is figure out how to not loose the reviews and or comments and those who were following it to begin with. TWCS isn't the easiest to post to, IMHO, but they do have excellent help connected with them.
I'd say, look for a wedding on a beach somewhere tropical.
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Carol/Dinia
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2015 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 17 Truth Be Told
; )
Author's Response:
~8^]
Date: 21 Jun 2015 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 17 Truth Be Told
I didn't enjoy that chapter at all but it had to happen. Em was trying. Lol.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your time for both reading and reviewing. Yeah I didn't like writing this chapter, but we all knew it had to happen. Human nature. At lease we know Emmett is ok.
Hope you enjoy the next chapter better.
See you next chapter.
Hard Hugs
Dinia/Carol
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2015 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 17 Truth Be Told
Okay.... At least Emmett took it well?
Man, is this where the angst comes in?
Please don't drag it out!
xoxo
Mina
Author's Response:
Yes we can usually count on Emmett for comic relief. Yes this is the angst. Not dragging it out. I hate when that happens too. Not too many more chapters to go.
See you next chapter
Hard Hugs
Dinia
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2015 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 17 Truth Be Told
loving this
Author's Response:
Thanks!!!!!
Date: 19 Jun 2015 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 17 Truth Be Told
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank You!!!
Date: 19 Jun 2015 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 17 Truth Be Told
Rosalie wasn't kidding when she described Edward as a deep thinker, and this is probably the most important thing he will ever think about!
Author's Response:
No she wasn't. Let's hope all his thinking goes in the right direction!
See you next chapter.
Thank you for being a wonderful reader and reviewer. You are a ROCK in my foundation.
Hard Hugs
Dinia/Carol
Date: 19 Jun 2015 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 17 Truth Be Told
Wonder what's up next? !
Author's Response:
Guess you'll just have to wait and see. *evil grin*
See you next chapter.
Hard Hugs
Dinia
Date: 19 Jun 2015 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 17 Truth Be Told
This is great! I can't wait for more! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I"m so happy that you're enjoying it. I loved writing it. Be sure to catch Carrying the Torch which will begin posting right after the last chapter of Keeper. If you've not read Parapsychology 101 you might want to as it, Keeper of the Flame and Crrying the Torch are my trilogy of Light vs Dark.
Look forward to your thoughts on the up coming chapters.
Hard Hugs
Dinia
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2015 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 17 Truth Be Told
Would what will become of them all
Author's Response:
An HEA that's what. Of course. I don't think I've written any story where the principals didn't end up with one. :D
Have to wait until next chapter to know. :D
Hard Hugs
Dinia
Date: 08 Jun 2015 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Just A Matter Of Time
That was rather a sad chapter. Bella alone. Btw, the new chapter for how Bella got her groove back didn't download properly at least for me. Thanks!
Author's Response:
First, I'm sorry, but I screwed up with the the downloading of this chapter to the story Moving On. I knew I'd get myself introuble when I realized what I'd done. Just didn't have my head working correctly. I'm sorry. Chapter 10 for Moving On will post this Friday.
Second, yep sad chapter. Things will pick up for Bella I bet by the next chapter, but you'll just have to wait and see.
Thanks for taking the time to read and review. You know how much that means.
Hard Hugs
Dinia/Carol
Date: 07 Jun 2015 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Just A Matter Of Time
Good chapter
Author's Response:
thank you so much!
See you next chapter?
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Dinia
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2015 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Just A Matter Of Time
; )
Author's Response:
;) <3
Date: 05 Jun 2015 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Just A Matter Of Time
Let's hope he's still laughing when she tells him the truth! Bella is going to drive herself crazy with this testing to see if Edward truly is the one. Happy surprise about their shared wealth, too! I'm puzzled as to why Bella is so uncertain that she's found her soul mate.
Author's Response:
You know some people just don't want to be happy! Bella's one of then it looks like. :( I've got my fingers crossed that it'll work out for her.
Thanks for reviewing. Sorry I didn't get to you sooner. I just found it. I must have missed it. :( I wonder how many others I've missed. *scratches head*
See you next chapter.
