[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2014 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 23
My patience is THREAD-BARE!!!!! Please oh pleaseeeeeee????
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2014 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 23
Lmao he didn't realize it was Jasper. Man kiss her already. She is doing so well.
Date: 19 Jun 2014 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 23
Love the chapter. But on Edward being behind on who Alice is with. He is male. It always takes a woman to keep them in line.
Date: 19 Jun 2014 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 23
Bella is definitely growing up. I laughed when Bella told Edward that she thought it was Jasper. Lol Edward is so dense sometimes. Great story. Awesome job writing it.
Date: 19 Jun 2014 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 23
Although he's realized that he has more than friends feelings for her, he's still a bit clueless, isn't he? Why is he going so slowly? I have no problem with that, I just wonder what he's waiting for. The slow burn here works wonderfully for this story, though, and I'm loving every word.
Date: 19 Jun 2014 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 23
Love that they are getting closer
Date: 19 Jun 2014 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 23
I'm loving this....even if patience is not one of my virtues. The slow burn is necessary because of Bella's past.
Wondering why Drake looked at Bella funny? Was it just surprise or something more guilty?
Date: 19 Jun 2014 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 23
I am glad Edward slapped his head when he finely got that it is Jasper lol. I think it is going to be any time now they are doing everything else most of it comes after the kiss so they are ahead of themselves lol
Date: 19 Jun 2014 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 23
Jajajajaja Edward is sooooooo dense, it was in front of his eyes!!! Bella had to tell him. Yay!! They are getting to be much closer!!! Hope they get together soon!! Good chapter thanks!!
Date: 19 Jun 2014 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 23
I am wondering when the man the purchased Bella is going to come look for her??
Looking forward to more :)
Date: 19 Jun 2014 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 23
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 19 Jun 2014 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 23
B is coming along so well.
Date: 19 Jun 2014 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 22
I think Edward still feels a little uneasy about Bella's age so he might wait till she turnd 20 or she makes the first move...
Date: 18 Jun 2014 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 22
Bella has been dreaming of grandpa. I love that they are getting there slow is good
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2014 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 22
Oh I loved it grandpa is still taking care of them from beyond hehehe gotta l9ve him for that and wow Edward has fallen hard and deep now when will Bella hmmm but I think she still needs more time before they kiss
Date: 18 Jun 2014 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 22
Oh yes! LOVE this chapter. So he was clueless and now he's not. Do I think she feels the same about him? Yes, I do, but maybe she's not put words to her feelings yet or she maybe can't believe he would return her love....I like that you're taking it slow with them....
Date: 18 Jun 2014 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 22
It's about time Edward
Date: 18 Jun 2014 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 22
Finally! He noticed e is in love with her! Why is he always so dense? And really he is still in denial about Alice and Jasper? Thank you! Good chapter; but they should kiss already!
Date: 18 Jun 2014 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 22
Poor Edward. He really is clueless. I am not talking about the Bella situation. I am talking about Alice. Duh!! I am thinking that grandpa has visited Bella too and maybe Peter.
Date: 18 Jun 2014 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 22
A while longer. Edward is right not to rush. He needs to take it slow for both there sakes. She could could be mistaking gratitude or her first crush for something it's not. She also needs to finish healing and I disagree with Alice there is a big difference before a 19 and 29. Most people grow profoundly in their late teens and early twenties. I'm really enjoying this Edward he's different from your typical Edward
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2014 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 22
Grandpa needs to visit Bella to let her know it is ok to love an older man.
Date: 18 Jun 2014 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 22
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 18 Jun 2014 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 22
Peter had a dream of grandpa. I think Bella has as well. or if she hasn't yet then she will soon.
Date: 18 Jun 2014 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 22
I can understand you going slow. B still has more healing to do I think. So what happened with the guys Charlie was selling her too? Did they get caught or are they going to show up at a later point in the story?
Date: 18 Jun 2014 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 21
I think their relationship is developing at a nice pace and it is good that the feeling they just had gave them each a little shock. The means it is developing at just the right pace. Edward is a little slow on the uptake that he doesn't know Jasper is Alice's mystery man!!
Date: 18 Jun 2014 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 21
I am glad they are feeling it is he going to think he is a perv?? Poor Bella she has no clue what the feeling is does she. I think Jessica is looking for love for a long time.
Date: 17 Jun 2014 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 21
Oh my gosh! I just found this today. Read all 21 chapters without stopping. This is such a wonderful story. I know some would think it strange of me to say that because of all of the abuse and violence in the begining,but I tend to look beyond the hurt and focus on the healing. That I think comes from being a victum of sexual abuse when I was much younger. But I refused to be a victum and let it get me down. I put it behind me and made sure it didn't rule me. That is why I love this story. Bella is not going to let it rule her for the rest of her life, either.
This is so beautifully written. You are very talented and I very much look forward to the rest of the story.
Date: 17 Jun 2014 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 21
I think that opening up to Bella about his cheating girlfriend brought him closer to realizing his growing feelings for her. I think Bella is young and maybe not too sure when her feelings for him changed and grew to be more than friendly. Jessica needs to get a clue and keep her hands to herself, but you're right we haven't heard her story yet. The subtlieies here lend an amazing shading of feelings to this story. I really like that. !!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2014 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 21
Oh wow I think they both are both scared of how they are feeling what will be next
Date: 17 Jun 2014 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 21
Ugh Jessica needs to get a clue. Jeez louise. Glad B&E are so comfortable with each other.
Date: 17 Jun 2014 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 21
Poor clueless Edward clearly jasper is Alice booty call
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2014 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 21
I think both Edward and Bella felt fireworks and not just the ones in the sky. I think it scared them both.
