Date: 27 Jun 2014 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 30
LOVE Peter's speach
Date: 26 Jun 2014 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 30
awww, how cute! the bride fell asleep on the wedding night then wondered the next morning if she was really married! That is precious beyond words.....can we please now have some sex in this story?
Date: 26 Jun 2014 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 30
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 26 Jun 2014 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 30
The wedding was perfect! !!!! Loved all the speeches. It does not surprise me that they did not have sex their 1st night married.
Date: 26 Jun 2014 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 30
This story is great. I just have one nitpick. Since Edward is a vet, he is technically a "DVM", not a "DMV". He is a doctor of veterinary medicine, not a "doctor of medicine veterinary".
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2014 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 30
These two are too sweet and I am so happy they are finally married. They have their whole lives to love on each other. When it happens it will be amazing.
Date: 26 Jun 2014 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 30
wonderful ceremony and beautiful speeches.
Date: 25 Jun 2014 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 29
Everything is coming together nicely and Peter's dreams are right on target.
Date: 25 Jun 2014 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 29
Love love love it. It looks like Grandpa is not the only lyrics one who talks to Peter in dreams. Glad Peter is happy for Edward and Bella. So glad that it seems like the towns people are not going to make a big deal about Edward and Bella.
Date: 25 Jun 2014 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 29
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 25 Jun 2014 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 29
I think that the towns people had probably already figured out that Edward and Bella are a couple. I mean Jessica knows and may have mentioned it to someone, or they would have just noticed how they are together. I think it is great how the town is gossipping about them, but not for their relationship but because of their generosity.
Great Chapter
Date: 25 Jun 2014 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 29
I love them Bella and Peter are finely getting the life they deserve. No one seems surpised that Peter was talking to his mom.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2014 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 29
I loved it wow the family is all tied together now they are all one big happy family they way it is ment to be and that was cool what Bella and Peter did for the Black's and now 5he town is seeing Bella in a whole new light update soon
Date: 25 Jun 2014 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 29
Woo Hoo Engagements, marriages, new houses, adoptions. Such a happy chapter.
Date: 25 Jun 2014 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 29
Lovely chapter. I'm glad you got all the angst out of the way first so that the end could be smooth going. Any lemons coming?
Date: 25 Jun 2014 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 28
Such a sweet proposal. Hopefully they don't leave Esme off their invitation list! (;
Date: 25 Jun 2014 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 28
LOVE it
Date: 25 Jun 2014 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 28
The butterfly part was really great...glad everything worked out with the " rents " moving back so everyone can be together...
Date: 24 Jun 2014 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 28
Ah, what a sweet proposal!! :)
Date: 24 Jun 2014 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 28
Love it Grandpa is a tatle tail lol. I am so excited
Date: 24 Jun 2014 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 28
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 24 Jun 2014 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 28
Wow wonderful chapter. An Adoption, a marriage announcement and a proposal!!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2014 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 28
Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhaha I loved it momma Es is awesome hehehehehe she is a mom and knows all Alice was sooooo busted but how romantic was Edward that was so beautiful update soon
Date: 24 Jun 2014 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 28
All is falling into the right places. It's mildly amusing that Esme and Edward both told Alice she wouldn't get wedding gifts from them as they were not invited to the wedding. I think they will, eventually. Butterflies and marriage proposals make the sweetness of this chapter even more so....
Date: 24 Jun 2014 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 28
Love love love it!!!!! I did not see it coming of Alice and Jasper already getting married. Love how Esme gets on to her. Lol. Solo happy to have Esme and Carlisle moving to the ranch. The proposal sounded beautiful.
Date: 24 Jun 2014 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 28
The last few chapters have all been great!!! thank you so much!!!!! I´m really happy that bella and edward are together, their first date was sooo good!!!! It is great that Peter is being adopted by the Cullens, and that the big house is going to Jacob!!!! Im also shocked and happy that alice married jasper!! Again thank you very much for the daaily updates
Date: 24 Jun 2014 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 28
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 24 Jun 2014 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 27
Wonderful! XOXO,Cheri
Date: 24 Jun 2014 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 27
What a sweet date. He pulled out all of the stops. jasper's little speach was pretty funny too.
