Date: 09 Jul 2015 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 101
great fic thanks for sharing this on here with us ;D
Date: 09 Jul 2015 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 97
excellent proposal;) but what happened about her birthday? i'm so loving this story ;D
Date: 01 Nov 2012 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 33
Someone will see them together eventually. Would that be so bad? They are totally professional at work, so I don't see the problem. Yeah, I'm being too happy for them to see any problems. *grins* I like it that way. heehee! xo Kelly
Date: 01 Nov 2012 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 32
Good lord, the sex between them is so hot! xo Kelly
Date: 01 Nov 2012 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 31
Mike really needs help in the women department, doesn't he? I can't help but giggle at him. xo Kelly
Date: 17 Oct 2012 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 101
I saw on FFNet that chapter 100 showed as complete and on TWCS the chapter itself showed fini but the story summary showed no for completed at the ch 100 stage, so was not entirely surprised to see 101 but thought it would be about a baby or something.
I assumed anyway, unless they are very unlucky, that Bella will become pregnant in the next couple of years.
They had already started to settle down near the end which was good as they would have to tone it down once the children came but I think being parents will be their next big adventure and I think each stage of their lives together will be one adventure after another.
I don’t particularly want to hear about Renee, she’s served her purpose and is only a bit player in this story as Bella’s very much an adult.
I am glad Edward being gorgeous and smitten and sexy and the love of Bella’s life didn’t have to be rubbed in Jake’s face. Jake found out before Bella that they were not suited and would have had a mediocre life together at best.
Whatever life he has with his Brazilian person is beside the point. Jake breaking up with Bella freed her to find an exceptional life partner and she will have an exceptional life with him, with no regrets.
Thank you again
Luv
XOXO
Author's Response:
Good feedback, thanks. On the "complete" status for TWCS, truthfully I just forgot to mark the story complete when I posted chapter 100. Ha ha.
Date: 17 Oct 2012 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 100
Beautiful ending, thanks so much
Luv
XOXO
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for sticking with me until the end. :-)
Date: 16 Oct 2012 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 100
so happy for them... wished we would have read about them having babies and such... I enjoyed reading this story.. great job!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Appreciated all your reviews along the way. :-)
Date: 16 Oct 2012 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 99
Great Chapter
Luv
XOXO
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 16 Oct 2012 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 98
Sure sure Heidi’s bad but Emmett is far from innocent, so he decided to clean up his act for someone he couldn’t get otherwise, big deal.
Luv
XOXO
Author's Response:
Yes, no one in this story is perfect. Even dear Bella and Edward.
Date: 16 Oct 2012 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 99
awesome chapter! Bella and Rose are a force to be reckoned with!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I was nervous about this one.
Date: 14 Oct 2012 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 97
I think the proposal was gorgeous.
Bella did get her job offer a day early making it Thursday and now Thursdays just got better.
Luv
XOXO
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 14 Oct 2012 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 96
Poor Lauren I think she will get a rude awakening when Heidi dumps her.
The only thing I can say in Heidi’s favour is at least she wasn’t someone used by Emmett when in his manwhore days.
That’s why I’m glad it turned out good for Jess and Mike as I didn’t like that Bella told Mike to lie to Jess to get sex from her but maybe Bella knew if Mike put more effort in he would get a relationship he wasn’t expecting.
Luv
XOXO
Author's Response:
Ah, I hadn't thought of Bella's banter with Mike as serious suggestion that he like to Jess, but if it came across that way I should consider revising a little. Thanks for the review - love to get feedback like this because it makes me think!
Date: 14 Oct 2012 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 95
Those two, I just hope they can always be on each other’s wave length but I supposed they are an ideal B&E.
Luv
XOXO
Date: 14 Oct 2012 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 97
yes!!!! omg I hope she says yes... his rambling is so cute...
Author's Response:
Thanks. :-)
Date: 11 Oct 2012 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 94
Bella’s quiet thoughts were not disapproval of Leah but she was self-conscious of intruding on a private matter between mother and daughter. It goes to show that unless you are a mind reader you can misinterpret body language that’s why verbal communication is so important.