Date: 17 Jun 2014 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 21
I loved their talk. I was surprised that Jessica was not hateful. Glad that she seemed to be nice to Bella.
Date: 17 Jun 2014 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 21
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 17 Jun 2014 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it :)
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2014 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 20
Just caught up. Love love love it as usual. You ladies rock!!!
Date: 17 Jun 2014 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 20
What a sweet day they all had...and Bella wanting her story to just be between them is saying a lot :)
Date: 16 Jun 2014 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 20
I loved the snowball fight and sledding. Lol Alice and Peter's side was the best.
Date: 16 Jun 2014 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 20
That was a very sweet chapter. I love that Edward and his family are giving Bella and Peter all the Holiday things they never had with Charlie. I think Bella and Edward are falling for each other, though they might not yet realize it....
Date: 16 Jun 2014 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 19
That was a close call! It's amazing that Edward can't see what's right in front of his face!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2014 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 20
I loved it wow it was scary there for a moment but Edward helped save her again and is making her Christmas special update soon
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2014 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 20
Sweet and moving it along well.
Date: 16 Jun 2014 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 20
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 16 Jun 2014 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 20
I am loving it he is giving them a lot of there firsts when is he going to give Bella her first kiss.
Date: 16 Jun 2014 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 20
awww they are coming along nicely
Date: 16 Jun 2014 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 20
LOVE LOVE LOVE this chapter! !!!!!!!! Glad they are having some good times.
Date: 16 Jun 2014 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 20
I thought they would kiss this chapter, oh well
Date: 16 Jun 2014 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 20
So enjoying your story! XOXO,Cheri
Date: 16 Jun 2014 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 19
I love Alice she is so smart I cant believe Edward has not figured out that Jasper is Alice's booty call.
Date: 15 Jun 2014 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 19
I am so glad that Bella was not hurt. Thankful Lauren and them got to her in time. Really, does Edward not think it is odd that Alice said she was moving in with Jasper? ? Lol. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us.
Date: 15 Jun 2014 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 19
Poor B. Hope the cops do something about this guy since he tried to hurt/rape B, as well as animal cruelty.
Date: 15 Jun 2014 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 18
Silly Alice teasing E. Glad they are skyping. Stupid mean people with thedog.
Date: 15 Jun 2014 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 19
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 15 Jun 2014 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 19
Yes Edward is really obtuse, its pretty obvious that Alice is with Jasper! I just think Edward is in denial with Alice being his sister and all!!! Great chapter thank you!!!
Date: 15 Jun 2014 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 18
I think additional feelings, besides those of friendship, are growing in Edward.
Date: 15 Jun 2014 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 17
Love that whole ding-dong double entendre conversation. It had me in stitches too!!
Date: 14 Jun 2014 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 18
I think Bella feel for Edward long ago and Edward is starting to catch up to his really feelings.
Date: 14 Jun 2014 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 18
I am wondering what Edward is going to think when he finds out that Alice is talking to Jasper. Lol. Love the sand story idea.
Date: 14 Jun 2014 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 16
I understand about Misty. Humans wouldn't put down a person who freaked out after a lifetime of abuse and attacked 3 people, but then we don't treat all living creatures the same, do we? It's a shame.....I love that Bella and Edward are getting closer, playful even.....How old is Edward again? I know there's an age difference between him and Bella, but it's not that much, is it? No matter if it is....
Author's Response:
At story start Edward is just turned 27 and Bella is 17. :)
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2014 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wow they are getting closer and closer and Edwards view of her is changing she is not some hurt little kids she is becoming a woman and he is very slowly falling for her update soon
Date: 14 Jun 2014 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 18
I love how their relationship is unfolding...but it's funny how Edward doesn't see it as odd that they spend hours on just one Skype call but Alice gets it... I think he is starting to have different feeling besides just friendship for Bella.. I hope she doesn't start dating someone and end up getting hurt or being abused again...
Date: 14 Jun 2014 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 18
I love how they are with each other I bet they are the only ones that see what is happening with them Alice knows.
Date: 14 Jun 2014 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 18
They are getting close
Date: 14 Jun 2014 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 18
Loving their relationship and the sand story telling is a great idea.
Date: 14 Jun 2014 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 18
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 14 Jun 2014 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 17
She is really starting to bloom. Can't wait for them to start getting closer in a mature way!
Date: 14 Jun 2014 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 17
oh yeah ask jasper and see what happens edward lol
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2014 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 17
oh wow they had a good time and Bella seems so happy now and is going to collage will she b able to handle it i think with help and incouragement from her new family she will update soon
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2014 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 17
Oh my good God! I just about fell on the floor laughing myself during the whole Ding Dong conversation. And I really wish I could be a fly on the wall when Edward asks Jasper to help find out who Alice is seeing. That should be good for a few laughs.
Thanks, Maria
Date: 13 Jun 2014 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 17
When is Edward going to figure out that Bella is his soul mate??
Date: 13 Jun 2014 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 17
I swear I will never look at Ding-Dongs the same way again! So funny! Loved the chapter! You do a wonderful job depicting things in real time. I also love the fact that he plans on asking Jasper to investigate himself. That ought to be amusing when it all comes out! Thank you again!
Date: 13 Jun 2014 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 17
Thank you so much for the daily updates!! and this rally great story!!! Bella´s recuperation is amazing, working in the shelter helped a lot!! It is great that they are getting along so well!! I´s obvious jasper is with Alice!!!
Date: 13 Jun 2014 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 17
I'm glad they're getting along so well. Edward, asking Jasper about Alice would be funny. LOL
Date: 13 Jun 2014 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 17
Loved this chapter, many lol moments. I think Edward should definitely ask Jasper for help, he might get an answer he's not ready for.