Date: 24 Jun 2014 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 27
Great date!!
Looking forward to more :)
Date: 24 Jun 2014 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 27
Sweet
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2014 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 27
Lmao Jasper and Alice are too funny making sure he has everything. Sweet date.
Date: 23 Jun 2014 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 27
wonderful first date
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2014 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 27
Lovely first date. I'm impressed.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2014 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 27
Wow Jasper was funny heheheh but wow now that is how you woo a woman you love wow
Date: 23 Jun 2014 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 27
What a great first date. I loved Jasper talking to Edward like is son going on his first date lol
Date: 23 Jun 2014 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 27
I'm swooning and imagining it is me in his arms.....*sigh*.....such a foolish old woman am I. And still a romantic. Lovely date!
Date: 23 Jun 2014 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 27
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 23 Jun 2014 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 27
LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! That was the perfect date for them. Awesome job! !!!!!
Date: 22 Jun 2014 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 26
It's good that Bella was able to go back to the house and get a bit of closure... Her idea for the house was great.... A few more people know about their relationship so they should probably tell everybody soon.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2014 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 26
I loved it now Jessica knows but was sweet about it and Bella is doing so great to go into her home and face some of her past was big now how will dinner go and where is Edward talking her on their date
Date: 22 Jun 2014 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 26
I love it and Jess was very cool about it. I think filling that house with happy family is the best
Date: 22 Jun 2014 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 26
Bella is so sweet after what she has been through. I do feel bad for Jessica and wish that there was someone in town for her too.
Date: 22 Jun 2014 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 26
Ok did I miss something? In your author's note it sounds/reads like Bella's mom is Tanya. I thought her mom was Renee.
Glad Jessica did not throw a fit when she found out about Edward and Bella. Hope she finds someone special.
I laughed reading about Jasper. Lol.
Author's Response:
Peter and Bella's mother was Tanya Renee Dwyer.
Date: 22 Jun 2014 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 26
Hope Jessica keeps her word. Great idea from Bella about the house
Date: 22 Jun 2014 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 26
How incredibly selfless it is that Bella wants to help Jacob and Leah in that way. She is a pure soul, despite how she was raised. I think Edward and Bella's "secret" won't stay that way very much longer at all!! Such a nice turn this story is taking after the way it started out....thanks for writing!
Date: 22 Jun 2014 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 25
Awww for first kiss. Glad she's strong enough to tell him she wants to wait.
Date: 22 Jun 2014 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 24
Wow. Charlie got off WAY to easy
Date: 22 Jun 2014 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 26
Wonderful chapter. Feel sorry for Jessica, or should I? XOXO,Cheri
Date: 22 Jun 2014 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 26
90,000 sounds like a lot of money. But for a house, its really not. Although they may not want to live with the ghosts of Charlie and Tanya.
Looking forward to more.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2014 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 25
I loved it poor Jessica I hope she can find her special someone but yeah for Bella and Edward and the fact they are talking and letting each other know what they want is great now how long before they marry hmmmmm hehehe update soon
Date: 22 Jun 2014 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 25
Bella is so cute about asking him to wait and aslo telling him about Jessica and how bad she felt about her.
Date: 22 Jun 2014 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 25
I feel bad for Jessica...maybe she'll meet someone that has a child or could adopt a child with. I love Edward and Bella admitting they love each other..now to see how everyone else will take the news... I think with those kisses it'll be hard for them to wait till the wedding so they better get married quick...lol
Date: 21 Jun 2014 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 25
I am glad to see that Jessica is not being ugly to Bella. Thanks for sharing Jessica' s story with us. That is a sad story.
I am glad that they are not going to hide their relationship from the town. I know Alice knows how they feel for each other but what are Esme and Carlisle going to say? I think Peter will be happy.
