Date: 18 Apr 2018 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 20
Even if you leave the story here it’s a brilliant way to end it. But would like to see a few years down the line with them being Forster cares and maybe a few more kids
Date: 05 Jul 2017 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 20
Cute. They are a perfect family, but they could use some more children. They are great parents.
Date: 04 Jun 2017 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 20
I love it. I liked how you looked back.
Date: 03 Jun 2017 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it!
XoxoxoxoX
Alia
Date: 02 Jun 2017 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 20
Aww Natalie's so cute sad this story is coming to a close absolutely love it look forward to next update x
Date: 03 May 2017 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 19
They are so cute.
Date: 25 Apr 2017 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 19
Glad that's them moved in and great to see them getting on so well look forward to next update x
Date: 24 Apr 2017 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 19
Love your story can't wait to read more!
Date: 24 Apr 2017 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter
Date: 22 Apr 2017 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 19
Great Story Another wonderful chapter....I had forgot about this story Thanks for updating..........
Date: 22 Apr 2017 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 19
Love this fic! So very sweet.
Date: 24 Jan 2017 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 18
Great story so far.
Date: 06 Jan 2017 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 18
I love their chemistry.
Date: 16 Dec 2016 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 6
Bless Bella- she is Natalie's rainbow.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I love them together.
Date: 16 Dec 2016 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 18
Great chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks!!!
Date: 16 Dec 2016 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 18
Great chapter. I love their relationshi. They are devoted to one another.
Author's Response:
Thanks, they are pretty cute.
Date: 16 Dec 2016 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 18
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 03 Nov 2016 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 17
OMG!!!!! when I read that I was balling it was soooooo adorable. I can't wait for mpre
Author's Response:
Aww, Thanks!
Date: 08 Aug 2016 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 17
They are so cute. They deserve to be happy.
Date: 08 Aug 2016 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 17
Glad to read a new chapter, keep on writing
Date: 08 Aug 2016 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 17
I am so happy they will be a family. Great chapter. So sweet.
Date: 06 Aug 2016 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 17
Glad you updated I really love this story and Natalie's so cute look forward to next update xx
Date: 05 Aug 2016 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 17
You are one amazing person to have so much going on and still find the time to write to us thanks so much. I wanted to cry when she asked if she could call Edward daddy.
Date: 04 Aug 2016 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 17
I'm so glad you will have more time to write. This was a really good chapter for Bella, Edward and Natalie! They are going to make a great family!
Date: 12 Jun 2016 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 16
I love this story. Very different. I hope you are going to finish it, I cannot wait to read more.
Date: 17 May 2016 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 16
They're perfect for each other.
Date: 07 May 2016 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 16
Great story, I look forward to reading more.
Date: 02 May 2016 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 16
Great story, keep on writing
Date: 30 Apr 2016 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 16
I'm in love wroth your story!
Date: 24 Apr 2016 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 16
I am just so happy to hear from you. That was a great date they needed that WOW
Date: 23 Apr 2016 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love your story and I certainly hope you keep working on this story because is so amazingly good and well written. It has touch my heart and soul on what Natalie has gone through but also Bella's history with domestic violence at the hands of her ex boyfriend Tyler. You have open many eyes and a good discussion forum on this subject that is still consider taboo to many people. You have done more good with this work than I think you will ever know. Somewhere there is a woman or young reader that is seeing herself in Bella's previous situation for the first time, She is taken a long hard look at her situation and hard look at the guy she is dating and is begining to ask her self the some questions. On behalf of all women around the world who have or are still suffering from domestic violance I thank you so oh so much for writing about this subject. I hope to see an update very soon in the future. I look forward to it in fact! Thank you
Date: 21 Apr 2016 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 16
Fun date ;) LOL
Date: 21 Apr 2016 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 16
Great story can't wait for more!
XoxoxoxoX
Ashmerlin aka Alia
Date: 21 Apr 2016 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 16
Always a good chapter when these two connect!!!
