Date: 07 Feb 2024 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity
Edward should've had Bella arrested for domestic violence for hitting him and vandalism charges for the apartment. Getting knocked up doesn't automatically make you a good person or qualify you to be a parent - it just shows irresponsibility. Both are proving this
Date: 07 Feb 2024 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity
Edward should've had Bella arrested for domestic violence for hitting him and vandalism charges for the apartment. Getting knocked up doesn't automatically make you a good person or qualify you to be a parent - it just shows irresponsibility. Both are proving this
Date: 30 Nov 2015 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Friends
I'm loving it
Date: 02 Jun 2015 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 12 - One Flew over the CooCoo Nest
Isn't it unethical for Carlisle to be Bella's doctor?
Date: 01 Jun 2015 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 8 - You've been Served
Damn, maybe there was something wrong with me when I was pregnant. I don't remember being half as horny as she is. Really? Using "pregancy hormones" as an excuse?
Edward's just a ball licking dog.
Date: 01 Jun 2015 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Arguements and Explanations
If you ask me, they're both nut jobs. I pity that poor child.
Date: 18 May 2015 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
Enjoyed storyline thank you for sharing.
Date: 18 Sep 2014 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Pregnancy Hormones: Hot and Horny!
Hot damn, im glad bella isnt pining for edward
Date: 18 Sep 2014 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity
No way would i ever step foot in edwards apartment or bed again. I dont want bella to take edward back. I am a bitch though and would always remember those words and use them against me
Date: 17 Sep 2014 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Stay with Me
I'm suprise bella didnt ask edward if he was happy, he didnt want a child now he doesnt havent to worry as she cant ever get pregnant again
Date: 17 Jun 2014 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Dark Passenger
I'm not sure why Edward gets to live. This is all his fault. I hope when Bella wakes up she turns him into the police.
Date: 09 May 2014 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Pregnancy Hormones: Hot and Horny!
OK. I cant agree with that. Yes their broken up, but come on. They were in a 6 year committed relationship & were the loves of each others lives. They broke up & Edward got with someone within hours. Bella is pregnant, clubbing & begging for sex with Edwards best friend?! Thats just so wrong!
Date: 09 May 2014 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You
OK. Im not use to that much cussing.
Date: 09 May 2014 3:49 AM Title: Prologue
I cant believe Edward.. Man! smh
Date: 25 Apr 2014 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
Great story! Loved it!
Date: 20 Feb 2014 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Pregnancy Hormones: Hot and Horny!
Okay ... I now think Bella is gross. She just broke up with Edward because he didn't want the baby. She should be focusing on herself and her baby. She's not a classy woman to act like a party-going teenager when her mind should be on other priorities. Of course she should have fun, give herself time to heal - in the right way. Not screwing her ex's friends. So tasteless and trashy.
Date: 20 Feb 2014 5:43 AM Title: Prologue
I love this Bella - she stands up for herself and did the right thing by telling Edward to fuck off! I hate stories where she lives and breathes only him.
Date: 04 Jan 2014 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Engagement Party
I have too many emotions & opinions running through my head to be able to voice them clearly.
I guess my marraige has left me bitter.
Good job.
I wish B would hold off on allowing E back into her trusting, broken heart.
Date: 02 Feb 2013 1:10 AM Title: Prologue
Poor Bella and sTUPID eDWARD
Date: 26 Dec 2012 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 12 - One Flew over the CooCoo Nest
Oh no Jessica is nuts.
Date: 26 Dec 2012 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Manholes and Baby Steps
Its good to see Edward starting to work towards fixing things with Bella.
Date: 26 Dec 2012 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 8 - You've been Served
Another fantastic chapter.
Date: 26 Dec 2012 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Heart to Heart
Great chapter
Date: 26 Dec 2012 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Images of Perfection
At least Bella is no wimp.
Date: 26 Dec 2012 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Pregnancy Hormones: Hot and Horny!
Bella has wasted no time either. lol
Date: 26 Dec 2012 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity
So Bella really fell in love with this Edward? Hard to believe.
Date: 26 Dec 2012 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You
Edward is being such a dipshit. Great chapter.
Date: 26 Dec 2012 6:15 PM Title: Prologue
Wow this is some start to your story.
Date: 07 Dec 2012 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
loved it!
Date: 07 Dec 2012 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Stay with Me
loved it!
Date: 07 Dec 2012 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Dark Passenger
loved it!
Date: 07 Dec 2012 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Carnage
loved it!
Date: 07 Dec 2012 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 17 - A Mother's Nightmare
loved it!
Date: 07 Dec 2012 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Stalking Tendencies
loved it!
Date: 07 Dec 2012 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Moving Forward
loved it!
Date: 07 Dec 2012 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Nightmares
loved it!
Date: 07 Dec 2012 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Small Gestures
loved it!
Date: 07 Dec 2012 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 12 - One Flew over the CooCoo Nest
loved it!
Date: 07 Dec 2012 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Engagement Party
loved it!
Date: 07 Dec 2012 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Friends
loved it!