Glad they finally kissed and that they talked about how to proceed with their relationship.
Date: 21 Jun 2014 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 25
They are so adorable!
Date: 21 Jun 2014 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 25
I am so happy. She has had the dreams of them being married just like him. I love that they are not going to hide but not put it everyones face they need that time. Jessica is a good person she just wants to be loved.
Date: 21 Jun 2014 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 25
This was the best chapter ever! I love that Bella wants to wait on sex until she is married. I love that she could say that to him, ask him for that. I love even more that he will wait. I'm not opposed to sex before marriage but respect the right and privilege of others to do what is best for them.....and it's just a story. It's refreshing that you have put this in your stories. You know, I love all kinds of stories whether they are mostly chaste like this one, all the way up to and including pure smut. I get something for all of them. I really enjoy reading this story as well as the last one you wrote. Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2014 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 25
LOVED the back story on Jessica ... LOVED the kiss even more!!! Thank you!
Date: 21 Jun 2014 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 25
Perhaps you could mak Jessica a fauster mom or something. Then she would not have to fixate upon her cat Molly so much. She needs a child to give her love to. Thanks - Xanath
Date: 21 Jun 2014 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 25
Finally!!! They kissed!!!! I´m not surprised at Edwards lack of filter, he has been trying to saying it for a long time; it is soooo good! I´m sorry about Jessica I understand a little bit better!! Thank you so much!!! Very good chapter!!!!
Date: 21 Jun 2014 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 25
I loved Edward's lack of filter. After all the time they've spent ignoring things, it was great to see him let it all out.
Bella was pretty open about her feelings and thoughts as well. I'm glad she is.
About what her therapyst said, yes, it's never good to become dependent on someone, but that doesn't mean we can't ask or go get help at times when things are tough, like Bella's nightmares. Balancing it, though, isn't easy. Something tells me they'll manage.
Date: 21 Jun 2014 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 25
I love this story! I will agree this Bella should wait to be married before experiencing intercourse; however, I hope they don't have to defend their relationship to everyone. I also hope that isn't the reason she's waiting. I'd like to think that it's because she wants to be a complete person before she can, and that will take time. I love this Edward. He is such a solid rock for her and is selfless!
Date: 21 Jun 2014 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 25
Perfect chapter! Can we please find Jessica someone to fall in love with, perhaps someone who has kids? This story makes my heart happy!
Date: 21 Jun 2014 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 25
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 21 Jun 2014 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 24
So enjoying your story, thank you for sharing. XOXO, Cheri
Date: 21 Jun 2014 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 24
My, poor Bella!!
Date: 20 Jun 2014 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 24
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 20 Jun 2014 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like this story a lot, but no one is as naive as Edward about Alice & Jasper being a couple. Come on! I don't agree with the reviewer about Bella is not a sex before marriage girl/woman. At the beginning of the story what Bella was was very young & damaged. That changes as the story progresses.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2014 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 24
Oh wow you made me cry Charlie was an evil sick bastered I hope he is rotting in hell but good for Bella she got it out and now she can heal from it update soon
Date: 20 Jun 2014 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 24
I'm glad that Bella told Edward about her mom. I knew that Charlie was making her mom have sex with other men for money. He was one sick dude.
Date: 20 Jun 2014 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 24
She needs to forgive herself for what she think she did wrong even though she did nothing wrong. I cant wait for the next chapter
Date: 20 Jun 2014 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 24
That was a very emotional chapter. I'm glad Bella got that out and that she is seeing a therapist. The pain and the hurt are bringing them closer. I agree that, with this Bella, the sex before marriage thing doesn't work. I'm glad your wrote it that way already and am eager to see what you do next with these characters.
Date: 20 Jun 2014 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 23
Edward was a little slow on the Jasper/Alice situation. It is a good thing he is better at animals than people. He seems to pick up the animal clues much faster.
Date: 20 Jun 2014 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 23
Glad to know Bella is more observant than Edward!!