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Carol/Dinia
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2015 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Just A Matter Of Time
Well when will Bella figure out he is her soul mate and how will he take the news about her magic
Author's Response:
Thak you reading and reviewing! Bella will figure it all out in the fullness of time - I hope!
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Dinia
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2015 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Just A Matter Of Time
:)
Author's Response:
:) :) ;)
Date: 23 May 2015 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 15 - And Then, There Was One
Yes, I hope she does too! We need our HEA don't we.
Date: 23 May 2015 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 15 - And Then, There Was One
Come on Bella, have a little faith! I think Edward will be for you what Jasper is to Alice and Emmett is to Rose! There will be no need to worry about being alone!
Author's Response:
YEs he will, if we're going to get our HEA!
Thanks again. You are jsut the bests!
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Carol/Dinia
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2015 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 15 - And Then, There Was One
; )
Author's Response:
;) <3
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2015 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 15 - And Then, There Was One
Poor Bella. I hope she falls for Edward soon
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2015 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 14
; )
Author's Response:
:) <3 :D
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2015 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter! Thank you for the wonderful update
Author's Response:
Thank you sooooooooo much! I really appreciate your response.
Hope to hear from you more often - even a smiley face works and helps to keep me going!
Hard Hugs
Dinia
Date: 08 May 2015 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 14
There was no doubt in my mind that Jasper wanted to be sure of what he already suspected, that Alice is his soulmate. The Knight of Cups card sounds like it was the image of Jasper's personality.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I aims to please ( as much as possible)
See you next chpater.
Hard Hugs
Dinia/Carol
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2015 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 14
:)
Author's Response:
I love that you respond in two different places and I love your smile!
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2015 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 13- It's a Blue Blue Night
; )
Author's Response:
8)
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2015 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 13- It's a Blue Blue Night
:)
Author's Response:
8*)
Date: 17 Apr 2015 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 13- It's a Blue Blue Night
I'll bet all small business would like to insure their outcome the way the Swan sisters do! I'm still curious as to how much they will tell Edward, Emmett and Jasper, about their business and their magic!
Author's Response:
I keep books for a diamond wholesaler 20+ years ago. We had our offices in a 20 story building in Houston, TX which housed hundreds of other wholesalers and some retailers. Many of these while salers were Hindu and every year they performed rituals of their faith for the brining in of abundance. It was very interesting to watch these too. Anyway, these are nothing like what the Swan Sister peformed. And since this is a fiction, the Sisters riturals worked very well! LOL The pigions are about to come home to roost for the Sister though with their respective male counterparts. :D
See you next chapter.
Hard Hugs
Dinia
Date: 17 Apr 2015 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 12
Looks as if Bella is making all Edward's dreams come true!
Author's Response:
Yeah, but why did he have the dreams to begin with? Did Bella work some dream magic on the guy?
So glad you're enjoying this. For some reason this fic is doing better than the reast. I suspect it's because it's a romance. I prefer to write the supernatural and occult things myself. Oh Well.
See you next chapters.
Hard Hugs
Carol/Dnia
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2015 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 13- It's a Blue Blue Night
I loved it wow they are very humble and sweet that is how it should be now how will there day setting up go
Author's Response:
Thank you! They've had a lot of years to learn it's better to nice then not!
I look forward to your comments on the next chapter.
Hard Hugs
Dinia
Date: 13 Apr 2015 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 12
Awesome Chapter! Loved it. Anal shower sex! Fun times!
Author's Response:
I'm happy that you enjoyed it.
See you next chapter.
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Dinia
Date: 12 Apr 2015 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue
Sounds great so far!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
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Dinia
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2015 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 12
Wow I loved it but when will she tell him I can't wait to read
Author's Response:
Maybe Bella will be ok and Conner accept Edward. Just never know with people do you.