Date: 07 Dec 2012 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Manholes and Baby Steps
loved it!
Date: 07 Dec 2012 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 8 - You've been Served
loved it!
Date: 07 Dec 2012 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Arguements and Explanations
loved it! I absolutely hate Edward and Jessica!
Date: 07 Dec 2012 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Heart to Heart
loved it!
Date: 07 Dec 2012 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Images of Perfection
loved it!
Date: 07 Dec 2012 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Pregnancy Hormones: Hot and Horny!
loved it!
Date: 07 Dec 2012 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity
loved it! poor bella
Date: 07 Dec 2012 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You
loved it! go bella
Date: 16 Aug 2011 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Friends
im sorry to say but bella's a bitch.
Date: 29 Dec 2010 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Engagement Party
Wow, Why could Bella not slap the shit out of Jessica.
Date: 29 Dec 2010 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Arguements and Explanations
I love the banter between E & B, it sort of reminds me of what Rob & Kristen would be like in this situation, the dirty talk and so on. Please forgive me I tend to read a ton o chepters before I review, I get so into the story, I just want to keep reading, but Ill be better at it. I love this story.
Thanx
Suz
Date: 27 Dec 2010 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Nightmares
whew! i was thinking as i read "wth" what happened since the last chapter. thought i was losing my mind.ok now i can breathe again.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Heart to Heart
i'm still really pissed at him. glad daddy c talked to him. hopefully he's finally getting it.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You
you have done the impossible, you have created an E that makes me wanna cry and slap the shit outta him at the same time of pure rage. he needs to be beat with a 2x4 for that crap he pulled at the end. i pray he comes to his senses but after reading the prologue i know it'll take awhile. lovin it so far.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 8 - You've been Served
No! Keep Jasper as a lover. He is a big boy and knows exactly what he is getting into. He can be there for her and give her the TLC and hot monkey sex that she needs right now.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Arguements and Explanations
Ok so I have been reading this today at work on the sly and couldn't review until now. He He. I really like the premise of the story. I can't believe what an asshat Edward is being. I love the wrench of Jasper being thrown in though. He appreciates a beautiful woman and if Edward is going to be stupid, he is going to step and benefit. You get yours Bella girl! I also loved that she called him out in front of his entire family. Love it. Will be reading until late tonight.
Date: 22 Oct 2010 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
I didn't think Edward would have the balls to commit murder. Always seems like Charlie or even Emmett would be the one to do so. I think it was a very nice twist to not only have Jessica murdered but have Edward do it. Overall, great story!
Date: 06 Aug 2010 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
aaaawwwwww so sweet!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 06 Aug 2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Pregnancy Hormones: Hot and Horny!
uuummm that was FUCKHOT!
Date: 06 Aug 2010 7:21 PM Title: Prologue
I'm very excited to continue reading.
Date: 22 Jul 2010 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Nightmares
awesome
Date: 07 Jul 2010 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Nightmares
thank god it was a freakin dream :) great chap....
Date: 07 Jul 2010 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 8 - You've been Served
GOOO BELLAA!!!...yesss his ass was served... great chap :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! After Everything was one of my favorites to write :) I got to ask b/c ur name is familiar...do you have a story on fan fiction??
Date: 19 Jun 2010 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You
wow! james is a pretty cool guy :D please let him stay that way
Edward is an asshat
Date: 02 Jun 2010 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
I really liked this story. I am sorry that I did not take the time to review each chapter but I started and finished this in one quick setting. Anyway I really liked this story it was nice to see a person seldom used as the BAD GUY. I liked your story and the plot was do-able. Thank you for sharing this with us all.
Date: 27 May 2010 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
THAT WAS A GREAT STORY, I WISH YOU WOULD MOVE ALL OF YOUR FANFIC STORIES TO THIS SITE I LIKE IT OVER HERE BETTER
Date: 21 May 2010 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Pregnancy Hormones: Hot and Horny!
I understand but wish she didn't fuck Jasper. I know Edward is whoring with Jessica but still...
Date: 21 May 2010 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity
I just started this so I don't know if you are writing an EPOV but I hope so. Stubborn is close to stupidity!!! Asshole!
Date: 21 May 2010 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You
Oh my! Havimg a hard picturing Edward like this but.....that's what is making it so Good!
Cannot belie e he's already hooking up. Think I just vomited a bit in my mouth!
Date: 21 May 2010 5:20 PM Title: Prologue
Ok - kinda pissed right now. I know you warned that Edward was going to be a douche but seriously? He hooked up already? How old are they supposed to be?
Date: 16 May 2010 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
GAH! Perfection here!
And of course I will continue reading your other stories. I am so glad I read this one... it took me long enough.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 16 May 2010 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Stay with Me
Wow. I'm crying. There is no longer any hope for my mascara. This was beautiful. I can't wait to read the end.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 16 May 2010 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Dark Passenger
FINALLY! Let me just hope everything goes well... from this point forward. And I love the name Sophia.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 15 May 2010 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 17 - A Mother's Nightmare
WHAAAAT?!? NO! This can't be happening! This is just so intense.~
Jessi Cullen
Date: 15 May 2010 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Stalking Tendencies
Yeah, my thoughts exactly. She just creeps me out! This is by far the most crazy Jessica I have ever read!