Looking forward to see how Natalie doing on 1st time away
Date: 21 Apr 2016 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 16
I was so excited to see another update! Keep up the awesome work!
Date: 20 Apr 2016 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 16
That was just perfect
Date: 20 Apr 2016 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 15
So happy this story is continuing! This has to be so hard for Natalie. But really it's a good thing for her too!
Date: 20 Apr 2016 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 16
At least now we won't have to worry about them exploding! I thought that scene was beautifully done. I have to agree with Bella, how are they going to refrain from doing that all the time? Love this couple and their little girl!
Date: 20 Apr 2016 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 16
Smiles! Can't wait for more!
Date: 20 Apr 2016 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 16
Awesome. Glad you're back
Date: 19 Apr 2016 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 15
That child still has the ability to shock them both, with her views on life! It's pretty sad that she has thoughts like that, but I'm sure her therapy will help with those! I'm really looking forward to these three having a good life together!
Date: 19 Apr 2016 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 14
I figured that amazing little girl would take the news of her momther's passing the way she did! In a real way, this is the beginning of a much better life for Natalie, despite the way it happened!
Date: 19 Apr 2016 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 13
That was pretty much a heart breaker of a chapter, you did a fabulous job of it , too!
Date: 19 Apr 2016 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 12
Therapy is the right thing for Natalie just now, and especially if her dies soon.
Date: 19 Apr 2016 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 11
It will actually be for the best if Heidi does just pass away, then her suffering will be over. It will mean that Natalie will have a strong foundation of love and support with Bella and Edward!
Date: 19 Apr 2016 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 10
What a great guy these girls have found!
Date: 19 Apr 2016 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 9
Good lord, I think she has met the perfect man, at least for her and Natalie!
Date: 19 Apr 2016 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 8
That poor child, to have the knowledge she has, way before she should have had to deal with it! It looks like she really wants to be with Bella, and won't mind if Charlie and Edward come along to the zoo. How sad that she is nine years old and has never been to the zoo!
Date: 19 Apr 2016 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 7
Shame on both Bella and Edward for not rooting for the Seattle teams! It's nice that they have hit it off like this, even considering the circumstances of their first meeting! It will probably be a fun date at the zoo, especially if Natalie has never been!
Date: 19 Apr 2016 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 6
Bella is getting to meet Edward's family, bit by bit. Natalie's mother seems to be not long for this world. It would almost be a blessing if she just quietly slipped away. Then her chils might have a chance at a decent life!
Date: 19 Apr 2016 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 5
Yes, even out of something so horrible, some good has come! I just hope it continues!
Date: 19 Apr 2016 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 4
Thankfully Bella was home when this mess happened, so help got there in time! It makes mt skin crawl to think of what could have happened to Natalie, otherwise!
Date: 19 Apr 2016 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 3
Happy for Bella's success, but she really needs to get out a bit and meet a nice guy! Of course I can see how she would get involved with a sweet little girl like Natalie. Who wouldn't?
Date: 19 Apr 2016 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 15
I just found this story and am all caught up. So glad you're working on it again. Beautiful, thoughtful writing and a heartbreaking, yet so hopeful story. Please keep it up. We're anxious to see what's next! ;)
Date: 19 Apr 2016 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 15
So happy to hear from you I am with you all the way. Natalie has come along way but she has many more bumps to go.
Date: 19 Apr 2016 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 2
At least she's honest about what she does to make rent money. It's nice of Bella to offer to keep Natalie so she isn't exposed to what goes on at her apartment. You can't help but feel sorry for the way this little girl lives!
Date: 19 Apr 2016 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 15
This was great.
Poor Nat has been through so much...
Loving this and looking ofrward to more :D
Date: 19 Apr 2016 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 15
I can't imagine the pain of writers block bit so glad to get an update. I'd take some errors and more chapters than fine tooth combed edited ;) ijs haha!!! Can't wait for the next one!!!
Date: 19 Apr 2016 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 15
Great update. Missed ya
Date: 19 Apr 2016 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 15
Thank you for writing!