Thanks for reading and reviewing,
See you next chapter
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Dinia/Carol
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2015 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 12
; )
Author's Response:
;) <3
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2015 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 12
:)
Author's Response:
<3 <3 <3
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2015 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 11 Revelations
Oh wow is Bella free from the curse and will Edward say anything to her about his dream
Author's Response:
No, sorry. Bella is not free from the curse. Not sure if she will be. could be only Alice and Rosalie find "true" love and Bella will left alone to wander the earth. We'll just have to wait and see what happens. :) Evil. I know. *grinning* Honestly. I"m just the typist. I have to wait until the characters talk to me. I've already gotten 4 and 1/2 more chapters written. Wish I had more, cause I'd like to know what they're going to do.
Thank you so much for your support. That, means a great deal to me. Really.
Hard Hugs
Dinia
Date: 13 Mar 2015 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 11 Revelations
A tiny bit misleading, the title of this chapter, since Bella answered his questions without revealing all that much. There are still some important secrets Bella needs to share with Edward!
Author's Response:
Sorry myFriend. Chapter titles are damned hard to come up with, but, Edward does have the relevation that maybe the dream was real?
Bella will eventually tell all and by doing so may risk all.
Thank you so much for your support, and your comments, and for allowing me to know you just a little.
Hard Hugs
Carol
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2015 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 11 Revelations
:)
Author's Response:
:) :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2015 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 10 The Three Sister's Curse
Love your story can 't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I'm so happy that you're enjoying it.
See you next time.
Hard Hugs
Dinia
Date: 27 Feb 2015 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 10 The Three Sister's Curse
Thanks for the background of the curse. It gives a framework for the actions between the Swan women and the trio of friends that are drawn to them! I'm glad for them finding the guys. It's been way too long they have been waiting!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I always like to have some backstory in my stories, helps understand just where the characters are coming from. Maybe they have found their mates and maybe they haven't. *grin*
See you next time.
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Dinia/Carol
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2015 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 10 The Three Sister's Curse
poor Charlie and Renee
Author's Response:
:'(
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2015 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 9
:)
Author's Response:
:) :) :)
Date: 13 Feb 2015 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 9
Evidently, Edward likes Bella with or without makeup, so that must meanshe hasn't "bewitched" him. These are three really interesting sisters and this is a real good read!
Author's Response:
On the contrary, she's totally bewitched him in all ways. She's just playing it cool. He'll find out, or figure it out before to long I think. Dont' honestly know yet. You see, I'm just the typest. The characters speak to me and tell me how they want the story to go. Sounds silly, I know, but it's true. I've talked to other wirters, and they pretty much all say the same thing too. So, we'll all just have to hang on and see what's gonna happen! :D
Thank you for the "real good read" comment. May I use it as pimpage?
I do look forward to your comments.
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Carol/Dinia
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2015 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 8
Well they have been around for a long time how will they find happiness and sadness update soon
Author's Response:
Only time will tell if they find happiness or not. I guess you'll just have to "hide and watch". Thanks for reading me and thank you so much for reviewing.
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Dinia
Date: 30 Jan 2015 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 8
Thanks much for the background of our three sister witches! I have a question about them bonding with the men in their lives. Is anything permanent going to come of this, or will they love and move on later? I was thinking, it would be a problem with immortal women loving mortal men, so wondered what you had planned for that possibility?
Author's Response:
You, are most welcome. There's a chapter all about "the curse" coming up in the next few. That will explain more, I hope. If not when you finish it, then ask me again and I'll try to explain my thinking. :D
If I was using someone else's setup for mortal and immortal there might be some problems, but I'm afraid you'll just have to wait and see. :D
See you next week!
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Carol/Dinia
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2015 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 8
:)
Author's Response:
:D :) ;)
Date: 30 Jan 2015 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 8
I love the sisters history! I also love Salem! I am less than an hour away! It's a great trip! I am excited for the next update! :)
Author's Response:
Thank You! Oh there's more to come. Trying to cover a lot but a little at a time. Don't want to give it all away. :D
See you next week, or when I update next.
Hard Hugs
Dinia
Date: 17 Jan 2015 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 7 First Date Part 2
This is very good! I am really enjoying this! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you, I've enjoyed writing it a lot.