I always think that women in same sex relationships don’t really present a problem for parents wanting grandchildren as their daughters can get pregnant, it’s just the contributing male thing they have to think about and even if they were in a hetero relationship or marriage doesn’t mean it would last.
Anyway Bella and Edward look like the ideal lovey-dovey well mannered couple on the outside but are sizzling, I was going to say behind closed doors but the doors or windows are not always so closed, the scamps.
Luv
XOXO
Author's Response:
Thanks for the detailed review. Love reading your reaction.
Date: 11 Oct 2012 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 94
aww so charlie likes edward ... what a sweet chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 10 Oct 2012 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 93
Edward is supportive; he always has Bella’s best interests in mind.
I don’t supposed they saw each other that much at work as she was often away on her tours but now it will be school hours if she gets the job.
Of course with the way Edward is moving and given both their ages she might be pregnant in the not too distant future.
Great story
Luv
XOXO
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing so consistently - love it! Glad you've enjoyed the story.
Date: 10 Oct 2012 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 93
aww that was sweet... did Edward ask permission for her hand??
Date: 09 Oct 2012 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 92
yes bella go rescue your man
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 09 Oct 2012 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 92
Leah didn’t think Jake handled it well, well that’s an understatement.
Sue seems slightly brash but maybe it’s just the strangeness of the situation.
Edward is a peach as always.
Luv
XOXO
p.s. thanks for posting here.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing here and on ff. SOOOO appreciated.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing here and on ff. SOOOO appreciated.
Date: 09 Oct 2012 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 91
Ah now it's on here too. I haven't read this one to see if it's more raunchier, i don't suppose it could be, but it's all good clean fun.
Luv
XOXO
Author's Response:
So far they're identical. If I ever need to change that, I have this version that can stay in tact.
Date: 09 Oct 2012 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 91
this story is soo good.. can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 08 Oct 2012 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 90
Edward sure learned a lot as a teenager but then again I supposed he’s watched his share of stuff and has a willing partner to try it all out, especially since they are so suited and can turn everything into a plus.
Even though they haven’t been together, together they have been quite smitten with each other for some time and have certainly gotten to know each other outside of the now intimate aspects of their relationship. They may have appeared to have been just colleagues during that time but as Edward said, he hung on her every word.
Now we have to see how Charlie will view their relationship. I think he is observant enough to see that Edward is very serious about Bella. He approved of her relationship with Jake who strayed at the first opportunity, so this time he should be more observant.
Luv
XOXO
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind words and detailed response - LOVE it!
Date: 08 Oct 2012 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 81
I meant this for the previous chapter
Naughty Lauren, she must be up to espionage and gone to the opposition.
Luv
XOXO
Author's Response:
LOVE hearing the theories about Lauren. Hmm, wonder what it is indeed!
Date: 08 Oct 2012 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 80
I wanted to comment on the last chapter by had already done the coffee cups.
Poor Edward he’s quite the exhibitionist but at the same time he’s also quite the prude.
Very funny chapter.
Luv
XOXO
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 07 Oct 2012 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 90
OMG that was hawt!!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it. :}
Date: 06 Oct 2012 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 89
Great story! I look forward to the updates, so keep going :)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 05 Oct 2012 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 88
loveing this story!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 04 Oct 2012 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 83
That Lauren chick... what a bitch...
Good thing Jess isnt sure if she wants to be friends much longer wth her... I think her and Bella make better friends....
lmao the ending to this chapter was awesome lmao
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 01 Oct 2012 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 30
I'm loving them getting to know each other better. And could Edward be a more giving, selfless, and caring man, and lover? I think not. I want one of those, please. xo Kelly
Author's Response:
Yes, I'd like an Edward too. :-)
Date: 01 Oct 2012 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 29
I want to hear about Bellas life before she met Edward. :) xo Kelly
Date: 01 Oct 2012 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 28
Wow, what an awful thing to happen. Unfortunately things like that happen all the time in life. xo Kelly
Date: 01 Oct 2012 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 27
Oooh, what is this? I can't wait to find out more about their histories. I just love these two! xo Kelly
Date: 01 Oct 2012 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 26
Yummy way to wake up. ;) xo Kelly
Date: 29 Sep 2012 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 79
That was an awesome chapter! can't wait for more... I do love his parents...
