Date: 02 Feb 2016 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
Shit! I needed to reread the beginning :) Good idea, good punchline. Def one of my favourite.
Date: 11 Aug 2013 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hello. I am so busy laughing my rear end off right now! I had to read this twice. When I first read it, I thought it was about Edward & Bella, until the very end, so then I read it again and realized it was about Edward & Emmett. I could just imagine Charlie's face and the thoughts in his head. Thanks for the good laugh! Suzan Noerr
Date: 25 Jan 2013 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Nice twist at the end! Didn't expect that!
Date: 05 Sep 2012 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
ohh fuck !! And the whole time I thought it was Bella !! I cant stop laughing !! I mean, this shit is funny ...
Date: 26 Aug 2012 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
Haha, i think you got it mixed up at the end but it was awesome anyway. I loved it.
Date: 26 May 2012 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story!
The title and your vage description tipped me off, but I was never 100% sure. And I loved noticing all the parts where the phrasing was "gender-neutral". I enjoyed reading!
Date: 10 Dec 2011 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
WOW was not exspecting that it would be emmett!! haha loved it though whata shocker to readers!!
Date: 22 Oct 2011 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was fun:) Yes had to read the last few lines again to make sure I read it right.
Date: 07 Sep 2011 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was quite the twist ending! Here you have your mind all made up that it's Bella and Edward in trouble and it is turned completely around at the last minute. Really clever and kind of cute, too!
Date: 07 Sep 2011 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
*Giggles* You sneaky little devil! =) I did not see that one coming, but it was great! I can't stop laughing. :D
Date: 23 Apr 2011 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
wow shocker of an ending! i kinda wondered why they were talking about a closet, heehee. that was hot and so funny that they got caught by charlie!
thank you for sharing your story
suzie :)
Date: 16 Mar 2011 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
I was actually caught off guard - however, Emmet's going to be the girl in the relationship, that's for sure ;). Really funny!
Date: 16 Mar 2011 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was mind blowing. I did have to scroll back up to see if there were any clues. I guess you got me.
Date: 10 Mar 2011 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love the twist at the end !!!!!
Date: 10 Mar 2011 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
LMAOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You really got us there! hahahhaha... and Mike Newton?? bwahahahahhhaaa
Date: 10 Mar 2011 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
LOL! :D
Was not expecting that :D
Date: 10 Mar 2011 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
OK, you got me. Glad I peeked in to your one-shot. Nice.
Date: 10 Mar 2011 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
I am also LMAO, total Gotcha--must reread! Kind of like watching Sixth Sense when you realize Bruce is dead, you just want to try to catch the clues you missed...
Date: 10 Mar 2011 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
lol that was too good for words
Date: 10 Mar 2011 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
oh my!!! I did exactly what u said I had to scroll back up and reread it 2 times!!!
Date: 10 Mar 2011 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG Was not expecting that ending.
Date: 10 Mar 2011 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hahaha!!!
Date: 09 Mar 2011 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
ROTFLMAO!!! That's exactly what I did!!!! I did a big "WTF?" and scrolled up to make sure I read that right. Good story with a nice surprise ;D
Date: 09 Mar 2011 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Yep totally had to go back up and reead it! Quite the curveball!
Date: 09 Mar 2011 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMG that was great!!!! I really did have to re-read the WHOLE story. Oh you are a sneaky one!!! I like it! ;)
Date: 09 Mar 2011 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
So funny! You really did have me confused there! I so thought it was Bella all the time :P I hope you had a good laugh at getting this response from everyone!!
Date: 09 Mar 2011 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
WELL, I thought it was funny because of course it sucks if the Chief of Police (aka your Dad) catches you in an intimate moment but wow. I was confused there for a moment at the "coming out of the closet" comment but the last sentence. THAT made me do a double take. And I'm still snickering as I type this review.
CrimsonR
Date: 09 Mar 2011 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMG, this little one shot just threw more for the biggest loop.... I had to go back and reread the story again, just to make sure I didnt miss anything..... LMAO, i would have never thought about who got caught, until u read the last couple of sentences.... Very well done