Looking forward to hearing more from you.
Thanks for taking the time to read and to write.
Hard hugs
Dinid
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2015 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 7 First Date Part 2
:)
Author's Response:
~8^]
Date: 16 Jan 2015 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 7 First Date Part 2
Sounds like a really good first date, even if Emmett didn't get an invitation to spend the night. At least Jasper got lucky, from the looks of it anyway. I was intrigued by that reference to a curse, what's up with that rather cryptic comment?
Author's Response:
Ah the curse. I go into great detail later on so you'll just have to wait. *grin* Can't give it all to you at once you know.
Yes the date did go well. There'll be more to come. :D
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Hard Hugs
Dinia
Date: 01 Jan 2015 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 6
Found you......I loved it
Author's Response:
I'm glad you did! I'm very happy that you enjoyed it. Hope to hear from you more.
Hard Hugs
Dinia
Date: 01 Jan 2015 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 6
I loved Jasper's comment about restaurant choices! Guess it all depends on what you like. The guys were sure impressed with the girls carrying a weapon. Must be the Texan in them!
Author's Response:
I'm so sorry! I just saw this this morning. I'm not getting all of my notifications I think.
Yes, I LOVE Texas - my home State. :)
Thank you!
Loves and Hugs
Dinia
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2014 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 5 First Date
Oh boy they are ready now how will there date go
Date: 19 Dec 2014 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 5 First Date
Sounds like the sisters are lovely and ready to impress the guys. Let's see if that goes the other way, too! Maybe Rosalie will be a bit happier to meet her blind date when she actually sets eyes on him?
Date: 12 Dec 2014 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 4
I like this so far. Keep up the great work!
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2014 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 4
Love your story can not wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2014 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue
:):)
Date: 07 Dec 2014 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 4
So is Bella's games going to come back and bite her in the tushy??
Looking forward to more
Date: 06 Dec 2014 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 4
and now they all are going out on the First Date.
Date: 06 Dec 2014 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 3
I am not on facebook. So I am just here.. thanks
Date: 06 Dec 2014 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it update soon
Date: 05 Dec 2014 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 4
I kind of feel the way Alice does, that using magic on Edward may come back to bite Bella. Since the whole gang is going out tonight, we will see! I'm hoping for good fortune for all involved!
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2014 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 3
Very interesting so far! Keep up the good work.
Date: 22 Nov 2014 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh wow! Wonder if Bella has had the dreams too??
Looking forward to more :D
Author's Response:
What if she sent the dream?
See you in more chapters
Hard Hugs
Dinia
Date: 21 Nov 2014 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love the story. Look forward to reading the next chapter
Date: 21 Nov 2014 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 3
Bella must be casting a spell that has Edward so enthralled! He should tell her about his dream, to explain his staring.
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2014 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha I loved it they have the guys bewitched he hehehe but will they find out there secret update soon
Date: 08 Nov 2014 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 2
Good start.. Yes we drive pickups here in Texas. :-)
Author's Response:
Yes I know, but then we also drive them here in the Deeper South. :)
See you next chapters?
Hard Hugs
Dinia
Date: 08 Nov 2014 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue
I must say thank you. If you are going to change up the actors I am glad you changed Edward.. YIPPIE. I mean KS still helps with Twilight( writers or actors short stories lately) and he makes snide remarks about it.
Good start..
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Hard Hugs
Dinia
Date: 07 Nov 2014 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 2
Very interesting so far! I like it!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Have you joined the Facebook page for this story? Lots of pictures of things relating to chapters there.
See you next chapters
Hard Hugs
Dinia
Date: 07 Nov 2014 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 2
Perhaps Bella sent Edward that dream? It would be most intriguing if she did! I love the dynamic between the cousins, but then I always like Jasper and Edward!
Author's Response:
I'm so sorry if I missed this before. I just saw it this morning. Have no clue why either.
Anyway, yes Bella did send the dream.
Hope you contued to enjoy this.
Hard Hugs
Dinia