Date: 27 Sep 2012 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 77
awesome chapter!
Date: 26 Sep 2012 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 76
great chapter
Date: 24 Sep 2012 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 74
LMAO OMG ESME STOP IT!!!! POOR ROSE AND BELLA LMAO LOOKING AT CARLISLE WILL NEVERRR BE THE SAME!!!!!!!! LMAO
Author's Response:
Thank you! I aim for humor, often not sure if I've achieved it. Your review made me smile.
Date: 18 Sep 2012 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 70
Boy look what he turned her into lol!!
Author's Response:
I like to think she was always that way - just didn't have an adventureous partner to share it with. :-)
Date: 18 Sep 2012 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 25
So good...Hot and sexy. ;) Kelly
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I love all your reviews, and it's so wonderful to read your reaction as you've been going through chapters. I appreciate it greatly!!
Date: 18 Sep 2012 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 24
*sighs* Oh you sexy couple... ;) Kelly
Date: 18 Sep 2012 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 23
Holy crap! I didn't expect this so fast, but I'm all in! ;) Kelly
Date: 18 Sep 2012 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 21
An overnight visit huh? They sure are getting attached really fast. I love that though, when it's right, it's right. :) Kelly
Date: 18 Sep 2012 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 20
I wonder what was going on in Edward's life in Chicago. I'm very curious. I'll bet it was about a girlfriend or something. I hope it wasn't mentioned in an earlier chapter! I would feel so silly for forgetting! :) Kelly
Date: 18 Sep 2012 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 18
I can't help but giggle at these two, they are so cute and sweet. :) Kelly
Date: 18 Sep 2012 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 17
Who doesn't love an over the clothes dirty little makeout session? ;) Kelly
Date: 17 Sep 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 69
wow... he sure was about to jump off the deep edge of the cliff witht he bruise huh ... poor edward... its cute when he gets sappy...
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 17 Sep 2012 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 69
aww he is just the sweetest thing! Way to go with that explaination Bella!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 15 Sep 2012 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 66
Awwww!
Author's Response:
Thanks for sticking with this fic. More fun to come. :-)
Date: 15 Sep 2012 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 65
Oh this should be hysterical!
Date: 15 Sep 2012 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 64
Rut roh! LMAO :)
Date: 15 Sep 2012 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 14
I want to live there! Preferably with my very own sweet Edward. :) Kelly
Date: 15 Sep 2012 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 13
You write the best descriptions in your story, if I close my eyes I can almost see what you are describing, such as Edward's condo. I also have to wonder if you've just done an awesome job of research, or if you live somewhere around the Seattle area. I live a couple hours away from Seattle, so I recognize all places your characters go and it's fun to read about them in your story!
Now I'll just get back to the tour through Edward's condo. heehee! ;) Kelly
Author's Response:
You just made my day! Thank you for the review. I lvoe that you can visualize the setting - I was going for that so I'm so pleased it came across. I do research, but I've been to some of these places and have a good memory. Most of it is in my head, though.
Date: 15 Sep 2012 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 12
I bet you had so much fun writing these chapters! I'm totally in love with your story! It's wonderful to read a light, romantic, sweet and funny story. I sometimes get so burned out on angst, or heartfail, so I try not to read anything like that too much. I'd much rather smile, giggle, and swoon while reading a story! So thanks for writing! :) Kelly
Author's Response:
Thank you, thank you! I should try angst some time to see what that's like. I don't know if it's easier to write angst or fluff, as this is the first thing I've ever written (other than non-fiction, which doesn't count in fiction skills beyond improving grammar and spelling and all those other things that make writing easier to read - and I still leave in the embarassing mistake).