Date: 18 Apr 2016 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
What a pathetic situation! Didn't take Bella long to figure out what was going on, either!
Date: 25 Feb 2016 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 14
I love this story so far and really look forward to reading more.
Date: 12 Oct 2015 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please update soon this is a great story!
Date: 04 Oct 2015 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 14
This is soo good.
Poor Nat, she has gone through so much. Hopefuelly things will start being better for her.
Loving this Edward!
Date: 30 Sep 2015 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 7
I followed this from a FB rec. Its very good!! :D
Author's Response:
I was wondering why my email was blowing up with new followers. Thank you! Chapter 15 is in the works.
Date: 21 Jun 2015 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 14
Natalie was ready so sad but it was good she was ready. Edward is so sweet
Date: 20 Jun 2015 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 14
Found this story today and love it.
Date: 19 Jun 2015 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 14
I love this story.
Date: 19 Jun 2015 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 9
What a great day for Natalie. Edward and Bella will be great parents.
Date: 19 Jun 2015 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 14
Yeah, it's so obvious that both Bella and Edward are falling hard for each other! Moving in a normal house and a new neighborhood will be a great start for Natalie. I hope we get more updates on this story. :)
I'm reading/following Come Back Tomorrow too! Really a sad story. I'm still hoping some miracles to happen to Edward but it seems he's getting worst. I hope he doesn't get pneumonia...
Date: 19 Jun 2015 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 14
Thanks for the new chapter. I really like this couple and sweet Natalie. Come Back Tomorrow is a great story!
Date: 09 Apr 2015 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 13
:) loving this story
Date: 20 Mar 2015 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 13
I love this story....Any new updates?
Hopefully soon.
Brenda
Date: 19 Mar 2015 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 13
This is a hard chapter to read. Natalie talking to her mom, letting her go so as not feel more pain really made me cry. I don't know how I'll deal with something likw that but it proves that even if Heidi made poor decisions in life, she's done a good job raising that little girl. Hope there'll be an update soon...
Date: 14 Mar 2015 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wonderful story!
Date: 14 Mar 2015 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 13
This is a fantastic story. And I totally understand what Natalie meant about her mum not being there. I felt the same about my grandmother the last time I saw her.
XoxoxoxoxoX
Ashmerlin
Author's Response:
Thank you! I have an aunt that overdosed on heroine and too much insulin. While she was in a complete coma I really felt as though she was gone. Her soul wasn't there. She eventually did wake up and recover enough to live but is now a 47 year old 3 year old.
Date: 14 Mar 2015 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 13
Yay!!! You're back. So glad you choose to continue the story. Natalie is such a strong little thing. Can't til next chapter.
Date: 14 Mar 2015 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 13
So glad to see an update......thanks for not bailing on it......
Natalie is one amazing kid......that was the sweetest goodbye ever.......now her and Bella can start their bonding as a family......
See you next time....
Date: 14 Mar 2015 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 13
I was so excited to see your update Thanks. What an amazing little girls.
Date: 14 Mar 2015 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 13
*sniff* so touching.
Date: 13 Oct 2014 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 12
My heart is breaking for this little girl and all those around her she is such a sweet brave little girl that has had to grow up way to fast. I was so excited to see your post thanks much I am here when ever you post.
Date: 12 Oct 2014 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 12
The poor dear. I'm so glad she is accepting help from everyone.
Date: 12 Oct 2014 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 12
Thanks for updating :) and I love your characters to...Natalie had a good first therapy session so hopefully she'll be able to open up and get past this.
Date: 11 Oct 2014 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loving it! Fantastic story with great characters.
Date: 13 Aug 2014 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 11
great story so far! please update soon!!
Date: 08 Aug 2014 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 11
Very pleasant mini lemon.
Date: 07 Aug 2014 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 10
They really are a perfect family.
Date: 07 Aug 2014 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 9
I'm glad they had such a good day.
Date: 07 Aug 2014 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 8
I love that she calls him Charles. Too cute.