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 15 May 2010 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Moving Forward
Whew. I thought for sure Jessica was going to make a presence here. I just have the git feeling that she is the one watching. But this was cute.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 15 May 2010 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Small Gestures
Finally. These two needed to work SOMETHING out!
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 15 May 2010 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 12 - One Flew over the CooCoo Nest
Okkkaaay. So this hussy has some mental issues!
Jessi Cullen
Date: 13 May 2010 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
this was a very good story. excellent characters, not too much angst, and lots of love and passion. i am reading Explosive Encounters right now, another fab story. waiting for your next update on that one. going over to ripple effect next and check that one out. Keep up the great stories. E
Date: 13 May 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Engagement Party
I want to kill that hussy! But that was just so... it was an Awww moment with her and Edward.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 13 May 2010 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Friends
This story is steadily growing on me.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 06 May 2010 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
this was a really good story. thanks for writing it!
gosh, jessica is sucha crazy bitch. i dunno how i feel about the way edward planned to kill her though. it was premeditated and though i understand why he did it, to protect his family, it still makes my blood run cold that he can do that... yeah, he has to do what he can to make sure bella and his daughter is safe, but murder...
but i'm glad that bella's inability to have children did not keep them from having more kids. really really glad.
Date: 05 May 2010 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
that was good but sad glad that they saved bella and got the baby bacl and that they still have 2 more boys
Date: 28 Apr 2010 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
i love that you still gave them a big family.
thank you for writting! i hope to read more of your work soon!
Date: 28 Apr 2010 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Stay with Me
yay happily ever after here we come!
Date: 28 Apr 2010 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Dark Passenger
so happy the boys have delt with jess, permanently, but how are they gonna explain eddie showing up with the baby and jess disapearing? i wonder what you have up your sleeve....
Date: 28 Apr 2010 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Carnage
of corse bella will make it, a couch couldn't keep you safe if she didn't! lol
i think it is time for the boys to go hunting and just happen to have to use ''self defence' on jessica's ass. it is all to keep the family safe.
Date: 28 Apr 2010 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 17 - A Mother's Nightmare
well doesn't everyone feel stupid for not believeing bella? jess is fucked up! but at least in her instability she seems to care for the baby and should take care of her and keep her safe. now we just need to see if they find bella in time to save her. and what about other babies will there be permanent damage?
Date: 28 Apr 2010 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Stalking Tendencies
can you say çreepy!' boys and girls?
Date: 28 Apr 2010 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Moving Forward
well i am glad that they are still moving forward and all is good right now. the class was too funny! welcome to motherhood mofo! not so easy is it?!?... sorry
looks like crazy jess is still out there waiting for the right time to strike!
Date: 28 Apr 2010 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Nightmares
ok so we have made it to the prologe. wow you had me confused i had to check i was on the right chapter. i thought i missed one and missed a big time jump! very nicely done.
Date: 28 Apr 2010 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Small Gestures
awww... i remember once for christmas hubbie gave me a bottle of massge oil with a note saying as long as there was oil in the bottle he would massage me whenever i wanted. silly man has not clued in that the bottle hasn't been emptied in 18 years! heehee man i'm sneaky!
glad to see e and b are working in the right direction.
Date: 28 Apr 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 12 - One Flew over the CooCoo Nest
so she really is a psyco! not just acting that way. wonder how she'll weasel her way back into edward's life to get us back to the prologe? poor bella really has to worry now...
Date: 28 Apr 2010 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Engagement Party
wow psyco jessica
Date: 28 Apr 2010 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Friends
glad jasper was cool with the 'friends' thing. b needs all of the friends she can get.
i knew eddie would make a nusrary for baby. the kiss on the tummy was so sweet my teeth hurt! glad to see eddie is pulling his head out of his ass, but obviously he is still a dick, thanks to the look into the future from the prologe
Date: 28 Apr 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Manholes and Baby Steps
i really don't have a story for you. we have just always 'been us' can't imagine my life without him and he feels the same. shit happens but we have never let it pull us apart. i know i'm lame! my kids tell me all the time.
i think eddie should set up a nursary for the baby. he always wanted bella, it is the baby he needs to prove he wants.
Date: 28 Apr 2010 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 8 - You've been Served
damn strait she is making a mistake! jasper is hot and ready to be used! as long as she lets him know it is just casual she should keep going, he is just a 'friend; and she needs one right now.
Date: 27 Apr 2010 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Heart to Heart
Wow. I am quickly getting sucked into this story. I just can't stop reading it. When I have a chapter of my own to get out!
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 27 Apr 2010 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Arguements and Explanations
i will take a look through me 'read' stories and compare them to yours then i'll let you know on the recs.
bella good job on making him work for it. bastard can't just come in say sorry and get you 2 back. he is such a dumbass!