Date: 15 Sep 2012 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 11
Your Edward is soooo sweet; I want one! And he cooks! :) Kelly
Date: 15 Sep 2012 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 10
*giggles* *grins* Kelly
Date: 15 Sep 2012 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 9
omg, I love your Edward so much! :) Kelly
Date: 15 Sep 2012 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 8
Hmmm, I wonder what's up with Emmett and Rose. I love your description of the back of their home, it sounds beautiful. I can almost picture it. :) Kelly
Date: 15 Sep 2012 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 7
I had another 'Awwww' moment when you used the word 'Woo'. Unless it's a period piece, I very seldom see anyone use 'court', or 'woo'. I love that so much. I guess I'm a sucker for the old fashioned ways. :) Kelly
Date: 15 Sep 2012 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 6
I'm sorry I keep saying the same things, but your story is so much fun to read; it makes me giddy and happy! I love the anticipation of these two getting to know each other better on a personal level. I love your Edward and Bella. :) Kelly
Date: 15 Sep 2012 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 5
Awww, they are so sweet. I can't wait for their 'date'. :) Kelly
Date: 15 Sep 2012 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 4
*grins* I'm having fun reading your story, it's so cute! :) Kelly
Date: 14 Sep 2012 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 3
*giggles* A seeing eye Chihuahua? I laughed so hard at that! Oh and Bella saying 'ouchie' and thinking Edward must think of her as a child. I'm betting that he doesn't think that at all. ;) Kelly
Date: 14 Sep 2012 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh, they're so cute, acting as if they aren't attracted to each other. :) I love it! Kelly
Date: 14 Sep 2012 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great first chapter! I'm looking forward to reading your story! :) Kelly
Date: 14 Sep 2012 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 64
juat read all 64 chapters today..... great, great great!!!! i have to say hottest , realistic sexy times and seriously just not to get into TMI but i love it because its all stuff that i have experienced. its real and it written so well. the way you describe their sexy times is perfect. Love it :) I also love that Edward seemed kind of quiet and shy at first but now that him and bella are together he is a little freak.... i love that he is bold and takes charge without making bella feel uncomfortable and i love how he doesnt pressure her into doing things she might not be comfortable with. i can't wait to read more!!!! oooh i bet he is going to freak out about the bruises, isnt he!!! anyway, again great story and i am hooked!!
much love and luck always
b
Author's Response:
Thank you SO much for the review. You've made my day!!!! Welcome to the Adventure. ;-)
Date: 12 Sep 2012 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 62
these two are coming together quite nicely lmao coming..cumming lmao!
THEY ARE AWESOME.. god, edward is so dirty i wish I had me an edward... Bella is such a lucky bitch!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! Love hearing what you think.
Date: 12 Sep 2012 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 62
very hott
Author's Response:
:-)
Thanks for the note.
Date: 11 Sep 2012 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 61
Wow that was hott! He is the most sweetest thing there is!!
Author's Response:
So glad you're enjoying. Thanks for the review!
Date: 11 Sep 2012 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 60
Cute chapter, thanks for the double update! :)
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! Can't post tomorrow, so three updates today (just did another one) to make up for that.
Date: 10 Sep 2012 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 58
OOOHYEAH WOOTT WOOTT
Author's Response:
So glad you're reading. Thanks for the review! Very much appreciated. :-)
Date: 10 Sep 2012 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 58
Awww..... so sweet!
Date: 10 Sep 2012 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 57
More Sexy Seattle Adventures please :)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I'm caught up now, so it'll be about one a day. Hope you stay with me for the ride! :)
Date: 10 Sep 2012 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 56
Yay! About time :)
Date: 10 Sep 2012 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 55
Ahhh....Bella thinks too much
Date: 10 Sep 2012 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 54
Cats out of the bag :)
Date: 10 Sep 2012 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 53
Wow its hot here.... :)
Date: 09 Sep 2012 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 49
Sex Olympics is right!
Date: 09 Sep 2012 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 41
Hope the phone call wasn't to say they came home early, lol!